The great Italian poet, Dante Alighieri (1265-1321) is best known for his Divine Comedy, an extensive poem in which the reader, guided by Virgil and Beatrice, journeys on a pilgrimage to hell, purgatory and heaven. This vast work, in poetic form that is divided into Cantos, is one of a number of literary gems that we categorize as an allegory.
Put simply, an allegory is an extended metaphor. As we all know, metaphor is a commonly used device in our poetic toolbox—an image that stands in for, or symbolizes something else. In choosing to write an allegorical poem, Dante recognized that everything in his poem needed to be metaphorical.
His skill may be seen in the subtlety of his use of these representations. In the Middle Ages, playwrights, painters and other artists turned to allegory. Biblical scholars recognized passages of both the Hebrew Bible and the New Testament as allegorical. Characters named Lust or Greed inhabited the stage of morality plays.
Dante was not so obvious about it. In the Inferno, he introduces us to lust, for example, in the characters of Paolo and Francesca, who share the story of their fall into adultery with the pilgrim. In addition, Dante created punishments for each circle of hell that fit the sin leading the lost soul to damnation. For example, in his hell, those who sinned by lust spent eternity whirling around in a dark wind.
Artists in all genres have turned to allegory. Consider such contemporary works as Star Trek, Avatar, or the The Lord of the Rings.
To give an example of an allegorical poem, I am choosing one of my own in order to escape accidental copyright infringement. You may remember it from a previous post on my blog:
Alternate Uses for a Steak Knife
I know better
than to dig blindly
in the tool box.
The knife—
sharp as it was
the day he died
ten years ago.
A bit of rust next
to the handle
crusted with dirt.
I can see him
digging
beside the Sago
Palm, uprooting
stubborn weeds,
opening boxes,
slicing through
years of crap
to get at truth.
Then he would
sharpen the blade.
Listen carefully,
hear the song
of steel meeting flint.
That last time,
could he guess that
I would bleed?
In writing this, I could have chosen the title “Grief,” or “Mourning my Father.” Instead, I elected to trust the reader to figure out for him or herself the meaning hidden within the symbolism that I offered.
For today’s prompt, let’s visit allegory. Here are a few ways you might approach it:
• Write your own allegorical poem using any form. Remember: extended metaphor. But I suggest you keep it briefer than Dante’s if you want comments!
• Write a poem about an already-written allegory. You might check out Dante or do a Google search on allegory.
• In our age, many have different understandings of what the hell or heaven means. Or purgatory, for that matter. Maybe you’ll enjoy writing your own allegory about this topic.
• Find a piece of allegorical art—they’re out there—and write an ekphrasis about it.
• Try a short piece of poetic, allegorical narrative.
• Check out the Bible or another sacred text for allegory and use that as a starting point.
If you’re able to join us:
• Write your poem–include a process note, if you wish;
• Post it on your blog or website;
• Click on Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post and enter you name and the direct URL of your post.
• Come to the pub and visit other poets’ work. Take time to comment and while you’re at it, order up your favorite wine, or brew. My husband tells me I make a killer Manhattan.
• Have fun.
For dVerse Poets’ Pub, Meeting the Bar, I’m Victoria C. Slotto, grateful to be a part of this talented poetry community. I’d like to invite you to visit me, not only at my Blog, but also my Website where I’m trying desperately to peddle my novel, Winter is Past, published by Lucky Bat Books. Thanks, all, for being a part of our community.
this is a very cool prompt victoria…i’m a big tolkien and c.s. lewis fan and love how they worked with allegory… also enjoyed the poem about your father much.. happy meeting the bar…this is going to be much fun
That was an excellent poem of yours you chose to share Victoria. I’m also a fan of allegory, of the unspoken that’s revealed through its shadow…harder to do than it sounds I think, and I hope the poem I posted for this prompt is close to what you’re talking about here–but Dante, I know I’m not. I’ll be around later to read.
“The sharpest knife in the box”, heard that said so often and never quite knew what it meant.
I have always confused ‘metaphor’ and ‘allegory’.
Thank your for making me at least look into that this evening. Still a very difficult concept, and I’m sure that I am still a far way from getting it right.
Thank you so much for this post that will need re-reading a few times.
and thank you for making us try this.
wow, Victoria, I love your illustrative poem! I’ll have to see what I can do with this challenging prompt…
This is such an inspiring post, Victoria. From the poem it sounds like your dad was a bit like mine except that he’d be digging up the Sego Palm with a golf iron…
Ha! Mine dug up his ego with a golf iron…and his daughter follows suit.
