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Growing up, I had a friend—Charlie. He was one of those guys you just had to hang around long enough and you knew something crazy was going to happen. There was the night four of us sang to our waitress at a pizza parlor—only to find out her boyfriend was the cook, and carried a very big butcher knife. Another night we went to Goodwill and bought the zaniest outfits we could find (fitting was not a concern) and went to the minor league baseball game to put on a little act.
Mud bogging in a four door sedan. The night, at 3 AM, when the knocking on my window did not wake me up, but my dad went outside with the shotgun while Charlie hid under the car. Setting the table with the fine china at a friends house, while he and his family slept upstairs.
Charlie got me to do things I never would have done on my own.
Don’t get me wrong, I was a willing participant. Smiles. This is part of the magic of OpenLinkNight. Every week when I read, you inspire me. If you read, you will be inspired. There is always someone that tries something new. A new way of saying something. A perspective. A word. A rhyme. A rhythm. Something that challenges me to try it.
My name is Brian Miller and tonight I will be your host—fresh off a week break—and ready to get this poetry thing on…
Here is how it works:
- Write ~ a poem, post it to your web page
- Link ~ by clicking on the Linky button below and entering the URL to your poem
- Read ~ pick some poems to read
- Respond ~ leave them feedback, what did you like? what inspired you?
Hey, anyone can do that eh? If you can do those things—welcome, we are glad to have you. Smiles. I will look for you out on the trail! ~Brian
Happy Open Link Night everyone!
welcome kelly….just got the kids out of the classroom and on my way around…
More than a week! lol
cat….that did not even rhyme…you are slipping…smiles…
Missed you last week, Bri…Glad to see ya’ again! Cheers!
cheers back to you j…
good to be back
haha..think we all had and have those charlies in our lives and sometimes were those charly…ha…smiles… happy oln everyone and it’s good how we inspire each other… that’s one of the things that makes this such a rich place for me…smiles
sometimes we are those chalies…haha…true that…and i agree on the inspriation…thanks for your hard work last week claudia…smiles.
You (and everyone) inspire me to continue writing and trying out new forms ~ Nice to see you Brian ~
Happy day to all ~
happy day to you as well grace…
i can say the same…smiles.
Mr. B….just a short for me, please….thank you…funny how the days draw us here and there and yet the magnetism of friends and words feel like home and we return…comforted by familiar hands and faces…your open door policy is cherished by many, including myself
Peace
home is a good word…and familiar hands and faces…good to see you friend…need to rap with you again sometime…got a new number so will have to email it to you…
please do B…sailing in the morning, but I’m always connected
I love to have you back Brian.. I read your post and tried to visit many posts and try to do the same tonight….
thanks man…claudia said she saw you out on the trail a lot this weekend…that is very cool man…i will be out there soon….a little slow today…smiles.
I need to go to bed now – last night babysitting my niece who went to a Bieber concert…
haha…sleep well björn
oh my…a bieber concert eh? ha. bet she was singing all day…smiles.
Hi Brian….. Childhood friends are the best, and the memories born there have carried me through out my life. I wouldn’t be who I am today if I hadn’t experienced those incredibly insane yet fun years. Others often tell me not to live in the past, but I do so treasure my memories. Anyway, soon today will be the past. And so the comraderie, poetry and whimsical nature of some acutely fine artists here at d’verse will be with me always. Again, thanks for for sharing your time with us Brian….
ah i agree…those years def shaped part of who i am today….our past def informs our present so we can not escape it…
Sounds like a fun blog hop. Count me in.
welcome…smiles.
I had a Charlie in my life…his name was Doug…and he did the most outlandish things in life. Hard to follow him up.
I don’t know the interest in haiku here, but I found “Basho on Poetry” and used some of his words. Haiku can be very confusing, but this text of Basho makes plain and simple this issue of haiku. At the end I have added some of my own. Shield up for the bricks….
Operative words for haiku from Basho: Weirdness and Oddness. FIts.
