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1 stanza, 10 lines, Christmas trees, fir trees, Robert Frost, syllables, the Etheree, William Logan
Fir trees are ancient symbols of eternal light associated with the Winter Solstice and the return of the Sun.
Now it’s December when time seems to accelerate and diary dates fill with activity as many of us head towards the Christmas/Winter holidays. I think of all the sacrifices the coming festivities exact not least the fir trees soon to be chopped and sold in the market place, mostly rootless, and baubled till the New Year discard. No wonder Robert Frost in this poem is reluctant to sell his Christmas Trees to the City buyer:
“My woods—the young fir balsams like a place
Where houses all are churches and have spires.
I hadn’t thought of them as Christmas Trees.
I doubt if I was tempted for a moment
To sell them off their feet to go in cars
And leave the slope behind the house all bare,
Where the sun shines now no warmer than the moon.
I’d hate to have them know it if I was….[more]
William Logan’s recalls childhood memories of Christmas Trees:
“Through blue frozen lots
my giant parents strolled,
wrapped tight against the cold
like woolen Argonauts,
searching for that tall
perfection of Scotch pine
from the hundreds laid in line
like the dead at Guadalcanal.
the clapboard village aglow
that starry stark December [more]
So yes you’ve guessed it….
- The poetry theme for this MTB is to write a poem about a generic or particular:
- Christmas tree(s) imagery, meanings, memories etc
- or Conifer/Fir tree(s) imagery, mythology, memories etc
2. The poetry style of your poem follows the form of an Etheree:
- must be an unrhymed poem
- no specific meter
- one stanza only
- 10 lines with no paragraphs
- graduating from 1 to 10 syllables
- [add lines 11 & 12 with just 2 syllables per line – my optional extra]
Thus the first line is monosyllabic; the second line has two syllables, and so on, until there’s ten syllables on the tenth line (then reverts to 2 syllables for lines 11 & 12 if you want this optional extra). The outline of your poem takes the concrete shape of a fir tree. Centre it on the page else left or right aligned it’s only half a tree! (X=syllables not words)
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N.B. This is the original simple etheree, there are other permutations but we are not using any of those for this prompt
Useful Links:
the Etheree
list of words by syllable count
We have not hung this etheree tree out since Victoria Slottos summer post of 2016
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
[Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Good evening from a very wet part of the UK this evening – the bar is open for snacks. mocktails and the intriguing Christmas tree cocktail to go with the Etheree.
I Tried the Viral “Christmas Tree Cocktail” Party Trick | The Kitchn
its an easy MTB for the end of the year and fun too.
Fun and delightful, I agree.
Hi Laura! What a delightful and creative spin on the etheree form. Love the format on the page and thank you for bringing this back. We are deep in winter here so a warm chocolate cup will be great. Thank you for hosting.
thank you Grace – was pleased to come across this in time for now!
Hello Laura and All. Love the tree drink, I’ll have one please, with vodka and cranberry juice.
I think I’ll join you Lisa!
Thank you. Cheers!
Hi Laura. A fun prompt for sure.
that’s good to hear
👍🏼🙂
Spiked eggnog, please!
yes – that is an interesting one
Concrete poetry does not usually appeal to me but allied with your Christmas tree prompt I was reminded of a different Yule log which may have been subsumed by Christianity – darkness warning…
And having hewed my poem I will have a Single Malt nightcap please Laura…
hope you enjoyed your nightcap – I certainly enjoyed your myth telling
Looks like a fun prompt, Laura. Thanks for hosting!
thanks for joining Dwight with that touch of sadness
You are welcome. I enjoyed the prompt.
Thanks for hosting Laura. I don’t feel well enough to respond. I might link to one of my older “shape” poems. If I do, feel free to erase the link if you wish. 🙂✌🏼🫶🏼🎼
I prefer not to erase Rob not least because you kept the syllable count!!!
Such a fun prompt. I added my piece and a truly fond memory. Thanks Laura!
glad you had fun with this
Thank you for the prompt.
and to you for your two
Christmas fun, thank you Laura.
and so much love from yours Paul
Thank you Laura 🙂
Fun one, and timely.
Timely not merely for the holiday season, but in that I’d just days ago noticed a pine out back I could conjure a thought on this morning.
Cheers,
Julian
Hello from Kentucky! We have plenty of rolling hills here, just full of old fir trees. Untouched and wild. Thank you for the prompt, I have never heard of this type of poem!
thank you for joining in with your first etheree – I am struggling with the google sign in 😦
I enjoyed writing for this prompt! Thank you, Laura.
so wistful Jay
Love this challenge, but ran out of time in the end to join in. I might still create one for Christmas anyway. ❤️