Hello everyone! Kanzen here, I am so glad to be here with one of my favorite subjects – Food: a universal in its simplest permutation. We all eat, have favorite foods, memorable meals – a last meal, a first meal, comfort food, shameful food – the politics of food – starvation, being a vegan, eating for health. Growing up in a family where around the dinner table was always an angry event or in a family where dinner was a fun and loving event. Relationships have started over a meal and they have ended. Whether eaten with a fork, chopsticks, or fingers; or healthy, junky, noodles, seafood, sandwiches, prepared on the barbecue grill or on a stove, a formal occasion or casual picnic – food is something we have in common.
There are many poems about food or meals. It is often said that poems about food are not about food. Well, sometimes they are, sometimes they are not. Sometimes they really are about the coolness of a melon or eating oysters; other times they are about guilt, anger, loneliness, sex.
So this poetics today is about food: describing a favorite food (I have written several about homegrown summer tomatoes, for example), remembering the last time you ate with someone you loved, right before they died, the first time you shared a meal with your new love, the meals at the end where the relationship was coming apart, feeding your baby pureed pears, buying that can of whipped cream and you and your lover decorating each other and licking off the decorations (and maybe how you vowed you’d never do that again!).
Let’s hear your food stories, thoughts on food. I am an escaped chef and I love love love food and stories behind it. I have included a couple of examples of poems for you – one is obviously not about food and the other one is.
The poetic form is open. Today: (1) write a poem about food and to encourage you to sharpen, nay, whet the knife of your imagery, (2) do not post any images with the poems. Give us your poems as if they were a handwritten menu in a diner, or on a chalkboard, or on the parchment of a fine restaurant. Let your words be our food. Let us gnaw, nibble, spoon out, slurp your poem as you put it on your poetic plate in front of us and let the poem be seen in our own imagination.
For Viola: De Gustibus – Poem by William Carlos Williams
Beloved you are
Caviar of Caviar
Of all I love you best
O my Japanese bird nest
No herring from Norway
Can touch you for flavor. Nay
Pimento itselfi
is flat as an empty shelf
When compared to your piquancy
O quince of my despondency
Coolness of the melons by Matsuo Basho
Coolness of the melons
flecked with mud
in the morning dew.
After you have written your poem:
- Post your poem to your blog
- Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
- Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read
- Share via your favorite social media platforms
- Above all- have fun!
Grace said:
All this food talk is making me hungry ~ Thanks for the prompt and welcome to being our pubtender Kanzen ~ Happy Tuesday ~
claudia said:
food and poetry is an excellent combo….hmmmm
kanzensakura said:
Food and poetry….and thou! Friends are all that is needed to make it complete.
kanzensakura said:
Hello everyone. Welcome! the pub is open! In honor of Bjorn, to celebrate Midsummer, I have stocked a variety of snaps….not schnapps! Flavors of caraway and anise to tease your palate. So come on in – after awhile, let’s get crazy and dance around the improvised Maypole – branches placed in vases swathed with flowers. Celebrate food, fun, sunlight!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I have just spent some time marinating herring for Friday.. then it’s midsummer night’s eve and I will drink snaps and beer with friends.. Maybe find a maypole somewhere and enjoy the long daylight—
Gabriella said:
Sounds like the perfect evening, Björn.
kanzensakura said:
It does indeed. And do you dance like a frog? I’ll bet that would be fun to see.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I did that when I was a lot younger.. you have to either be a child or be with children to enjoy that.. 🙂
kanzensakura said:
Ha! I’d get right in there and frog dance. Beats the “chicken dance” we do over here at weddings anyday.
Mary said:
Ha, I think today I will have some peach liqueur. It would go well on a day like tody. Smiles.
kanzensakura said:
Then I will happily pour you a lovely cordial glass of it and garnish it with a bit of mint for you. 🙂
MarinaSofia said:
Food is also one of my favourite subjects in the world! But I’ve not been able to come up with a single poem right now on the topic – will try again tomorrow and hopefully link in useful time. Meanwhile, I’ll just have to read all of yours and let my mouth water…
kanzensakura said:
Hopefully the links will inspire you. I can hardly wait to jump into the poetry buffet and pile my plate up high.