LOVED the poem you chose to share with us today, Victoria! The entire article is fantastic…off to see what this old pen can churn up!
Wonderful!!! I thoroughly enjoyed this promp!
I too loved the poem you’ve shared and the article. I started a mythic/fairy tale/allegorical poem on day 22 of NaPoWriMo, releasing sections each day, and finished it today after reading your prompt. Thank you for the serendipitous post!
Also, Glenn I can never comment on your blog but enjoy your work.
The shadings from extended symbolism, parable, allegory and fable are very fine indeed. I think the poem I posted for #OLN is probably properly a fable and not an allegory. I read that allegory should be personification, yet others say as you do that it should be a long extended metaphor. I’ve struggled with these shadings since college. Finally abandoning it in my construction to let others decide.
I thought your poem was an extended metaphor, beautifully constructed full of poignancy and grief. Thank you for sharing it and for your challenging article.
The prof whose notes I’ve used is the one who gave this definition…and he included Aesop as an example of a fable…so, I don’t think it’s anthing that needs to be limited. Just my opinion.
I think I usually write in metaphors, but when they fully bloom I guess I end up with allegories… who knew?
I’m linking up an older poem that I think qualifies…. sort of.
the only problem with wood men is splinters you know…smiles.
Men with, ummm “wood” are worth the splinters. I can’t believe you just made me go there.
hehe
very col prompt victoria…had a bit of fun with it…sorry i am late getting back i tagged in and had to work…so just now getting to play some catch up…
I gave it a shot, but probably missed the entire barn. Or as my dad was fond of saying when we’d go rabbit hunting (I was a terrible shot), “Son, you couldn’t hit a bull in the butt with a scatter gun.”
ha. a scatter gun has a pretty wide aim charles…i think you hit a bit at least…smiles…
leaving the allegorical party at this point for a real bed and be back tomorrow morning…smiles
ah i see the sun from earlier today is working on you a bit…ha…rest well claudia…
Thanks for the inspiration. Sometimes you need someone to poke you with an old knife to get the blood flowing.
Great prompt Victoria. Gave a lot to think about. Thanks all.
Thanks everyone, for the comments and participation. I’ll be back within the hour to read, read, read.
HI Victoria, thanks for the prompt. My poems are usually too short to have more than one good idea in them, but here’s my attempt. I’m not mocking, I just don’t have the requisite talent for such extended skill. 🙂 Mosk the Envious
ha yours was a blast man…
I think short is a sign of talent…to be able to wrap it up in few words = skillful crafting.
Found this very challenging – in a good way. Not an arena I have worked in before … its good to be stretched :o)
Your poem is beautiful Victoria.
OG you gonna jump in?
I didn’t think I’d be able to pull this one off, but something just came to me. It may scare you though. 😛
oo scary is good…smiles.
Thanks for the prompt, Victoria. I’m not sure if I pulled off an allegory or not but my political musing came forth tonight.
So this is my first meeting the bar, usually my poetry is almost meditative so I haven’t done much of the analytical side but I have had allegory stuck in my head the last week and when I saw it come here in prompt I felt compelled. so here I am, my thanks for the prompt. ~ Rose
thanks for lighting up the night rose…smiles.
So glad you came to share with us, Rose. Your work is always nice to run across.
cup of coffee and on the trail in a minute…
good morning…and good night…smiles.
be back in the morning poets…
Hi Victoria – a lovely post and wonderful poem. I think I sort of went for the obvious! Oh well. I don’t know how much I can read tonight as almost midnight here – a long day but looking forward to them. K.
just read and liked it much k. – sleep well and i’m off to work – back in the evening..
Great one this, just wish I’d had more time… may have side-stepped what was intended. Have to disappear now, but will be back later to do some visiting.
Hooray, I made it! Also Victoria, you poem is seriously fantastic – I love it! 😀
smiles….glad to see you made it….
I will try my hand at a new allegorical poem when I have time, but I posted an old one to the group today – The one linked to from that post is also an allegorical one 🙂 Enjoyed the prompt immensely!
Really touched my heart as I used to love being with my dad as he made and mended things in his workshop. I still have a box of his old tools in the shed in the garden. But apart from that this is really a great read and I’ve had more than one go at it. Thankyou for this! I posted one that I had put up last year at the death of the painter Lucien Freud…so hope that is o.k.
I’m up x 2….2 part allegory for this prompt
nice….
and a few others snuck in when i wasnt looking…gotta catch up now…
Wonderful prompt, Victoria… I’ve just started to read some of the offerings, and there are some remarkable poems out there.