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For those of us who celebrate, Christmas and New Year are well and truly over, decorations are down and, in the UK, the January sales are not what they used to be.
Children have gone back to school and most people in employment are back at their places of work. I found a poem by John Updike that captures January well:
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/january-30/
There is an overall feeling of emptiness, which is reflected in the January skies: they are grey, there are no birds and, at the moment of writing, hardly a breeze.
I may feel this way because the beginning of January is when my mother died two years ago. I found a poem by British poet Pete Crowther that expresses this perfectly:
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-cold-day-in-january/
Of course, January will not seem like this to everyone, especially those of us who live in the southern hemisphere and are experiencing their summer; which is why today I would like you to write no more than three tight paragraphs about January, followed by a traditional haiku that includes reference to a season.
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
- Write a haibun in response to the challenge.
- Enter a link directly to your haibun and your name by clicking Mr Linky by clicking Mr Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy. You will find links to other poets and more will join, so check back later to read their haibun.
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems read.
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
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kim881 said:
Welcome to the first Haibun Monday of 2019! It’s a cold windy night over here in the UK so I think warm drinks are in order. Irish coffee and Baileys hot chocolate, anyone?
Grace said:
Hello Kim! That is a tempting drink on a cold winter afternoon here. I will have one.
Thank you for hosting our first Haibun Monday for 2019.
kim881 said:
Irish coffee coming up!
Gina said:
yes for me please, Bailey’s with lots of ice, a warm warning on the equator. Lovely Haibun prompt to start the new year Kim. Hope you are night will be warm and cosy. Excited to read what January is like for folks across the globe.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Gina. A Baileys is coming right up! We’ve had flood warnings along the North Norfolk coast, due to the so-called spring tides, the high winds and the change in temperature – it’s getting colder. I lit the fire in our log burner earlier and it’s nice and toasty at the moment.
Gina said:
Typhoon warning for some parts here in Southeast Asia but I am not in harm’s way. stay safe and toasty! I can just picture your cosy scene.
msjadeli said:
Kim yes please on Baileys and coffee YUM. Updike has it right, dark to dark. As I’ve been staying up later and then getting up later there is maybe 5 hours of light at most, feeble cloudy light, but better than dark. Rainy all day here. It should be easy to cook up a haibun today.
kim881 said:
Darkness and rain as inspiration – I’m looking forward to reading your haibun, Jade.
msjadeli said:
Kim it’s in Mr. Linky now. Looking forward to your feedback.
Christine Bolton said:
My mother also dies in January in the UK. January is always a depressing month 😢
kim881 said:
Mum’s anniversary is on Wednesday, the day I lead the Bounce and Rhyme session at the library in the morning and listen to children read at a local infant school in the afternoon. I’ll just have to paint on a smile and get on with it.
Christine Bolton said:
I’m so sorry 😐 My mum died 21 years ago and next week is the anniversary. I struggle every year. I find the month so depressing even though I live in a sunny climate. Thinking of you Kim 💕
kim881 said:
Thank you so much, Christine. xxx
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
In Sweden these weeks of January are called the ox weeks…. dreary and slow like an ox working the fields… depending on how you feel it will last until Easter, but I prefer to let them last until my Birthday, the last day of January…
kim881 said:
It’s our anniversary the day before your birthday! I like the name ‘ox days’.
kanzensakura said:
I like ox days! So fitting.
merrildsmith said:
Ox weeks is great! I will have to remember that one!
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V.J. Knutson said:
Ah January – so bleak. Thanks for inspiring some creativity, Kim.
kim881 said:
Thanks for joining us, V.J.
