“when I lifted my eyes to your name,
suddenly your heart showed me my way.”
— Pablo Neruda.
Today is ‘Learn what your name means’ day. A light-hearted day of discovery but yet it touches our core identity. One of the first sounds we hear is our allotted name, one of the first nouns we learn and one that firmly embeds the I-self as not-you, not-other.
As a child I was always wanting to change my name but Teresa Mei Chuc was tired of having to do so:
“I am tired of having five different names; -
Having to change them when I enter
A new country or take on a new life. My
First name is my truest, I suppose, but I
Never use it and nobody calls me by this Vietnamese
Name though it is on my birth certificate—
Tue My Chuc. It makes the sound of a twang of a
String pulled. My parents tell me my name in Cantonese
is Chuc Mei Wai. Three soft bird chirps and they call
me Ah Wai. {more}”
Whilst Rachel Sherwood wistfully calls up the Names of Children:
“In early morning when the sun
is vague and birds are furious
names of children float
like smoke through the empty room:
Ariadne, dark as seal skin
Ian, fair-skinned baby
Marina Terrence Alex John
after dinner pulled back from
talk of war and morals
their names glow like light
around a candle —
Jack, my rampant youngest son
Celia, my daughter who sings {more}”
So what if you were called Walter/Walt“ from the Germanic: “Army Ruler,” it denotes a sense of dominance and control, a strong and impactful name. And if a girl: “Marie” with so many linguistic variations like Mary, Miriam, she is ‘beloved’, ‘from the sea’, ‘bitter’ with qualities of strength, resilience, and grace, reflected in the etymology.
And so for today’s MTB prompt we are writing a WaltMarie poetry style*:
- 10 lines
- even lines are just 2 syllables
- odd lines are longer but without syllable restriction
- the even lines make their own mini-poem if read separately
- meter and rhyme are unspecified
And the theme of your poem should be
- the history/meaning of your name
- or one you wish you had
- or an imaginary one
Consider/imagine how it was chosen, what has it meant to carry that name
*Information: The WaltMarie poetry style was invented by Candace Kubinec as a nod to Poetic Bloomings hosts, Marie Elena Good and Walter J. Wojtanik.
Here are 2 example poems as reference: Poetic Forms Waltmarie
So once you have posted your poem according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Hi Laura. This is a wonderful prompt. I enjoyed writing to it.
It is way past my bedtime. I will catch up with my reading tomorrow.
Thanks for hosting.
that is good to hear! I look forward to reading your name poem
Good evening from the Uk and at the bar tonight you simply have to name the drink of your choice.
The prompt is short and sweet and if not very inspiring at least makes us consider our names in an existential kind of way. Its just a writing exercise and also for those of us following Lent or Ramadan, time is of the essence!
Thanks Laura…could you slide the beer I’ll order down the bar like they used to in Westerns if I promise not to wear my sheriff star..the usual stout…ta….um, yes, might have had one already..lovely prompt…
I’ve always wanted to to the bar slide so here goes Ain -enjoy!
Thank you for hosting, Laura. My name being what it is, I’m glad you gave us a choice of an imaginary one! 🙂
looking forward to seeing what you came up with Dora!
Hello Punam, Laura, and All. What a great prompt today. I enjoyed where my mind wandered for it. Will you please pour me a Long Island Iced Tea? Sun is shining out there which is a good reason to celebrate.
that sounds so delicious I will join you Lisa – even though a cold and wet night here
Thanks and Cheers, Laura!
hi all
not quite sure i got this write (spelling intended)
thanks for the challenge
rog
you did and it was such a great poem but every time I tried to post comment a message said I could not as not signed in which I was!
“funny and so well writ in ink spills” was what I wanted to add
thank you
Before I fly away, I’d like to stop for something warm. Any suggestions?
since you like to make a choice then I recommend the Flying Scotsman cocktail -recipe and history here
My name, Shay, means gift.
a gift to poetry no less!
Thank you Laura! Fun as always 🙂
thank you for joining in the fun
Hi Laura, and thank you~
cheers Gin
Hi
Thanks for choosing the Waltmarie as a prompt.
i posted an example, but will do one with my name tomorrow. Cheers.
look forward to that Candy
I enjoyed creating the form. Hope everyone has fun with it.
Thanks for a great prompt, Laura – it’s next day now but a morning cup of coffee would hit the spot please…
and here’s one for tomorrow too with birthday cake!!
Many thanks for this creative prompt Laura, a lovely surprise when I logged on. 🙂
thank you Paul for your appreciation
Help! the LisaPaul link does not work – does anyone know what the blog link should be?
Laura, use the Mr. Linky link above.
My response is a bit long and is an amalgam of different posts and poems I’ve done about my name over the years. As usual, my response is also a bit late but at least made the deadline for Mr. Linky.