Greetings dVersians! It’s the Monday after a big US holiday, where usually many of us are just finishing up the leftovers from last week and are possibly returning to work after the long weekend. In other years, on the day after Thanksgiving, Black Friday, we might have found ourselves standing in line at the big box stores at 2 a.m. waiting to wrestle with others over super duper deals on the prized hot gifts for Christmas (especially popular video games or electronics.)
Things are different this year. Many stayed home, without gatherings, and shared the holiday with loved ones via Zoom or other videochat programs. Many-coursed meals might have been skipped. There were no “big games” to watch after dinner. Even the annual NYC Macy’s Thanksgiving Day Parade was canceled.
I tried to think of a word for today’s quadrille prompt that would fit what each human on the planet is dealing with right now in some fashion in regards to the pandemic. I wrote a poem on waiting for Laura’s prompt last Tuesday. A word along the same vein is abide but with a little texture.
Abide is a verb with three distinct definitions. The first one is, “accept or act in accordance with,” such as a rule, decision or recommendation. The second one is, “be unable to tolerate,” someone or something. The third is, “continue without fading or feeling lost” in regards to a feeling or memory.
There is a certain ache to the first poem.
Abide
by Jake Adam York (b.8/10/72 — d.12/16/12)
Forgive me if I forget
with the birdsong and the day’s
last glow folding into the hands
of the trees, forgive me the few
syllables of the autumn crickets,
the year’s last firefly winking
like a penny in the shoulder’s weeds,
if I forget the hour, if I forget
the day as the evening star
pours out its whiskey over the gravel
and asphalt I’ve walked
for years alone, if I startle
when you put your hand in mine,
if I wonder how long your light
has taken to reach me here.
Although the next poem is written about a person, how easy it would be to shift monarch to coronavirus here.
Monarchy
by Emily Rosko (b. 1979)
There was no room for us to have feelings.
Under the Queen, we were foiled, our faces blanked of wonder.
A pitiful ordeal, our cheap toil. We hated her for stealing.
Our crooked backs ached; our knees bled from kneeling,
the whole sum of our treasures given up to fund her.
There was no room for us to have feelings,
so we made our way quietly; we arranged our own dealings,
checked what we clocked. Each swallowed their thunder
and railed within. Nothing left out for stealing.
But pound for pound, we grew skinny, weary, reeling
from the new rules she devised. We had to watch and mind her.
There was no room for us to have feelings.
We were audited, then fined. We abided her schooling.
Then, all music stopped. All solitude filled, we couldn’t ponder
our losses. We tried to forget how much she was stealing.
Our patron saints left us; the stars took to jeering, leering
at our lessened state. We hardened at our blunder.
There was no room to have any feelings.
What of us? Not a pittance. No worth there for stealing.
As a child, I remember reading what I thought was a poem. I clipped it out of a magazine and memorized it as it gave me strength through the many tough times. Looking it up just now I discovered it is part of a hymn. “Abide with Me” is a Christian hymn by Scottish Anglican Henry Francis Lyte (b.6/1/1793 – d.11/20/1847.) It is most often sung to the tune “Eventide” by William Henry Monk.
The part I memorized:
Swift to its close ebbs out life’s little day
Earth’s joys grow dim their glory pass away
Change and decay in all around I see
O Thou who changest not, abide with me.
I could be wrong, but it seems like each of us may be rotating through all three of the definitions over these past so many months.
Today’s challenge, should you choose to accept it, is to write a quadrille poem. If you’re new to dVerse or the quadrille, it’s simply a poem of 44 words (excluding the title.) You MUST use the word “abide” in your poem.
If you are new, here’s how to join in:
*Write a poem (in any form) in response to the challenge.
*Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below and remember to check the little box to accept the use/privacy policy.
*You will find links to other poets and more will join, so check back later to read their poems.
*Read and comment on other poets’ work–we all come here to have our poems read.
*Please link back to dVerse from your site/blog.
Sources:
“Abide,” by Jake Adam York is found here.
Learn about Jake Adam York’s poetry here.
“Monarchy,” by Emily Rosko is found here.
