
Femme au peignoir japonais 1907 Emilie Charmy (courtesy of http://www.emiliecharmy.org)
Welcome poets, I’m sandwiched in between two major holidays with this prompt so first let me say a special thank you for visiting the pub today. My name is Anna Montgomery, blogging poetry at Chromapoesy, and I am continuing my series on Postmodern poetry today by encouraging you to try your hand at experimental poetry. I’ll be focusing on an excellent series of writing experiment suggestions by Bernadette Mayer, an avant-garde writer known for her innovative use of language. You can find a recording of one of her classes on experimental techniques taught at the Jack Kerouac School of Disembodied Poetics at Naropa here.
Let’s start with a helpful definition of experimental art courtesy of A D Jameson from his wide ranging and informative article, What is Experimental Art?:
‘The experimental artist wants her artwork to be different from all the other artworks around her. She desires that her results be unusual, unfamiliar to the point of looking peculiar, perplexing. She may be drawing on conventions, she may be working inside one or more traditions. But her conventions and traditions are not dominant ones; they are, perhaps, older ones, or unpopular ones. Or she may be importing ideas and conventions from one medium into another, where they are not well known.
Or it may be that she has noticed an idea—a possibility—that has not been fully developed in other artworks, and therefore seeks to develop it. She exaggerates or expands that minor concept or idea (something that isn’t dominant in other works) until it overwhelms the more familiar aspects of her artwork, distorting and enstranging the entire thing. Hence Manet and Degas exaggerated the de-emphasis of line and more energetic brushstrokes that they observed in works by Velázquez, J. M. W. Turner, and Eugène Delacroix, developing that idea until they arrived at Impressionism.’
Mayer has come up with a list of useful experimental writing ideas that we’ll work from today: Writing Experiments (scroll past the journal ideas). These suggestions are designed to liberate us from our mental sets, patterns of approaching our work that can sometimes stifle our creative flow. It is useful to explore new ways of creating poetry, even if they don’t find a home in our repertoire as these methods can inject much needed new ideas and creative problem solving into our habitual patterns. Feel free to use any of her ideas or come up with one of your own. Here are a few highlights I’ve found particularly useful and inspiring:
• Begin with the etymology of a word or family of words that fascinate you, or even the etymology of your own name. This can initiate an interesting investigation of interconnections and meaning.
• Write something secret and something shared. Write both things using veiled and then direct language. Compose a poem from both points of view.
• Pull together a group of words, either randomly selected or brainstormed and then form these words only into a poem. Let the diction circumscribe the form.
• Construct a poem as if the words were three dimensional objects. Think of ways to form the poem and present it as if this were true.
• Reduce your work methodically until you feel it is deconstructed into its fundamental parts. Make these remaining, ultimately necessary words into a poem.
• And a personal favorite, her provocative suggestion to systematically derange the language!

Fleuers et fruits 1904 Emilie Charmy (courtesy of http://www.emiliecharmy.org)
Midwinter Day [Excerpt from a book length poem]
by Bernadette Mayer
(courtesy of the Poetry Foundation)
I write this love as all transition
As if I’m in instinctual flight,
a small lady bug
With only two black dots on its back
Climbs like a blind turtle on my pen
And begins to drink ink in the light
of tradition
We’re allowed to crowd love in
Like a significant myth
resting still on paper
I remember being bitten by a spider
It was like feeling what they call
the life of the mind
Stinging my thigh like Dante
this guilty beetle
Is a frightening thing
When it shows its wings
And leaps like the story of a woman who
once in this house
Said the world was like a madhouse
cold winds blowing
And life looks like some malignant disease,
Viewed from the heights of reason
Which I don’t believe in
I know the place
Taken by tradition is like superstition
And even what they call the
Literary leaves less for love
I know
The world is straight ice
I know backwards the grief of life like chance
if I can say that
I can say easily I know you
like the progression
From memory to what they call freedom
Or reason
though it’s not reason at all
It’s an ideal like anarchism though it’s not an ideal
It’s a kind of time that has flown away from causes
Or gotten loose from them, pried loose
Or used them up, gotten away
no one knows why
Nothing happens
There is no reason, there’s no dream
it’s not inherited
Like peace but it’s not peace
there’s no beginning
To participate:
• Choose one of Mayer’s experimental techniques or create one of your own. If you’d like, you can share your methodology or process notes at the end of your poem.
• Copy the direct link to the URL and paste it, along with your name, in the Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post.
• Engage in community building, a primary principle here at the pub, by investigating the work of others, reading and commenting. One of the best ways to become a better poet is to read and reflect on the work of your peers. Please provide positive, constructive feedback and appreciation. It’s how we show respect for one another at the pub.
• Share your work and that of others on your social networks. Encourage other poets to join us here at the pub.
very cool anna…really enjoyed looking over the list…and contrary to the subject of my poem, i did enjoy trying out something new…gonna keep that list as well for days i need a kicker…
So wonderful to hear that Brian; I think she’s given us some great, stimulating ideas.
I, too, bookmarked her page…
I want to know and learn how to write postmodern poetry.
