You would learn very little in this world if you were not allowed to imitate. And to repeat your imitation until some solid grounding in the skill was achieved and the slight but wonderful difference that made you YOU and no one else could assert itself.
-Poetess, Mary Oliver
When I consider the importance of skill in any field, my mind wanders back to my early years in nursing. In those days (I was with Florence in the Crimean war…or maybe it was a few years later) the basic education for nurses was very hands-on, so that at the end of our training we were able to manage a full load of acute care patients and even play the role of house supervisor in the hospital. Granted, soon after I graduated, requirements changed. I had to return to school for a Baccalaureate and, eventually, a Master’s Degree in my field. But it was that initial training that rendered me competent to access veins, assess a patient, administer medications…in effect, provide competent, caring service to the sick.
Just as I learned nursing through “doing” in consort with the didactic education that helped me understand the pathology of disease and the reasons behind each intervention, so too, I’ve tried to hone the crafts of poetry and fiction-writing through putting pen to paper. But as I immersed myself in this world of word-art, I continue to prime my skills through reading, writing and soaking in the wisdom of the masters and of fellow poets in writing communities who make the blogosphere a place of magic for those of us wanting to grow in our métier.
Going back to nursing for a moment, I recall the process for learning new skills. An instructor demonstrated a procedure to the students who then returned the demonstration…often on another student. There was always an aspect of mentoring. Even of imitation.
When we think of imitation, we tend to look down on it. I recall attending a writing conference in which a keynote speaker suggested copying the work of favorite authors, word-for-word, for chapters, until we got the feel of his or her voice. I couldn’t buy into that advice, although I do agree that prolific reading of quality literature enhances one’s ability to write.
Your first response to the quote of Mary Oliver that I chose to open this post could be, No way. That’s plagiarism. That’s a capital offense. Oliver disagrees, tells her readers that she believes imitation helps the beginner (and, in some respects, we’re always beginners) to learn well that which may be learned only partially.
What are some ways in which imitation can be useful?
• Review of rhymed and metered poetic forms, studying the cadence, the beat, can help give a feel for effective rhythm, whether that is applied to form poetry or free verse.
• Study of time-honored poets introduces perennial themes and expands vocabulary.
• Reading the work of contemporary poets gives rise to new forms, manners of expression, experimental verse. Consider how ideas have come to you while browsing our poetic communities.
There are dangers in imitation. It’s easy to become so enmeshed in another’s voice that you lose yourself in the process. You want your own voice to emerge, and emerge in its own unique tone.
I recently voted for a poem in a contest that included an anonymous submission process, but the voice was so distinct I knew it was the work of our own Claudia. Most of us are able to recognize the work of poets who appeal to us, whether they are world-renowned or members of our own poetry groups. If someone says to you, “I would recognize your voice anywhere,” you are on the way to arriving.
For this week’s prompt, consider writing a poem in imitation of another poet—but please allow your own voice to sing out.
Here is an example of what I’m referring to. I was amazed to see that Hedgewitch’s OLN post featured Wallace Stevens’ Thirteen Ways of Looking at Blackbirds, as I’d already drafted this post. If you didn’t get a chance to read it then, check out http://www.poets.org/viewmedia.php/prmMID/15746 Serendipity calls, don’t you agree?
Now, allow me to share with you one of several poems I’ve written, using Stevens’ poem as inspiration:
thirteen ways of looking at trees
i
trees know
to bend with the wind
otherwise they will snap.
ii
in the winter
trees seem to die
that is when
they send down roots
a lot happens
beneath the surface
iii
some people are like trees
they reach out
comfort
provide food
shelter
beauty
iv
others
like some trees
are invasive they
choke
stifle
lesser life forms
v
trees
like some people
survive
without a lot of attention
nature provides
water
food
sometimes if they are weak
they need support
now and again
you have to prune
dead branches
vi
if you plant a tree
you are responsible for it
make sure you choose
with care
it like adopting
a child or
a pet
due diligence is needed
before you commit
vii
everyone should have
a special tree
to hold in memory
a place to go
when you are
afraid
tired
lonely
in that way
a tree is like
a mother’s lap
viii
once you put down roots
you will grow
if you become one
with your place in life
ix
learn from trees
even though they have differences
they are all trees
they belong together
x
trees are like families
sometimes
they have to give way
to make room
to one another
xi
even though trees
are many different colors
they are still trees
contrast makes them
stand out
outstanding
xii
when you puncture
a tree’s trunk
with nails
it will bleed
when you puncture
another’s heart
with words
it too will bleed
xiii
in time trees
like people
will die
to make room
for new life.
