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My name is Claudia Schoenfeld and– wait– can you see me–?
I’m sitting on top of that Ferris wheel and wow… you have a great view from up here.
So when was the last time, you enjoyed some carefree hours on a fun fair?
We always had one in spring and in autumn in the town where I grew up – a rather small one – both – town and fair – and I’m not at all a big hero when it comes to roller coasters and thrill rides either but I do love the scents… sausages, popcorn, gingerbread, caramelized almonds… on the Jahrmarkt (that’s how we call it in german). I also often took my dog with me when I went there and we spent the time walking, smelling, watching people and just enjoying the moment and the atmosphere..
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So today, we want to write fun fair poems and there’s a wide variety of possibilities…
Take us on a bumper car ride with you or on a metaphorical merry-go-round or tell us about that roller coaster ride that almost made you lose your mind (i had one or two of these…wanted to get out in about 12 meters height…and good i was belted)…however… make it funny, thoughtful, wild, reflective… wide open space…
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But oh– one thing before you start– take a candy apple– just for kindling the magic a bit– smiles

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smiles…just the kinda fun that is needed on a long weekend….the fair will be in our town soon enough and will have to head back there…for me its the people watching that makes it fun…they call it uncle billy day here…though i do not know billy but…
nice…we have a big fun fair in autumn in basle each year…it’s called herbschtmäss in swiss dialect…and they serve mässmogge and chaeschuechli…smiles
ok i will have to google those….smiles.
welcome everyone.. looking forward to that poetic fun ride….and eat a candy apple while i’m waiting for your poems to pour in…
That apple is looking pretty good Claudia–ours here usually have caramel and nuts on them, but the apple itself is always nasty and mushy these days–when I was a kid they were crisp and delicious….or so I remember. ;_) Not that my memory would ever play tricks. I had total unserious fun with this prompt after I spied it at Brian’s earlier, so forgive me if my fun fair ride is a little raunchy. Thanks for hosting!
haha…on my way over…
yours is a riot hedge….loved it!! corn dog…smiles.
Wonderful what you did here: so uplifting and joyous.
What with barbecues and blading and Saxophone playing , going to fairs and hopping over the Atlantic: you lead an exemplary life.
The fun is streaming out.
haha..maybe my life looks more exemplary than it is…i can get quite depressive at times…smiles
It’s wonderful and sounds like so much fun. I just love the way you write. May be I can contribute to this. 🙂
please do…we will be open until midnite tomorrow…so all the more fun if you do…smiles.
ah i def. hope you will join the fun abhra..
We had a big fair at least twice a year come to Brighton. Still does, but, I was never one for the upside down/scary fast rides either. Loved it all though 🙂
Great, fun prompt Claudia.
pshh…i’m neither one for the scary fast rides…but i have promised a colleague to ride two roller coasters with him, next time we get to a fun park….ugh… enjoyed your poem much bren..
Claudia, are you watching the Eurovision song contest in between poems?
It seems to get more flashy every year. Bizarre at times,
i remember the first one i ever saw was when dschingis khan was the winning song.. and nicole with “flieg nicht so hoch” … think i may need to watch..
Okay…I so needed this…skipped out on an appointment I was so desperate for a poetic intervention (Shhhh!) I love coasters! Upper Clements Park has a lovely, rickety, wooden coaster…the ride lasts about a minute…but the whole time your thinking about splitting timbers! I swear you can hear them cracking…terrifies me every time…there’s not often a line up, so I’ve been known to put in a day simply running back and forth…on/off and back again. The focus is fun and I’m determined to find it…thanks for the ride poets! and thanks Claudia for a prompt that has already lifted my spirits…see you soon!
i crown you the roller coaster queen tash…with a wooden crown of course… in the europapark they have one called silverstar, built by mercedes benz, so you should think you can trust them cause they want you to survive and buy their cars…but…
hehe…shoo him away and flip him the bird as your car pulls out…what an attitude on you tash…smiles…i LOVE the wooden coasters….
Ah, well, i’m not so sure: they may be good at cars, but they also built a bike [pedal] that wasn’t up to much.
Let’s hope their roller coaster was : “Vorsprung durch Technik” 🙂
First time I’ve done an on-the-spot write for a good while now, and maybe more appropriate for the stream of consciousness post earlier , but it sure was fun trawling the contrasting feelings about funfairs and youth and trying to tie them together, thanks Claudia for the inspirational poke!
yours was a rather fun piece…you did well wiht the on the spot writing brian…
Rawk-aaand-roooooooll! ha…was great brian
I’m linking up an old one from my old blog. I hope you don’t mind.
not a problem at all…
a great piece..
This is great fun, Claudia. Will get on this later as I’m just getting home from a Duke University ceremony recognizing my daughter for taking the SAT (in 7th grade)… so proud!
oh that’s awesome laurie…send her hugs…and looking forward to what you come up with..