The first two articles in the series are here: https://dversepoets.com/2012/10/04/meeting-the-bar-postmodern-prose/ & https://dversepoets.com/2012/11/01/meeting-the-bar-postmodern-highlow-art/. Thanks for joining us today!
what a cool article anna…really enjoyed perusing the list…and will return to it when i need a kicker…was fun playing in a different way….my approach was somewhat inspired by victoria as well…i nejoy when she takes this approach as well…
Yeah, Victoria does a fantastic job with the variations and sections inspired by Wallace Stevens.
sorry i commented twice was getting a goofy error on my end….might just have been local as i dumped all the cookies and cleared history on my end and can see comments now…
Bringing an older post to play today…very scarce in it’s wording…more scarce than I usually am (yes…I know I’m a big mouth) Hoping everyone enjoyed a wonderful holiday!
I’m looking forward to it (not, of course, because the words are scarce :), but it’s great to be back and the pub)!
What a lovely list–I started to do 25 versions of the same poem (eeks–don’t worry, chose short forms), but then pooped out after 9. Might add more later. This was FUN!
Fantastic you had fun and I can’t wait to read them!
oh i want some snow after reading yours susan…wonderful…
yay we got our first snow yesterday! smiles….loved your susan…
i’m not jealous, i’m not jealous, i’m not jealous…ha… *pouts her lips*
haha…hey i have been jealous of everyones snow so far this year…was starting to think we would get none…more on saturday is what i hear…i hope it dumps on us…
Oh, me too–well, I was happy until I had to clear two feet of it off my car, LOL. Anyway, I finally came up with 25 perspectives. Stole from myself to do it 😉
http://susandanielspoetry.com/2012/12/27/25-versions-of-1-snowfall/
a fantastic prompt anna…very cool ideas on that list as well…happy writing everyone and i need to check out more of Mayer’s work as well..
Claudia, she has a lot of edgy stuff I think you’d really enjoy (check out Ode to Periods). Loved your response to the experiments!
Ode to Periods sounds great..will def. check it out…
oh heck yes…edgy indeed…goodness..ha..smiles
Awesome!
Anna- Your articles are always so informative, well-written and challenging… thank you!
Happy New Year to all!
Thanks so much Laurie! That means a lot to me. Happy New Year!
bernadette mayer seems to be such an interesting character as well…wouldn’t it be so very cool to be able to share a drink and talk to her a bit…ha…
Very true.
this is so cool, Anna! I’ll keep taht list bookmarked – so many wonderful ideas…
I’m not really sure what to think of mine… it kind of caught me off guard, if that makes any sense. late dinner for me, then on to reading 🙂
*that… sorry, my stomach is distracting me 😉
next time i will have a warm soup ready for you…smiles
awwww…. that sounds like heaven!
smiles…you know…i only pretend to be a poet…in reality, i’m a pumpkin soup wizard…but…psssshhh…don’t tell anyone…smiles
hahaha i am sure only the pumpkin soup wizard knows the secret ingredient to make your poetry so wonderful. i am gald you’re ‘pretending’… 😉
ha, its the knowing the ingredients that go in to make it taste right that helps the poetry i think…smiles.
oooh… or that. 😀
Sometimes that can be a good thing, being caught off guard and unclear about the results. I know for me that can signal a poetic breakthrough :). I’ll be by to check it out soon!
I really enjoyed the list of ideas too, Anna, and like others have said, I will be keeping the list as well. I am sure there will be other opportunities to use it….thanks for an interesting prompt.
there she is….mary…enjoyed your take on it…
Thanks Mary, I have used it a few times myself and always learn something new :).
alright…off to get my beauty sleep and back in the AM to catch up with the overnights….have a wonderful evening everyone!!
Sleep well and dream of snow. I’d send you some of ours but I think it wouldn’t be the same :).
On top of the surreal prompt at the imaginary garden, I think I have strayed into an unknown dimension, one in which I am a galumphing alien. The only experimental poem I can offer is my response to the surreal prompt mentioned above. Now I am going to read everyone’s poems for enlightenment.
check out the list in the article…there are any number of ways you can answer this one…i think we have only scratched the surface in the inspirations mentioned…
You’ve sure piqued my curiosity :D!
Lots of flexibility in this request. Thanx, as always, Anna, for the education. I just tried posting, but it failed. I will try again in 5 minutes.
You’re welcome, glad the Mr. Linky worked out in the end.
Your post is very informative Anna and I have saved the links as well ~
I actually wrote more than one poem after reading the writing experiments, so thanks for sharing your knowledge and love of writing ~
Very much appreciated by me ~
Thanks Grace, I’m so happy to hear the list worked for you! I’ll be by soon to read what you came up with in response.
after what you graced us with, i cant wait to see what else you came up with…its been a rather poetry rich end of the week for me as well…3-4 a day in the new notebook i got for christmas…
Well no one can beat you with posting (except Pat who is 90 posts ahead) almost every day Brian. The downtime has been good to me as well ~
You know we can write to this prompt again and again, trying out different ways of the writing process. Thanks for stretching our work Anna ~
ha i used to post every day the first year i blogged…then 6 days for a few years…five is a good number for me now…fridays and mondays off…fits me well…and yes we can and i will probably return to this one often…
In a little bit I have to get ready to head to the airport. Inclement weather means the flight was delayed so I won’t return to the prompt tonight (I’ll be getting home at midnight). Thanks for the great responses and I’ll be in tomorrow morning to see what magic happens overnight.
drive safe out to the airport…and take good care of that passenger as well…smiles…
Will do, he’s very precious!
