I think there’s no place in a city where you get more intimate with their people than when you ride the Subway.
It’s like a melting pot and the mixture of ingredients is diverse…
You have business men, suit and tie, the little girl on the hand of her mom with ice cream in the corners of her mouth– Over there a cool 16 year old with green hair and leather jacket, nose pierced.
There’s the old man with the wrinkled face and worn down shoes and a guy with sparkling eyes who preaches the Lord in spanish.
And did you see the musician in the corner and the homeless man-? they all breathe, fill their lungs with underground air, enter, exit– doors slide– and somehow, it’s magic–
I’ve been riding the London tube with its wooden steps going down and down and down and the electronic voice that tells you to please mind the gap, and I stood squished in the Paris Metro at rush hour between sweating bodies, unable to move– i wish i had already written poetry back then.
And then of course I rode the subway in New York City, where deep down, close to her heart my poem and the idea for this prompt were born.
So let’s have some fun and write subway poems today–
Make us see the people, let us feel the rails vibrate, breathe the moldy air and together enter those veins, that for me embody a big part of city magic
Here’s how it works…
- Write your poem
- Post it on your blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below, and in the new window that opens up input your name and direct url of the poem
- Visit others who have taken the challenge
- have fun!
welcome for poetics everyone…did i mention…? there’s a subway stop right in front of the pub door…so take you pen…grab a map…and let the magic happen.. smiles
fun prompt claudia…i love mass transit personally…all the people, it is a people watchers paradise…smiles…i like to write about them too and do it often so i tried a bit of a different approach to how i wished to fit in…smiles.
and i remember taking that one pic of the sign…smiles.
smiles…it was the stop we missed..
haha yes it was….
In London you will be OK: I just put the map up for you guys.
Earl’s Court?
How can you go wrong with that i wonder.
Now, if you were to try Tottenhamcourt Rd, you might forget to swallow a syllable or two 🙂
smiles..my hotel was at tottenham court road…and believe me…my german tongue had knots by the end of the day…haha…
and the story with earl’s court was…i was late and about to meet two blog friends…and asked the guy at the counter which train to take to earl’s court (imagine a heavy german accent…)… and he looked at me…”where..?” i repeated…twice..and he said: “ah you mean earl’s court..” and smiled…he was just teasing me…
Would you be offended if I told you an incident in one of my EFL classes I taught in Oxford?
I think of it with great affection, and still smile.
To break the ice, with a new group of students, I had asked people to talk about their hobbies. One sweet lad, Habitur age, said he loved swimming. So I asked if he was any good at it, and he [to my immediate collapse into a fit of uncontrollable laughter, which really did break the ice], said “Yes, I sink”.
Sink about it. I don’t think any of those students will ever have made that mistake again, seeing what effect mistaking the [th] for an [s] can have on people.
ha. that is pretty funny…and i am glad you were able to laugh in a good way with him…some fun irony..
haha…there’s also this fun video where an s and th are confused…really funny..
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Very good prompt Claudia. Oddly enough, I had used the ‘down, down, down’ in my own piece when I wrote it, then came here to see you had said the same thing about the London Underground.
First time I ever used it, I didn’t even realise exactly HOW far underground they were and, no escalators back then either! LOL
Have fun everyone!
this is what i love about the london tube…you think it can’t go deeper any more..and it still does… and it’s a mixture of horror and excitement…loved your poem bren…the london tube is my fav of the undergrounds i rode so far
def loved it bren…have yet to hit the london tube…though i can dream…smiles.
Hmph! Subways! We don’t needs no stinkin subways in Texas!
haha…loved yours charles…and of course…i’m hungry now…smiles
It was fun! Thanks for lettin me ride!
my pleasure having you on board sir…smiles
You know what came out of the Mind-the-Gap thingie, don’t you?
‘Mind the GP’, advice to never bother your doctor with any medical problems.
And certainly not after hours. Guardian gag from a few years ago.
This WAS a good prompt choice, especially with Charles’ snack.
I’m off to bed, I was up at five this morning. I’ll catch up with the fun tomorrow.
Thank you for getting us to write.
