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Francis Sagorski and George Sutcliffe were both classmates in a bookbinding class at the London’s Central School of Arts and Crafts. They were immensely talented, and both independently won scholarships to continue their apprenticeship as bookbinders. Unfortunately, after only three years in the business, they were laid off after a coal strike caused an economic slump, and decided to set up their own bookbinding business.
This was in 1901, and Sangorski & Sutcliffe became known as one of the most important bookbinders of the century. The firm made its name on sumptuous jewelled bindings, which set precious and semi-precious stones in leather book bindings, which were luxuriously multicoloured and inlayed with gold.
Sangorski & Sutcliffe, Great Omar, 1911
One of their most famous volumes, produced in 1911, was a fabulously jewelled binding based on Persian artistic sensibilities, and known as the Great Omar.
The front cover was decorated with three jewelled peacocks, surrounded by gilded vines and ornamentation, and its back cover adorned with a lute and designs from Persian architecture; the binding enclosed a hand-illuminated manuscript version of “The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam”.
Next to the poetry of Rumi, the works of Omar Khayyam are perhaps among the best-loved works of Persian literature – and definitely among the best known. Most of his writings – more than a thousand poems in all – have been available to us through the translations of Edward FitzGerald and others, collected in “The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam”.
The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam, Wikimedia Commons
“Rubai” is the anglicized Arabic word for “quatrain”. “Rubaiyat” is a collection or series of such quatrains.
Although the strict Persian structure is different from what the Western world knows as rubaiyat, the classical Rubaiyat Quatrain form, as popularized by FitzGerald, makes up four lines in a stanza, with the rhyme scheme AABA.
Some of the most well-known verses of Persian verses come from this collection:
A Book of Verses underneath the Bough,
A Jug of Wine, a Loaf of Bread – and Thou
Beside me singing in the Wilderness-
Oh, Wilderness were Paradise enow!
And another:
The Moving Finger writes: and, having writ,
Moves on: nor all thy Piety nor Wit
Shall lure it back to cancel half a Line,
Nor all thy Tears wash out a Word of it.
FitzGerald’s translation of Omar Khayyam’s verses became so popular that the stanza form was imitated by many classic poets like Algernon Charles Swinburne.
While FitzGerald and his contemporaries used iambic pentameter to underpin each line, this is not strictly required, especially for modern rubaiyat quatrains.
Perhaps the most famous of these – written in iambic tetrameter in linked Rubaiyat quatrains – is Robert Frost’s poem, written in 1922 and published in 1923, “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening”.
Each stanza follows the AABA scheme, except the last, where Frost admitted he could have linked back to the first stanza but decided – in a moment tinged with both desperation and insight – to simply repeat the last lines. The result transcended the form, and Frost himself called the poem his “best bid for remembrance”.
Snowy Woods, Wikimedia Commons
Stopping By Woods on a Snowy Evening
by Robert Frost
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
This “Snowy Evening” structure – linked AABA rubaiyat quatrain in tetrameter with an AAAA final verse – is what underpins my own poem, “Lullaby for a Stillborn Child”.
I would love to read what others can do with either a rubaiyat quatrain, or linked quatrains.
… But what happened to the The Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam, the original inspiration for these? What happened to the Great Omar, with its jewelled peacock binding and illuminated manuscript?
In 1912, the Great Omar had been auctioned at Sotheby’s and after the sale set to be transported to America. To this end, the book was slated to make the transoceanic trip, on the RMS Titanic. It sank with the ship, and was never seen again.
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Copyright (c) 2012 Samuel Peralta. All rights reserved.
thanks sam for the excellent article…haven’t heard of that form before…tried to write one all afternoon…but not really successful…so will keep pondering and see if the muse kisses me…smiles…. by the way…jumped over to read yours and it is just a brilliant and touching write
You’ve had all afternoon??
I had five minutes.
Well, admittedly, it shows .
I bet Sam’s perfection took a little longer 🙂
smiles….you did well for just 5 minutes…enjoyed your matrix garden
Now the next stage in this form quest is to INTERLOCK the rhyme between the stanzas, like the pro’s above. Goodness, that is difficile.Tomorrow.
Hi Aprille, Hi Claudia! Glad you’re attempting this. One quatrain is all that’s needed, but of course if you’re up to linked quatrains, it’s even better! Really looking forward to seeing what people come up with…
My poem – I don’t know about perfection, but it did a little longer than five minutes. The initial draft was easy, but I’m quite a taskmaster with my own work.
dude it was an awesome piece….very moving…
Wow, you threw us a curve ball with this format.
