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Hi everyone! Here again is our guest prompter for dVerse: Rajani (Thotpurge) who blogs from Bangalore, India at thotpurge.wordpress.com. If you want to learn a little bit more of her, she has been interviewed by Sherry at Poetry United.
If this is your first time to write a haibun, please refer to this post. Here’s Rajani:
It’s haibun time again and I’d like to offer you lovely folks some mood setting Japanese poetry. These are waka from the Ogura Hyakunin Isshu, an anthology of 100 poems compiled in the 13th century, later translated by MacCauley.
Tsuki mireba
Chiji ni mono koso
Kanashi kere
Waga mi hitotsu no
Aki ni wa aranedo
– Oe no Chisato
As I view the moon,
Many things come into my mind,
And my thoughts are sad;
Yet it’s not for me alone,
That the autumn time has come.
Picture credit: here
Nageke tote
Tsuki ya wa mono o
Omowasuru
Kakochi gao naru
Waga namida kana
– Saigyo Hoshi
Should I blame the moon
For bringing forth this sadness,
As if it pictured grief?
Lifting up my troubled face,
I regard it through my tears.
Something about that mellow moonlight that brings out wistful longing and bitter sweet melancholy as if our hearts speak louder to the silver glow. Perhaps you will let the moon be your muse today.
As always, keep your prose concise and let your haiku shine!
If you’ve never joined us at a Dverse prompt, here’s how it works:
– Post your work on your blog and link the URL to this prompt using Mr. Linky below.
– Read and comment on the work of other participants, in the spirit of the community.
– Share your work on social media if you wish, using the hashtag #dversepoets
– Have hordes of fun creating your haibun!
Grace said:
Thanks to Thotpurge for hosting our Haibun Monday~ I look forward to reading your haibun ~
She will be with us shortly as it is still early morning in India ~
Magaly Guerrero said:
I, too, look forward to reading today’s haibun, Grace. I just love what this form does for the muse!
Grace said:
You are a natural storyteller Magaly ~
Magaly Guerrero said:
Thank you, Grace! I enjoy storytelling to no end, so those words mean a lot to me.
By the way, you might not remember, but it was you who introduced me to the haibun form a couple of years ago. I had never heard of it, and ended up writing something that read like one by accident. You left a comment on a piece that, at the time, I simply labeled “a mix of prose and haiku”, and you called it a “good haibun”.
I let Google free me from my ignorance, and have been in love with haibun ever since. So thank you for the introduction. ♥ 🙂 ♥
Grace said:
Happy to be part of your haibun journey Magaly 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… Didn’t expect it to be this early… We have no DST yet… Welcome everyone. I will go in and read, but will have to work a little … Lots to do at work presently
Grace said:
Yes, we just started our DST yesterday Sunday ~ I will be around to visit and comment when I go home ~
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
We go DST a few weeks from now… This year it’s going to be at easter.
Magaly Guerrero said:
Well, just think of all the yumminess that will be waiting for you when you get home. 😉
Magaly Guerrero said:
There is something, indeed, about the moonlight (and darkness) that makes the heart spill deep emotion, that makes her shine so ready to be compare with our moods. Mmmm, so much can be said about the moon…
Thanks you for bringing the moon into our Monday poetry, Rajani. 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Moon suits the Monday… doesn’t it?
Magaly Guerrero said:
It totally does.
writersdream9 said:
Thank you, Rajani for the inspiration of the moon! It’s one of my favorite topics! We will be having a full one soon.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Next full moon has to be on the other side of equinox… Easter is early this year.
writersdream9 said:
I think so! Looking forward! Here it’s cloudy a lot so I may not see it!
Magaly Guerrero said:
It’s the witchy woman from within, feeding of the silver yum… and howling, isn’t it? 😀
writersdream9 said:
Oh yes!
whimsygizmo said:
Hai, y’all. Have been around to those so far, and am enchanted by your moon glow.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I swoon from moon.
whimsygizmo said:
Yes. Me, too. Always.
Margaret Elizabeth Bednar said:
Second time playing with Haibun and I really enjoyed it! Trying to wrap my head around what really makes a haiku – trying to blend the Japanese and American…
Grace said:
Great to see you here Margaret ~ Haibun is quite addicting actually 🙂
thotpurge said:
Good Morning all… am just settling in to read all your fabulous haibun. Hope you’re having a lovely day!
Bodhirose said:
Good morning, Rajani…although it’s about 8:30PM here in Florida, U.S. Thank you for being our guest hostess again with the haibun. The moon will always be good subject matter I believe. I’ll be posting a little later in the week.
thotpurge said:
6AM here now! And dark…so the moon’s probably still out. I look forward to reading your post soon!
Grace said:
With the Daylight Saving Time now, our morning starts very dark too ~
Thanks for hosting and reading ~
thotpurge said:
My pleasure Grace… thanks for the opportunity. Such great haibun- we’ve got it all covered from love to ghosts and werewolves!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Good morning.. 6 AM here… Will read a little before going to work.
thotpurge said:
6AM seems to be the preferred time to read poetry!
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
For me this got all mixed up with the ‘toads’ prompt from Brendan about one’s Muse as paramour. (The moon is Muse.)
thotpurge said:
Love and inspiration forever…!! A good mix up Rosemary 🙂
kim881 said:
Thank you Grace, for an interesting challenge. I saw Bjorn’s poem yesterday afternoon, long before I was able to see the challenge, which always goes on while I am at choir practice, so I don’t get to read it until I get back and then it’s too late for me to think! So it’s now morning in the UK and, as always, I will write my own contribution before looking at anyone else’s, which I always look forward to. That way I’m not influenced by other people’s work.
thotpurge said:
I try to do that too…not read any of the posts until I’ve completed my own!
kim881 said:
I’m just working my way through them now 🙂
Walt Wojtanik said:
I have to say this venue certainly does stoke the creative fire. A link to my second Haibun added to my first (instead of overloading the Linky thing). Love this form and the works I’ll enjoy later!
Grace said:
Please add another link into Mr. Linky Walt ~ The more the merrier for Haibun ~
Hannah Gosselin said:
Thank you…I love haibun Monday…sorry to be so late to the party…I look forward to reading you all over the next couple of days. 🙂
Grace said:
Thanks for joining us Hannah 🙂