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Brian Strand, Couplets, Crystallines, Denis Garrison, Epigram, FormForAll, Gay Cannon, Heroic Couplet, poems, poetry, Rhyme, Writing
For New Year’s I thought we could talk about couplets. Couplets are probably responsible for your earliest introduction to poetry. After all what are nursery rhymes and Mother Goose if not couplets. Sometimes they’re written in four short lines but I’m thinking they were composed in couplets.
Jack Be nimble, Jack be quick
Jack jumped over the candlestick
*** *** ***
Tom Tom the piper’s son
Stole a pig and away he run
The pig was eat, and Tom was beat
And Tom went crying down the street
*** *** ***
I ponder whether couplets may be such a natural to poetry because they correspond to the need for “another”. Poetry seems to have been initially used to persuade, induce, or seduce. What better way than through rhyme and emotion. One line needs another as one person feels complete with another person. Love calls out for two lines, a rhyme to unite them and harmonic sounds to enhance the feelings. In an earlier article found here I wrote about “rhyme”. Couplets usually consist of two lines that rhyme and have the same meter. However, increasingly free verse is written in couplet lines employing white space in between to enhance the meaning of the words and to allow the reader time to assimilate the layered meanings.
Rhymed couplets written in iambic pentameter are called Heroic Couplets:
O could I flow like thee, and make thy stream
My great example, as it is my theme!
Though deep, yet clear, though gentle, yet not dull,
Strong without rage, without o’erflowing full.
–John Denham Cooper’s Hill
A Poetic Epigram may also be written in couplet form.
What is an Epigram? A dwarfish whole;
Its body brevity, and wit its soul.
— Samuel Taylor Coleridge
Or they may be included as part of a more formal poem such as a sonnet.
“As truth and beauty shall together thrive
If from thy self, to store thou wouldst convert:
Or else of thee this I prognosticate,
Thy end is truth’s and beauty’s doom and date.”
–Last four lines of Shakespeare’s Fourteenth Sonnet:
However I chose Couplets for New Year’s because of the Chinese use of couplets for their New Year’s celebrations. These are sometimes called “contrapuntal couplets”. They are placed on doorways in Chinese communities all over the world. I suppose now they are sent as text messages on smart phones. They are sent as greetings and well wishes for the day. They are called Chun Lian. The calligraphy can be purchased at marketplaces and glued to a doorframe. They may be traditional in nature or they may be some texts that reflect on recent news or political events. Some Chinese couplets may consist of two lines of four characters each. Couplets are read from top to bottom where the first line starts from the right. The Chinese New Year occurs in the spring. Chun means “Spring”.
Here is what I found on http://www.chinapage.com:
Chunlian is a special type of Duilian, or couplet. It is used only during the Chinese New Year as part of its celebration. While duilian is permanent, chunlian is a temporary decoration to be placed on the entrance of the house, somewhat akin to Halloween and Christmas decorations.
Duilian comprises of a couplet written on vertical strips of red paper in the best calligraphic style one can muster. The first (called upper) line is posted on the right side of the front door. The second (called lower) line is posted on the left side of the front door. In addition, a third horizontal piece may be posted across and on top the door.
Here is an example:
Word-for-word translation of above:
Top (Horizontal across) Whole Earth Returns Spring
Left (Vertical) line : winter gone mountain clear water sparkles
Right (Vertical) line: Spring comes bird sings flowers fragrant
Note that word for word, the upper and lower lines are antithetical, yet the meanings are complementary and content of the message is hopeful and uplifting. The words in the horizontal are written from left to right.
CRYSTALLINES
So it seemed to me that this understanding of nature, good will, and good luck that has been given by the Chinese for centuries makes a wonderful form to consider for the New Year. Then I stumbled upon Crystallines and they seemed to be the perfect kind of couplet for us to write in English. Crystallines are two line image poems often with a title. It was created by the American poet, Denis Garrison. His website is here.
Crystallines are small poems, limited to 17 syllables, whose primary focus appears to be to match the Japanese clarity of image with the English harmony of sound. It was inspired by the Haiku and like the haiku it may be at its best when written in present tense. Any reference that can place the verse in context much like the Japanese kigo (season) or kidai (symbolic seasonal reference) is recommended.
