Samuel Peralta here…
Many of my poems begin as challenges to myself – to write using only the letter ‘e’ for a vowel, to meld together an Oriental poetic form with a Western one.
One of my most memorable challenges was to begin a poem with a list of ingredients to a recipe.
That thought simmered for years, before finally finding life in the poem “Sustenance”, where that ingredient list sets the stage for a transformation into something entirely different:
from Sustenance
by Samuel Peralta
Ingredients:
3 pounds pork shoulder, cubed to 1″ size
1 cup orange juice, sour to bitter
1 hot green pepper, diced
1 large onion, finely chopped
1/2 cup sliced shallots
1 teaspoon each of salt, black pepper
thyme
On the kitchen
television, the evening programming
brings in the latest from Port-au-Prince,
a different litany of figures: 7.0 magnitude;
245,000 buildings destroyed; over 160,000
dead; 3,000,000 injured and homeless. And
here, in my chef’s kitchen, I am preparing
griot,
a calorically
sinful dish we’d fallen improbably
in love with, on a trip five years past.
List poems are fairly straightforward to write. You choose the subject matter, and then free-associate ideas about that subject, capturing the ideas in a word or phrase.
Once you have that list of words or phrases, you then use your artistic intuition to edit the list into a finished work.
That editing is what separates a list poem from a simple list.
As one example, you could re-write each phrase so that it lends, gradually, to building up a theme or perspective about the subject.
Or you could order the list so that the phrases tell a story as you continue down the list.
In capable hands, list poems can be incredibly powerful. Witness for example, how Patricia Lockwood wields it in her poem, “Rape Joke”.
One specific type of list poem is one based on the output of search engines, such as Google.
Here, for example, is “Sorry, Google Doesn’t Know Jealousy” by Denise Duhamel. The montage video was conceived and produced by Didi Menendez of Goss183, who published the only chapbook I currently have in print form, “Sonnets from the Labrador”.
A total of 65 poets read each individual line of the Duhamel’s list poem, including Obama inaugural poet Richard Blanco, Laurie Kolp, Terrance Hayes, Collin Kelley, Michelle Buchanan, Diego Quiros, Emma Trelles, Amy Gerstler, Maureen Seaton, Matthew Hittinger, Stephen Mills, Major Jackson, Duriel Harris – and myself. (Please leave a message in the comments if you can, and if you do, say Sam sent you!)
Duhamel’s poem builds on a list of results known as Googlisms. Paul Cherry conceived the idea for the site Googlism.com, with the creative programming support of Chris Morton.
While not affiliated with Google Inc., the site uses Google.com for creating a stream of results that essentially provide a picture of what Google “thinks” of certain topics and people.
You put in a phrase, click the button, and end up with a list. For example, here is their output for “list poetry”
Googlism for: list poetry
list poetry is fun to write
list poetry is poetry that is written in the form of a list
list poetry is the i am from poem
list poetry is as you say
list poetry is a type that allows poets freedom from rhyme scheme
The results are, in a sense, crowd-sourced from the entire world – including yourself – tens of thousands of thoughts and opinions about a myriad of people, places, and things.
While not able to keep up with the growth of Google, the site still contains nearly 2 million unique Googlisms, and has served an average of 35,000 searches per day, for a total of 16 million searches in total.
Here is the framework for putting together your own list poem based on Googlisms
1. Think of a seed phrase (for example “The bird flies”)
2. Go to Googlism.com
3. Type in your phrase and press “Googlism!”
4. Note the list of phrases (googlisms) that result
5. Do some editing/sculpting of the poem
a. You may use as many or as few of the phrases in your list poem,
b. You may alter the order of the phrases
c. You may change punctuation, or upper/lower letter case
d. You may divide the list into stanzas
e. Don’t alter the word sequence in any specific phrase
6. If you would like more than one stanza not built on the same seed phrase, think of another seed phrase for the next stanza and repeat steps 2-5 until you are happy.
And here’s an example of a list poem based on Googlisms:
THE BIRD FLIES
the bird flies is visionless
the bird flies is growing in terms of readership and reach
the bird flies is actually the main theme
the bird flies is a book project i took on just recently
the bird flies is gradually increased over time
the bird flies is the transformation of
the bird flies is the fact that the chase legacy
the bird flies is south of clinton
the bird flies is skadar lake national park
the bird flies is square in cross
the bird flies is then the same as the wave velocity
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Tonight, I invite you to contribute your own list poem based on Googlism. You can use the output in a true list poem, or integrate your list as part of a regular poem, such as I did in “Radar”.
It’s not required, but if you wanted to snap a picture to show the actual Googlism output, it would be neat. In fact, for more fun, input your own name into Googlism and see what it says!
When you’ve finished, have a look and see what others have come up with.
I hope you’ll join me in writing and sharing tonight. Thank you.
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Samuel Peralta – @Semaphore – is the award-winning author of five titles in The Semaphore Collection – Sonata Vampirica, Sonnets from the Labrador, How More Beautiful You Are, Tango Desolado and War and Ablution – all Amazon Kindle #1 Hot New Releases in poetry. His Semaphore | Art & Craft newsletter shares observations on creativity and new project announcements.