Gabriella said:
One of my favorite topics too…
katiemiafrederick said:
Oh.. goodness jumped ahead a little bit seeing another poet’s try with this with images and didn’t realize that was an exclusion so I will not link what i have.. as it is kinda photo dependent as a whole.. and matter of fact.. haha!.. a prayer for me for food in blessings is a photo of the food to savor forever on blog way.. out to eat.. for close to two years now.. from recovering from shut-in illness without ever a out on the town dinner.. yes.. just out on the town blessings but never the less…. one day just for fun i might make a blog blessings photo collage of two years of out to eat meals to appreciate that.. even MORE AS BLESSINGS.. i suppose there is around 100 photos of meals to discover on my blogs or more.. but it takes a lot of fuel to power 232 LBS in 32 miles of dance last weekend so that is where i took inspiration for this general theme of food.. never the less.. it is a very interesting prompt and will probably be back just to read and comment for fun.. as i always do anyway.. smiles..:)
kanzensakura said:
I read the poem. Just delete the images and you are good to go! post it and we will enjoy. some people posted a photo anyway, pick one of yours and let it be the star. Have fun!
katiemiafrederick said:
Hi Kanzakura.. One of my major reading audiences far outside of dVerse is Autistic folks who are visually rather than word oriented in terms of viewing symbolism of the world in their world view in images over words.. So I do tend to cater to that audience overall as they use inspiration visually of the real possibilities of life offline.. smiles.. so every photo is priceless in that way to some of them I have been interacting with for close to 5 years.. And really never saw reason to explain why I do that as much as I do but that is fine.. I come here most of all for inspiration and I find that without fail.. My other readers on blogger format number in the hundreds per day .. Photos are not for everyone.. they are for some.. But never the less I appreciate the compromise..:) It is not a problem for me to forgo prompts with that exclusion .. As far as linking .. But I’ll be back to read and comment for more inspiration.. Smiles..:)
kanzensakura said:
Then go ahead and don’t worry. We’d rather have you than not have you.
katiemiafrederick said:
Smiles.. I’ll do that and thanks for listening and understanding..:) and and about will be back later to do that..:) I hate doing this on smart phone..:)
kanzensakura said:
Just next time, please respect the prompt. We all do that when we post to dVerse. What you post on your own is your choice. Also, please review dRules regarding excessive and/or nonrelared images. We take the prompts seriously and work within that framework. Open Link Night is tbe venue for work that does not follow prompts. Thanks for understanding and respecting.
katiemiafrederick said:
It is more than clear that I did that this time friend.. But never the less thanks for allowing me to participate..:)
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Food and poetry.. somehow I went into childhood and the boiled potatoes we used to have with every meal..
kanzensakura said:
The food of our childhood stays with us. Another thing about the universality of food I find interesting.
Mary said:
Ah, a very interesting topic, Toni. There are so many directions that a person can take it. I enjoyed your comment that a poem about food can either be about food….or not. So true! There can be a depth to a food poem beneath its surface.
I smiled at one of your pictures here — the peaches, as that is what I wrote about. I am really craving them right now, but I think it is a little early.
kanzensakura said:
They come from a local orchard. Two crops a summer – stone and freestone and both yum deluxe. The fried chicken and green veggies are my photos too. the green veggies come from the same farm market.
Mary said:
Excellent photos. You are making me hungry mid-afternoon!
kanzensakura said:
Hungry time is any time and any time is hungry time. In fact, fried chicken for supper tonight.
kanzensakura said:
Some early ones are coming in now but…..not up to par. I end up canning a bushel of them and freezing another bushel and then making a special peach lime jam as well. Love love those peaches.
X said:
Ah, I went with the metaphor of food.
Fun.
Best wishes on your first hosting Kanzen
X said:
OH stuffing, I just saw the requirement on the pictures. Off to delete my pic.
kanzensakura said:
Don’t worry. leave it. I’m on a pictureless jag right now and I’m fine with it, personally.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Oh .. I had a picture.. that’s not good.
kanzensakura said:
I’m easy going. Lots of folk posted out of habit…..As long as they write about food, I’ll take it. 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Actually I have to have a picture on each entry in my blog.. But I promise, there will be no food picture.
kanzensakura said:
Thank you very much! and that’s what I like about the food topic – it can be so broad and yet, be so much a part of us all.
kanzensakura said:
Oh! and I am bragging because I am so excited – check under dTeam…I’m the faceless one with white hair!!!!!!!!!
X said:
I caught it earlier, maybe even yesterday. Can’t remember when it went up.
Ao is that your real hair? Cool color if it is.
kanzensakura said:
It is my real hair. It is actually snow white but the pic came out blue…I’m a blue haired old lady!!!!! (huge grin)
Gabriella said:
I love food, making it and eating it so it is always a good topic to write about!
kanzensakura said:
I think sometimes, making it is the best part and then seeing it eaten with enjoyment.
