Good Tuesday, everybody. I’m Joe Hesch, your host for tonight’s dVerse Open Link Night.
Almost every morning–while I drive to work and while my computer is booting up–my mind and the computer’s brain run through all their calisthenics, diagnostics and burbles, and a poem happens to run through and from my mind to a sheet of paper.
Sometimes it starts from something I saw that morning, or it bubbles from a memory or other sensory charge that flashed to me in the previous 24 hours. I grab my mechanical pencil (my poet’s weapon of choice) and write on a legal pad until I come to its end, not caring too much what happens, discovering (or more likely stumbling) over ideas and impressions along the way.
And when I’m finished with that draft poem, I tend not to change too much before I share it with you. I know, it sounds like a terribly unprofessional literary process, but it’s damned spontaneous, from my gut and mine. While I’m reading it one last time before I hit the Publish button, I try to understand its origin once again, and how it came from ethereal poof to that final period at the end of the last line. Then I leave it for you to figure out, because I don’t own it anymore.
You do the same thing each Tuesday when you link to the pub for Open Link Night.
While I wonder about where my own poems were inspired, I wonder just as much or more about where yours were born. The poem I’m linking today was inspired by a walk into my backyard late Saturday afternoon. The sun was heading to California behind the new houses and remaining old trees. Jet contrails of varying vintages crisscrossed the blue autumn sky. That image stirred something in me that I didn’t quite understand. Nevertheless, I pulled out my phone and took some photos of that sky and I registered some images in my mind’s eye, too. Contrails of Memory is the result of that inspiration.
You didn’t need to know that. My poem, just as yours, doesn’t need to explain itself. It just IS. But each week, well over 100 poets display similar personal and artistic interpretations of some thought, image, or memory. Often, I would love to know what your inspiration was for your OLN poem. So, if you feel like it, maybe you could make a note of your inspiration at the end of this week’s poem or leave a comment about it at the end of our welcoming essay today.
Think of this as the nosey wonderings of a long-fallen journalist, the hmmmm between your lines by a poetic yenta, an artistic busybody’s peek through the garret keyhole.
The most important thing of all this is you wrote the poem and have chosen to share with us. Here’s how you can do it.
- Link the poem you’d like to share–old or new, on any topic (one per blog, please) by clicking on the Mr.Linky button just below.
- This opens a new screen where you’ll enter your information, and where you also choose links to read.
- Once you have pasted your poem’s blog url and entered your name, simply click submit.
- Don’t forget to let your readers know where you’re linking up and encourage them to participate by including a link to dVerse in your blog post. (Something I too often forget to do, so this is a reminder for me, too.)
- Visit as many other poems as you like, commenting and liking as you see fit.
- Spread the word on the poems you enjoy if you’d like. Tweet and Pin and otherwise Share on the social media of your choice.
- Finally, enjoy! Remember, we are here for each other. Thanks to all of you for sharing your brilliant creations.
smiles…a poem doesn’t need to explain itself..i like and also love when we find inspiration in the small things around us and poetry just happens…the inspiration for my poem was my flight from L.A. back to Zürich and i wrote it on my iPhone while standing in the airplane aisle, stretching my weary muscles…12 hours flight…ugh…smiles
happy oln and thanks for inspiring us joe
Thank you, Claudia. Talk about a culture shift!!! LA to Zurich! And yes, WOW! Week 70! 🙂
It is the small things. . .
and wow…week 70…isn’t this awesome….
Thank you all of you bartenders for the venue!
Thanks for visiting tonight, Wander!
Hiya Joe,
I used to write as I commuted, memorizing lines and having a full poem by the time I arrived. Now I write before I am fully awake and have to read it later in the day to see what my pen created. I love it when words come that way.
Your early thoughts have inspired me many times, most recently with my poem faith. I thank you for that.
It is only 2:00 pm here so if you have some hot tea, I would love a cup. Have a wonderful night. *hug*
Thanks, Beth. As a matter of fact, I am sitting here with a real, live (not virtual) mug of tea. Always willing to share with my buds! 🙂
I was going to type “Honey?” but thought better of it. haha I am having a real, not virtual cup as well with honey, the kind from bees. 😀
i have a cup of tea and i’d be more than happy to share it with you beth…with or without honey..smiles
*pulling up a chair* Enjoy, claudia. Tea and poetry go well together (and maybe honey)
I’ll bring my own African Red Bush teabags, a few to share. My favorite brew with a favorite few…
I was about to say, can’t believe it’s been 70 weeks… wow.
