The unexpected.
The surprise….party, tragedy, epiphany. The unsought treasure under a rock. The phone call at midnight. The understanding (perhaps the most unexpected of all) that you are not only in love, but are loved back.
One of my daughters used to get hiccups frequently and I’d try–BOOO!
–to startle them out of her.
It didn’t usually work.
But for poets, if not hiccupers, the unexpected can be a great tool, waking and shaking both lines and readers.
Poetry, like life, can be stranger than fiction; compressed, styled, even more open to narrative leaps and linguistic juxtaposition. Ted Kooser’s Late February, for example, moves peacefully through an early spring day, the snow “no more/than a washing/strewn over the yards” – to the discovery of a farmer’s body “as unexpected as a tulip.” (Kaboom!)
But poetic surprise generally doesn’t bother to involve corpses – in Archaic Torso of Apollo, Rilke describes how the starburst gaze of a headless statue exhorts him to change his life. (Okay, there’s a torso.) In Teaching my Husband to Swim, Jacqueline Burger’s revelation is simply that her husband does not know how to hold his breath underwater.
The unexpected can also infuse rhythm/rhyme – Cole Porter matches Mahatma Gandhi with Napoleon Brandy (from You’re the Top.) dVerse’s own Brian Miller uses the sounds of a back-spun record to illustrate repeated discordance: “riap elbarapesni eht raw & evol/love & war the inseparable pair.” From Love & War (Part 1).
So, Poets==I’m ManicDdaily, by the way, also known as Karin Gustafson— the mission today (if you choose to accept it), is to jump off the springboard–or into the deep pool of–the unexpected.
Before I go through the rest of the drill, I want to say that for me the writing of any poem is an unexpected gift, and the reading of that poem by others – and their comments upon it – are things that a year or so ago would have been beyond my wildest dreams. So, thank you thank you thank you in advance for your participation in this site, your wonderfully brave and creative poetry, and your support of your fellow poets.
So here’s out it works:
- Write a poem that you did not expect to write today! Or if you don’t have one, find an old poem that involved the unexpected. Post it!
- Click on the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and url and click enter.
- This is also where you will find the list of those that have also joined in—read, comment, meet new people—let people know what you think of their verse. (Let go of expectations!)
- Feel free to share your link and a link to dverse using the social media of your choice.
- Take a chance. Have fun.
(A few credits – the above rainbow under a stone is my photograph of a light sculpture by Jason Martin; the drawing of springboard elephant is by yours truly, Karin Gustafson.)
Hi Guys! I wanted to first give a big shout-out to Mary Kling and Fred Rutherford, newest members of the Poetics team, who were such great hosts over the last few weeks – left everything ship shape! I’m sorry I dragged so much sand in – I have a feeling I should make the graphics smaller, but I just love graphics!!!!! Anyway, I am almost finished with my “unexpected poem” which has turned out to be somewhat weirder than I thought. I look forward to yours. K.
hihi..i like weird…looking forward to read…
Well, thank you so much, Karin!! What a nice thing to hear.
Thank you for a fantastic prompt Karin. I have been missing you all for the last couple of weeks so thought it was time to get back in the saddle tonight. Hope you don’t mind but I took a sneak peak at some poems posted earlier so that I could be prepared tonight. Look forward to reading the fine words of the dVerse community!
great seeing you in the pub vanessa…
That’s great. It’s great to have you back, Vanessa. k .
woot great to see you today ma’am…and great poem as well for the prompt…
great prompt karin…and that kooser poem…dang…never read this before… happy saturday everyone…looking forward to read what you’re coming up with…rainy day over here but i cooked pumpkin soup which brightened it up a bit with its yellow creaminess…smiles
Yes! I urge everyone to check out the poems cited. They are terrific. None is very long–all good. k.
nice…very cool picture to go with this karin and i think this will be a fun prompt as well to see what people can surprise us with….the unexpected…it was a little intimidating to try to think of something but think i got it….out to peruse now…
and its nice to see elephants again…smiles.
Personally I think a corpse almost always adds to a poem… Dammit, I can’t use that as a surprise now!
Don’t worry! I have a feeling any found corpse still has a bit of shock value! k.
