
Good afternoon, poetry world. I hope everyone is doing well, and I hope you are ready to write some poetry. This is Melissa from Mom With a Blog, and I am your host for today’s Poetics prompt.
I came across this poem by Albert Garcia called “August Morning,” and it inspired me.
August Morning
It’s ripe, the melon
by our sink. Yellow,
bee-bitten, soft, it perfumes
the house too sweetly.
At five I wake, the air
mournful in its quiet.
My wife’s eyes swim calmly
under their lids, her mouth and jaw
relaxed, different.
What is happening in the silence
of this house? Curtains
hang heavily from their rods.
Ficus leaves tremble
at my footsteps. Yet
the colors outside are perfect--
orange geranium, blue lobelia.
I wander from room to room
like a man in a museum:
wife, children, books, flowers,
melon. Such still air. Soon
the mid-morning breeze will float in
like tepid water, then hot.
How do I start this day,
I who am unsure
of how my life has happened
or how to proceed
amid this warm and steady sweetness?
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/48749/august-morning
I’d like you to start from wherever you are and write a poem “wandering from room to room like a man in a museum.” Notice your surroundings. Take a walk around. Be curious about what is happening. Perhaps write about ordinary things or things that you might not ordinarily notice. End your poem with an open-ended question as Garcia does, incorporating characteristics of some of the things you’ve observed earlier in your poem.
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Hello, friends. Welcome to Tuesday Poetics here at dVerse. In my part of the world, my family is enjoying our last week of going to the pool before school begins again. It’s a sunny day here in Pennsylvania. Can’t wait to read all your poems inspired by tonight’s prompt. Also inspired by the prompt, we have Honeydew and Prosciutto Salad; Ginger-Glazed Grilled Honeydew; Frozen Watermelon Lemon Cream Tarts. If you’re thirsty, try a Watermelon Spritzer or a Cantaloupe Margarita. As always, I will get you whatever else you like!
Hi Melissa, Thank you for hosting. In Ontario, we are cooling off a bit for summer but we are saving every bit of warmth still out there. Love to taste that frozen watermelon lemon cream tart and honeydew and prosciutto salad.
Hi Grace! Here you go!🍉🍈
A hard prompt for me to write to… but I hope it works…
Hi Björn! Thank you for writing to it even though you found it difficult.🫶🏻
A GREAT prompt, Melissa! With iPhone in hand, video running I plan on walking the walk, talking the talk! Hoping a poem results. Honeydew and Prosciutto Salad sounds delicious, an iced tea too?
Hi, Helen! I can’t wait to see what you come up with. Honeydew and Prosciutto Salad and an iced tea coming up.🍈🧊
A lovely poem, Melissa
Isn’t it?
💜
Lovely indeed.
Iced tea, please. It’s hot outside!
One iced tea coming up!🫶🏻
Great prompt Melissa I enjoyed my little trip 😃
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Hello Melissa and All. Late to the party. Great prompt as it took me to a place I didn’t expect to go.
Wahoo! Hi Li! Hope you’re having a great day.
I’ve had better, but thank you for asking ❤
Well I’m sending a big hug your way.
Great prompt, Melissa. Thanks for hosting.
Thanks, Jay.☺️
Thank you Melissa for introducing Garcia’s poem, I love it, and thank you for the creative prompt. 🙂
Hi Melissa – I want it all – but I shouldn’t being Type 2 so I will settle for a spritzer please…
Hello, friend! One Watermelon Spritzer coming up.🍉
Melissa,
I am late to the party, but I am glad to be here. I had a lot of fun writing to this prompt. I fudged a bit making the line you requested into the title and shortening it. I hope you don’t throw me out.
Looking forward to read what others have shared.
I hope you are enjoying the last bit of summer or maybe you are excited to get your kids back in school?
Ali
I would never throw you out. The kids go back to school Monday. I am ready.😅
I bet you are!