Among other new projects, Peralta has recently helped crowd-fund over two dozen independent films, including “Malaika the Princess“, an animated short film from LuaBooks; and has recently signed on to director Enrico Poli’s upcoming film “Closure” as an executive producer.
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brian miller said:
ha. this was fun sam…and intriguing…if some do not use their name, i suggest you try your name on googlism sometime…its pretty funny…i def like your ingredient/recipe poem…tried that once…might again….
see you out on the trail….
Mary said:
Ha, I DID look at what came up with my name…..just for the fun of it…and it was cool indeed….but decided to go in a different direction. I DID enjoy what you did with YOUR name, Brian.
brian miller said:
ah, all in good fun you know….smiles.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ouch… i did too.. but some of the lines about a child molester i could have lived without..
brian miller said:
ouch…yeah, that is where the editting comes in…i took a few of mine out as well….
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yes, you ARE allowed, encouraged to edit!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yes, that was definitely clever, I may do something similar in the future…
Ella said:
Clever Sam I am…I love this!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yay Ella! Nice to see you here!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I definitely liked what Google said about my name! 😉
Mary said:
Hi Sam, this turned out to be an interesting challenge!! I wasn’t sure about it at first…..but I enjoyed it. Thank you for an interesting prompt!!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Glad you thought so, Mary! It’s the quality of the filtered Googlism results, and how they re-cast them, that make this worthwhile. A straight unfiltered Google search list isn’t as interesting.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
So fun. I could waste hours looking at these thing,s which I’d never heard of. I’m charging my wasted time to your account, Sam! This should be entertaining to read. Will be back soon.
brian miller said:
ha. i got sucked in a bit as well…i even did a few of your names just to see…smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I have to do that… look at the Googlism of some of the dVerse folks… hmmm….
ellaedge said:
Me too~
brian miller said:
ha and you are now 95 percent and an example of a tarn…smiles….
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
And more hours are lost to the ether 😉
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Ah, you don’t know how many hours I wasted on Googlisms!
Glenn Buttkus said:
Wow, Sam, what a kick-ass concept for a List Poem. I guess I violated several of your mandates/conditions, but I still had a hell of good time with it; taking Brian’s lead, I Googled myself (which is always an adventure in cyber-ego fulfillment). Then I put them in some kind of cohesive list, wringing verse, stanzas, & prose poetics out of the online data; thanks for the great prompt, sir.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks, Glenn – not my invention, of course – but I thought it would be a great concept to share with everyone. Looking forward to seeing where you went with this!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Enjoyed this a lot. My own name came up with a mixture of tennis players and child molestors 😦 so I found another phrase. Very happy to find Shrodinger’s cat in mine 🙂 will definitely wast hour on this
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Schrodinger’s cat would be an amazing phrase to input into Googlism. I wonder…
aprille said:
Always something challenging and interesting. Same you have opened our eyes to so many facets of writing poetry.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I love experimentation, as you can tell, Aprille. Glad you joined in the challenge!
aprille said:
Sorry Sam: you left out the letter -e-, I put one in by mistake, in the wrong place.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
What’s an ‘e’ between friends? 😉
Grace said:
This was so much fun Sam ~ Thank you for introducing another concept ~
Grace said:
I should have thought of using my name…maybe next time, smiles ~
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Names are only one aspect of this, but there will always be a next time!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Grace, glad you could join in 🙂
Tony Maude said:
I was dubious about this – but had lots of fun arranging the results googlism.com returnd for my phrase … smiles.
brian miller said:
I am dubious, so we should go well together…smiles…ha.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yes, I had my doubts at first, but the quality of the Googlism results makes this challenge work.
Laurie Kolp said:
FYI- I’m in the video, too.
brian miller said:
what….i need to check that out laurie….
Laurie Kolp said:
= )
Laurie Kolp said:
I’m @ 2:44
brian miller said:
well that makes it easy….smiles.
Susan said:
I saw that! Fun.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Laurie! My comrade-in-video!
I’ve edited the article to include you in the list… if there are any more in the community who I’ve forgotten, please let me know 🙂
Laurie Kolp said:
Thank you!
Laurie Kolp said:
Does it say Leslie Kolp though?
brian miller said:
fixed. smiles.
Laurie Kolp said:
sigh… story of my life these days… thanks
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Sorry! Too many names in my head. 😦
claudia said:
the poetic heart of google…ha… surely it has one deep down there…smiles… loved the idea sam… the lots of is’s threw me a bit off… so i went a bit off path… and waving the white flag…smiles
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
No need for a white flag from you, Claudia 🙂
margaret said:
How fun! Thanks for the challenge.
claudia said:
margaret means pearl..just saying…smiles
margaret said:
I know and my maiden name (Schaff) – german for “sheep” I was told – so when I was a teenager I dreamed my author’s name would be “Pearl Sheep. 🙂
brian miller said:
pearl sheep eh? ha. nice
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Cool, glad you could make it, Margaret!