Lady Nyo
ha. no bricks here…i have a growing appreciation of haiku this year…not all of it mind you as many are sloppily written…but…i am sure you are good…will be over soon…
I have a friend like that right now. She knows who she is 🙂 For example, we went to an exhibition of Edvard Munch’s work and the cafe menu had some of his work in the design. I found myself blagging a menu for this friend because she is a designer. And I did tell you all about the creative writing group I’m starting next week, didn’t I? She was mixed up in that happening too.
sounds like she is a good/bad influence….lol…fun fun on the class as well….must have missed the intel on the class…would love to hear about it…
It’s the one at the Grassmarket Community Project in Edinburgh – launch day is 3rd May. It’s coming in fast …
Hi, I’m Charlie. Ha! Not that Charlie, but if you’d been around in my younger days, you’d know it could’ve been me Brian was writing about. I cut quite a path when I was a yute.
ha. yes if you notice the tag…i probably could have been in jail for a few of the things we did if they would have caught us…smiles.
That’s what I’m talkin bout!!
Happy Open Link Night to all. 🙂 pour one for me, B.?
you got it…
and maybe a side of calamari…
😉
Hey Brian – So great to have you back! You get us to do all kinds of things we wouldn’t otherwise! Thanks much. k.
great to have you back as well k. – so enjoyed your india posts
Thanks so much for this wonderful forum, and happy Tuesday!
happy tuesday to you as well madeleine
Don’t the weeks just fly by. And such a good week for being outdoors. At last. Must have been Claudia’s Spring prod prompt from last Saturday 🙂
spring…wonderful spring…was biking to work today…. it was wonderful…blue sky…sun..cherry blossoms…sigh…
Happy Open Link Night! I tried a triolet.
Brian, I have missed you. So glad you’re back! Hi to everyone else–and yes, I’d miss you too!
smiles. i missed being here as well…
Nice to see you back with us, Brian. I hope the break was good for you. I will be round to read a bit later. Happy open link to all.
Pamela
happy oln pamela…just coming from your place…smiles
Welcome back Brian. I’ve written so much poetry this week that I didn’t know which to link. Eventually, I decided to link the poem that I have least confidence in, partly because the prompt was so complicated. I do hope people will feel free to critique it.
a poetry backlog is a wonderful thing viv…smiles…on my way over..
i feel you….i wrote a ton this last week and will filter them in as i dont want to give up that daily discipline of writing new stuff as well…
guess what i’m listening to and singing while out on the trail… the chances of anything coming from mars are a million to one he said…ha…so if there’s a green martian shadow with my comment…don’t wonder…smiles
Hi Brian,
My Charlie’s name is Patrick. Best friends for over 35 years. There was that time I ran into a business colleague at the grocery store. “Is that your husband”? she asked as he scurried away down the aisle. “No, my friend. We’re shopping for a party.” As we said our goodbye, she added, “Some party!” Little did I know that as I had been speaking with her, he had been filling up the cart with box after box of condoms and packages of lard, pigs feet, pickled eggs, anything gross he could find. I was only mad for 45 seconds.
I have 2 rare things tonight: a good mood and some spare time (right after bills are paid). That may leave me with no poem to write, but I’ll try. And I’ll be reading for sure! 🙂
smiles…hope that poem falls in your lap…hey it could even be about bills…smiles….hahahahahahahaha on the shopping trip…that is awesome….lol….you are going to have me chuckling for a bit…smiles.
bedtime for me over here…will be back tomorrow morning to catch up…
sleep well…
Welcome back Brian! We all need a break every once in a while, it’s good to see you again. Happy Open Link Night everyone!
