I want to wish everyone happy holidays and all the blessings of the season. This Christmas finds us all in very different places, celebrating in many different ways. It is also a time that stretches one’s mind and affects our emotions. We in the U.S. have been much affected by the shooting in Connecticut this last week. I think caring for one another and particularly for that community has weighed on us as we prepare to hold our own families tight this season. All of us send our sympathies to that community and are profoundly sorry for its loss.
This form is based on the Catholic Mass, and it is another French form. But while the initial phrase Kyrie Eleison is translated as “Lord, have mercy” and is a phrase in the Mass alternating with the phrase Christie Eleison, the poem does not necessarily have to use that phrase, nor does it have to have anything to do with religion or spirituality. In fact, as it is now used it seems the refrain acts as an allusion to the liturgical repetition. As I investigated the form, I discovered it is not very different from the Quaterns we looked at last time.
The Encyclopedia Britannica gives this definition: kyrielle, ( French: “repeated series of words or phrases”) a French verse form in short, usually octosyllabic, rhyming couplets. The couplets are often paired in quatrains and are characterized by a refrain that is sometimes a single word and sometimes the full second line of the couplet or the full fourth line of the quatrain.
The word is from the Old French kiriele, which is a derivative of the word kyrie, a type of Christian liturgical prayer.
However I have read many variations of Kyrielles. True, like the Quatern, it is a form that employs eight syllable lines; I have read them as well in iambic and trochaic meter. While traditionally in couplets, there are several variations in the rhyme scheme: abab, aabb, aaab, and abcb, The only constant seems to be in having the refrain fall either after the quatrain or as the fourth or last line of the stanza (quatrain). I have seen very old versions as a single couplet followed by the refrain. As in most French forms, three verses is the usual minimum with no maximum number.
So to sum up:
1. the form can be written a number of ways usually as a quatrain.
2. the form ends in a refrain which is repeated as the last line or after every stanza.
3. the lines should be written in tetrameter (in iambs or trochees) or a count of eight syllables.
4. the original form addressed spiritual topics but that usage has somewhat disappeared.
Here is a youtube of the Gregorian chant version of the Kyrie, this version dates to the 7th Century A.D.
I sent out a request to a couple of people for Kyrielle examples. Here’s an example of the Kyrielle provided graciously by Beth Winter.
I Dared Not Dream
Blockaded from rejection’s pain,
I swore to never trust again
yet kismet breached a porous seam.
I live a dream I dared not dream.
When fancies thrive in moonless nights
as shadows shrink from star-born lights
and sacrifice sustains esteem,
I live a dream I dared not dream.
Though minutes race, our time is still
as all my wishes, you fulfill
and faith allies with ardor’s scheme,
I live a dream I dared not dream.
© Beth Winter * All Rights Reserved
On the web are a number of Kyrielle Sonnets. The Kyrielle lends itself nicely to being arranged as a tetrameter sonnet. I found this definition at writing.com:
Kyrielle Sonnet
A Kyrielle Sonnet consists of 14 lines (three rhyming quatrain stanzas and a non-rhyming couplet). Just like the traditional Kyrielle poem, the Kyrielle Sonnet also has a repeating line or phrase as a refrain (usually appearing as the last line of each stanza). Each line within the Kyrielle Sonnet consists of only eight syllables. French poetry forms have a tendency to link back to the beginning of the poem, so common practice is to use the first and last line of the first quatrain as the ending couplet. This would also re-enforce the refrain within the poem. Therefore, a good rhyming scheme for a Kyrielle Sonnet would be: AabB, ccbB, ddbB, AB -or- AbaB, cbcB, dbdB, AB
Luke Prater replied with this one. I am so pleased to present it here. He has written it three different ways but I liked this for its inventiveness and universality. To see all three click here: Last Flush
Last Flush – (modified Kyrielle Sonnet)
Engorging, slick, devour her skin
in credit, carriage, blacksack bin.
We spit the dregs of her last flush –
O Lord, be merciful to us.
The itching started, trees were ripped,
mass-drilling and her min’rals stripped.
One grimreap day will see us done –
O Kýrie, eléison.
Industrialise, copulate,
tip landfill, overpopulate.
Her waters break; she’ll take whoever –
O Nkósi, o yibá nencéba.
In gouging, sick, sick in her skin –
Seigneur, ayez pitié de nous.
© Luke Prater – 19 March 2011 * All Rights Reserved
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claudia said:
happy thursday everyone! i grew up catholic, so i’m familiar with the kyrie eleison chant….still in my ear and i think it’s beautifully meditative…
thanks gay for an excellent article and a big challenge…
will make my round in a bit as we have set up the christmas tree today and my daughters wanna read a christmas story to me that i used to read to them when they were small…so…smiles…see you in a bit..
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Merry Christmas Claudia. Enjoy your family. Your voice is so sweet – I would love to hear you read those stories.
tashtoo said:
Ready and waiting today! 🙂 Finding my flow…and sending each and everyone blessings of light and love for the season…no matter what you may call it 😉 Peace and joy to all and an overflowing cup of gratitude to Gay and all the pub regulars for helping me stay sane…it’s appreciated more than y’all will ever know. PoetLove!