Going to have to have a think about this one…
A very interesting and fertile prompt, Karin…I will have to go brood over it and see what happens.–love your top photo of the light sculpture.
Thanks. Me too.
I wrote this in the morning and find it fits your thought provoking prompt. I will be out all afternoon at a memorial service (for someone else). Please follow the link as this is on a collaborate site and not my personal blog.
Anna – I loved your poem – I could not see where to comment. A beautiful powerful poem – especially the last stanza. k.
Thank you so much k. I just got home from the service. I’ll be around tomorrow morning to return visits when I’m in a better state of mind for reading and commenting.
Just added my two cents in – one from the archives but thought it fit your wonderful prompt! Thanks, Kathleen
is that one from your book…it seemed vaguely familiar?
Yes – an oldie but a goodie! One day I will sit down and write about all the angel visitations! Hope you and yours have a great evening, Brian – K
very cool look forward to that….
Dang it all…I did it again! Karin…what an AWESOME prompt for our pens….I’m off to hit the twitterverse…then the notebook…then the return visit! See you soon 🙂
Thanks so much, Tash. k.
If I do as asked–
write the unexpected,
it’s, alas, expected.
Yes – that is a conundrum. But like Zeno’s paradox – you may still get there.
I’m not sure if I’m phrasing this right, but you get my drift.
haha true that…one
of the many ironies
in our lives
ha…true that…
getting ready to hit up a movie with the fam…then will be back and play catch up with everyone else….
I also am in and out, trying to finish my POEM! late as expected. ! k.
i’m watching starwars 2 with my husband…
ok is that the original 2 or the new 2….ha….Empire Strikes Back is my fav…
the one where A. is a rebellious teenager…ha
That’s a great pic, love the little rainbow, coincidentally mine is about a rainbow too:)
Some things are so nice when they are pleasant and, unexpected. 🙂
Great – I’m going to start visiting again soon! Almost done. k.
Sorry for any delay in getting to people. I’m up with oddish poem! I am doomed to never do my best things for my own prompts! Oh well! I hope that’s an issue of timing not prompt. K.
i liked your poem much k.
Well there I was this afternoon reading poetry in the sun and thinking surreal and along comes this prompt! and guess what you’ll be reading! Many thanks.
Looking forward to it. k.
I enjoyed this prompt, Karin! (And I want to thank you for the kind words about Fred and myself. Being a ‘bar tender’ isn’t easy. LOL) I was out and about for a while; and now am out taking a look at all the wonderful poetry so far. I just have to say to some WordPress people, oftentimes my responses go somewhere in the netherworld…..I hope you will check your spam once in a while, as I just may be there!
I will, thanks!
Now this is an inspiring prompt – and I needed something to shoot for today. I have always said real life is so much stranger – and less believable, often – than anything we can make up. Let me rewind thru my thousands of years of history and see what I can find. Great image of the stones and rainbow up top – it almost looks like hands are reaching up out of the sand to hold them up. Love your elephant on the diving board too. I just plain love elephants, wherever I find them!
Thanks so much, Sherry! k.
This ought to prove a very interesting prompt. Unfortunately, I am busy, so I am linking to a stale rabbit I pulled from a hat long ago. Not too stale as it is one of my own favorites.
IT’s really hard to do something new all the time. We appreciate your participation. k.
Okay, I have managed to cobble together something–on a theme I’ve been thinking about a lot lately, and tried to add an element which I hope is unexpected. Hope it works. I will be back to read after the dinnertime festivities–my turn to cook–an asparagus mushroom frittata a la Jones.
nice…dinner sounds yummy hedge…smiles…
Awesome, “k”! I’ve had this line rambling around in my mind for several days now, and your prompt touched it off perfectly. My offering is one I wrote just moments ago, and it’s called “Dead Man Singing”. Now tell me who can resist going to see what THAT’S about!! Cheers!
Sounds great. k.
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a tempting call, couldn’t resist.
and now i want to go hide, you’ll see why…
Ha! k.
Thanks for an intriguing prompt, K…it’s been fun seeing what this has inspired.