It’s been an honor to be here since Week 1, thanks to Claudia and Brian. 🙂
strangely, my poem was inspired by the simple chore of making my bed yesterday, and getting the winter quilt out…
Happy Open Link Night!
i just loved it kelly
Capturing the simple in life in a new and creative way is what makes you such a magical poet, Kell! 😀 xo
Thanks, Joe… just one question- are you driving when you write that poem? lol
As far as my poem goes, this line came to me after I found myself reading meditation in iambic pentameter:
Sometimes I find myself
reading in iambic pentameter
…and I had to write a poem with it…
Extremely cool, Laurie! Not to mention regal and Shakespearean!
Yeah, I’m driving. So many lines come at me just as those dotted ones on !-87 do. 🙂
Thanks, Laurie! xo
smiles…good evening to the lady who does the lovely interviews…smiles
Joe, great to have an insight into your poeting process! Thanks for that. Isn’t it great how minds can be trained in such a way, that there’s not always need for editing etcetera?
Have a great evening in the pub!
Thanks, Arjan. I don’t know about training. I think I just learned to “lower my standards” when writing a draft and let the words fall where they may. Sometimes I get lucky.
Enjoy your evening!! 🙂
Happy Tuesday everyone! The poem I linked to today was inspired by randomness, or the lack thereof. It is a co-write. A twitter friend and I wrote it together. Please enjoy, and I’m looking forward to reading a bunch of poetry tonight!!
wow…cool on the poetry collaboration..
I think the aspect of sharing and collegiality is what we’re all about here in the pub, rodkok.
Thanks for sharing with us tonight!
As a notebook and pencil addict who believes in the rawness before the edits…I hear your flow, Joe…and hope you’re feeling better
Thank you, dear Tasha!
Love the new avi!!!!!!!!
🙂 xox
A Shakesperian sonnet from me this week. Here’s the link: http://bit.ly/GBdjLk
Kind regards to all at dVerse. James.
Thanks, James! Will be by to see your piece later! 🙂
Wow OLP 70, it does not feel anywhere near as long.
PS: Love the “About” Joe!
That speedy calendar may be because my every 5 weeks hosting now feels like every 5 days, Raivenne!
Do you mean my little History of Me on the blog?
I meant the highly abridged About Joseph Hesch posted below the Mr. Linky here on dVerse. -smiles-
Wow, can’t believe it’s time for another OLN! Hello all!
And here I thought it was just me, Susan! 🙂 Welcome!!!
😉
Hello everyone,
Good write Joe. My inspirations are fairly random. When I am out photographing (my other love), I remember the way I felt and the possible reasons I look the time to photograph the image and the words seem to reflect that when used together. I write from the heart, a sunny day may bring joy to my writes, where as rain or bad weather may be reflected in the words in dark tones.
It is wonderful to see and hear the views of so many here. Thank you for the continued opportunity and support this community provides.
All the best and great night!
You’re a visual wizard whether there’s a man-made lens between those eyes and some subject or not, Gwen. You see things only Gwen can see and then fix ’em so we can appreciate them.
Thanks, Gwen! 🙂
Thanks so much for this forum. What inspired today’s limerick? I was aimlessly scrolling down my Facebook feed, when I spotted a post saying today’s “World Kindness Day.” So naturally I had to celebrate with a Limerick Ode To World Kindness Day.
Thanks, Madeleine! Hey, your name plays a prominent part in my poem today!
And I love your creativity! 🙂
hehe…loved the madeleine sky taste…
Indeed it does! Lovely poem, and your Madeleine use was wonderful. And thanks so much for your kind words!
smiles…always love reading your limericks madeleine
Thanks so much, Claudia!
I envy people like you, whose poems write themselves. I just get a hazy, foggy idea then I agonize over it for some time before writing anything. Wish I could say the product is often a masterpiece. It’s not. Poetry for me is like a zen exercise in perseverance. But I keep writing.
I wouldn’t say they write themselves! LOL
But I try not to agonize as much as I once did over EVERYTHING. It only took me 53 years to turn that switch, though…
You’re doing great in your exercise, Myrna!
oh and it’s good that you keep writing myrna…loved your hawaii poem
Thanks for hosting, and for sharing your creative process, Joe. You’re very right, once we hit the publish button, the poem is the reader’s, and I’m always surprised by how many different interpretations I see from the same words. I think Carl Sandburg said “Sometimes *I* don;t even understand them” about his poems, and that is definitely the case with me. Since you asked, my poem tonight came on one of my sleepless nights, part dream, part who knows what whispering in my ear.