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Massive endeavor Tash. You continue to impress me with every write.
Aria said:
Thanks so much. Favouriting this to study more on this form.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Glad you enjoyed it, Aria. Yours was beautiful.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Welcome and happy holidays fellow poets. I’m so happy to have been able to share a year of poetry and poetry forms with all of you. I’m wishing you a new year full of good health, joy and inspiration. I’m praying for world peace as I always do this time of year and sending out blessings of goodness in what ever way you celebrate the season. Enjoy the kyrielles. Like the quaterns, they are extremely versatile and fit in many modes. I want to thank Luke Prater and Beth Winter for generously donating the examples for today’s articles.
Beth Winter said:
Thank you, Gay. Wonderful article and I am pleased to be part of it.
Mary said:
I will be writing my kyrielle a bit later today. I enjoy the form, but have not had time today, as my granddaughter & I have been occupied with Christmas things. Thank you for the article, Gay. Very helpful and informative. And happy holidays to you too…..and to everyone at dVerse and who shares here, whatever season..
brian miller said:
nice…so what have you and your grand daughter been up to?
Mary said:
She needed to finish some ‘jewelry’ she was making for gifts; and we also wrapped Christmas presents and watched some Christmas videos. She is spending the night with me…as there is a blizzard going on, and it’s not good driving! Thus I was later than usual with my poem tonight.
brian miller said:
oh my…cold rain here…i want snow…making jewelry…that sounds like fun times…and well worth the wait i am sure….be over in a minute…
brian miller said:
i am in….boy what a long day at school…the kids are def hyped up for christmas break…lol..this was fun gay…wrote one, scrapped it and the second worked out a bit better….maybe…ha…we’ll see what you think…smiles.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Very clever take, sir. I liked it a lot.
Raivenne said:
The fun of being a writer who likes using different forms is wonderful happenstance of already having one done! But I’ll see if I can crank out a new one before Mr. Linky expires.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Loved it.
Laurie Kolp said:
I bring you today’s poem with great sadness after spending time in an elementary school. Sorry.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I weighed in somewhat on the same topic. So sad at Christmastime.
tinkwelborn said:
~ ~ H a p p y ~ H o l i d a y s ~ ~
To All~
brian miller said:
happy holidays man…hope you have a wonderful one with those you love…
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Yuletide greetings to you and may the season be shiny and bright!
vivinfrance said:
Thank you, Gay, for a great exposition, giving more choice than I was aware of when I wrote my first Kyrielle, on climate change, last May. I want to give this more thought, and will try again later.
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Looking forward to it, Viv!
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Thanks Gay, nice distraction. Played with this and so very much tongue-in-cheek poem. Not sure when or if I can do the tour. Family health crisis means I have to take folk in and out of hospital from 6am tomorrow until Christmas-eve
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I love that tongue-in-cheek stuff you write so well. Sorry you’re having a health crisis in the family. I hope it’s not too serious and sending well wishes to you and yours.
John (@bookdreamer) said:
I’m at the hospital waiting for my wife to come round from an operation for a unexpected recurring cancer. She was in for an hour longer then expected so not sure what this means yet.
I have to haunt the corridors to such time as I’m allowed into the ward. Been here since 7am and up since 4am (it’s nearly 2pm now).
For some reason their wifi treats dVerse and most of the other sites as dangerous and unclassified so makes it difficult for me to access and make comments. Only on now as sitting out in a park with my telephone on as a hotspot. So I’m not sure when I can do the rounds.
claudia said:
oh john – sorry to hear this…hope everything went well… sending prayers her way..
Gay said:
Thinking for you and sending prayers as well. Hope they’re just being careful. I hate that word SO MUCH. Wishing good health for you to carry her through and a healing for her.
brian miller said:
john missed this earlier…sending thoughts and prayers your way…for you and your wife…
John (@bookdreamer) said:
Thanks. The delay was down to the need for more extensive surgery, which appears to have done the necessary for the removal of the fresh crop of cancer. She refused post operative follow up last time putting trust in alternatives. Being married for 25 years meant that the ‘ I told you so’ has mostly been unsaid…
This time follow up should be taken up but given the six week gap between the surgery and the treatment I suspect the intention will need a certain amount of open and frank discussion to remain an option.
This means that I will not be around much for sometime so merry Christmas to all
brian miller said:
merry christmas john…
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
I understand John. It seems like an epidemic to me. I’m sorry you have to go through this and sorry for her as well. Hoping the post-op recovery goes well and the necessary therapy afterwards. There is much that can be done now but it takes courage for everyone concerned. Thank you John for linking at this difficult time. My thoughts are with you.
brian miller said:
Logan has his Christmas choir program tonight so i grabbed john’s and then I am bugging out for a bit to enjoy the show…will catch up with the rest of you this evening…
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Thanks Brian. Good show to Logan. Y’all have fun tonight and we’ll see you later.
kaykuala said:
This is new to me Gay! As with everything else’s that’s new in d’Verse, I’d always try. I’ll give it a shot later!
