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This is our last prompt before we go for a two week summer break. dVerse will back on July 14, 2025, which is our 14th year anniversary.

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Call for Poetry Submissions: Krisis: Poetry at the Crossroads
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We have taken up synesthesia in our prior MTB here and here. Let’s revisit the key concepts as synesthesia is such a rich and evocative concept for poetry.

What Is Synesthesia in Poetry?

In literature, synesthesia is a figurative device where one sensory experience is described using terms from another — like hearing colors, tasting sounds, or feeling scents. It’s a way to blur the boundaries between senses, creating vivid, unexpected imagery that resonates emotionally and sensorially.

This technique draws inspiration from the neurological condition of the same name, where people involuntarily experience one sense through another (e.g., seeing music as colors). But in poetry, it’s a deliberate act of imagination — a way to deepen metaphor and stir the reader’s senses.

 

Examples:

Aubade
By Dame Edith Sitwell

Jane, Jane
Tall as a crane,
The morning light creaks down again;

Comb your cockscomb-ragged hair,
Jane, Jane, Come down the stair.

Each dull blunt wooden stalactite
Of rain creaks, hardened by the light,

Sounding like an overtone
From some lonely world unknown.

But the creaking empty light
Will never harden into sight,

Will never penetrate your brain
With overtones like the blunt rain,

The light would show
(if it could harden)
Eternities of kitchen garden,

Cockscomb flowers
that none will pluck,
And wooden flowers
that ‘gin to cluck.

In the kitchen you must light
Flames as staring, red and white,

As carrots or as turnips, shining
Where the old dawn light lies whining

Cockscomb hair on the cold wind
Hangs limp,
turns the milk’s weak mind…
Jane, Jane,
Tall as a crane,
The morning light
creaks down again!

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Modern Love: I

By George Meredith

By this he knew she wept with waking eyes:
That, at his hand’s light quiver by her head,
The strange low sobs that shook their common bed
Were called into her with a sharp surprise,
And strangled mute, like little gaping snakes,
Dreadfully venomous to him. She lay
Stone-still, and the long darkness flowed away
With muffled pulses. Then, as midnight makes
Her giant heart of Memory and Tears
Drink the pale drug of silence, and so beat
Sleep’s heavy measure, they from head to feet
Were moveless, looking through their dead black years,
By vain regret scrawled over the blank wall.
Like sculptured effigies they might be seen
Upon their marriage-tomb, the sword between;
Each wishing for the sword that severs all.

In her heavily synesthetic poem “Aubade,” Dame Edith Sitwell describes the “dull blunt wooden stalactite / Of rain creaks, hardened by the light.” In George Meredith’s “Modern Love: I,” a woman’s heart is made to “drink the pale drug of silence.” Synesthetic effects include textual amplification, complication, and richness.

Source:  Poetry Foundation

Writing challenge: Write a poem that explores a moment — real or imagined — through the lens of synesthesia. Choose a dominant emotion or memory and describe it by blending at least two senses in unexpected ways. Let your metaphors cross sensory wires: let grief shimmer in ultraviolet, taste the thunder or hear the color of longing.

If you want to incorporate synesthesia to our anthology theme: Write a poem about a moment of decision — a literal or metaphorical crossroads — using synesthesia to express the emotional and sensory dissonance of that moment. Let the senses misbehave. Let the road sing, the sky taste, the silence glow. Ask yourself: What did that choice feel like in the body? What color was the regret? What sound did hope make? Let the feeling of indecision have a texture or color.

Here’s how to join in:
See you at the poetry trail. ~Grace~