Greetings, fellow poets. This is Victoria, hosting Poetics today. I would like to invite you to journey back in time with me to your own childhood. Let’s experience once more the wonder of discovery, the beauty of simple things. Hopefully for most of us, these were years replete with innocence, playfulness and an abundance of imagination. For those not so blessed, may you have found joy and healing in other children—perhaps even your own little ones.
My mother and grandmother taught me to love poetry before I could read. Even today, my mother (who is 93 and suffers from dementia) is able to recite this entire poem from memory:
Oh, there once was a Puffin
Just the shape of a muffin,
And he lived on an island
In the bright blue sea!
He ate little fishes,
That were most delicious,
And he had them for supper
And he had them for tea.
But this poor little Puffin,
He couldn’t play nothin’,
For he hadn’t anybody
To play with at all.
So he sat on his island,
And he cried for awhile, and
He felt very lonely,
And he felt very small.
Then along came the fishes,
And they said, “If you wishes,
You can have us for playmates,
Instead of for tea!”
So they now play together,
In all sorts of weather,
And the Puffin eats pancakes,
Like you and like me.
by Florence Page Jaques, Originally published in The Golden Book of Poetry
In “A Family of Poems: My Favorite Poetry for Children, ” Caroline Kennedy, the daughter of President John F. Kennedy and Jacqueline Bouvier Kennedy, discusses the important role that poetry played in their family life. She presents a collection of poems for children. I happened upon it the other day while waiting for someone and rediscovered the pleasure of many poems from my own childhood.
Kennedy writes in the introduction:
Some people think poetry is solitary or boring. They worry that they won’t be able to understand it. But people who start reading poetry when they are young don’t have these fears. As children we enjoy language and rhyme and creating word pictures of the world around us. A love of learning and the ability to express ourselves clearly are critical in today’s world. We are bombarded with information, but growing up with poetry develops a foundation in language and values that enables us to distinguish what is truly important.
Here are a few facts I discovered on the Internet about what children enjoy in poetry:
• They love poems that tell a story—narrative poems;
• They like Limericks, humorous poems and poems about animals;
• They prefer poems that play with sound such as rhymes and rhythm
Although one article states they don’t like haiku, or free verse I didn’t find that to be true when I was a museum docent. One of the gallery games I used to play with children of all ages was to take them to one of the smaller galleries and have them write a haiku, cinquain or free verse choosing one of the paintings in the exhibit as inspiration. They “got it,” and they were good.
For this week’s Poetics, would you write a poem for a child of any age? Maybe you have someone in mind for whom you would like to write. Poetry can express emotions that are hard for some to verbalize, it can pass on values, family history, the wonder of the world, teach lessons and so much more.
If you are new to dVerse, here’s the drill:
• Write you poem and post it on your blog or website;
• Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post;
• Copy the URL to your poem and enter your name or identifier in the spaces Mr. Linky provides;
• Return to dVerse, share a comment if you will and visit and comment on other poets work.
• Enjoy being a child for a little while.
In conclusion, here’s another poem you may enjoy:
The Swing
How do you like to go up in a swing,
Up in the air so blue?
Oh, I do think it the pleasantest thing
Ever a child can do!
Up in the air and over the wall,
Till I can see so wide,
River and trees and cattle and all
Over the countryside–
Till I look down on the garden green,
Down on the roof so brown–
Up in the air I go flying again,
Up in the air and down!
Robert Lewis Stevenson, Public Domain
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Welcome back to your younger life. Have fun, light up your imaginations and enjoy.
I have house guests but they leave in the morning. What I can’t read today, I will visit tomorrow. Happy Poetics.
Laurie Kolp said:
This is a delightful prompt. Thanks, Victoria.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
And your poem is a delight, Laurie.
Anmol (alias HA) said:
I was not born into a family of readers. It is something I explored myself. I remember the stories my mother used to tell me in the night. They were unlike the fables and fairy tales. They were more real, but of course with a fantastic twist or other worldly incident to keep it fun. As for poetry, I am accustomed to a lot many lullabies from the childhood and nothing else. I remember them and they were full of wisdom and the achievements, a child shall get in life. I find them quite burdensome for a child. So, I have written a lullaby-like poem for the prompt today, quite in contrast with the ones I already knew.
Thanks for such an endearing prompt. Hope you are having a good day. 🙂
-HA
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thank you, HA. I have to think that the story-telling had a great effect on you. And lullabies!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Wonderfully fun prompt – I am at dinner with friends and will be by later – ha 😉
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Enjoy your evening, Bjorn.
