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From French kissing to French’s mustard (okay, make that Grey Poupon), things French add a certain je ne sais quoi to our lives, both as people and poets. Manicddaily here (a/k/a Karin Gustafson) and I’m hosting the Pub’s Poetics today in a celebration of Quatorze Juillet, Bastille Day, France’s national holiday.
Things French have always had a certain cachet for me—a kind of chic that runs way deeper than Chanel. Even as a tiny girl, I was always trying to put my hair up in a French twist. (I wanted to look like Grace Kelly, but ended up more like Pippy Longstocking.) Still, I knew the code – anyone in a movie smoking a French cigarette, whether a good guy or bad, was cool (Claude Raines in Casablanca), anyone looking great in a beret was super cool (Ingrid Bergman in Casablanca), and anyone remembering Paris, while also smoking a French cigarette and holding the arm of someone beautiful in a beret, was just, well, beyond cool. (Bogey.)
But France, largely through its cuisine, has also injected itself into world culture in more homey ways. In the Methodist Church booth at my local upstate New York county fair, they serve french toast; even Colombian coffee can be bought in french roast; McDonald’s supersizes french fries from Amarillo, Texas to Mumbai.
French poetry is famous for a certain elegantly sardonic darkness – Charles Baudelaire with Les Fleurs du Mal (Flowers of Evil), and Arthur Rimbeaud with Le Bateau Ivre (The Drunken Boat)– but, to me, the most striking thing about French poetry is its music, which arises partly because the poems are written in French. My favorite example of this music is Il Pleure Dans Mon Coeur by Paul Verlaine, which begins, “Il pleure dans mon coeur/ Comme il pleut sur la ville; Quelle est cette langueur/Qui penêtre mon coeur.” (Basically: it weeps in my heart like it rains on the town, what is this languor/sadness that penetrates my heart.) If you are interested in hearing the music of that poem – and vraiment, the sounds alone are fantastic whether or not comprehensible–check out the very sweet YouTube reading below. (Unfortunately, it does not have the text but here are links to both the French original and French/English translation. )
And now, to the prompt! Celebrate Quatorze Juillet/Bastille Day/Things French with us by writing whatever French twisted (or sort of French, sort of twisted) poem you desire, whether your fancy takes to you poodles, Paris, or red wine on the couch.
As you link up your poem, however, think of the painting above, and the three watchwords of the French revolutionaries celebrated today–Liberté, Fraternité and Egalité (Freedom, Brotherhood/Sisterhood, and Equality). These are also, to some degree, watchwords here at dVerse. We each link one poem per prompt, which is, hopefully, imbued with that sense of liberation that comes from the sharing of one’s work with brother/sister poets, people who will certainly have different styles and viewpoints, but who are also (simply by the fact that they are poets) fellow rebels, fellow revelers.
Eh Bien! Get to work, mes amis! Have a great day! And, as always, merci beaucoup to Claudia Schoenfeld, Brian Miller, all the dVerse staff, and especially to all of you.
Here’s the drill for those of you, new to the Pub. (Bienvenu!)
• Write your poem and post it to your blog
• Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below.
• This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read. Once you have pasted your poem’s blog URL and entered your name, click Submit. Don’t worry if you don’t see your name right away.
• In the spirit of Fraternity, read and comment on other peoples’ work.
• Share via your favourite social media platforms
• Above all- have fun – and do check out the youtube video for a lovely moment of a child reading French verse. Also note that the elephant above is not intended to refer to, or promote, any political party or persuasion! I just happen to draw elephants!
claudia said:
vive la poesie…smiles… great prompt today karin… as we live just a cat’s jump from france, we’ll go later and watch their quatorze juillet firework.. happy saturday everyone
ManicDdaily said:
Sounds so nice – with burnt peanuts I hope. k.
aprille said:
Hiya Karin,
Happy french night to you to.
I went with something close to our presentday hearts:
The soul of a poet.
With a little bit of help from Yves himself 🙂
We’re off to by baguettes and cheeses, from the Provence region, where Le TOur is at present.
I’ll be back later, merry and french inside and out.