Information about “Abide with Me” is found here.
Sheet music image found here.
top image: “Abide in the Vine,” by Gwen Meharg
msjadeli said:
Hello All! I’m behind the pub tonight, serving up libations and tasty tidbits to enjoy as we share good company, read, and write. Step right up and what’ll have?
Xan said:
Happy to see you serving! I think a hot chocolate tonight, Jade. Maybe with a little peppermint schnapps tipped in.
msjadeli said:
Alexandra, good to see you here at the pub. A nice big mug of hot chocolate with a shot of peppermint schnapps coming right up. Cheers!
msjadeli said:
Oops, behind the BAR, that flat surface that holds elbows is what I meant.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
As long as there is no-one under the bar we are all fine
msjadeli said:
lol
kim881 said:
Good evening dVerse Poets, and thank you for hosting, Lisa! I can only stay a while but will be back in the morning to read and comment.
msjadeli said:
My pleasure to host, Kim. Glad you are here. Would you like a beverage and/or snack?
kim881 said:
A hot chocolate with cream, no marshmallows, please Lisa. It’s still cold in here. An electrician is coming to look at the storage heater in my study; hopefully he#ll be able to fix it!
msjadeli said:
One hot chocolate with cream, no marshmallows, coming right up in a large warm much to help your hands stay warm. Hoping the electrician gets the heater issue sorted.
msjadeli said:
another typo. much = mug
kim881 said:
Thanks Lisa!
Ingrid said:
This is such a wonderful prompt, Lisa – thank you! I got the heads up from Peter’s post this morning, and immediately thought of the hymn ‘Abide with me.’ It was heartwarming to learn that these lyrics have also comforted you in hard times. I’ll take a cup of kindness, please, as we’re heading to that time of year 🙂
msjadeli said:
Ingrid, so happy you like the prompt and that the lyrics to the hymn have comforted you. One cup of kindness coming up, in a warm mug ❤
merrildsmith said:
❤️❤️
revivedwriter said:
I’ll have the same, please. 🙂
msjadeli said:
One cup of kindness in a warm mug, Jenna! ❤
Ingrid said:
🍻
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Had a bit of romantic fun with this word… hope it works
msjadeli said:
Ooh I like it when you write romantic in any form, Bjorn. Can’t wait to read it. Would you care for a drink or snack?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
It’s already late here, so I will just have a glass of water…
msjadeli said:
One glass of water, fresh and cold from the well. Cheers!
Laura Bloomsbury said:
A most heart-warming word for a damp and cold November Lisa (unless used in its negative – can’t abide!) and I always like a hot rum toddy for such nights. Thanks for the choice of poems too – I went out in the garden for my quadrille. Will be back and forth reading others as time permits.
msjadeli said:
Laura, glad you like the prompt word and the choice of poems. Looking forward to reading your garden offering. One hot rum toddy for you, in a tall glass. Cheers!
Dora said:
Wonderful prompt, Lisa. 😀❤️ Hoping to get in a word or 44 edge-wise.
msjadeli said:
Thanks much, Dora, glad you like it. Glad you’re here. Would you care for a drink or snack?
Dora said:
Something hot to chase awaythe dismals, Lisa, if you please. 🙂
msjadeli said:
Dora, I fixed us both a cup of hot rooibos tea with shots of Baileys in them. Cheers!
merrildsmith said:
Thank you for hosting, Lisa. Hi to all. It’s not terribly cold here just yet, but it’s been raining, and we have a severe thunderstorm warning–so, we’ll see what happens! Perhaps some tea and cookies?
msjadeli said:
Hi Merril, glad you’re here and my pleasure to host. Severe thunderstorm might look nice over the water. What type/flavor of tea would you like and what kind of cookies?
merrildsmith said:
Hopefully, any thunderstorms will stay far away over the water! 😀. How about some Darjeeling and anything chocolate?
msjadeli said:
Merril one cup of hot Darjeeling and two chocolate no-bake cookies. Cheers!
rothpoetry said:
A great prompt Lisa. Interestingly I grew up singing this song many times in our church services. It is a favorite of the old hymns. Abide implies a deep close connection that comes through in our relationship with God. This should be a good one to work on!