X said:
Being called away to an unexpected emergency, I will be back in a bit to catch up with those that happen to along after me on the list.
Mary said:
Take care, X! Hope all turns out okay in the end.
X said:
Car trouble.
Working on it.
Mary said:
Ah, glad it is only car trouble – not human trouble.
kanzensakura said:
Glad that is all it was.
kanzensakura said:
Take care! See you later.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I will catch up tomorrow morning. It’s bedtime here.
Grace said:
See you tomorrow Bjorn ~
The ghost in the machine said:
I fixed your links for you Kanzen
Grace said:
Thank you ~
The ghost in the machine said:
You are welcome Grace.
Smiles.
kanzensakura said:
Bless you GIM….I am so severely link challenged at times.
The ghost in the machine said:
Happens to the best of us.
kanzensakura said:
And I alas, am not one of the best. If I had sewing skills, I would make a superhero cape for you.
The ghost in the machine said:
Ha. No tights for me.
Not even
when I danced
ballet.
All the same though.
(And if you were not one of the best,
bjorn never would have picked you.
Just saying)
kanzensakura said:
Nope, just the cape and no wimpy colors either….maybe drabonscales with flames. Something modest and unassuming.
kanzensakura said:
I’m skipping out for a little bit to feed and care for my loved ones. help yourself! Be back a little later.
DELL CLOVER said:
Hi Kanzen! This is a great prompt, though challenging as it means I’ll have to put down my fork and pick up pen!! I like that you suggest we NOT use a photo–just let our words paint the picture. Thanks, hope to see you later with a “dish”!
Grace said:
See you later, smiles ~
DELL CLOVER said:
Hi Grace–big smile to see you!!!
Mary said:
Looking forward to your poem, Dell…. Whenever you post it.
DELL CLOVER said:
Hi Mary!! I just told Kanzen I’m going to have lunch and ponder food!
kanzensakura said:
I am glad you liked the prompt! I always enjoy your posts.
DELL CLOVER said:
Why, thank you–I’m going to fix lunch now, work up some inspiration for your prompt!
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Hello everyone,
Hope you’re all having a wonderful week 🙂
Sharing my poem “Food” hope you guys like it 😀
Thank you Kanzen for this wonderful opportunity 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Grace said:
Lovely to see you here Sanaa ~ Will be over in a bit ~
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Its great to see you too 😀
X said:
Dropped you a note on yours but it just disappeared, so it may be in your spam.
Was it a form you used?
I tried to figure it out by the rhyme scheme but to no avail.
Mary said:
No, she moderates. Probably is not in spam.
Sanaa Rizvi said:
Great to see you Mary.. thanks for your kind comment 😀
Sanaa Rizvi said:
I have replied.. thanks for stopping by 😀
It was pantoum 😀
X said:
Ah.
kanzensakura said:
I’m back and getting ready to hit Mr. Linky!
billgncs said:
I have had a chance to dine at a few very fine places in my life and find… food always tastes better shared, and nobody cooks like mom.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I would never have dared to say that.. 🙂 For me it’s safe, my mom have never been a great cook. Both me and my wife are far better.
rosross said:
I love to cook and have a passion for good food. I take the view that no matter how bad a day might be, at the end of it, we can prepare with love something wonderful to eat and sit, with a glass of wine in hand to enjoy and rejoice.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I sure agree with that.. food should bring joy to life.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I had to write a second poem about food.
Kathy Reed said:
A great prompt any time of year..I’ve several in my mind for later…see you all on the trail later.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Love what you did on food Kathy
Shaista said:
Kanzen, thankyou SO much for this prompt! It has given me the chance to write about something that has always bothered me – a prejudice some people have about the food of my native country. It gave me a chance to pay homage to the two people who have shaped my palate – but one in particular, of course – my mother.
I was worried I wouldn’t have my poem ready before Mr Linky Link expired – but whew! Got it here in time – thankyou again. Really enjoyed this.
Shaista
Grace said:
I can’t seem to find it…can you relink again ?
Shaista Tayabali said:
Oh thanks for letting me know! It now looks like I have two poems up – which is probably against the rules – but the first link doesn’t work. Must have something to do with the fact that I edited it on another device. Technology and poetics can make for a complicated marriage 🙂
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
I didn’t have time to write a new one, but this lovely prompt gave me the long-delayed shove to edit an over long old one.
Grace said:
Enjoyed yours Viv ~