Now, I invite you to participate in this prompt, sharing, not only your poetry, but, perhaps, introducing us to poets we may not have met as yet. Consider including a link to their work in your submission. As for joining up, you know the drill:
• Write a poem and post it on your blog,
• Include your name and the link to your work using Mr. Linky,
• Take some time to visit and comment on other poets.
• Above all, have fun.
This is our chance to open up our work for critique and to hone our own skills in offering suggestions to one another. Refer back to previous critique posts for reminders on the process, remembering that the goal is to build up and support, not destroy. As a suggestion, take time to do a thorough, detailed review of the poems linked just before and after your own. Then do a comment on others as time allows, offering suggestions if you will. Keep in mind, as well, that your work is yours. When you receive feedback, I suggest (as they say in 12-Step Programs) “Take what you like, and leave the rest!”
Thank you, wonderful Pub Poets. I’m Victoria Ceretto-Slotto, honored to be a part of dVerse Poets’ Pub. You’ll find me at http://liv2write2day.wordpress.com
brian miller said:
great article and challenge victoria…i agree there are dangers in mimicry as you do not want to lose your own voice, but i do think there is much to be said of reading the works of others and finding your own inspiration…
i picked ee cummings,as i really enjoy his word play and while i linked one of his poems to mine, it is not the one i took inspiration directly from. it is more his style i borrowed….
Gene said:
It seems we were both inspired by Mr. cummings today, Brian, ha.
brian miller said:
what an inspiration he is though…enjoyed yours for sure…
zongrik said:
posted the poem son, which i would like critiqued
Beth said:
Thank you for the great intro article. I have tried to write in imitation many times. I have failed every time except when thinking along the lines of the famous Dr. Seuss, his infectious rhythm and rhyme. So I’m back with a new Seuss humor. I’m looking forward to reading what is offered.
Beth
brian said:
ha i love dr seuss…yours was def enjoyable….
tashtoo said:
Oh my…a wonderful article, Victoria! My rhyming ways are a direct influence of Blake and Carroll…two amazing wordsmiths that held me spellbound at a young age! Their rhythm and wit, even then I found to be mesmerizing! The Tyger…to this day, will always make me smile.
brian said:
nice so you going to grab that tyger by the tale and spin one tash?
claudia said:
thanks victoria for an excellent article – i tried to sound bukowski…big challenge… what i love is that he always SAW the people in their loneliness, lovelessness or strife & angst and he makes me see them in his verse…
claudia said:
oh by the way…i once tried to sound like rainer maria rilke in a poem…that was the biggest disaster you can think of…i never posted this…
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tinkwelborn said:
Okay…I like mimicking. Here’s my contribution, one I did a few months ago on …”Aping Billy Collins”
pasted to Mr. Linky as http://wp.me/p102ON-1a
brian said:
nice i love billy collins….was one of the first poets i read….
Anna Montgomery said:
Oh Victoria, I was trying to eat salad when I got to the part about Florence (I should know better by now, you and your sneaky humor). An excellent introduction and your poem is lovely. I’m especially enamored by iii., iv., vii. (we have an enormous Douglas Fir next to the house), and viii. is wisdom to live by.