Good night.
smiles…good night aprille…sleep well… i may make another hour..then off to bed as well
cant believe you all sleeping in the middle of the afternoon…smiles…
and charles…i love their hot relish…
Who needs subways when you can ride horses, wild and free … breathing real air?
That’s what I’m talkin bout!!
it that a request for horse back poems…we will have to see what we can do but i imagine the rating may go up a bit…
I’ve had my tongue in my cheek all day today, so if y’all will tolerate a shameless plug, take a look at my other bit of silliness from earlier today: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/04/14/the-perfect-stranger/
Ah Charles – leaving Texas to ride on subways expands our horizons broader than the high plains. You gotta ‘ love it! Posting a true incident – I swear – that happened to me on the London subway.
well gay you have given me enough to def peak the interest…on my way…
this was kind of a magical story gay…much enjoyed..strange things happen on the subway..right..? smiles
I know…perhaps there will be a time to tell you about the model who was “pissed”..different meanings in Texas and London..you see.
ok, get started on that one…i need to hear it…smiles.
Thank you for the prompt Claudia. I now ride the Toronto subway occasionally as I bring my car to work. Still it stirred some memories for me as I daydream a lot during the one hour commute ~
Happy weekend to everyone ~
and a delicious daydream this was for sure…smiles
heading out to dinner…be back in a bit to catch up…so i guess this is my stop, for now…
nice…enjoy your dinner..
Great prompt, Claudia. I’ve traveled subways for three years and gathered a lot of anthropological insight into the best and worst that mass tran can offer. I’ve also hitchhiked across the US twice, taken trains buses and planes… a lot of traveling, I think. Many many stories to tell, one of which I just put up. Hope you like! 🙂
i like it a lot… and wow…you’re quite the traveler…but i should’ve known..
I’ve never ridden a subway; but I’ve eaten a Subway sandwich. 😉
Claudia, I just loved this section:
“There’s the old man with the wrinkled face and worn down shoes and a guy with sparkling eyes who preaches the Lord in spanish.
And did you see the musician in the corner and the homeless man-? they all breathe, fill their lungs with underground air, enter, exit– doors slide– and somehow, it’s magic”
smiles….yep i really saw this spanish preaching guy on the NYC subway..and …talking about subway sandwiches..you should go and read charles mashburn’s piece…
I plan to. I was just thinking about what I might come up with for the theme. Nothing’s coming to mind, however. 🙂
maybe a subway movie could serve as inspiration..? one of my favs is “sliding doors”
or that one with the serial killer that sat in the subway train with a headshot and no one cares…wait..i will google the name.. ha…collateral with tom cruise..awesome movie
Me too!!! You just gave me chills. I love movies that illustrate how drastically a life can be changed, even with minor alterations in decision-making. I love Gwyn. 🙂
ok poets.. the rain finally lulled me into a half-sleep-state already.. so off to bed and back in the morning…
I couldn’t pass up a prompt about the subway. I hated riding it, but when I thought about it, I realized that without it I never could have made it to school and later to work. So I guess I must be grateful.
i hoped you would jump on that train myrna…enjoyed your poem
Thanks for the prompt – almost a brief encounter moment!
…and the minds starts wandering off… good stuff john
Thanks. Was late when I wrote mine so now a video performance in place
…and finally midnight over here…so…i’m def. gone now…ha
This is the second time I have popped in to join you all, hope you like my offering this evening…. http://wp.me/p2dIML-2B
This is perfect- I was in London today- rode the underground- this prompt was like fate!!!
