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Damien McCLendon, Ezra Pound, Jack Kerouac, Katsushika Hokusai, Li-young Lee, Maggie Queeney, Optician's words, Random words
It’s Tuesday, and the dVerse Poets Pub is open with snacks and beverages from our well-stocked bar, as well as a selection of delicious poetry. I’m Kim from writinginnorthnorfolk.com, your host for this week’s Poetics.

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Several months ago, I had an eye check-up and was prescribed new glasses. I wear varifocals or, as I call them, fairy vocals, and one of the tests they do when trying on a new prescription is reading from a laminated reading test card of different size fonts in sentences, such as text for posters, novels, text books and printed instructions, classified advertisements, etc. What I have always found fascinating are the sets of four words beneath each sentence, which seem to be random. I thought they would make a great poetics prompt, so I asked the optician for a copy.
Here are the sets of words:
nose – one – cause – even
were – crone – our – summer
name – use – means – arose
near – can – remove – sure
crow – verse – see – renew
assume – once- van – sum
aware – caves – sea – cream
Your challenge is to choose one or two sets of words and write a poem using them in the order in which they appear. If you’re feeling particularly inspired, you could use all of the words. You can write in any form you wish, but I imagine haiku or tanka would be interesting for one or two sets, and a range of forms for more.
I looked for poems created around random words, and the Poetry Foundation is a treasure trove of creativity.
For example, ‘Metamorphoses: The Female Into’ by Maggie Queeney plays with what seems to be random words; you can find it here.
‘Words for Worry’ by Li-Young Lee focuses on specific words; you can read it here.
‘Sink’ by Damien McClendon is interesting.
A small selection of haiku that could have been inspired by random words:
‘A Poppy Blooms’ by Katsushika Hokusai, a disciple of Basho
I write, erase, rewrite
Erase again, and then
A poppy blooms.

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‘In a Station of the Metro’ by Ezra Pound
The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.