rothpoetry said:
It has also come to mind that this song was one that was often sung at funerals by a men’s quartet from our church.
msjadeli said:
Hello Dwight, glad to see you here. I need to go find a youtube to see if the melody for “Abide with Me” sounds familiar. It must be a beloved one by your church to be used for multiple purposes. Would you care for a drink or snack (or both?)
rothpoetry said:
Oh, yes, I will have both, thank you. I am sure you will find many versions on You Tube.
msjadeli said:
Dwight, I made you a large mug of hot cocoa and here is a small plate of Lorna Doones to go with them. Cheers!
rothpoetry said:
Yum! We are going to have to put you to work more often!! :>)
msjadeli said:
lol
rothpoetry said:
We sang acapella at our church so this version is much like the music of my childhood. You will noticed it has the old shaped notes as well.
msjadeli said:
Dwight, thank you for sharing the hymn! The melody is not familiar at all to me but it is a wonderful message to abide with.
rothpoetry said:
:>)
revivedwriter said:
“Abide With Me” has been among my favorite hymns for several years. 🙂 Thanks for featuring it. I will write a quadrille soon.
msjadeli said:
Glad to hear it, Jenna, and you are welcome. See you on the poetry trail!
Na'ama Yehuda said:
Great to have you hosting, Lisa! I’ve been good and left my contribution with the linky. May I now have some hot cocoa with a splash of something stronger? 😉
Na’ama
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Na’ama, and thank you. A large mug of hot cocoa with a shot of Baileys coming right up. Cheers!
Na'ama Yehuda said:
Yay! 😉
sarahsouthwest said:
Hi Lisa – a hot apple juice with a bit of ginger and a dash of brandy for me, please. What a great word to choose!
msjadeli said:
Hot apple juice with a bit of ginger and a dash of brandy sounds really tasty! I might have to try that. Coming right up, Sarah. Cheers!
Linda Lee Lyberg said:
Hi Lisa- Sorry I am late, posting and running today. Taking care of a sick husband. Off to the doctor with him now. Great Prompt, and thanks for hosting!
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Linda, glad you could make it and post before taking your husband to the doctor. I hope he feels better soon. Glad you like the prompt, thank you 🙂
robtkistner said:
Hi Lisa! Love the word Abide. Great prompt, thanks! I am just getting on here at 2:00 PM PST — but I will cobble something together and post a link ASAP… 🙂
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Rob! Glad you made it. Would you care for a drink and a snack? Will look for your “cobbler” later on the poetry trail 🙂
robtkistner said:
Late to the party, but I made it Lisa… 🙂
msjadeli said:
Groovy, Rob!
rogblog666 said:
thanks for the prompt took me awhile to the word justice
msjadeli said:
I enjoyed your poem, Rog. Glad you made it to the pub tonight. Would you care for a drink and a snack?
msjadeli said:
You’re very welcome.
Xan said:
Managed to wrap this into my high school memories set that I’m doing for my old classmates, who have abided by each other nearly 50 years now.
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Alexandra! Glad you’re here. I read your poem and really enjoyed it. Nice to keep a group of classmates together for that long! I bet it’s a tight bond by now. Would you care for a drink and a snack?
lynn__ said:
A wonderful hymn and word, Lisa…fits right in with the timely sermon I heard yesterday. Thanks for hosting our Monday quadrille!
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Lynn. Glad you’re here. Also glad you connected abide to a sermon you heard. Would you care for a drink and a snack?
lynn__ said:
Oh yes! Surprise me 🙂
msjadeli said:
OK, how about a banana-strawberry shake and a small dish of coconut macaroons? Cheers!
lynn__ said:
Sounds delish, Lisa 🙂
memadtwo said:
Good word Jade.(K)
msjadeli said:
Hello Kerfe and welcome 🙂 Glad you like the word. Would you care for a drink and a snack?
memadtwo said:
Popcorn!…and a brewsky, cold.
msjadeli said:
Here is a nice big bowl of popcorn and a brewski in a tall frosted mug (better wear gloves or your hands will get cold!) Cheers!
memadtwo said:
Just what I needed!
whimsygizmo said:
Oh, Lisa. That Jake Adam York poem is FANTASTIC. Thank you! And thanks for the inspiring word. I’m off to write and post, and will catch up with reading tomorrow. Love to all as we continue to abide.
msjadeli said:
De, so glad you like the York poem. He’s a poet I want to read more of, for sure. OK will look for you on the poetry trail. Love back atcha, girlfriend!