This did happen (except for the apple part). In the picture you can’t see my other two kids… they were sitting like they were supposed to!
i see the apple…can i have the apple? smiles….yeah i can see it happening…
Well, I set out to write a funfair poem. It’s in the title and everything but it wasn’t where the pen took me, sigh
sometimes our pens have their own will…
Yes, I can see you ! And you can see me obviously, so this sounds like fun but other things first. Will try and get back, maybe need a purpose or maybe not, lol. ;)) ???
we’ll wait for you to come back… *waves with wind in her hair from the top of the wheel* smiles
Ooh I don’t think I have quite pulled this one off and I think I know why. The one thing I kept coming back to was a photograph (featured) which was taken on a holiday with friends going through a rough marital time. I think I felt a bit uneasy writing about somebody else’s life and so I cut back on a lot of the details I might have put n if it was my own situation.I have mixed emotions still about posting it! A fantastic prompt though Claudia, so many rich visuals possible here (even if I opted for my pic rather than my rather limited personal experiences of fairgrounds) so thank you for tending bar tonight
i hear you…not easy to write about someone else’s life and can be a walk on a thin line – so i think it was a wise decision to cut some of the details
on my way over…pulled myself out of the pool to come back to the fair…getting a little pink here…
ok poets… midnite over here.. so have to get off that wheel…love all the different entries so far and will be back in the morning… just save me some popcorn please…
sleep well claudia…we’ll try not to have too much fun without you…smiles.
Claudia, thanks for hosting tonight. great topic, lots of possibilities, can’t wait to see what everyone else has composed. Cheers.
i left my beer at home for this one, my stomach doesn’t care for much when i ride the “amusement” rides 😉
oy…well i will be over in an moment adan…and see if my stomach holds up..
OK, so I went to the fair but it wasn’t necessarily a fun ride, not that I am surprised anymore…I’m starting to think my muse needs therapy! Looking forward to seeing what everyone else comes up with. 🙂
haha…my muse is therapy…smiles…
This tripped the old memory banks, and a song started playing in my head. Then this poem came rushing out, and sadly, it’s pretty much true. The song I refer to was called Palisades Park, and was first done in 1962 by Billy “Boom Boom” Cannon. It was one of those accidents; flip side of a song they thought would be a hit that got played by accident; went as high as #3 on the charts. Enjoy!
ha now that sounds fun…be over in a minute charles…i hope you are not too many days with that song stuck in your head though…smiles.
I know! Don’t ya hate it! This one’s got arcade organ music, too! ARRRGH!
I’ll be back to read and comment in the morning!
lol…oh man you are in trouble…get some rest man…
Man, those candied apples look so good. You are such a tease.
love some candied apples….
Ditto!
alright poets….i am off to be…a bit early but i think the sun sucked the energy out of me a bit….see you in the morning…
Hi Claudia — I have had good and bad fun fairs – a very negative experience at one once = which is what I wrote about, though now I think about it, I’ve also had great experiences at true county fairs with Methodist pancakes, and lost of animals. But a busy day so went with the negative (Ha!). A very interesting prompt. Sorry, I’m so late. k.
good morning…and on my way over… having a bit of a hay fever attack…so hope you don’t mind when i sneeze at your sites…smiles
Another Top of the Bill turn! Thanks for.
great that you chose the spiegelkabinett as we call it in german to make your point david..much enjoyed..
enjoyed the overnight rides…and off to church now..back in the afternoon..
What an excellent prompt Claudia and really brought back many fun memories …. enjoy the ride
good morning poets…enjoyed catching up on the overnights….traveling back home today so will check in later and see who’s at the fair…
Fun prompt, Claudia. Savoring my candy apple now. Dental bills coming your way soon. 😉
haha…you know..we hand out tooth brushes today…smiles..
ok…just coming back from my mom…and a fantastic piece of rhubarb cake…and on the trail again..
good visit with mom?
yeah..we watched formula one..haha
i dont know if i ever watched racing with my mom you know…haha..
Great fun here, Claudia. I wrote CARNIVALE yesterday, but have been having trouble with my DivShare mp3 downloading, so I just put the poem in sans recitation; will add that later.
Sorry that what I came up with isn’t exactly FUN, but this is what came to me and what’s a girl to do?
Just what I needed on a rainy May day–to sit by a warm fire with a cup of coffee and write a sunny fair poem. Thanks for the prompt!
just coming back from a poetry slam… so will be over at your place in a bit…
oo very cool…did you watch or play?
just got back home myself and playing catch up…then off to work for a bit…
was just watching…and learning… have a good time at work..
not so bad tonight…good on you for the learning…they are a lot of fun…and sometimes rather unpredictable too…
For anyone stopping in…we will be opening early in the morning with an opportunity to honor those that serve, in lieu of Pretzels & Bullfights for this week…so if you want a head start on what to pen for tomorrow…here you go…i hop all of you are having a great weekend….
I am so disappointed: it took ages to get my post together as the pictures kept disappearing or arriving in the wrong places. I finally decide I can do no more, only to find that Mister Linky has closed. Grrr. In case anyone reads this comment, my poem etc is here: http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2012/05/28/village-carnival/