Here we are mid-December and those of us in the Northern Hemisphere are stuck in cold, dark days with the winter solstice not far away. Some of us light candles for Advent or at the coming Hanukkah. Some sing carols or send cards with the Christmas Nativity or other seasonal tableaux, depending on where in the world you live.
Antonella Anedda’s “December” poem sets the scene for us Northerners:
“December, not yet Christmas, or Hanukkah.
Only a few lights lit in the streets,
no sleigh drawn by reindeer in shop windows.
Instead of snow, a dark pouring rain
to dodge as passersby reject us.
No spruces, but sycamores with their white cankers.
It may be surprising not to link all of this to darkness,
emptiness, fear...[more]
And today being the 11th December it is the anniversary of Jim Harrison’s birth and he too entered the spirit of the season in his inimitable wry style with “Xmas Cheeseburgers”:
“I was without Christmas spirit
so I made three cow dogs,
Lola and Blacky and Pinto,
cheeseburgers with ground chuck
and French St. André cheese
so that we’d all feel better….
The world that used to nurse us
now keeps shouting inane instructions.
That’s why I ran to the woods”
In her long titled, four part poem “They that dally nicely with words may quickly make them wanton”, Ange Mlink begins with a solid, static scene:
“Should I take this time, while the children are in school,
to untrim the tree? Standing in the dish we let go dry,
it looks well-preserved, as if Christmas were still
in our future; would it spare their feelings if I dismantle
piece by piece its grandeur, or will I amplify
their sense of loss, to de-jewel it without ritual?...[more]
And now we come to the prompt for composing a poem in the manner of a tableau: i.e. “a carefully composed scene in which characters are arranged for a picturesque effect, acting entirely oblivious to the viewer.”
And our tableau has a fixed poetry style entitled The Tableau – created by Emily Romano in October of 2008
Poetry Style:
- 1 or more verses
- 6 lines per verse
- 5 beats/syllables per line
Poetry Rules:
- title should contain the word ‘tableau’
- poem should aim to be pictorial
- no rhyme scheme
Extra points for creating a static Tableau scene as seasonal December or Nativity
N.B. I’m revisiting this prompt that we did 5.9.24.
My own contribution as example is here
Once you have written and posted your poem, according to the guidelines above, do add it to Mr Linky below then go visiting and reading other contributors as that is half the fun of our dVerse gatherings.
Please also TAG dVerse in your post, or include a link at the end of your poem that leads readers back to this dVerse prompt
[N.B. Mr Linky closes Saturday 3 p.m. EST]
Hello Poets – I look forward to reading your tableaux – if you need anything from the bar to oil your ideas do help yourself as I’m back and forth this evening
Hello, now I have the opportunity to do this correctly with 5 syllables and not 5 feet as I did last time. A very simple one though (with an opportunity for my own pictures)
feet confuse me so glad you sorted it this time around
Hi Laura. Thanks for hosting. A warm chocolate to ease the cold winter day. I enjoyed reading back to what we have done over the years. Our library is deep!
hot chocolate is made for you and your tableau, Grace – and yes it’s good to do a deep dive into the archives though usually I try for more than a year ago
Thanks for hosting. I had my fair share of victuals for the night, thanks. I’ll catch up with reading in the morning, it’s high time I try and go to sleep.
sound like you can sleep without even the need for a herbal drink of camomile and valerian
Ooh! Camomile and valerian! May I change my mind please?
I hope you slept well!
Did! Thanks.
Hello Laura and All. I enjoyed writing to this prompt.
that’s good to hear Lisa and your poem was enfolded in quietude
Hi Laura and all. Today has been a day of interruptions and distractions for me, but I found the prompt very interesting so I gave it a go. I drew all my years of memory and took us on a winter walk in the forest mountains of Oregon. Hope you enjoy it.
Just for giggles— I tossed in a couple of winter mountain images that I created today.
both so enjoyable – especially for me who never sees such sights
For Rob Kistner: I tried several times to comment on his poem. Some glitch seemed to prevent it.
I think I may be turning into a Grinch, Laura…
I hope not – it is the season of Joy!
Thank you Laura, an engaging prompts. No bonhomie for me, a somber effort.
and you engaged with it so well – bonhomie is not mandatory 😉
Hello Laura–thank you for the prompt! Sending you some warmth from sunny 77 degrees in AZ.
your warmth is most welcome Jennifer, here in England’s 42F