The Crystalline employs the kireji (cutting word) of the haiku. The kireji in haiku is a word that “cuts off” one view and turns the reader to a different view. In a longer Japanese poem the kireji is 2 long lines inserted midway in the poem that change the direction of the poem not only in structure but in thought. A stand alone small poem such as the Crystalline emulates the long poem’s kireji couplet long line frame and it should “cut” or turn the view from one line to the next.
Unlike haiku which observes the image with objectivity and attempts to keep the ego out of the verse, the Crystalline invites the poet’s subjectivity and permits the poet’s thought and feelings to be communicated through the verse.
ENGAGEMENT
Love flowers as commitment ties,
as mere flirtation flies,then dies.
–Brian Strand
ON THE WING
Hot summer days bring into view
A Red Admiral and Holly Blue.
–Brian Strand
ONE SUMMER DAY (A Crystalline Sequence)
From twisted sheets the new day rises,
low sun dispelling fever dreams.
Watering my garden – with the green
in the mist and steam, my rainbow.
In bright of day, mad dogs and I
in maple-shade together lie.
New mown grass, wild onion scent
console me through this torrid afternoon.
Ice tea pitcher breaks a beaded sweat.
Steaming, we welcome thunder’s threat.
Under soft black sky, the dark hills,
the air filled with fireflies’ fairy lights!
In the still night air, the ebbing heat
provokes the gray tree frogs to sing.
–Denis M. Garrison
So wishing all of you much success in your life and writing in the New Year, prosperity and good health. Hope you enjoy playing with couplets, chunlian and crystallines.
Gay said:
It’s the busy week between Christmas and New Year. Festivities, shopping, visits, and celebrations in full swing; so I’m happy you’ve stopped by the pub for a read, a chat, and a drink. We’re in the usual corner, there’s a fresh breeze today and some light rhymes or verses to celebrate the turn of the year. Please enjoy!
claudia said:
another great article gay… i really like the crystallines…they seem to look like an easy write but my experience is – the shorter the poem – the more difficult it is to write a good one… will see if i manage to join into the couplets fun..
on another note…it’s victoria ceretto-slotto’s birthday today….so if you got time, catch her on twitter, FB or on her blog and give her a warm hug…smiles
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Gay, your posts on form are always so full of information and inspiration. Thank you. It’s a bit crazy today, but I’ll carry my writing journal with me and see if the muse shows up! Happy New Year.
claudia said:
happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you, happy birthday lovely poetess…happy birthday to you…smiles
Gay said:
Wishing you a most wondrous birthday, Victoria. Hope this is your best and most inspired year ever! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, Gay
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Gay–thanks for the informative article. I have not opted for a good one! But I do try to keep each couplet to 17 syllables, and I have an excellent crystalline visual (if I can brag a bit here–it’s a picture of my very very old dog, so some indulgence is required!)
Thanks again and happy new year. K.
tashtoo said:
Happy Birthday Victoria! And Gay…another wonderful post that I am certainly going to take a stab at. May not be until tomorrow as I’m working on a spoken word video with River for our Poetry Slam coming up tomorrow. Hope you’ll all consider posting a read or video of one of your pieces. It’s a first, so I’m sure there will be a few bugs to work out, but still should be fun! Cruising toward the New Year…couplet style! 🙂
hedgewitch said:
Another interesting and highly informative article Gay–thanks for explaining it all so well for us. I’m having a hectic few days, but will see if anything comes–like Claudia, I know from experience it takes me far longer to write a 17 syllable poem than a 17 line one, especially with the form devices and so forth necessary here.
Happy Birthday, Victoria!
siggiofmaine said:
A lot to digest mentally…will muse on it and be back…
fertile ideas shall sprout !
I’ve been learning so much…thanks for the well written guides.
Peace
and
Have a Happy New Year all year long,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Linda Kruschke said:
Gay, What a wonderful lesson. And imagine my surprise when I came to read what was being taught today only to find you were discussing the very form of poetry I wrote last night and posted for today! I don’t usually write in couplets, and I often write in free verse without considering rhyme. But for my thankful Thursday post today I wrote a poem that is a series of rhyming couplets! And the best part is that the blogging friends I’ve made here at dVerse are included in the poem (though indirectly along with all the other blogging friends I have made).