I was the good son..didn’t have those kinds of crazy things in my childhood..nowadays…..hmmm
Welcome back Brian 😉 Won’t be posting yet, but look fwd to seeing what some folks write 😉
Time for me to head off for my beauty sleep; either it doesn’t work or I don’t sleep enough 😦
Hey Brian, It’s been a couple of weeks since I stopped by OLN, good to see you hosting tonight! Just coming in from work and happy to be spending some time at my favorite pub! Love your story! I was actually a rather quiet kid, until I too met a friend Charlie (same name, seriously!) and his sisters. We never did anything mean or harmful, but sure had a lot of good times. Actually still do, they took me in at 16, and have been my family since! You already commented on my share for OLN a while back, but stop by and say hello if you get a chance!! See you inside!!
ah you know i will…smiles….
i was a quiet kid…early on…ha…teen years changed that just a bit…i would not say we did anything mean…but we def had fun as well…funny on the same name too…hmm….
glad smiles are back
big smiles….
Good evening and happy open link night,
I have just posted a epic poem – and it is long – maybe ridiculously long for Tuesday night. Maybe I should give a prize for anyone who finishes it – lol.
Looking forward to reading everyones wonderful poetry tonight – see ya! K
ah you know i will…smiles…
and thank you for your emails during my time away…you def gave me much to think on…and some perspective as well…smiles.
smiling back atcha, my friend! K
Warm blessings to all 🙂
whassup poppy!
You’re back! Great to see you Brian–and everyone else too. I’ll be ’round throughout the eve. Happy OLN!
smiles…good to see you…and a wonderful magical verse tonight….
Glad to be joining you all tonight!
Sorry I’m so late, but we’re having some family situations… it’s all going to be okay. Brian, you naughty boy you… but why am I not surprised?
haha
Such fun memories. I hope was all have a few like that…glad that I do! Maybe not the same caliber, but…Out all day today, now it’s good to come home to POETRY at dVerse.
smiles…good to see you victoria…poetry time is good time…we had lovely weather here today…was out earlier tossing ball with my sun…so it was good to be out…
Glad it’s getting nice. My memories of spring in your neck of the woods are of beauty and amazing azaleas. And I was out smacking a ball around a golf course…way too many times.
i grew up playing par 3 golf, so my short game is not bad…you just dont want to be driving by when i tee off…just saying…smiles.
Ha ha! Sounds like you had great fun and great friends. And I’m sure they have made their way in to many of your poems. Glad you are back and hopefully refreshed!
it was good to get away…and def helped to find some perspective as well..yeah i had a few nuts…charlie was def one of the biggest…
And thank you for always putting in 110% effort!
good morning…back and catching up…
good morning…about to head to bed my self…have a wonderful day claudia…
be back in the AM myself…
sleep well… biking to work now… back in the evening to read more..
Glad to see you back, Brian!! I was hoping your would come back soon. I had a Charle but her name was Cafern..Well thats what her dad called her. I called her Cat……Crazy Cat to be exact. She chose my fifieth birday to leave this world. It s just her way, though, she has to be the first to do everything first. Miss you hunny. Our kids are making me nuts…..Cant wait to have that beer and joint in heaven together.
smiles…ha….def something to look forward to you know…smiles…i am sorry for your loss, but glad for the time you had…
I always enjoy this poetic space but to my shame never interact as much as I feel I should. SO, today’s resolution, I have linked a new poem (more relevant to a previous evening, howsoever!) so I will systematically read through and engage with absolutely as many of the links as I can today. Looking forward to my mission, see you all on the way, Kevin.
have fun with it kevin…we def dont want to dictate someone having to read a certain number…as you cant dictate community…but i think there is much to gain in our rubbing together…sharpening each other…
Hello everyone! I miss writing with you all. As, soon as I have extra time I will. Always thinking of each and everyone of you.( New Job, dif hours.)
best of luck in the new job leah.. and hope things calm down soon so that you have time to write again…thanks for saying hi…
hey new job is a good thing right…smiles…congrats on that…
Nice to have you back brian. Love those Charlies in life. I think of them from time to time, and I hear them cheering me on when I need it.
Great post this is.. fun reading through the comments.
smiles…thank you ma’am…and they def can be an inspiration…