I was going to take the day off but you’ve lured me to poetry again today. I’ve posted excerpts from Mere Beasts (title taken from Hamlet), which directly engages two of Shakespeare’s heroines reinterpreted: Ophelia and Lavinia. I started this piece more than ten years ago (so embarrassing to admit I’m not finished). I wanted to enter into a dialogue with the writer’s work.
manicddaily said:
Hi Victoria, great prompt. I’m sorry I’ve used an older poem, after Marlowe. I love love love Wallace Stevens and loved your version, but I am a bit overwhelmed at the moment. Your advice is terribly useful. K.
bkmackenzie said:
had time to get one in…blessings..bkm
brian said:
woot great to see you bk!
ed pilolla said:
good writers borrow. great writers steal. someone told me hemingway said that but i don’t know. there are specific rules and debates as to the number of words that constitute plagiarism.
liv2write2day said:
Thanks for all the above comments. I’m looking forward to reading everyone…and time being what it is, I’m reposting another, older take-off on Stevens’ “thirteen ways of looking at a blackbird.” And I welcome your critique on this one or on the one in the article.
vivinfrance said:
I Ithe article and all the responses. My response arrived too late for Mister Linky, and it is not a new poem – when first posted it aroused anger in Ted Hughes fans! http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com/2011/03/13/repeated-lines-for-httpdjvorreyer-wordpress-com/
Valerie said:
Nothing I’ve written to offer yet, but I’d love to share the work of a great poet that I discovered last year: Frances Chung. You can read a lot of her work here: http://books.google.com/books?id=GRM-bPO2uhsC&printsec=frontcover&source=gbs_ge_summary_r&cad=0#v=onepage&q&f=false
I’ve attempted to imitate her sparse, imagistic style a few times without great success, but I will certainly keep trying.
claudia said:
thanks for the recommendation val – checked her out and really great poetry….def. on the poets to read list..
SuzyQ said:
What a wonderful article brimming with a few of my favourite things…Wallace Stevens, Mary Oliver, who I only wish I could imitate more keenly 🙂
Had fun with this one!
Thank you for the challenge.
Seasideauthor Sharon Rose © said:
ASIDE for Suzy ; Very good write especially the two different images in ways to fight in battle. One is on your knees, the other with destruction. You are a very deep writer and I enjoyed hearing your voice. It is uniquely yours. Style was right spot on.
Someday I will get a comment through on your site.
Mark Kerstetter said:
Great article + prompt, Victoria. I hope you don’t mind, but parody is another form of imitation, and I couldn’t resist….
Heaven said:
Thank you Victoria for the wonderful post and tips. I would like to try this but unfortunately I am traveling back to Canada in a few hours. I am learning a lot from reading the work of others, watching closely the play of words and style. Also the critique/ comments are very helpful so I am going to be reading them as well.
brian said:
travel safe heaven….
thursdaychild1973 said:
I love your poem, and I love the original. I’ll have a go at my own 13 verse poem one of these days, but it will take more than a weekend as I tend to write shorter verse, the idea of writing 13 on the same topic is a bit daunting! 🙂 I couldn’t go past Wislawa Szymborska sor this submission. She is one of my favourites. I think I steal inspiration from all over the place, so not so easy to choose one poet’s style as inspiration.
hedgewitch said:
A very well written and engaging article, Victoria. I relied very heavily on imitation when I was an adolescent trying to learn to write my heart–from Poe and Stevens to Alfred Noyes to folk ballads. Their decades-old ghosts underlie all my current writing, I know. I also find when I read an author that makes an impression on me, my writing will sometimes unconsciously mimic that style. And you’re right, by repeating the ‘procedure’ that’s been demonstrated for us, we learn to obtain the result.
It really is an odd coincidence that we both chose that poem of Stevens’ to focus on this week–but it’s a great example of simplicity and diversity, and has plenty to offer the reader in style and substance.
hobgoblin2011 said:
Victoria, thanks for hosting tonight. A really “unique” topic- I had to say that for a prompt to imitate 🙂 But seriously, I completely agree with all you’ve written here. I could go on and on how civilizations and cultures have been built upon the shoulders of those who walked before, simply taking the knowledge that we’ve been shown, then adding our own flavor to the “art”
Love the topic, for me personally, I have tried something like this a few times before, yet I always find that my own voice overshadows the Sensei, or the opposite occurs and my voice is drowned in imitation. But I’ll give it another shot, at least I’ll try, but did want to drop a line here, as I absolutely love the topic tonight and can’t wait to read what others offer. Thanks again
Lori McClure (@lorimcspeaks) said:
Victoria, I really enjoyed reading this, but I have been struggling all afternoon with this one. I am strange about imitation. I always avoid it, but perhaps I’ve been going about this all wrong. In fact, I won’t even allow myself to read other links until I’ve finished writing my piece for any of the prompts that we do (for fear I’ll be influenced). I realize that we are all influenced by everything we’ve consumed, but I’ve always let it come out on its own.