Cool prompt, Anna. I am not in a very good circumstance for writing today, but I may have some time mid-day tomorrow. Hope so. Thanks for inspiration. k.
Cool list also, Anna. k.
Thanks, I’ll look forward to it tomorrow if anything comes up :).
sure to get some different stuff tonight..excellent prompt..actually did some reading first.. 🙂
Wonderful to hear; I am heading out the door but will check in tomorrow morning.
alright got everyone to bed and grabbing the last couple before bed….be back manana
…very interesting Anna… thank you for bringing this up here at the Pub… i, literally, printed the ‘Writing Experiments’ of B. Mayer as my reference… i find it really helpful in honing my crafts… and, yes, a good exercise of mind…. I just recently discovered the Poetry Foundation site and i’m enjoying the read in there… smiles…
Happy New Year to you and all…
Yes, there’s lots of good information at the Poetry Foundation. Happy New Year!
Thanks for the resources, Anna. I started off in a bit of a contrary mood. So Ionesco of me.
smiles…yours sparked me to read the Humpty-Dumpty and Alice conversation…and triggered also an interesting online discussion…smiles…
Can’t wait :)!
Hope i kept to form a mix of tired and meds not good and all the best to you all
No worries on that account :).
Brilliant prompts from the ‘Writing Experiments’ ~ I too shall keep it for the future. Thank you Anna.
Yes, I’ve found them to be fun and useful time and again!
Beautiful. Knocked the socks off me!
dave, welcome back…hope you had a good holiday!
Fantastic!
happy almost new year!
wonderful prompt, Anna. i hope i got it right.
afraid i’ll have to come back to visit once i’ve gotten some sleep ~ it’s after 5:30am and i was up all night writing my poem. rather blurry-eyed but had a great time! why is it, i wonder, that i often spend all night working on something for the pub? {smile}
see everyone later~ i’m really looking forward to seeing the results of this prompt!
Happy almost New Year to you – somewhat like a very merry unbirthday. Hope you get some good rest.
As ever, nice to catch up with other streams of poetry. I have gone for theft( ahem, inspiration) and playing with transformation. Family life still very tricky here so limited time for a round
john! great to see you man…hope the holidays were well for you….
Haha, nice.
think we are going to head home early and race the storm so we dont get stuck or snowed in with the storm we are to get this eve…so will be around when i can…will catch up and return comment this eve…
travel safe…
Travel safe and thanks for tending this morning; we got in after 1:30 from all the delays and snow. Luckily there’s no storm here today.
just made it back here…the house smells of indian food…fam is lost in computer games and reading…and for me it’s time to light a candle and read some of your poetry…smiles
Indian food is my favorite :).
Stopped by to enjoy the post. Thank you.
Agh! Endless secuitry
I think earlier comment didn’t go through — in endless airports today. Will try to post but may miss mr. Linky. K.
ugh…airports and security…not fun…wishing you safe travels k.
Thanks. Accompanied my mom back to Florida now back to new York, and I hope eventually upstate. Usually Orlando has okay wifi but nothing working and hips – ahem- sore! K.
caught up and back to my book….reading jeffery deaver…the broken window…so good…
I think this is my favorite dverse prompt ever. I’ve never been so excited to read all the other poems. Thank you, Anna.
That’s fantastic!
“Read a novel backwards.” I do this one all the time, but not with novels; just with words or phrases.
For example, I could turn “words or phrases” into “says a harp of roses, drowning.” Then I’ll loop around and keep rereading to find new words. I can write entire poems working with just two or three words, backward-reading them over and over.
Ooh, this one is good too: “Write what cannot be written” Quite a dare, I’d say.
“Attempt writing in a state of mind that seems least congenial.” Ha! Nice.
“Write on a piece of paper where something is already printed or written.” Oh yeah, this is good.
“Write a work gazing into a mirror without using the pronoun I.” Awesome! This would make a great dverse prompt all on its own. A one-sentence prompt. Now that would get some attention! However, it would be easy to gaze into a mirror without using “I.” Writing a poem without the word “I” would be much harder though. 😉
This is good too: “Write the same poem over and over again, in different forms, until you are weary.”
And this: “Set yourself the task of writing for four hours at a time. … Don’t stop until hunger and/or fatigue take over.”
Thanks again, Anna. This is great.
Haha, those are all awesome; thank you for your enthusiasm!
Thank you for another interesting post Anna. Happy New Year! I think I have always been post modern even when everything was pre modern…I’m not sure what it is..but I have been told that I am:)
Haha, Happy New Year!
Thank you all very much for your excellent responses. I had my first trip to the hospital which has delayed me significantly in replying. However, I am feeling much better and look forward to making rounds today :)!