Since I was a small girl, I always loved trains..
My father used to work for the German Railroad Company and we were allowed to travel free of charge on all german trains. I love the smell of oil, steel, smoke and wanderlust on train stations and if you bed me in a couchette coach you can be sure I’m sleeping like a baby as soon as the train starts to move and the soft and comforting rattling of the rails fills the air.
I also enjoy observing and meeting people on trains and I recall one story that still makes me smile. I was a teenager back then and was traveling with my father and on my walk through the wagons, I met a young man, playing the guitar. I entered his department, started to sing along and we spent the rest of the train ride with singing and joking until he reached his destination. One of the songs we sang was “City of New Orleans” and this morning, I grabbed my guitar, sang all these old songs and thought it would be fun to do a recording…hopefully it brings some extra inspiration..smiles
The challenge for today is to write a train related poem. This could be a poem about famous trains like the Orient Express, this could also be about traveling in general, about arriving, departing or some train station story, train history and of course you could also use the train as a metaphor…whatever jumps to your mind. If you like, take the above picture as an inspiration..I shot it on my train ride from Rome to Grosseto a few weeks ago..
So here’s how it works…
- Write your poem
- Post it on your blog
- Click the Mr. Linky button below, and in the new window that opens up input your name and direct url of the poem.
- Visit others who have taken the challenge.
- Have fun..!
claudia…love your song! perfect for the prompt and def adds to the fun…love trains myself..grew up by the tracks and fell asleep to their moan at night…of course they also take my mind odd places…so enjoy my verse…smiles.
welcome, welcome to this week’s poetics prompt…hope you have your tickets ready, suitcase packed….curious where your trains will take us to….let the fun begin…
Claudia! This is very weird! Just this morning before heading out, I wrote of the trains that I can’t seem to get away from, the tracks cross every part of my province, and no matter where I’ve lived, I’ve always been able to hear their whistle. Great minds! 😉 Love the video…tres inspiring! One day I may work up the nerve…considering the encouragement to be found between these pub walls, it may be sooner rather than later 🙂 Off to grab my pen and edit the poem already written!
nice synchro tash…look forward to reading it…and def its time to hear you sing too…smiles….
when you bring your poem tash…i’ll be waiting with the promised massage, glass of red wine and my guitar to accompany your singing…smiles
Claudia, a very lovely song ~ Thank you for sharing your words and music.
I have to think about this prompt since I don’t ride trains, and it has been awhile since my last train ride. Perhaps as a metaphor… will be back later. Just wanted to let you know I appreciated your recording.
Claudia, you make the old song come alive again. It’s been said we have a love affair with trains in this country, but I think sometimes we’ve left our oldest and best loves behind these days.
Looking around I found I had a poem with a train station in it in my exhaustive files of fragments, and pieced it together to fit this inventive and classic prompt. We’re about to leave the house for awhile, but I’ll be back later this evening to see where this train takes us all. Great prompt.
loved your train poem hedge..
My poem is not new to my blog and hopefully most have not seen it. But it is for once on topic 🙂
ha. i thought you did really well with it…i am def a people watcher so it was right up my alley….
yes – was right up my alley as well….used to commute by train to my workplace….meant train rides of two hours a day – 5 days a week…and you get to know people just by watching them…
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I wrote a poem called train at night almost twenty years ago. Anyone who wants to tear it up/improve it/rewrite it/make suggestions, please feel free. It’s the only way to learn and get better. Thanks.
jumping over to read…
oh it loved it…esp your opening stanza…
There’s not much sexier than a man with a guitar. I used to live just outside of New Orleans. It’s a scary-dirty-nasty-delicious place. And the music is to die for. You would love it, Claudia. … As for trains, they terrify me.
i have to disagree…i think there’s not much sexier than a man with a saxophone…just saying…smiles
I find the guitar slightly sexier because then the man can sing while he plays. But the sax is definitely hot too.
nice…i like me some nawlins…great food and an interesting atmosphere…i happen to find trains rather sexy honestly…
agreed…
Dear Claudia, thanks so much for the song, which is one of my favorites. Good picking!
I took liberty of posting older poem. I actually wrote and posted a new poem (not about trains) this morning on my home page, and somehow didn’t want to bury it (though it’s bit funereal) by immediately doing something else, so updated an older link of a subway poem. (If that’s breaking the rules, I’m sorry, and, appropriately trained, I will attack something new tomorrow. ) But the poem I linked is one that’s never seemed all there to me, so I would love any feedback anyone is interested in giving.
Trains are a great prompt. K.
just read your poem and loved it…the dim fluorescence…very nice…and you’re not breaking the rules…smiles
Thanks.
Claudia you definitely put a smile on my face with your song.