Ruth said:
great prompt & writeup, Victoria
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thank you, Ruth.
Maggie Grace said:
Before I got to the end of your post, I was reciting the poem in my head “Oh how I love to go up in the air.” Made me smile to see it as part of your post. My one escape was a Child’s Garden of Verse which I read countless times. That’s the only poem I recall though and it still feels like happy to me. Thank you.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Sounds like we grew up with the same escape, Maggie Grace. I’m not sure I remember what else is in it. I wonder if it’s still available.
Morgan said:
I love the puffin poem…its even fun to say 🙂
Maggie Grace said:
A Child’s Garden of Verse is but I had a three volume set as an addition to a set of encyclopedias. Possibly Brittannica. Don’t even know if hard volume encyclopedias exist any longer.
brian miller said:
i dont think they do make them anymore…esp considering information is always changing and updating, it almost does not make sense now that we have tin internet…we had a set though…
ManicDdaily said:
Hi Victoria — I am a few days behind things and have just posted my “beat poem”.
http://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2013/10/19/new-yorkers-at-the-velvet-garter-somewhere-west/
(if anyone interested.) I really like children’s writing and have posted a few illustrated poems already, which some people have already seen– the Villainelle and the grandmother one. I could link those or in the next day or so, try for something new.
Maybe wait and see if I have time to have something new come up–
I agree that children’s poetry is just incredibly important–I think all children’s writing is though. Thanks for the lovely prompt.
k.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Thanks, Karin. I look forward to whatever you post AND the illustrations!
kkkkaty1 said:
I LOVE that book Caroline Kennedy wrote as the collection is of the most wonderful poetry for children I’ve seen all in one volume….and The Swing was always a special favorite for me…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
She wrote (compiled) one for adults too.
aprille said:
So lovely, Victoria, and true: small children love nursery rhymes, which after all, are poetry, I put together a mixture of 2 of those and turned them into a game, which they also like.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Loved it!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I was so happy to rediscover it, too.
freyathewriter said:
ooh, what a challenge! And how wonderful that the poem about the puffin (my absolutely most favourite bird) remains in your mother’s mind and soul so perfectly. Thank you for this challenge.
brian miller said:
enjoyed your freya…and for one that says you dont have much in the way of children in your story you pulled off some great fun
freyathewriter said:
🙂
Raivenne said:
I love this prompt. I never write for children – something I need to work on more. Happy Poetics to all. 😀
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’d never written for children, either–but now I have a bunch of ideas prowling my brain.
Mary said:
Oh how I used to like A Child’s Garden of Verses by Robert Louis Stevenson. I too loved the poem “The Swing” and also “The Land of Counterpane.” When I was teaching, the kids really liked the books by Shel Silverstein. I liked the poems he wrote too. One thing I know is that kids don’t learn nursery rhymes as much as they did in former years…which is a shame, I think. I HAVE written some very personal poems for my two grandchildren…they will see them ‘someday’ and, hopefully, appreciate them. I like the prompt very much, Victoria, but today is kind of a frantic day for me….and I may not be able to do the prompt justice! We will see. But I really enjoyed your article today….
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Not to worry, Mary. There’s always OLN!
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
Hi Victoria, thank you for reminding us that we were all young, dreamy and innocent. It was a real challenge for me today, as my inspiration was on a completely different muse.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I hope it was fun for you, Adriana.
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
It definitely was. 🙂
Sheila said:
I love reading and writing children’s verse. thank you.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
You’re welcome!
Susan said:
Both of the poems above are part of my childhood too! Good memories, Victoria. It is no small joy that one sticks with your mom. The one I post today I wrote a year ago. Sorry I have nothing new today.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
That’s okay. Maybe something will manfest down the road. Looking forward to what you wrote.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
The child poetry I read was of course Swedish .. but I remember the rhymes and that they above everything else was absurd.. and I loved them
Victoria C. Slotto said:
There is a universal appeal to the rhymes for children…whatever the language. (And the age).
claudia said:
hey victoria… thanks for this fun prompt.. i’m in zürich for a few days on a business trip and have mondo problems with the internet… managed to log on somehow with my business laptop but not really sure how far i get… will try to visit as many as possible… smiles… happy saturday everyone..
