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Hello fellow poets!
Welcome to the Diwali edition of Poetics this Tuesday.

As you all read this, I am lying in bed exhausted but satisfied. Diwali deep cleaning can do that. For years and years, in most Indian households, it has been a ritual to clean the home before Diwali. Yes, we do spring cleaning in autumn! Each nook and corner is dusted, all expensive crockery lying unused in sideboards is taken out, washed and rinsed, then put back. Each cupboard is emptied, then clothes neatly restacked. I still remember the mixed fragrance of Brasso( cleaner for brass/silver/copper items) and the floor cleaner. You get the drift… This cleaning before Diwali is a muscle memory that kicks in as soon as Dusshera is over (20 days before Diwali). Though, to tell you the truth these days I am like this 👇🏼
by Rose Milligan
“Dust if you must, but wouldn’t it be better
To paint a picture, or write a letter,
Bake a cake, or plant a seed;
Ponder the difference between want and need?
Dust if you must, but there’s not much time,
With rivers to swim, and mountains to climb;
Music to hear, books to read;
Friends to cherish, and life to lead”

Our moms not only fanatically scoured and cleaned involving all the kids at home, but were also experts at cooking mithai (sweets/confection) at home. I still remember the heavenly aroma of wheat flour/chickpea flour roasted in ghee (clarified butter) and the innumerable sweets made at home. This mithai would be shared with family, friends, neighbours, house-helps and visitors. For almost entire week food to satiate stomach and soul was cooked. So every year during Diwali I forget all that I read about the harmful effects of sugar and buy all the mithai {I don’t make it at home} I like, to celebrate the spirit of abundance. And yes, on Diwali I stick to desi (native) sweets.

by Wordbug
“Grated carrot, sweet delight
Aromatic ghee, cashew sauteed light
Just imagine a touch of milk and sugar
And maybe a little water
Red, tempting dessert is ready to serve”
Another tradition that I have continued is making sure my children wear new clothes on Diwali. When I was a kid, those days were of frugality, hand me downs and not of indiscriminate shopping. My mom was an excellent seamstress and would sew something new for all of us. Sometimes there were tantrums when she would buy yards of same pattern because it was cheaper and we would all be dressed identically!
by Julia Alvarez
“I remember the whirr and whine of her black Singer
the gold traceries on cast iron rod
by the wheel that lifted and lowered the needle.
Threading the levers, eyepieces, winding the turquoise string
through hooks, around minuscule wheels, up and down“
All the homes look so pretty adorned with marigold flowers, diyas/earthen lamps, candles and rangoli/colourful floor decorations. Though I am not into any religious rituals but a havan/homa/offerings consecrated to fire, followed by lighting diyas at sundown with the entire family and later a sumptuous home cooked meal, is a tradition I follow.

Diwali is not just about cleaning, cooking, gifting, rituals or eating. It is much more than that. It is a time to celebrate generosity, to welcome home joy, to let go of sorrow and a time to renew and rejuvenate. But best of all, it reminds us to be grateful for the goodness that still survives despite the darkness.

by William Cutter
Doth not each rain-drop help to form
The cool refreshing shower?
And every ray of light to warm
And beautify the flower?”
The Challenge
So, for the poetics challenge today I give you a sort of carte blanche. You could write about cleaning, cooking your favourite dish, the joy of giving or how you celebrate your favourite festival. Since Diwali falls a day after Halloween, I expect lots ghouls, goblins and candy galore peppering some poems. I am really looking forward to a smorgasbord of poems to sample and satiate my soul.
For those who are new to dVerse:
- Write a poem in any form or style on the above challenge on your blog.
- Link back your post to this post.
- Please leave a link of your post at Mr. Linky so that other poets can read your verse.
- Mr. Linky will remain open till 2.00 p.m of 31st October.
- Make sure to come back and read and comment on other entries. Interacting with other poets is the best part of this platform.
Happy writing and Happy Diwali and have a great Halloween!
Good evening poets. Welcome to today’s poetics. I have curated a special menu for you all today. We have mushroom kebabs, cottage cheese tikka and idli fries. To satisfy your sweet tooth we have rice pudding, jalebi and rasmalai. And of course any drink that you fancy is ready to be served.
I look forward to reading your poems to light up my night.
Thank you for sharing your memories of Diwali Punam. They sound deliciously heartwarming ☺️🩷
Glad you enjoyed it, Christine. 😊❤️
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Wow, what a wonderful treat that you have prepared for us… may I just sample a bit of it all.
Sure, Björn. Here is a platter for you.
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I’m at the door with a dirty dog. Do you have water, soap, and towels for him, and a big glass of wine for me?
Of course, Nolcha! A big glass of wine for you. You can take him to the washroom. Let me know if you need anything else.
Thank you! 😂
You are welcome.😁
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Thank you for the prompt and the tempting feast but I’ve just eaten for my daughter’s birthday and hence found a poem to fit the theme – I love the whole notion of Diwali – such joy and celebration just when we need it
Birthday greetings to your daughter, Laura. I’ll save a wee bit for you just in case you feel peckish later. I am delighted you enjoyed the prompt.
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Ohhhhhh idli pom….
The memories flood back…
Thank you for the loveliest of presentations Punam!
Hmm…I should have know the mention of idlis would bring back memories . Ain, I am pleased you enjoyed it.
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Good evening, poets! Thank you for the inticing prompt, Punam, and for the portrait of Diwali!
I’d love a sample of your Mushroom Kebob, with a glass of bergundy to wash it down, please! 😉
Hi Frank! Good to see you. Glad you enjoyed the prompt. A platter of freshly made mushroom kebabs with your favourite burgundy..😃
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Thank you for hosting Punam! Well, it looks like dark rob came out for Halloween… 🫣😏😉👻✌🏼🫶🏼🎼
Hi Rob! Dark Rob sounds wicked-good!😃
Beautiful poems shared and I like the prompt! Happy Diwali to all!
Glad you liked the prompt, Jay, as well as the poems. Have a wonderful Diwali.
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Tis the season for celebrations everywhere right now, thank you Punam, great prompt.
It sure is, Paul. My pleasure.
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Finally finished my offering and I bring food to the pub and not the other way round…
Wonderful, Andrew! I think next time we should have a potluck night at the pub.
Good idea and I was thinking that OLN is usually about people reading their own poems but I think it would be interesting if we read another poet’s work – something that has influenced us! But in a potluck post, that could be where our poets present a pairing – the influencer(s) and the resultant poem(s)…
That’s a great idea, Andrew! We could choose the influencer from within our dVerse community. That way the pairing would be very interesting. Maybe for my next poetics prompt …
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How did we become poets – what were our inciting influences…
Sure, that too…
A beautiful and timely prompt. Happy Deepavali everyone. 🙂
Thanks, Aishwarya. 😊
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Thanks for joining in, Robbie.
My pleasure
This puts together everything beautiful! 😀
Thanks, Prakash. 😊
Such a gorgeous prompt, Punam. It gave me all the cosy feels. I’m sorry to have missed it. I relate to all the things that you mentioned and how interesting that so many of the rituals are the same as they for Eid though it’s a different celebration. I love what you said about your mom sewing identical outfits for you and your siblings – I hear you! 😂 I had the same thing! Really enjoyed all the poems you shared, thank you 💕
What a heartwarming comment, Sunra. Yes, I know, apart from the religious traditions, most of the rituals are the same. Thanks so much for dropping by. If the prompt inspires you, you could link it up for OLN this week…just a suggestion…
Thanks so much, my dear. 💖
You’re welcome, chick ❤️🌺
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