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‘The Taste of Rain’ by Jack Kerouac
The taste
Of rain
—Why kneel?
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- Write a poem in response to the challenge;
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below;
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join, so check back for their poems;
- Read and comment on other poets’ work – we all come here to have our poems appreciated;
- Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog;
- Comment and participate in our discussion below, if you like. We are a friendly bunch of poets.
- Have fun.
- And remember, Mr. Linky will remain open until 3pm EST on Thursday, 30th January 2025. You can, however, write a poem to the prompt and link it up to Open Link Night.
Good evening… love little word puzzle, and I tried to play a bit with it. I think I need a cup of herbal tea tonight
Camomile or peppermint?
Going to bed soon so camomille is probably good.
Good idea – coming right up!
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Welcome dVerse Poets! The bar is open, drinks and snacks are waiting, and I am waiting to read your random word poems. I’m a little poorly today, so I may go to bed early, but I promise I will read as many of your creative pieces as possible, and will be back early in the morning to read and comment some more.
the word for poorly is get well soon Kim but thank you anyway for this interesting prompt and all the poems you put together with links above – I especially liked words for worry.
Thank you , Laura.
Hi Kim. I enjoyed your prompt. I am sure there will be many fun poems.
Good night. Will catch up tomorrow.
Good night, Punam. I’ll be going to bed soon. See you in the morning.
This demands coffee, a pint of Norfolk’s best, and water …I like the suggestion of haiku or tanks very much.
Great stuff Kim.
Glad you like the prompt, Ain, I think Adnam’s, which is Suffolk’s best, might go down well, especially Ghost Ship, if you’d like to try it. But we do have a brewery just up the road, The Wildcraft Brewery. We haven’t tried it yet but it sounds good. I’ll pour a couple of glasses of both for you.
The ghost ship….hmmm now I might know where your inspiration for some of your wonderful dramatic verse arises….what a good idea…two would mean I would not have to sup water…thank you again…
You’re most welcome, Ain. Enjoy the virtual Ghost Ship.
Good afternoon, everyone! Kim, what a fun prompt, thank you! Hope you feel better soon.
Thank you very much, Dora – I hope I haven’t picked anything up while I was down with the grandsons. I’m so pleased you like the prompt.
Hi Kim! Happy to see you. I’ll have a chai tea latte please, with whipped cream.☕️
Good evening, Melissa, I hope you have your poetry hat on. A chai tea latte with whipped cream is coming right up!
Thanks, Kim! I did write a poem. Going to link up now. Keep your nose clean!👃🏻
Will do!
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think i need a soak in the bath after that my head hurts.
thanks for pushing me out of my comfort zone.
rog
Enjoy your soak, Rog.
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Well, I made a mess of things. Do you have some tomato juice?
A tall tomato juice coming up, Nolcha!
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Lovely to see you back at the helm, Kim! An inspired post, peering at the small print of poetry and dream landscape in a very spacious way. I couln’t resist your invitation, and now am rolling off to bed with a tisane of hmmm, brideswort? and I hope that you will awaken refreshed and well tomorrow, when I too will be back to delight in the poems woven from wordlists xxx
Good morning Kathy! I’m not long up and reading and commenting before aqua aerobics, which will wake me up even more. I’ve been dying to share the optician’s words since I had my new glasses back in September, I look forward to reading your poem. xxx
Interesting prompt so I decided to play along with a story poem.
I always enjoy a narrative poem, Truedessa. I’ll be over to read shortly.
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Very interesting prompt. The sea-cream made me think of, perhaps it is certain character combinations that might be more easily visible depending on their immediate neighborsâ¦. Which then reminded me of a license plate I saw recently ZZ777ZZ.
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HI Eric! I’m glad the prompt has roused your interest, and that I’m not the only one who plays the license plate game.
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Hello Kim and All. I really enjoyed your prompt, Kim. Because it’s so late and the day has gotten me so wingy, the verse turned out as it did.
Good morning, Lisa. I’m just up. I’m so glad you enjoyed the prompt. I’ll be over to read in a bit.
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Many thanks Kim, a very creative prompt that will occupy me for days, lol.
I look forward to reading your poem(s), Paul!
🙂
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sorry, i don’t know how to do a link like the others.
I can link you up.
Hi Lesa. I tried to follow your link but it didn’t work. I would love to read your poem. Let me know if you need my help linking up.
thanks for trying Kim. I’ll play around with wordpress and learn the basics again. I loved the challenge and I’m enjoying reading the others, thanks again.
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OMG, I started trying to write to this prompt last night and got stuck, stuck, stuck, because I was being super-literal and thought I had to ise the words sets in order, without any words between them. Oh, the rotten poems I tried to write! Then I came here to see how others had handled it and realized that “in order” didn’t mean no other words could be inserted. Whew! “Live and learn”, as they say. I finally got myself in order and responded. I’ve already had a couple of glasses of chardonnay, so perhaps just a sparkling water, Kim? I have to get up for the day job in the a.m., although I’d rather just learn more about writing poetry. 😃
A sparkling water with ice and lime? Coming up, Kim! I’m sorry that you got yourself in a pickle; my prompts are not strict and it’s up to you how you interpret them, but it is a good idea to read a few poems to see how others have done so – or just sleep on it. I hope you slept well and that your working day is successful.
Gaia’s Soothing Haven linked up a poem. Unfortunately I don’t have an account with Hello Poetry and wasn’t able to comment there, so I’m leaving a comment here. Well done for using all the sets of prompt words. I love the title and the passion in your poem, especially in the lines:
‘Our pet name use ignites our love’s fire,
From whispered lips…’
and
‘Fearfully aware caves, your body cries for me
Your sea cream skin I long to taste’.
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A challenging prompt, I wanted to tankas for all the sets but time permitted only 4, I’m happy though, I think they turned out good. Thanks for hosting, Kim!
Thanks fr joining us , Jay. I’ll be over to read your poem in the morning,
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Thank you for the prompt, Kim. I’ve just finally responded, I love random word prompts. I hope you’re feeling better!
I’m glad you like the prompt, Merril. I’m still not at all well , but I’ll make time to read your poem in the morning.
I’m so sorry you’re still not feeling well. Take you time with reading. (It’s going to take me a while to read them.) 😊
Thank you ,Merril. I spent most of the day in bed after a nasty night being sick and shivering. A shower has helped a bit. No eating though.
I’m so sorry you’re not feeling well. I hope you’ve improved a bit more.
Thank you, Merril.