Gayle ~
Love the bathing cap on your sweet little elephant k. Will be pondering the unexpected and plan to come up with something poolside real soon 🙂
sounds good. k.
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Sounds like a great topic, not sure if I’ll get there but I will try…thankyou for introducing me to Jacqueline Berger… I loved her poem and went on to read more…
Could someone tell HollyAnn she should check her WordPress account? I commented on her poem today (and it disappeared into nothingness); and I looked to see if my last comment on a poem a few days ago posted, and it did not. So that is stuck in her WordPress Spam as well. I cannot email her, as there is no email. Sigh.
I will tell her. K.
Just submitted a quick one on my grandson. Thanks for hosting!
Hank
Hank have to run out soon, but if I can’t check before – will later. k.
very cool drawings..
thanks Claudia for dropping by!
Hank
i am back…and wow got some major catching up to do…thanks though to those that stopped in while i was gone…coming your way first…
Well, Karin, thank you — what a fun prompt. I love the photo and scoured the image for the hidden prism but couldn’t find it! 🙂
Ted Kooser was fantastic — and man, what a great face he has !
So, I am new to poetry — may I ask, when you guys read such good works on-line, do you:
(a) go out and buy his books
(b) have a secret way to read them free on-line
(c) or just stop with one good poem
I can see that building a poetry collection could be costly — and my library has a horrible collection.
The Apollo poem by Rilke was tough for me. For without reading about Apollo, without understanding Rilke a bit more and his “spirituality” or philosophy, it is difficult. Your explanation helped a little — a headless statue still is bursting with power. Footnotes can be so enriching.
Jacqueline Berger was interesting mix between prose and poetry — that I actually enjoyed. Hell, I’m changing.
Putting together tonight’s poem over a few hours was fun. But not being skilled in poetry — it is clunky and I’d appreciate critical feedback.
I also took another chance and did something unusual — “jumped off the springboard” — by adding more to my post — a poll. The deep pool of the unexpected can be scary. But I like it scary!
when i have the money i get a few….also used bookstores are great treasure troves for cheep…i picked up a kooser book for a quarter a bit ago…also the library…just starting out a few years ago i hadnt read poetry since HS…so i had a lot…and still have a lot of catching up to do…that is one reason i love chris’ poems on monday as they expose me to more….
Well, I enjoyed your poem much. To respond to your comment – no prism – not exactly magic but I’m not allowed to tell.
I do have a book by Ted Kooser, but not by Jacqueline Berger, and confess to not having read other poems by her.
The Rilke is an all-time favorite of mine and I do think that there is something about the integrity of those sculptures that is incredibly forceful.
I appreciate your thoughtful comments. k.
Thanks brian & k.
I just so happen to have something in mind yesterday. I’m not sure if it worked but it’s fun one. Hope you guys are having an awesome weekend.
it is def fun…loving your creativity recently…the fill in the blank the other day and todays are both really cool…
I’ll be right over. k.
alright, off to bed…need my beauty sleep…smiles…see you in the morning poets…
Have a good night, Brian. k.
thanks k…hope you had one as well….smiles.
i’m submitting an older piece that was never linked in here at the Pub.
happy weekend, all!
♥
happy weekend to you as well dani
Hi Dani, so nice to have you here. k.
wow..the links doubled overnight…will be out on the trail soon…
Hi Claudia – a lot of interesting work– very varied – thanks all! I think I’ve visited everyone on Mr. Linky – but if I’ve missed you or your link hasn’t shown up, drop another comment! k.
I wasn’t expecting to write this!
http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.in/2012/09/poeming-with-songs.html
Unexpectedly writing about the unexpected.
Ha!
k.
smiles…happy sunday!
Mine popped out in a few minutes after long brooding…thanks for prompt!
smiles…an honest and felt write ma’am
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What may be most unexpected about my entry is that I’m not the last one in the door! Or perhaps not. Thanks for the great prompt, Karin–perfect timing. 🙂
Thanks, Julie. I look forward to your poem. k.
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rather unexpectedly, i found a poem before the linky expires… 😉
Great.
ha, glad you made it ruth….smiles.
Nothing like trying to slip one in just under the wire, but here I am – whew!
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