Hello, dVerse Poets! This is Merril from Yesterday and Today welcoming you to Meeting the Bar (MTB) where we explore a poetic form or technique. Today, I’d like to introduce you to the Triversen, a form invented by the American poet and physician William Carlos Williams. Along with H.D. Williams and Ezra Pound, he was considered one of the leaders of the Imagist movement. He believed the Triversen was a truly modern American form.
There seems to be a considerable difference in what constitutes a Triversen (“triple verse sentence”). I’ve tried to simplify it here.
Here are the basic rules:
*Three-line stanzas (Tercets). Each tercet is a sentence.
- The tercets are grammatical, and they are broken by breaths,
the accents and rhythms of normal speech—two to four beats per line.
*Unrhymed
The ideal length is 18 lines or 6 stanzas, but even Williams did not always follow that rule.
Ideally, each line is two to four beats, or stressed syllable (not total syllables). Williams disliked iambic pentameter, but others have written Triversen poems with more beats.
Here are some additional points that are often mentioned.
*Alliteration—it contributes to the stress syllables
*Imagist
Here is the most often cited example of a Triversen by William Carlos Williams, “On Gay Wallpaper.” Gay did not have the same connotations as it does today. 😉
So, for today’s challenge, write a Triversen poem, following the rules above–at least make your poem unrhymed tercets with each stanza making a sentence. It can be on any subject. But I know sometimes it’s easier with some sort of theme. One suggestion might be to look around wherever you are and write about something in the room (as in Williams’ wallpaper), or write a poem about the view from your window.
Here is an ekphrastic option, as well. Last month, we saw a wonderful exhibition at the Philadelphia Museum of Art called Mary Cassatt at Work. If you’re in the area, it’s there till September 8. We’re members, and we went during a special members’ hour. This painting was the first one in the exhibition (not my photo). Cassatt did many paintings of women at the theater or busy with activities.

When you’ve written your Triversen, enter the link in Mister Linky below. Read and comment on others. I can’t wait to read what you’ve written!
Hello, dVerse Poets! We’re having absolutely gorgeous weather here in NJ. I’m so happy the humidity is gone (for now). Our bar is fully stocked with delicious food and beverages, and I’m ready to read your poems!
Hi Merril! It’s a beautiful day here, too. I’m on my way to the store to pick up groceries, so nothing for me. I will write later tonight.❤️
Yay! I will probably read it in the morning.
Good evening poets and thank you for hosting with a new form, Merril. I hope I’ve understood the instructions. and that my poem is a triversen. A decaf coffee with oat milk would be lovely.
Hi Kim. Thank you for your poem. As far as I know, it is a triversen. I hope mine is, too. 😂 Here is a large decaf coffee with oat milk.
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Thanks for this prompt, Merril–it was fun to revisit a few old poems and revise them into Williams’ ‘triversen’ form! Greetings as well from the gorgeous weather of central NJ!
Hi Chris–it’s great to see you here. I wish this weather would hang around for awhile.
Hey Merril, thanks again for the awesome prompt challenge!
Hi Willy, I’m so pleased you like it!
Thank you (I think) 🙂 Merril, a meaty challenge. In for a penny …. It is what it is, but I had fun anyway.
You’re welcome, Andrew. Thank you for writing to the prompt!
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Thanks for another interesting, challenging poetic form, Merril. It seemed complicated at first with so many rules but I got with it – I think…
Thank you, Andrew. Yeah, it’s a different sort of thing with rules, but not rules–not as strict as haiku or sonnets. . .
Thank you for an interesting prompt, Merril. I’ve written a double Triversen, if that’s not a problem. 🙂
That’s fine. I commented on your post, that I suspect it’s just a long triversen, since the length seems flexible.
Thank you. I don’t know if I met the bar but it’s good to be at the bar with this fine serving of a prompt. It was fun trying this form.
You’re welcome. I’m pleased you enjoyed the prompt!
Thank you for hosting Merril. Fascinating prompt my friend. I think I’ve got the gist of it, at least I hope! Here goes…. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼
You’re welcome, Rob. Thank you for your poem!