Loredana Donovan said:
Wow, this is so interesting. I learned something new! I didn’t know you could search on Googlism.com and get a word list. Thank you for sharing this information, Sam!
I searched for my name Loredana and got some fun results. Apparently, Loredana is either a gentle or hot lover, or a hill in Tuscany! LOL! What a poem that would make. Smiles 🙂
Will think about this and if not tonight, we’ll try for OLN. Thank you! 🙂
claudia said:
haha…that sounds way cool… and can’t wait to read what you’re coming up with… my name brought some really weird results…and only 7 on first try…ha… and nothing as exciting as a hill in tuscany or a hot lover..oy..smiles
brian miller said:
haha…ok, waiting on that poem loredana…smiles…..
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yes, that would make a cool poem, Loredana!
margo roby said:
I made it this time, Brian! Thanks, Samuel. That was a lot of fun.
claudia said:
good to see you margo
brian miller said:
woot….smiles…its funny, viv had put your link instead of hers on tuesday…smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yay Margo!
freyathewriter said:
Brilliant idea, such fun! And thankfully, not too challenging tonight! 🙂
claudia said:
haha…depending on what you google it can get quite challenging you know…smiles
freyathewriter said:
🙂
I chose the easy road….
brian miller said:
so that is where you are going….smiles.
freyathewriter said:
Hehehe! 🙂
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Well, the degree of challenge does depend on the phrase you input, and how much you want to edit. So glad you could make it, though!
freyathewriter said:
I just needed to ease back this week! But I love the concept and will certainly try different approaches. Thank you for the concept!
shanyns said:
Googlism thought this of me – now to think of a seed phrase.
shanyn silinski is an outspoken survivor who writes
shanyn silinski is a writer
shanyn silinski is a manitoba rancher
brian miller said:
ha. at least yours is about you…smiles….
shanyns said:
yeah that is true smiles
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Well, that worked well for you, Shanyn!
Susan said:
Great examples, Sam, in a thoughtful essay. I went in easy and light, ie, I cheated. So, there you have it, I who love all the lists/catalogs of Walt Whitman, took one look at Google’s wordiness and chickened out.
brian miller said:
ha.
see i am not the worst cheater on form this time around.
makes me feel bad.
smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
You’re slipping, Brian!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Aw… but I won’t throw the first stone, I too chickened out. Actually, I couldn’t find a good seed phrase that resulted in enough list phrases to put together a poem I rally liked. Someday.
Gabriella said:
Thanks for the prompt Sam! It was a lot of fun.
brian miller said:
heya gabriella!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Gabriella! Glad you had fun!
grapeling said:
wasn’t gonna but then I did. thanks, Sam ~
brian miller said:
ah, glad you did…we cant take ourselves too seriously you know….
Grace said:
You even put it in a cloud – nice to hear you reading it 🙂
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Well, we’re glad you did!
Laurie Kolp said:
Better late than never, huh? Running back and forth to the hospital has really cut into my writing, but I am so grateful I’m able to do it for my mom… and me.
brian miller said:
smiles. hard but good times….
Laurie Kolp said:
yes… sweet times
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Hi Laurie… Sorry for my mess-up earlier. Hope everything else is going a bit better for you…
brian miller said:
alright…heading to bed…check in manana to grab those out visiting…
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
‘Night, Brian!
Misky said:
Thoroughly enjoyed writing to your prompt! Such fun! Thank you.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks, glad you could join in!
maryfmcdonough said:
I’m late but I’m here! I love list poems. I experiment with them regularly, but not always successfully!
brian miller said:
very cool….we’re open all day today, so you are not late at all…smiles.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Still open! And welcome!
margaret said:
I accidentally have two “2nd attempt” poems linked. Of course, you may delete one ;P
brian miller said:
fixed margaret…
and playing catch up to everyone else at lunch….
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Hi Margaret, glad you could join the party!
Imelda said:
What fun! 🙂
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Yay, Imelda!
Ruth said:
really an interesting prompt, Sam
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Ruth, great to see you here!
Snakypoet (Rosemary Nissen-Wade) said:
My attempt this time is also my entry for Day 7 in the Poetic Asides November Poem A Day Chapbook Challenge. I am having internet access problems, so it may take me a while to get around to reading others, sorry.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Thanks Rosemary! I’m a slow reader too, but I do eventually see everyone. 🙂
Poet Laundry said:
I echo how fun this was! Thanks Sam!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Glad you were here to join the fun!
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
I’m still on the trail, I’m a slow hiker, but I’ll get there!
…If the Mr. Linky button expires, please feel free to link your List Poem / Googlism in the comments.
Samuel Peralta / Semaphore said:
Well that was an enormous amount of fun… I’ve finally finished and was amazed at how much diversity there was in everyone’s approach.
There were a number of variations on my framework, ones that looked too good to pass up, too, so that I see myself putting together a few new poems from this.
Thanks everyone, and have a good night!