Going out now, but will return later to read and comment.
Sooooo many poems are composed in that twilight between awake and asleep, Joy. Unfortunately, only about 3% of those actually get written. 😉
So good job, Ms. Hedge!! 😀 See you later, dear!! xo
Joseph — thanx for bar tending. I accidentally posted the wrong link at first — Mr. Linky remembers prev. links, unfortunately. Could you please erase my first link. Thanx.
My poem was from an encounter on the way to work — like you, a time to reflect. On arriving to work, I quickly wrote it down in my notebook that I now carry with me for poetry. I have tried to polish it several times since because my natural literary skill are far less honed than yours and thus my spontaneous stuff not as dazzling. Hell, even this polished stuff feels so incomplete. But I enjoy it and hope one or two others do.
I look forward to visiting others later tonight.
I appreciate and honor every poet’s expression of feeling as they write it, Sabio.
I shall have to punt the technical issue to the great and powerful Mr. Brian or Ms. Claudia. They shall repair things for you.
Thank you for sharing with us tonight!! 🙂
Last night I went to my wordshop class where I write and edit with a facilitator and serious writers, but was too tired to stay. This morning the experience gave birth to this poem. Yenta Joseph, that is the truth!
ha…now that’s the background to the mention of tiredness in your sonnet…smiles
I always look forward to Tuesdays and posting on Open Link Night. . .
This week, I posted Lost Lovers, This poem is based on Rene Magritte’s “The Lovers” and the idea that love can be an illusion. . . Sometimes lovers are lost. . . as the saying goes, “love is blind. . . ” So far as love is real and genuine, love is truthful. . . Love is not always what it seems. Sometimes love is objectified as “lovers” objectify one another, or love the ideal or idea of love and not the actual person. . . Sometimes love is surreal. . . http://www.robbiepruitt.com/2012/11/lost-lovers_13.html
Now that’s Inspiration on so many levels, Robbie!!
This is excellent advice. 🙂 Thank you for hosting. Open Link Night is something I look forward to. 🙂
You’re welcome, Imelda. Thank you for being here and sharing with us!! 🙂
smiles…very cool to read about your inspirations…will log off for the night and spend time with the fam… be back in the morning to read and comment..
See you anon, Claudia. Thanks!!! 😀 xox
Thanks folks. I know when things are not the way they should be, I can retire here and have my spirits lifted by some of the amazing poems always on offer.
Thanks, Tino!
It’s nice to have a place to hang out and feel comfortable with so many kindred spirits.
been great seeing you out on the trail good sir…and i hope you smiled as much at mine as i did at your comment…peace to you tino
smiles….fun…it is def interesting where we find inspiration at…have included mine for you joe…
welcome to OLN everyone! on my way around to see what you brung…smiles…
and i will finish answering the questions from yesterday as well…
I was in a mind to write about your mind tonight, and so I did, and I like it…
Hi gang! Good to be here again. Hope all is well with all you fine talented folks! Just got back from spending a wonderful weekend with Mom and Ray, so I’m posting an oldie. I know some of you have seen it, but I don’t think I’ve posted it on dVerse. In any case, give it a read if you have time and feel like having a good cry.
I’m doing NaBloPoMo (a daily posting challenge that I guess is mostly for “mommy bloggers” — which I am not, though I am each thing separately) and the PAD Chapbook Challenge thing at Writer’s Digest, too. Feels a little crazy. Glad to be here.
No great mystery in my inspiration for today’s poem!
Hi Joe! Can’t wait to read that poem–love how they just percolate and when you start writing, there it is 🙂 I’ll be back to visit, for now gotta post (kung fu awaits) and run!
I do hope that this links…I’m not in a good techie place at the moment!! Missed linking with the site recently!
i fixed your link for you…smiles…
i am caught up…and will be back later tonight to do so again….happy poeming everyone…
Hi Joe! A very nice post. I’m supposed to be doing Nanowrimo and really am (sort of) but hard to resist the wonderful interchange of this community. I feel a bit bereft without it, so keep slipping back in.
But SINCE I am supposed to be doing Nanowrimo, I revised an older poem – I meant to leave as is – but I am a tinkerer – it was based on a true experience, but I’ve somewhat dramatized it and changed the focus a lot – as it doesn’t really reflect the truth of the person with whom I had the exchange, which just involved a passing remark out of a car window but it did stick with me for many years.