So, I’m still trying, but I don’t know how successful I’ll be. This might just be an off week for me altogether. I never made it to OLN either. Lots of distractions this week 🙂 But, thank you for this perspective. It gives me much to think about.
brian said:
rock it lori…you know you will knock it out the park…smiles.
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Dee Martin said:
How could I resist – Mary Oliver is my favorite poet! I have “riffed” off other poets before. This is inspired by her poem “Wild Geese” but in my voice and style, so hopefully it is what you meant. I am not skilled at critique but I will try.
Leo said:
oops! sorry.. I didnt notice the consider part 😦 will share another soon if the linky is still open by then..
Joseph Harker said:
Some very complex thought and discussion in that post, thank you for sharing it. I posted a Whitman-esque one written recently… a very rough imitation of one of his, not sure that I’ll go back and edit it, but would be interested to see what people say. And will take a red pen to other imitations in turn if desired… :]
claudia said:
wow – been reading a bit before i head for work and i’m amazed at how many poets i met i’ve never heard of…really need to check them out…great takes on the challenge…looking forward to reading more in the evening
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Brendan said:
Great article, Victoria, got the engines running … Saul Bellow said that a writer was nothing more than a reader moved to emulation … I think of how the old Irish poets came to write, first they learned to recite the entire oral literature of the tribe (sitting in a dark singing-hut where they listened and absorbed the tales of Wooings and Adventures, Cattle-Thefts and Voyages) — only then, after they had their “reading” down, were they allow to write a lick of their own. Our education as poets is so founded on our reading … When I used to live close to my job at a newspaper, I would walk to work and back, briefcase in one hand, some volume of poetry or another in the other. Did that for five years straight: the cadences remained.
Anna Montgomery said:
I will be out all day but will return tonight to read and comment. The piece I posted is only about 15% of the whole (also, it is not my post from yesterday, Collisions, so please follow Mr. Linky he’ll take you to the right place :)).
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Richarde M. Talbot aka Alabama Detour said:
Thank you for the prompt and the opportunity to share. I was inspired, in part, by a favorite poet, Naomi Shihab Nye. Critique welcome.
Seek the Sun said:
Great article! Since none of us live in a vacuum, no matter how much we feel we have an original voice, we are all influenced by the world around us. Then we add it to our experience and come up with our own take on it. My influences have helped me to be a better poet and artist as well. Poe, Emily Dickinson, Robert Frost, Rumi to name but a few.
Skylover said:
Strangely enough, I was inspired to write something in the vein of Eleanor Farjeon’s ‘It was long ago’ earlier this week, so this ‘Meeting the Bar’ is serendipitous. Thanks to all who have already commented.
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Gene said:
So glad I found time today to submit for this wonderful prompt.
libraryscene said:
a very fun challenge, thank you…it inspired me to do something a bit different today, to revisit a poet whom I find fascinating ~
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Victoria, I really loved the topic today. I wanted to write one and had an Adrienne Rich poem that I thought I would try to somehow mimic; alas, the RealWorld has torn me from my poetic aspirations and once again I have nothing to offer nor little time to read. I’m feeling quite sad and torn away from this, my poetic family. I know there will be time to recoup, just not today. Looking forward to something fairly simple to write next week 4 FormForAll…I’m thinking etherees. That will be rather straightforward for people to read and write, I think. Sorry, again.
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rallentandallentanda said:
Thank you for this interesting article Victoria. I think it is a rewarding intellectual exercise to write in the style of a poet, especially one you admire. MIne is Shakespeare and although I can never aspire to the genius of the Master it is lovely
to bask in his sunshine.
I agree with your comment re the talent of some of the blog poets. There are a few
that produce consistently breathtaking work. It reinforces my belief that being published is not necessairily a bench mark of determining talent.We need only think of so much excruciatingly dreary poetry languishing in dusty tomes undisturbed in academic instituions.
Cheers
Rall
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said:
enjoyed this prompt very much.
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