Gay Reiser Cannon said:
Good. See you then.
Grace said:
Thank you for the challenging form and examples Gay ~
I have linked up ~ Wishing you a wonderful day and week ~
Gay said:
Thank you Grace. Enjoyed yours very much!
ManicDdaily said:
Great post, Gay. Wonderful examples Beth and Luke! I have a not very Christmasy one! But I do manage a prayer in it.
Love to all. k.
Bodhirose said:
Thanks, Gay, for a great article on this form. I had looked it up and given it a try some time ago so linked that one in that hadn’t got much viewing before. Happy holidays to you, Gay, and may they bring you peace and love.
Semaphore / Samuel Peralta said:
What a wonderful form this looks to be, Gay, I already love it! You unearth the most unique forms!
It’s been an amazing year in poetry for me – I was invited to the dVerse group, I saw the release of five Kindle books, I totally re-vamped my website – but most of all, I shared and discovered poetry with a strong community of writers and artists, whose friendship has been nothing short of inspirational.
Wishing you all the best of the season – Christmas, for me – and raising a toast to the New Year!
brian miller said:
sam you have had a great year man…and well deserved as you def have the poetry skillz….smiles….have a great holiday man…
Gay said:
Thank you Sam. It has really been a super year for you and no one could be happier for you than I am. I am so thrilled for your success which is so deserved. Your work is always crafted with care and exhilarating to read. Wishing you a very merry Christmas and more success in the new year!
Mary said:
I finally finished my kyrielle, and now I am going to make some ’rounds’ and see what others have written. Happy first day of winter to everyone in the northern hemisphere tomorrow.
claudia said:
good morning…sorry i’m way late but about to get a coffee and playing catch up..
Mary said:
Ha, Claudia….and I am about to go to bed. LOL. Enjoy your coffee.
brian miller said:
on my way as well…good to see you though claudia…enjoy…smiles…
Susan said:
How much I wanted to say! And how little fit the form! And, as it turns out, once I knew who the narrators were talking to, I nearly let them act more mature–they nearly stood in silence in front of the awesome presences–but not quite.
Polly Robinson said:
What great responses you’re getting to this prompt, Gay. Goes to show, lots of us like a bit of form 🙂
Tony said:
Thanks for the article Gay. I’m a little late to the party, but I wanted to be sure that my poem was accurate before submitting it 🙂
brian miller said:
g’morning poets…some good stuff over night…last day of school here…and a sprinkle of snow in the air as well…i may survive it…between that and playing in the teacher vs student basketball game today…i may be lucky…be sure to buy the new mayan calendar today as well…smiles….i’ll be around…
Tony said:
My information is that the world should have ended at 11:13am GMT – and it didn’t. Of course, the whole thing was based on a misunderstanding of the operation of the Mayan calendar; a new page/B’ak’tun has begun and is good for 144,000 days or 394 years and 3 months.
brian miller said:
i guess i wont be around when the next time comes up again…ha…
Glenn Buttkus said:
I wrote my kyrielle yesterday, and then had to go to town on errands. We are getting ready to fly to Texas for the holidays. My wife’s family are there. I certainly share in the dVerse notion that we, as poets & artists, are obliged to speak up and out when our hearts and minds are engaged in topical events as well as esthetic ones. The responses to my poem, NEWTOWN, have been very thorough and thought provoking. Once again, I just consider it a rare privilege to be part of a fellowship like this one.
Gay said:
Good morning everyone. I have a few more kyrielles posted that I haven’t read. Will be ’round a little later. Getting ready to go do a few necessary errands for a while. So impressed with what I’ve read so far!
claudia said:
gay i have a question: how do you do it, that your name is connected to twitter when i click on the twitter symbol beneath the post. i think this is awesome, all the rest of us have just via @wordpress and on your posts it says via @beachanny – wonder what the magical trick for this is.. ha…smiles… are you giving hints..?
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
Enjoyed this! Was much inspired by Luke’s brilliant effort as to theme, while following a variation on the form of Beth’s lovely piece.
brian miller said:
very cool on yours…i enjoyed it…and thanks for the visit as well ma’am…
been doing christmas with my parents tonight and just winding down and popped back in to catch up…heading to be now as well so any late comers i will catch you in the AM
Sabio Lantz said:
Well, the pub is closing soon. Thanx Gay — and welcome back from your errands. I love reading folks creativity when it has some constraints.
brian miller said:
hey sabio…have def enjoyed all the different flavors…felt like i was following you around tonight as i caught up…thanks for being out there giving feedback…
wordcoaster said:
I double-posted. I’m sorry–my first try was really quite far from a kyrielle (it was some form, I’m sure though I’ve no idea which). So I posted a new one thinking I could remove the other link afterwards…I’m not having much luck. Anyway, thank you Gay, as always, for a wonderful prompt, and I’ve enjoyed everyone’s submissions 🙂
Gay said:
Ooops sorry I didn’t see this comment before I commented.
claudia said:
i removed the first link for you..
wordcoaster said:
Ah, thank you! 🙂