I had to get my head into rhyming gear double quick 🙂
Now I can sit back and relax and savour your beautiful post.
Thank you so much for pushing me into this new format.
My post for today [the previous one I wrote an hour ago], was totally different.
I’ll be back after a cuppa and a read of your poem.
Very cool. Me, it’s dinner time, have to put something together and have a bite. A little later I’ll make make my rounds, over coffee and perhaps something sweet.
Thanks for the wonderful article, Sam. I have written the rubayiat form many times in the interlocking format. This is actually the first I ever wrote of this form and odd as it may seem, I like the challenge of the unusual rhyme scheme. Looking forward to reading more.
Beth, I was going to bet you’ve done this before! …especially knowing that you’re from the school of thought that a grounding in the classical techniques is reaaly useful when writing any type of poetry, even free verse.
Like most poets that I’ve met, I started with free verse. I kept trying to comment classical forms without knowledge of what it takes to create within the form, so I set out to learn and taught myself. I am still learning. I think that is why FormForAll is such a vital part of the dVerse dance card. If one person tries something new, they learn to become a more rounded, more informed poet and that, in my mind, honors the craft.
I love this response, Beth. I think I have followed the same path that you stated that you have. I hated having to give up overstuffed lines and “prettiness” early on. I found that using form pared my work to essentials, working on correct rhythms gave it the musicality I wanted to express, and finding form forced me to think with clearer language and find a way to convey meaning economically. I hope everyone reads your comment. So many think that form is unnecessary and “old fashioned”, that they lose their unique voice when they try to write in set rhythm and rhyme, that rhyme particularly limits their ability to express themselves. I find it does the opposite.
This form was definitely a challenge!
Kelly
http://simplydeeppoetry.blogspot.com/
Kelly, glad you could make it – as I said, I’m going to have a bit of dinner, than I’ll have a look and see what you made of the challenge 🙂
Thanks so much, Sam. This was so interesting and informative (and, given the end, ironic!) I look forward to reading your poem and trying my own sometime late tonight. K.
Give us a shout over here when you’re done, it’ll be a pleasure to look over!
First, Sam, yours was lovely (as was in a very different way, the abuse nightmare one.) Second! I’ve opted for silly (as is sometimes my wont)! Silly silly silly. (I’ve had a pretty non-silly day, so this was a relief!) Take care. K.
When I was 13 years old and knew everything, a particularly unforgiving and demanding history teacher assigned me Omar Khayyam as the subject of a term paper. Since very little references to Khayyam were available in public libraries in the late 80s, I was sure I was going to fail — until a kind woman took me to the Yale University library, purchased a temporary library card, and set me loose in the stacks.
Even though I prefer free verse myself and usually find quatrains trite, Khayyam’s work will always have a special place in my heart. Given the world we live in today, it’s difficult to remember that his sensual subject matter (“a loaf of bread, a jug of wine, and thou”) got him in a lot of trouble in his day.
The real trick is in writing quatrains (and any other rhymed or rhythmic verse forms) that don’t sound trite. It is very, very difficult, and one of the things I aspire to.
But bless the soul of that woman who brought you to the Yale University library, I’m sure it was another stepping stone in that bridge that brought you to be the writer you are today.
What a nice memory. Thanks for sharing it. K.
A real challenge, Sam, as the slowly swelling poetics attest. I reached back to my love of history, to the third Servile Wars, 73-71 B.C., for my attempt at some Quatrains, my A DREAM OF SLAVES.
nice…thanks for bringing spartakus to the pub…he surely was brave…and…. sexy…*cough*…smiles
Wow, your description, and Claudia’s comments above, are whetting my appetite for this one!
i wrote a very silly one, so i think i will let it marinate overnight and see if i cant come up with something a little better before i post….great article sam
Brian, I know that your forte is free verse, so I really appreciate that you’re trying this out. Am definitely looking forward to it.
Thanks for the post Sam. I tried it…any feedback will be appreciated 🙂
Grace
Grace – just need to warm some leftovers, have a bite, than I’ll be over 🙂
You did swimmingly!
Not only am I late (again!) but I’m a newbie to the form as well. I couldn’t dare miss it though…so forgive me if I falter…See you in a few! 🙂
Tash, you’re only marginally later than I am! See you in a few! 🙂
you slayed it tash…and def helped my thought process with mine…
i didn’t realize that Stopping…Snowy was this form. It’s one of my favorite poems.