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Enjoy your time in Zurich. We’ll expect to visit it in subsequent poems! :0)
claudia said:
smiles… i wish i could see a bit more of the city but busy with a big conference..so…my hopes are quite small…smiles… managed to visit a few but the internet connection is fuzzy and slow and /&%ç&/Q%*W)ç&/W%ç)%ç) !!!!! ha… ok… i’m going to bed now and hope things are better tomorrow…smiles.. enjoy the evening all… i will get back to you..just need a bit more time…i’m sorry…
brian miller said:
rest well C…i cant stand internet issues…oy…had to make a call around 1030 last night as ours went out and took the tv as well…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Our house guests (who just left) are from Canada, but he is Swiss. They were just in Zurich!
brian miller said:
WAY LATE! got caught up at an outdoor festival and just getting home….victoria this is a delightful prompt…had fun writing mine and cant wait to see what people brought….
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It has been fun reading them. I’m back after saying au revoir to our guests.
ramblingsfromamum said:
Victoria thank you – so looking forward to this one 🙂 By the look of it everyone is excited!
brian miller said:
hiya mum….happy saturday to you…smiles.
ramblingsfromamum said:
G’Day Mr. M – hmm happy Sunday 🙂 Happy Saturday to you though – getting stuck into this children’s one..so excited hee hee
brian miller said:
nice…i look forward to it…was out at a festival most of the day…being a kid, ha…i made it across a 10 foot tight rope…no fall…woot…boys did some bull riding and rock climbing…watched a BMX stunt show…was very cool…
ramblingsfromamum said:
Excellent look forward to reading yours too. How nice is it to return to being a kid…eek on the tight rope glad you not me! You sound like you had a ball, so glad you enjoyed yourselves. 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I look forward to yours. It’s Sunday AM here now, so Monday there? Or your still asleep. Oh so confusing to me.
mindretrofit8 said:
This is such a wonderful prompt Victoria! I am not sure if I will be able to participate in time, but I have enjoyed reading everyone’s poems very much.
brian miller said:
smiles…hope inspiration hits you tomorrow…
brian miller said:
and i def appreciate your reading as well…that is truly giving of yourself…
claudia said:
appreciating your reading even without posting…thank you..
just finished my commenting back round and off to work now… internet is crappy like it was yesterday….. so really won’t be able to visit as many as i would love to.. happy sunday all
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’m grateful, like Claudia, you’re here to read. Thank you.
iWriter said:
What a fun prompt. It definitely had me going back to my younger years 🙂 Thank you. I hope I did it right! Have a great weekend.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
For me, whatever gets us writing is right!
iWriter said:
I like that 🙂
Sherry Blue Sky said:
WONDERFUL prompt, Victoria! I will be back tomorrow! I looked AFTER a child today and am exhausted:)
brian miller said:
look forward to what you bring sherry….smiles…
get some rest….i had to do saturday school this morning with 10
‘delinquent’ children, so i know it can be exhausting…smiles.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Tee hee. Sometimes I wonder why when we get older and wiser we can’t have children. Then I spend a day with them and remember why! Hope you got rested, Sherry.
Poet Laundry said:
I love this–great prompt. I’ll be back tomorrow to read and respond…getting late here and I’m beat. Looking forward to some great reads. 🙂
brian miller said:
get some rest….loved your story of the moonflower…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It’s been fun reading.
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
I’m linking to an old one which wasn’t specifically written for children, but after it appeared on the page I thought they must be its natural audience. 🙂
brian miller said:
old or new, its all good…and you know sometimes us adults have a hard time seeing the world as a child…smiles.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Reminds me of Shel Silverstien–only in this case his are written for children but I think even more appreciated by adults.
yikici said:
Ooo, what a lovely prompt, I may just Jon in, just have one question, when you say write a poem suitable for all children, do you have a particular top age mark, or are you including adult too who still have their inner child inside?
yikici said:
*join not Jon.
brian miller said:
i dont think there is a top age…most have written to younger children but i thought of writing one to teens as well to give a little different flavor…and if you wanted to write to your inner child you could do that as well..i hope you make it back
yikici said:
I’ve got my thinking cap on, failing that, I do have a poem or two I’ve written a while back which is suitable and has not been shared online, so I may cheat -I hope I do not get penalised for that (if I do that). lol
brian miller said:
not at all…feel free to post them…
you can post multiple on our poetics and form prompts…
our openlinknight on tuesday is the only day we limit it to one
as we have over 100 people usually…
yikici said:
Cool, that’s good to know 🙂 thank you.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I agree with Brian.
yikici said:
🙂
brian miller said:
whew….that is a good thing…smiles.
rosross said:
Now this would make a wonderful resource for a child’s poetry book. Some great work here.