Thanks for manning the helm, Joe! Write on!
Whether a spontaneous bloom, or carefully crafted masterpiece, I love the excuse to come here and drink from the fountain of shared poetry.
BACK in 1956, when I was 12, writing my first raw lines of poetry, i read where Hemingway always wrote first in longhand, stating that was the only way to own the words, transcribing them with your own hand. I used to keep all my first drafts, with the cross outs and lines pointing every which way, but now, as I blue pencil it, then type it, then edit it, then put it on my blog, then tape my recitation of the piece, I have enjoyed all the facets of it. I would love to hear more of you reading your work; it makes it come alive for me.
smiles…i still long hand all mine in my journal man….
Inspiration for mine came from the words “word” and “basket” where I had them written down together in a journal. Looking forward to reading what people came up with this week. Thanks Joe…happy oln
enjoyed your bit of magic tonight…smiles.
My inspiration came from my trip to the green grocer, or possibly I may not have had a thing to write. I wasn’t prepared today and had only written two lines in my journal over the past two days. Thanks for hosting, Joseph. I will be round to read tomorrow.
Pamela
oh i think it was delightful to visit the grocer with you and meet the mom and her daughter…smiles.
good morning…getting a cup of coffee and about to head out on the trail for my daily poetry dose…smiles
Good morning. Just wanted to come in and express my thanks to Brian for fixing my link.
Great job hosting Joe. I enjoyed reading about your creative process. It’s interesting how some poems come to be. I like your approach.
For me poems usually write themselves. I’m just the tool for manifesting them into the written word. Sometimes a scene will play in my head like in my poem “A Secret In The Mist” or “The Corpse and the Piano” and I’ll hear my voice in my head describing the scene poetically. Often though a line will pop into my head and by the time it’s written down, another appears and so on. Just like you Joe, I find myself looking at what I wrote and reading it like it’s not mine. When I force myself to write I tend to dislike the result. I’m trying to improve on that.
A recent technique I’ve come to enjoy is playing some Ambient or instrumental piece that you connect with, something that really evokes a feeling, any feeling, and using that as entry into the subconscious mind.
The poem I submitted “The Walker Between Worlds” crept from my subconscious mind onto paper and turned out to be a favorite of mine. It was a vision of myself walking through a crowd of people with prisms above their heads. I’ll leave it at that. I think the poem is rather clear in its expression.
Thanks again Joe for hosting. I’m a newcomer here and I absolutely love this community. I look forward to reading a bunch of submissions tomorrow, but for now I need some sleep.
enjoy your rest…and see you…well today now i guess…smiles…
having read your explanation i like your poem all the more…it had a nice surreality to it, but was vrey clear as well….
made it in! glad for the timely prompt to joseph, re sources of inspiration, i’ve been getting plenty here in paris 😉
take care 😉
jealous.
haha.
great to see you man.
Thanks for hosting Joe – love this place!
Anna :o]
good morning poets…..catching up on the over nights and looking forward to seeing what the day brings…freezing here…and frosty
Hi everyone!
I am new at dVerse though I have been around the poetry blogosphere for quite sometime.
Great thought Joseph and this particular poem of mine today was inspired by my very early days as a junior executive at the century old Royal Lake Club where the fresh flowers decorate dining tables and everyone knows everybody.
very cool…welcome nino…and on my way over to read…
Sorry I’ve been MIA. My Internet Provider decided to take yesterday off. I’m leaving soon to drive home from the desert and will comment tonight from beautiful Lone Pine at the base of Mt. Whitney if I can get access. Just glad to finally pop-in for a moment.
Joe, I so enjoyed your post. My poem happened on Monday when I was trying to meditate and my mind was all over the place. I sat in the kitchen, looking at the newly watered lawn on the golf course and decided just to focus on one drop of dew…and it actually did just explode before disappearing into oblivion.
Hopefully, I’ll be back this evening.
have a safe trip back home victoria
Good evening all.. 🙂 Anyone have a strong mug of coffee? Could use one.
ha..i surely could use one as well…has been a crazy (and long) day in the office today..
smiles….long day here as well…had two of my kids killed in a wreck this morning…students…on a brief break and will try to catch a few…
I’m not linking to a poem tonight but to a post I’ve written for NaBloPoMo about poets I love. I hope you’ll give it a look-see.
No internet for past two days – sorry guys. Haven’t had time to write anything new either; but couldn’t get on to read any until a few tonight.