I didn’t realize it either, until I stopped to analyse it and figure our how it could provide a punch at the end.
I’m so happy I finally had time to post. Thanks for this!
So happy for you to join in, Laurie, I enjoyed your poem of melancholy and longing immensely.
Thanks so much for this excellent article! I’m not sure I’ll have something to share, but surely do appreciate this.
So glad you were able to stop by! (tips hat)
I found it quite difficult, as I combined it with the latest Poetic Asides April Poem A Day Challenge prompt. I ended up resorting to syllabics instead of metre. Last time I tried the form, without a prompt, I found it easier – however am glad to have addressed the subject I chose this time, and gratified that people are already making favourable comments. 🙂
Your poem was simply amazing. Definitely one of my personal favorites.
My link is completely off topic, but I think everyone will enjoy the concept. Please come visit. 🙂
Off topic, but I did like the poem on a leaf idea. I have to find something like that to work with someday.
I have given this form a try although, I admit, meters have me stumped…still working on wrapping my brain around them. Thanks for sharing an interesting form today, Samuel.
i came up with my own meter…its called insanic brimeter…it means, th meter can change at any time if i feel like it…smiles….
Ha! I love that, Brian…I’m going to adopt my own Bodhi-meter…laughing…
Often I use syllabic count more than strict meter – I find that it preserves the meaning of the words at times. Good write!
This was fun. I took some poetic license with the meter but hey, poets are like that:)
Well, it worked, and that’s the most important thing, to submerge the structure in the meaning of the poem.
alright sam….made it back with mine….got a little creative within the forrm by blending and AAAA midstream….
Brian, as with almost any other topic or structure or prompt, you didn’t just blow it away, you detonated a Claymore.
Well what can be better then this as you wait for Easter Eggs – a proper( i.e hard) form and a topical mention of the Titanic!
I’ve even managed ( well almost) a love poem, which as them that read me will know isn’t where I usually end up!
I’m glad someone appreciated how the article arced into the Titanic…. which is how I settled on the rubaiyat for this week’s form.
And John, your poem was well done, a love song that ends up not exactly where you thought it would be ending. Wow.
still not going to see Titanic in 3D though…haha
It was pretty good in 2D, anyway.
i have seriously been impressed with what you poets have done with this…thank you for the inspiration….
I echo the thought – an amazing set of poems over here, and with a structure that looks simple, but actually takes a lot of thought and editing to make work. And yet, it’s that focussed thought and craftsmanship that makes the final poem worth it, doesn’t it? You guys have been amazing!
What a fabulous article Sam. You know I’ve been traveling to the coast and it’s a long trek (500 miles). However, as luck would have it, I have a poem that fits this perfectly. I had a workmate named Mona Jones whom I admired a lot for all she had overcome in life. Out of the blue, I chose Stopping By Snowy Woods as its model. I’ll share it here for this form and hope it suffices. It’s one of my favorites of my own writing. If you have seen it before, I hope you will enjoy it again as an example of the form.
Thank you.
It’s a fabulous poem, Gay, at once instructive of the form – and, because of its underlying narrative, uplifting.
Thank you for your lovely words Gay. If I have grown as a writer, it is because of the support and encouragement of this community. You know how I struggled with forms early on, but your process notes have helped me as well as the fine examples of the writers here. Cheers ~
Grace
And a few more rubaiyat compostions have come in, including a howl for fresh-air freedom, and a panoramic history of India. Incredible!
Just dropped one in… I don’t do rhyming quatrains often, but this one got some thoughts generating. Nice explication and examples, thanks for the post Sam!
An interesting observation you made in your blog, I’m going to try that angle sometime. And, by the way, you invoked the rubaiyat form perfectly.
I found this quite difficult also even tho’ this is a form I enjoy … tried to combine it with the Poem-A-Day prompt but not sure I did that although I guess trying to find your way when you’re lost could be construed as something hidden …
http://thepoet-tree-house.blogspot.ca/2012/04/alone-in-old-town.html
And a couple more make thirty poems based on the rubaiyat quatrain and its variations. An impressive collection, and well-worth staying up for… but for now, it’s good-night all!
Missed Mr Linky on this excellent challenge, but have posted Quatrains to my blog.
Here’s the link: http://bit.ly/GBdjLk
Thanks Samual for an great artilce. James.
Very happy you were able to put one together, James, it was a pleasure to read… so subtle a rubaiyat, and so gentle a poem.