Can only imagine what it must be like to ride a subway…but I could teach you a few things about hay wagons 😉 I’m thinking if I take the horror of riding our public buses and put them underground…I should be okay. It is what it is…
Claudia, Hope you’re enjoying the wee hours of the morning. Thanks for hosting Poetics tonight and offering up a very interesting prompt. It’s been years since I’ve actually rode a subway. The one we have here in Buffalo is above ground and only goes underground for 3 stops, and quite frankly is out of the way of anywhere I ever go. But the last couple times I’ve been to the city, for whatever the reason, somebody always drove, which as you can tell from just getting back, made no sense whatsoever. But I had taken the subway countless times in my travels and yet still nothing came. So after supper I decided to sit down and write a funny piece about subway the restaurant, but quickly, almost as if my muse refused to take me down that road and out came a rush of subway inspired memories. Cheers
joyce, wish i could comment as your place…nice meld of the pic and your words…love all the descriptions of the people you capture…but i got no facebook and that is the only way to comment…just wanted you to know i appreciated if you check back in…
Joyce, I couldn’t leave a comment too. Perhaps if you can enable your comment design to accept other sites other than FB, we can leave comments…
I probably cheated the prompt a bit, as the subway/train is only one of many conveyances, but hey… http://poetrytech.com/2012/04/14/pantoum-mass-transit/
gary your piece is a blast man…really enjoyed my read…
This prompt really brought out quality poems.
yes it did…enjoyed yours too man, the movement, illustrated by the concrete…i like…
alright, good night poets…i will catch you in the AM…
Hi Claudia –Just got in, and decided on something a bit different – mainly because I’ve written quite a bit on or about NYC subways. They are a favorite topic frankly and before I got involved with dVerse I used to write about my daily rides quite often.
Anyway, mine is up. Take care, k.
enjoyed your take on it k. – so very unique – just like you are…smiles
hope you’re having a lovely weekend and looking forward to your prompt next saturday
Coming in really late (literally I mean)–2 a.m. here in my neck of the woods!! Couldn’t sleep so up writing. Hoping what I shared looks as good to me in the daylight as it does at this hour! Liked the topic, Claudia. I spent 5 years on Long Island, a lot of commuting by Long Island Railroad (LIRR) into NYC & more than a couple of rides on the subway, so that’s where these come in (two for the price of one!) Will be back tomorrow to read and comment. I think my pillow is finally calling!
smiles…i read your poems by daylight and really enjoyed them…the mentioning of all the stops and places made me feel a bit homesick…sounds weird i know…but i fell in love with that city…madly…smiles
Thanks Claudia, and no it doesn’t sound weird! I am a New England country girl at heart, but I even get “homesick” for the city sometimes!! It amazes me as I’ve read you’re poetry Claudia, how many places you’ve been to, how well-travelled you are! I think I’ve got ‘travel-envy!!” *smiles*
Having morning coffee and popping in to read where the rest of these wonderful poets will take me!
i love to travel and now that the kids are growing up, it’s much easier…already planning my next trip…haven’t yet decided if it will take me to barcelona, amsterdam, prague or edinburgh…smiles
just read the overnights with my breakfast…and i loved them…thanks for the journey to…montreal, london, nyc, the center of the earth, the trails that run within us…very cool…be back in the afternoon to see what else you came up with…
An inspired prompt – more so than I thought at first. Top challenge.
loved yours david…esp. the description of the woman, the wanting to breathe into her face…nice..
good morning….enjoying your verse with my coffee…
good morning sir… just finished lunch…some nice mexican food, cooked by my daughter…hmmmm
nice…how long is she home for?
mexican…nice…
ha..who knows exactly.. she was just visiting a friend in the bolivian jungle for 4 weeks..they have no fridge but a radio station, which i think is rather cool..smiles
Happy to relive some NYC memories with this prompt. Thanks so much, Claudia.
I posted an old poem this time. It is perfect for the subject of subway. Thanks, as always, for the opportunity to hang out at the pub.
yes it is…and i remember it..smiles.
I’ve written more poems about subways than I care to think about, so what’s one more? ^-^ And spent more time on subways than is healthy, probably; two trips to Brooklyn and back yesterday. If I ever go homeless, I’m going to be one of those subway-riding homeless, but I’ll play an instrument or something, or write poems for money.
smiles…i like the idea…i would come and listen to your songs..
that is exactly what i want to be if it ever happens…smiles.
I really like this prompt. Riding the metro every day to work and then for other reasons as well while living in Paris has been a very impactful experience. Thank you Claudia.
the paris metro is quite an experience as well.. loved riding it when i was there..
So many memories from riding the bus
good morning… catching the overnights and then close the door for a few hours..chris is already gearing up for pretzels & bullfights i think…not yet sure who he’s about to bring to the pub…so see you in a bit..