V.J. Knutson said:
Your prompt touched the places that needed expressing. Thanks, Kim.
kanzensakura said:
thank you Kim for this prompt. I am sorry about your mother. I feel the same way about June – depressing month. But at least you will have the smiles of those children to help you through.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Toni. Now you’ve written that, I’m looking forward to seeing them after a few weeks off.
ladynyo said:
Hello Kim and everyone else. Happy New Year. I love this season for the silence, the starkness and potential. My Haibun is of fresh grief. January is a season if it sometimes.
kim881 said:
Hello Jane! I’m so glad you’ve joined us. 🙂
ladynyo said:
thank you for twisting my arm. LOL!
kim881 said:
🙂
rob kistner said:
January is a time of rejuvenation for all things wild in the Pacific Northwest. We are notorious for winter rains. While they might get a bad rap, truth is, they are a prime reason for the beauty and bounty of this lush region. So I am taking this opportunity of Kim’s excellent prompt, to celebrate our January sky water.
rob kistner said:
Oh, and lest I forget my manners, thank you for the prompt Kim. Very well considered! 🙂
kim881 said:
🙂
Nora said:
I’m a PacNorWester, too, but with a heavy dose of seasonal affective disorder. I always look forward to that snap of cold and clear weather we get in January for the three days of sunshine it brings.
Thanks for the prompt, Kim, and hello!
kim881 said:
Hello Nora!
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revivedwriter said:
I like the poems that you shared. Thank you. I will be back to post my own haibun later.
kim881 said:
I’m so pleased you enjoyed the poems. I’m off to bed in a bit but I’ll be back in the morning to continue reading and commenting.
Charmed Chaos said:
Adding my January so far from the desert here! Thanks for hosting Kim!
kim881 said:
Thanks for giving us a January from the desert, Linda. I’ll have to read it in the morning as it’s my bed time. Night night!
Charmed Chaos said:
Sleep well!
kim881 said:
Thank you, Linda!
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kim881 said:
The writing this week is outstanding and I’m struggling to keep up. It’s nearly bed time, so if I haven’t read your haibun yet, don’t think I’ve forgotten you. I’ll be back to read and comment again in the morning!
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merrildsmith said:
Thank you for the prompt, Kim. I am sorry about your mother. Last year at this time, my mom was in the hospital, and it was a horrible few weeks. I’ve had one of these days, today, and I’m just seeing the prompt now,. I won’t get a haibun written tonight, but perhaps tomorrow. 🙂
kim881 said:
Thanks Merril. Don’t worry about taking time with your haibun; the prompt is open until Sunday and I’m just up again after a restless night. I look forward to it. 🙂
merrildsmith said:
Hope you feel better, Kim. I have an overdue book chapter to work on and a test assignment to finish, so the Haibun might have to wait a bit till later today. 🙂
kim881 said:
😊
Mish said:
Hi Kim. I’m sorry for your loss. I know that grief is a journey over time. January can be a month of mixed emotions. Thanks for hosting. 🙂
kim881 said:
Thank you so much, Mish. I’m just up again after a restless night. Its still windy and chilly here. I’m ready for a good read at the dVerse pub this morning.
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Frank J. Tassone said:
Good Evening, Poets! Thanks, Kim, for the timely prompt! 🙂
kim881 said:
Welcome Frank!
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lynn__ said:
This one flowed for me…sometimes tears flow too. A hug and thanks, Kim, for sharing Irish coffee and poetry with us here.
kim881 said:
Thank you, Lynn. And thanks for sharing your poetry at the pub.
lynn__ said:
It’s my pleasure.
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Just Barry said:
My mom died in January too. It’s quite the burden. I empathize. *big hugs*
For my haibun, I chose a topic only slightly less depressing for me.
Nah, I’m kidding. I chose to whine about my sportsball team losing in the worst way possible.
kim881 said:
Thank you for the hugs, Barry! It’s early morning here and I’m preparing myself for a big read!
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Sabio Lantz said:
Testing, could not post comment on previous Sonnet post — is it turned off?
kim881 said:
The sonnet post should stay open for the rest of the month, Sabio.
kim881 said:
Did you mean the dIverse prompt? I checked it and you’re linked up to it.
Sabio Lantz said:
Thanks Kim. Yes, I meant the comments on the prompt post. But I checked again, and now it is working. Thanks for checking!
kim881 said:
You’re welcome!
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