Love your version of that Arlo Guthrie song. One day before she stops running those many miles, I hope you get to ride on her. ..down the Mississippi through the delta to N’Ahluhns (New Orleans). It’ll take you through the American heartland. I don’t hear that song that I don’t shed a tear or two. So wonderful being in your house, and hearing you sing. Lovely, really, lovely. I’ll see if I don’t have a train poem to post today. Once upon a time I wrote a lot of them; most pretty bad as I recall. Great post!
good to see you today too gay….hope you are well!
I’m doing pretty well and we’re hanging in there, Brian. Thanks for asking. Sorry I had to be away for Crit&Craft. But I peeked in on it a bit. Y’all did a great job.
so she’s really still running…? i didn’t know…wow…sounds magically gay… i would love to take that ride… *heart beating wildly…*
I believe so, Claudia. It’s an Amtrak train now and it takes a while, but i know people who have ridden it. Sad to say, I have not; but like you I love to ride the rails.
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Claudia,
You adorable, darling woman =) Thank you for singing to us….what a gift you have as your music brought many smiles across the miles… Your presence brightens the pub for sure.
Sitting on the shores of Lake Michigan this weekend… wondering how I’m ever going to write the one story I do have… we’ll see if it materializes. Blessings to you this weekend and thanks for hosting in such a creative way. =)
oh wow patricia…sitting on the shores of lake michigan sound great….wishing you a wonderful weekend…
Spend most of my working life on trains going to and from meetings around the country so had to react to this!
Trains are always fun in real life or movies… no wait I remember a day trip that lasted way tooooooooo long. So much for fun. Perhaps I like them from a distance.
Love the many places trains can take us.
Claudia – I am a sworn groupie!
Great song and great performance – voice, smile and all
I’ve gotten side-tracked, heard you some more on YouTube.
The real-tracks here are callin’… Great prompt – a theme that travels through me – different times, places, people, states of mind… exciting to connect to.
I’ll be back to post and read.
~deb
good to be back at the pub…and I adore trains 🙂
Thanks everyone for your comments. Having a really busy day but will read many Poems tonight!
Thanks for the prompt, but it was a bit challenging for me. It is good to be challenged to write outside of our zone. Besides I needed the brain workout. I liked your “City of New Orleans” one of my favorite songs. Guthrie is awesome.
boarded 24 different trains and enjoyed each of the poetic rides you offered…heading to bed now and wish it would be a couchette coach i could board… but with all the train poetry i read this evening, i may hear the humming of the rails tonight as well…see you tomorrow…
cool tunes ….feel like Cinderella here . manage to post just before midnight so will catch up reading tomorrow …..thanks for hosting Claudia
Hate to post and run =) Back later to read… all aboard!
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posted… but – bed is calling (3 am!!!) — I’ll be catchin’ up tomorrow too.
night all!
Claudia, you’re so awesome! Love your video, your smile and your soft voice 🙂 I’ll see if I have something ready or if I’ll have to write a poem – seems like I still have a few hours before the deadline 😀
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Love this prompt! I started out writing a poem on my usual themes of God and faith, but then it expanded into a huge tribute to Johnny Cash. This was really fun, plus it forced me to get my CDs out of my car and put more Johnny Cash on my iPod. 😉
Looking forward to checking out as many of the other poems as I can find time for. Oh, and can I get a hot cup of coffee and a cold glass of tea, please? Peace, Linda
Enjoyed the prompt this week, took me into a poem I had no idea was on my surface 🙂 Really enjoyed the video Claudia, was great inspiration. Thank you for hosting us! ~ Rose
I’m glad you made this a topic, trains have a special place in my heart and I had fun with this one!
If you’re in the mood for something dark, I’m your go-to gal today. Just linked up my newest.
Clouds Ma’am,
Trains are everywhere. Clever of you to pick on it. Lots of variety should be!
Hank
thanks hank for the journey you were taking us on..esp. enjoyed it as you mentioned the funicular up Mount Pilatus near Lucerne – i’ve boarded this funicular so many times that it almost feels like a second home…
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Happy Saturday everyone. I wrote about riding on a train in a different state of mind. I have been learning from other critiqes and hope you enjoy my drifting.
Oh Claudia, you are just so talented, music and poetry are you. I do not have train yet but we’ll see:)
Claudia, I love to see and hear you singing! You are adorable in every way 🙂 More please!
I look forward to joining in tonight or tomorrow. Great prompt 🙂
i’ll be back with a poem ~ it’s been running along the tracks all evening, but hasn’t arrived yet.
i first fell in love with your words, claudia, and then your voice when i heard you reading your words; now your voice singing one of my favorite songs, but most of all ~ your brilliant smile! you are stunningly beautiful, sweetheart, and your smile brightened my day no end. thank you! *hugs* ♥
I am late for this train, that is for sure. been out and about all day and night. just got mine posted and linked up. will be around to visit and hear your wonderful musical talents in the morning, claudia. thanks for hosting! 🙂
Too much difficulty linking up the cars on this track tonite… and have a big fundraiser tomorrow at work – an all day event. Might try to hit the tracks again tomorrow evening, maybe even hitch a ride on one of the boxcars then… Enjoy the journey everyone.