Happy New Year to everyone here at the pub
Hope the year is filled with rejoicing and grub
Peace, Linda
Elyas Mulu Kiros said:
Thank you for sharing! This is an awesome entry! 😀
I’ve linked something … but no way close to what this post demands. 🙂 I shared it just for fun. Hope you enjoy it. Happy New Year! 🙂 Cheers,
Laurie Kolp said:
Thanks for this challenge, Gay. It’s harder than it seems.
Happy Birthday, Victoria.
Happy New Year to all of you!
Beth Winter said:
Wonderful article. Perhaps when time is more lenient, I’ll try the 17 syllable poem. For tonight, I linked a series of couplets.
Happy Birthday, Victoria!
Beth Winter said:
Having blog troubles. I will re-link when I get it fixed.
Gay said:
Alas, Beth. I never found your poem. I read one but you said it wasn’t one that was meant to be linked. I always love your work and know whatever you wrote it was superb! Gay
Grace said:
Happy birthday Victoria ~
Gay, thank you for sharing another poetry form. I tried my hand in it, and its fun and challenging.
I wish you and everyone here in D’verse Happy New Year ~
(aka Heaven)
Mary said:
I didn’t try the 17-syllable form, but I just indulged my muse and wrote a poem in my kind of couplets. I enjoyed your very informative article though, Gay; and maybe i will give these forms a try when I have a bit more time and the muse is co-operative. Happy birthday, Victoria.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Well each couplet has 17 syllables and a pivot but after that went off in a completely different road…sigh
Nick Rolynd said:
Wrote mine about writing. Hope you enjoy! xD
kshawnedgar said:
Oh, I’m a rebel.
http://kshawnedgar.wordpress.com/2011/12/29/greeting-card-poetry-week-thursday/
@kshawnedgar
fireblossom32 said:
Hi Gay. I wrote something out of couplets.
Bodhirose said:
Hi Gay, thanks for a most interesting guide to couplets and other two-line forms…I enjoyed giving them a try.
Happy New Year! xo
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
A happy New Year to you, Gay, and to the crew and friends here at dVerse 🙂
brian said:
thanks sam…same to you!
brian said:
ok gay…i think i can do this….i think…ha…will work on it tomorrow…have end of year paperwork to get done as well so we will see…really a lovely write though…and i understand it for sure…smiles…and i have enjoyed those that i read so far….
b_y said:
Took a stab at it, but I suspect I’m overlooking five or ten essential elements. These apparently simple forms…
Lydia said:
I loved the challenge of this one. And I especially loved your inspired and inspiring post. Many thanks and a Happy New Year to you!
Lydia said:
This time I am linking correctly! Please ignore the previous comment….
I loved the challenge of this one. And I especially loved your inspired and inspiring post. Many thanks and a Happy New Year to you!
lolamouse said:
Gay,
Thank you for the informative article, which I did actually read. My submission is not at all worthy of the erudite nature of your posting. I just can’t help myself sometimes!
hedgewitch said:
I managed to scribble a little nursery rhyme for you Gay. Not much compared to the amazing things so many have done with this prompt, but I wanted to play, too. ;_)
Roy Schulze said:
My entry—Another Mouse—for some reason starts with a three-line couplet, but soon settles down nicely. Hope you like it.
Shawna said:
Okay, I finally came up with something. 🙂
Gay said:
Lucky..today, I found time to read your posts and boy howdy were they good! I’m so happy you guys came by, read and posted. These forms were sort of “lucky” finds. I hope this year is lucky for you. They say it’s the beginning of the AGE OF AQUARIUS. And so may all the goodness of water run over you, give you the freshness of new life and healing in any way you need. May all good things be yours. Thank you for bringing your lights into mine! Gay
hedgewitch said:
Thank you Gay for bringing us this chance to work with these forms, and also, personally, thank you for all your many kind comments, friendship and support. I hope the New Year brings you luck and happiness.
oceangirl said:
Thank you Gay, and happy, happy, New Year.
snakypoet said:
A good form to use! I do wish a Happy New Year to all – but my poem is, necessarily, still with a sad ending to the old year.
Lorna Cahall said:
I’m going to write the Small Stones challenge for January and though I’d use a puente form. I just love it. But couplets, well, they’ll work withing that form, I think.
Lindy Lee said:
Thanks for the couplet compendium…