ManicDdaily said:
Sounds pretty great, Aprille!
hedgewitch said:
How fun, Karin. I must go mull over my options, and will see how far my high school French will go. I had no idea elephants led the charge in the French Revolution, either. You are expanding my world. ;_)
ManicDdaily said:
Yes – well, it only worries me if some people apply the picture to U.S. political scene! (Although I think the decollete may be a bit much for some of that crowd!) And even here – no offense meant to any political persuasion!
brian miller said:
well mine obviously took me to pick up lines, so….
hedgewitch said:
Totally in character. ;_)
claudia said:
Liberté, Fraternité and Egalité ….ha…you’re awesome k… will carve that in the pub table tonight while sipping a glass of french and…do you think we could have some fois gras in the pub as well..? smiles
ManicDdaily said:
Well, I’m vegetarian, so I’ll stick to the wine! k.
claudia said:
santé karin! (and i pronounced karin very french..) smiles
Daydreamertoo said:
Thank for the prompt. Another great one 😉
Brian Carlin said:
I’ve made a bit of an intuitive leap, and figured since the French basically invented love I could post something on that, or is that cheating? 🙂
ManicDdaily said:
Not cheating! I’ve seen that so far people have posted a lot of things with French words, but that is absolutely not intended as part of the prompt. They are fun, but it can be anything–Love is french – even a poem with someone named Jules or Jim would be fine! k.
claudia said:
haha…i’ve interpreted quite some french city life into it…
Laurie Kolp said:
I like your personal touch to the painting! Great prompt… will be back in a bit.
ManicDdaily said:
I also have to run out for a bit AND to finish my own poem, but will be back soon and will check everyone’s out!. k.
Laurie Kolp said:
Mine is posted now. Have a great weekend!
brian miller said:
really its not nice you all talking in another language confusing me and all…haha…had fun with this k….actually performed mine last night Richmond and def my butchering of the french language was a hit…smiles….great prompt…
brian miller said:
i like that bit on our watchwords as well k….smiles.
ManicDdaily said:
So great that you performed it – it’s a wonderful poem. I haven’t gotten mine up due to some family responsibilities -Ah! the Family – This is Poetics Day! Oh well. Will gt it up soon .k.
ds said:
Liberty, Equality, Fraternity–and Elephants! Love it. Have been reading some French poetry this week (translated). Will give this a try. Happy Bastille Day!
brian miller said:
woot always great to see you ds….
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Thanks so much for your fun prompt. I had a really good time with this one, writing a limerick with mostly French words. This was indeed a challenge, since I barely remember my French classes from roughly a zillion years ago: Limerick Ode To Bastille Day.
ManicDdaily said:
Sounds tres bon! k.
Madeleine Begun Kane said:
Thanks, it was a fun mind and ancient memory stretcher. 🙂
flipside records said:
Write about poodles. Oh man, you crack me up. 🙂
What a great line: “a kind of chic that runs way deeper than Chanel” … This should be in a poem somewhere.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks! k.
brian miller said:
catching anna and then i am out the door for a bit…will be pack shortly though and will return some visits then…
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vivinfrance said:
Marianne surely knew how to get herself noticed! Most of my enthusiasm for Bastille day is covered in my 6-word-Saturday post, so I have responded to this prompt with a peevish Verlaine pastiche.
ManicDdaily said:
Sounds great. k.
brian miller said:
thanks for popping in while i was away viv…was starting to wonder if i butchered the language enough no one wanted to stop in…smiles.
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Mark Kerstetter said:
I stumble letter by letter through the French language, but several French poets (which I know mostly through translation) have long been very important to me. I’ve written a poem inspired by one of them.
ManicDdaily said:
Super – the prompt doesn’t really require anything actually French – I’m sure yours is — but something inspired by something French is plenty French enough! k.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
To think I used to dream and think in French…il y a longtemps. I will be back with mine.
ManicDdaily said:
Great! k.
aprille and departed friend said:
Just came home and feeling light headed. I added a stolen bit of the most wonderful French to my post, with a link to a video which will crack you up if you haven’t heard it before.
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charlesmashburn said:
I wrote about the only thing French I know anything about!
ManicDdaily said:
Will get there, having some computer glitches on my end. k.
ManicDdaily said:
Sorry to be out of action and not even get my own poem up – computer issues here. But soon, and will visit others. k.
Anna Montgomery said:
Wonderful and inspiring prompt k! I have been unexpectedly called away all afternoon and evening. I very much look forward to reading others later.
ManicDdaily said:
Yes, I’ve been in and out – my apologies to people for being slow! k.
gardenlilie said:
Thanks and well, yes, I submitted, to my delight a poem and read so many tonight. Missed you all! To me poetry is so personable and the words feel sweet to oneself. A good thing. Bye.
Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Hi~ I can’t get into your blog/link…can you please try again ?
brian miller said:
i went in the back door and fixed the link…it should work now grace….
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks, Garden.