Claudia,
Your song was a fabulous memory brought back to the depot. Thanks for the ride.
Was out all day and home late so I’m behind on reading. Fantastic and creative takes on the prompt so far, looking forward to coming back tomorrow evening to finish the rounds!
Gosh, I was tired – Claudia, Claudia, Claudia thank you for sharing your gorgeous voice and marvelous smile with us! You spoil us all and I hope you get back 10-fold what you give. I’ve got to run to church and make my mother birthday lunch but I’ll be back later.
spent my early morning with enjoying your train poems..off to church now, then mother in law will visit us for lunch and in the afternoon i’m invited by a colleague from work to the rocky horror show at musical theatre basel…so see you in the evening….
Trains have always been a part of my young life! That was always my holiday “must do” according to my mother! A topic that stirred a melee of memories for me! And one topic I knew many years ago had to be written! Finally, today was the day!
P.S. Enjoyed you and guitar! Just beautiful!
Beautiful rendition of the song, and you’re lovely too.
I think trains are the best way to travel, and I don’t do it often enough. I hope to take the Southwest Chief across the U.S. one day.
This is my first time participating in dVerse, but I’ve been admiring this pub from its very inception, and the fine poets who participate and the always interesting write-ups and prompts.
great to see you here ruth…hope you enjoy yourself…mingle around…there are some pretty cool people / poets here…
Welcome, Ruth. So good to have you sharing your poetry with us.
just waking and playing a bit of catchup…nice to see those that joined over night…enjoy reading each others work…and happy sunday!
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Marvelous topic, Claudia! I’ll be back later today to comment around!
Clients coming in from out of province today…a list of over 40 homes to see and a week to buy one…uggg! I will be MIA, and wanted y’all to know. Wish me luck, as the real world whisks me away, and know I would much rather be here 🙂
smiles….best wishes tash….see you on the other side…but know you will be missed….
Work is so annoying! Good luck with your project–a week is a rather short amount of time to pick out a house–took us six months at least.
I am kind of like that one person that races for the door just as the train begins its motion, climbing on and searching for a seat with that wholly disheveled look. I tried to rewrite a piece into poetic form but decided it works best as its original prosaic journal format. I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone shared here. *hug* to all.
Claudia, u sounded and played beautifully!
When I was a child, America had lots of trains and small rail companies where you could ride from town to town. Sorry to say they are gone, unless you are in a large city. Futuristic promises and sci – fi space life on earth never happened for Americans. They gave away our monies and borrowed more to give away for bribes and corruptions, without our consent. Upside down pyramid, who knew?
I miss the trains…..simple life…..
your song is perfect — and what a gift you have given everyone.
Thank you!
Writing on Tash’s poem I called up many of my favorite train songs (there are so many), then Night Train on Glynn’s – so I had to break down and add the video of Johnny Cash’s TEXAS 1947. One of my favorites. I really do remember (I think, well just barely) when they changed over from steam to diesel. My cousin and her parents came in from Ohio on the St. Louis Chief. She was a toddler and upon being placed on the platform started to run away. I was disappointed I was sent to grab her before she got hurt. I wanted to “examine” the new train.
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I posted a song I wrote a month or two ago. The train is only a part of it, but it’s crucial, and it’s in the chorus. You can’t have a country-ish tune without a train.
i thought i worked just fine gary…smiles.
Claudia, how wonderful to see your smile, hear that song and your lovely voice. You and your music sure bring a smile today. 🙂 Not sure I’ll get a poem written in time but love the prompt idea, will keep that idea brewing in my mind.
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I’m late in the game this week…
I feel great appreciation for what dVersePoets has done for me in expanding my soul and mind regarding poetry.
These are ‘challenges’ to me, and this week, I did something I’ve never done… I wrote something that doesn’t rhyme. Please critique me as hard as you please, as I desire to learn more regarding both the writing and the critiquing aspect of this culture. Merci beaucoup.
My write: http://art-soul-ink-writes.blogspot.com/2011/09/parallel-perception.html
Wow……… really lovely song Claudia…… Inspiration indeed!
hour and a half left people…pub closes at midnite…
good morning…just waking up and thought i’d sneak in and look what the overnight crowd brought before i leave for work…
Thanks so much for hosting this! Here’s my Chance Meeting, an old limerick of mine about meeting my husband-to-be on the Long Island Railroad.
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I loved your video so much! It inspired me to write about something I’ve long wanted to work out. …..Alas, I am too late for Mr. Linky. But I am still grateful for the prompt.
Mine is On music and trains, masters and tears.
Now, I really must find the time rules for posts here so I don’t screw up if I do this again. 🙂
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