Truedessa said:
Hello All, it is late but, I will be back tomorrow to read all the wonderful poetry. Pleasant dreams.
erbiage said:
Thanks Lisa, very intriguing prompt. Let me have a scotch whiskey please. I put up two, a kind of before and after. My sister-in-law passed away today so mine’s a bit blacker than usual. Not sure I’m up for reading y’all tonight.
msjadeli said:
Pouring you a double scotch whiskey, Eric. My deep condolences for the passing of your sister-in-law. Please take it easy, ok.
msjadeli said:
Glad to hear it, Truedessa. See you tomorrow on the trail!
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Ali Grimshaw said:
Great prompt as always. I am not going to get around to writing but I am enjoying reading what others are sharing. Thanks for keeping the poetry train rolling down the tracks.
Stay warm and stay well,
Ali
msjadeli said:
Ali, thank you so much. Would you care for a drink and a snack while you read?
Ali Grimshaw said:
Well, yes I would love some popcorn and a cup of tea. You are such a kind hostess.
msjadeli said:
Ali, please enjoy this large bowl of popcorn and a cup of hot rooibos. Cheers!
ben Alexander said:
Well, this is my first dVerse poem. Thanks for the inspiration 🙂
msjadeli said:
Alexander, I read your first dVerse poem a bit ago and was truly amazed by it. Welcome. I hope you keep sharing your work here. You’re a blogmate of Dwight’s aren’t you.
ben Alexander said:
Yes, Dwight led me here 🙂
pvcann said:
I love that movie, the hymn tended to be associated with funerals in the 70s and 80s, especially military funerals where I live. I so enjoyed this Lisa, thank you.
msjadeli said:
Paul, glad to see you and happy you enjoyed the prompt post. I love that movie also. It’s a perfect funeral hymn. Would you care for a drink and a snack?
pvcann said:
Double shot of Glenfiddich no ice
msjadeli said:
Paul, had to look that up and found, “The World’s most awarded single malt Scotch whisky.” Pouring you a double for you and pouring a single for myself. Cheers!
pvcann said:
Cheers Lisa, I might have another in a mo.
JanBeek said:
I’m grateful to Dwight at RothPoetry for posting this prompt and his response and inviting his readers to join the fun at dVerse. I see that several of us are “a blogmate of Dwight’s”… and we enjoy your prompts and adding the fun of different forms of poetry to our writing. I really got off on this one! I can see 54 others did, too. Thanks for leaving the Monday prompt open for us Tuesday trailers to come along! https://janbeek.blog/2020/12/01/is-god-asleep/
msjadeli said:
Welcome, Jan. Glad Dwight brought your poem here 🙂
M Jay Dixit said:
Hello Lisa, thanks for hosting! I’ve posted the quadrille and my tuesday poetics poem together in a single post as the poetics one was very short and they both are written in same style and also cuz I was very late to your amazing prompt. I hope I’m not going against the rules here. :)) I loved the prompt so I just had to write a poem for it!
~Jay
msjadeli said:
I haven’t seen your post yet, so will say more later 🙂
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cocoastainedparchment said:
Wonderful prompt!
P.S: I know I’m months late, but here’s my own take on this prompt:
Empathy
Let us not abide
By the bare minimum, basic decencies,
timeworn traditions woven into the fabric of society,
handed down through generations.
No, let us rise above and beyond;
let us lace up another’s ill-fitting shoes
and walk a mile or two in them.
msjadeli said:
I saw that at your site and really like it. If you go to the dVerse prompt page, look in the comments and you will see your own link to your poem.
cocoastainedparchment said:
Omg thank you so much! 😄