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Heaven (@asweetlust) said:
Hi K ~ Lovely prompt and cheers to everyone ~
Shawn said:
Camping and more camping has kept me busy and away for the past two weeks. We started in storm torn West Virgina, where we had to get ice from the National Guard. Unable to take it anymore we returned to Michigan after six days of no power and roaring generators (we tent camp) and decided to camp another five in our favorite state park. I am still looking for those moments of inspiration these trips should have cultivated. I am sure they exist, but today I post something a little Frenchy.
brian miller said:
dude you were practically in my back yard…..wow, love me some camping…could not imagine doing it during that storm and heat though….good to see you back…
Shawn said:
Yeah, I should have paid more attention to your post on the 30th. We left Michigan July 1st having no idea what we were in store for. Gas stations without gas, and every store with out food and ice. The campground we stayed in just got power back Wednesday. It only took a week and a half, but thankfully we left before then. It is good to be back!
ManicDdaily said:
Camping is nice, but maybe not so much if enforced Will check out post, thanks! k.
ManicDdaily said:
I think I’ve visited everyone, but please don’t feel shy to tell me if I haven’t visited – I’ve been having some computer glitches on this end, so I may have gotten distracted and missed someone on the list. Take care, and thanks so much for all your great work. k.
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yoga-adan said:
opps, so tired and ready for bed almost forgot to comment, i’m in! oui! 😉
fun prompt, thanks K. 😉
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks Yoga Aden. k.
punnypalaver said:
Fun prompt, Karen–je suis aussi une francophile. Joyeux Quatorze Juilliet! My contribution may not be finished till the holiday is over, but hopefully before Mr. Linkie locks down. Bonne nuit!
ManicDdaily said:
Looking forward to it. k.
punnypalaver said:
done! It was such fun! now to read. . .
ManicDdaily said:
Great. k.
Cressida de Nova said:
Charming video clip. Vive la France!
Lydia said:
Not sure, Karin, if I’ll be writing for this prompt….which is why I am making sure to let you know now that it is marvelous, and that your paragraph beginning with, “As you link up your poem . . .” is simply ideal in describing dVerse Poets Pub and the community here. I liked it so much that I saved it in my documents file. Thank you.
ManicDdaily said:
Thank you, Lydia – and glad you made it. k.
claudia said:
good morning…played some catch up and will be back later..we’re celebrating our 24th wedding anniversary today and my plan was to surprise my husband, kidnap him and spend the day in strasbourg but…he surprised me by inviting the family…….so…strasbourg has to wait…
mattspotentialpoetry said:
This one certainly did not come easily, but I finally achieved something worth posting, or that is at least my hope. I simply thought of Raymond Queneau, one of my favorite French authors, and ran with it from that point. Enjoyed this challenging prompt. Peace.
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks – you did a great, fascinating, job with it. k.
mattspotentialpoetry said:
K, thanks I really beat my brain to death for hours hammering out this piece- glad it landed- and uber glad you enjoyed it!
Lydia said:
Happy Anniversary to you and your husband, Claudia!
Two things: this prompt makes me once again swear that I will learn French, and I wish there were “Like” buttons available in the Pub’s comments section because, well…the comments are so great.
kkkkaty said:
My first time at this web site…a novice poet and blogger…lots of reading to do here!
ManicDdaily said:
Welcome! k.
hedgewitch said:
Okay folks, I’m in–I’m having a bout of sciatica atm and am taking some meds that blurr my brain, so may be a bit before I’m able to get around and read and leave an intelligible comment, but didn’t want to miss this lovely prompt, which tied in perfectly with another one I was doing. Or trying to do. Thanks Karin.
ManicDdaily said:
Thank you for the perfectly beautiful, beautifully perfect poem. So sorry that you are not feeling well. k.
brian miller said:
i am working today so it will be late before i can grab the last couple…kkkaty glad to see you, i will be by later….
ds said:
Well, this is in by the skin of my teeth. I apologize if my earlier comment created any confusion. My excuse for a poem is posted, and linked. Merci beaucoup, Karin and everyone here at dVerse.
hobgoblin2011 said:
Cool topic this week. Bastille day was always one of my favorite Rush songs. Which is kind of funny, that I never knew about the events or significance of the day itself until reading Les Miserables, sophomore year in college, up until then, I simply thought it was a very imaginative song from the Canadian rockers lol A little late I know, but thought I’d join the party anyhow. Great, Great write up, loved it. Thanks
ManicDdaily said:
Thanks so much, Fred. Will check it out. k.
Susan said:
I finished my poem just now–2 hours and 9 minutes too late to post it. Ah, me! I have been thinking about the challenge since Saturday when at my retreat we raised the cry “Liberty, fellowship, equality” for Bastille Day. I so love your challenge, K!
Susan said:
Sigh! I do not know how I missed another deadline! Well, I did. No use crying over spilt milk when Kitty will be happy to lap it up later.
Ken Gosse said:
Eat My Cake ~
(executed by guillotine on 16 October 1793)
For Marie Antoinette’s birthday treat,
They had candy and pastries and meat.
‘Twas a fatal mistake
To say “Let them eat cake,”
When her subjects had nothing to eat.