brian miller said:
most def…and enjoyed yours as well…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I agree with that…as soon as I started reading them I thought of the possibility.
brian miller said:
off to church….be back this afternoon to catch up with others that join in…
yikici said:
Reblogged this on Scribes Ink. and commented:
Scribers, I’ve just stumbled across this challenge, it’s a little short notice, but thought you’d enjoy it regardless (you have about five hours from this post (3pm EST)). If you can’t join in with this particular challenge, then follow their blog and keep an eye out for their posts, I am certain you’ll have fun stretching your poetic words. 😉
brian miller said:
smiles..thanks, look forward to yours…and we keep them open for 33 hours…so it is open til midnite EST today….
yikici said:
Oh lol, well, that’s good to hear (phew), I best amend the post (I’m on GMT, so totally clueless with EST). I can relax now. 😀
brian miller said:
still 11.5 hours from now…if that helps…smiles.
yikici said:
That helps a tremendous deal, thank you so much, I feel so ditzy now. lol
brian miller said:
ah not at all…i realize we are all scattered around the world so its hard to give times….if you click on the linky button to see all those participating i think it tells youhow much time is left as well…for future reference….
yikici said:
Noted 🙂 thank you.
shanyns said:
Total fun…can’t wait to read all your poems.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It has been fun.
Ginny Brannan said:
Hi Victoria, Wonderful prompt! Thought I’d come in and play for awhile! Wrote mine based on a childhood dream I had when I was like, four years old! The words flow easy when one still remembers such a place! Going in to read, see y’all inside!
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Can’t wait to read that one, Ginny.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Good morning, all. I’m back on the trail, looking forward to pretending I’m a child again.
brian miller said:
how was time with your house guests?
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Very fun. A Canadian couple on their way to Palm Desert for the winter. That’s how we became friends. But a short stay.
brian miller said:
ah but at least you saw them eh? smiles.
Glenn Buttkus said:
Yes, yes, a hundred times yes; this turned out to be a joyous prompt, Victoria. One interesting side note, a couple of the commenters on my blog proposed a really cool outcome for this prompt–that someone at dVerse pick the beat TEN of theses children’s poems, and print them up in a binder, illustrated by some of our more artistic poets (Karin, Claudia, Anna & others), and send it out to children’s hospitals. How cool is that?
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’ve been toying with the idea for a call for submissions like Frank Watson did with the Anthology. I just sent for the proofs of my poetry books that I put up on Create Space. In fact I was thinking of that for my Monday Meanderings post for tomorrow. What do you think, Brian? I love the idea of distributing them to hospitals, Glenn.
brian miller said:
i think it is a cool idea—both actually
Sherry Blue Sky said:
I am having so much fun reading these delightful poems I keep thinking they would make a wonderful collection of verses for children…..if we werent all too busy to put it together! But wouldnt they?
brian miller said:
smiles…that is what we were just discussing above…let me research submissions for childrens poems…might save us a bit of work…
ManicDdaily said:
Victoria, I could not find my old pantoum for children as I think it’s in a notebook and didn’t want to link something old, so did something new and quite silly and some new very silly (just pencil) drawings. I’m not sure the whole thing exactly fits together–especially I would like some of the illustrations to have dialogue in them, but I just put up what I had done and didn’t really refine them at this point. Always a lot of fun. K.
brian miller said:
yours was fun k….smiles.
ManicDdaily said:
I realized after posting that I should have taken a whole different tack but will maybe do that in the future! Thanks, Brian. k.
yikici said:
I’ve posted, however, I’m not 100% happy with it, so please excuse me this instance, I’ll prepare better for next time, had a manic day after a quiet start.
yikici said:
I’ll pop by tomorrow to read the poems in the linky list (I forgot to add (thanks to my sleepy mind)), nite.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Most of what we post ends up being drafts…what can you expect with a time-limited prompt?
yikici said:
True, very true, I think I’m a little OCD about what I post (something I’m trying to overcome).
brian miller said:
smiles…we will be gentle…get some sleep….
shanyns said:
We need to do a chapbook of poetry for children – these are so very good!
Glenn Buttkus said:
Over 50 poems submitted; should be pretty easy to find 10-12 for a bound volume of dVerse for Kids. Are there funds available? Will we pass the hat to help? Marketing is not my strong suit.
clawfish said:
Bit late for Mr Linky made some revisions so here it is http://velvetmedia.wordpress.com/2013/10/21/winters-fold/ hope you like and thanks Victoria for the prompt