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Time to roll out your sonnets! Today we’re going to look at the three basic types of sonnets. The word sonnet comes from the Occitan word sonet and the Italian word sonetto, both meaning “little song” or “little sound”. These days we’re likely to call almost any poem with some sort of rhyme scheme that is fourteen lines long, a sonnet. Today we’re going to look at the strict (yes, I said strict…well they have gained a kind of nobility to them, owing to the fact they’ve been written by many fine poets, and they’ve been around so long) so, I’ll give you the strict definitions of these sonnets in order for you to make note of their differences and similarities.
So carrying forward this idea of nobility, my Thrall and Hibbard says this additionally: “Certain qualities common to the sonnet as a type should be noted. Its definite restrictions as to form make it a challenge to the artistry of the poet and call for all the technical skill at the poet’s command. The more or less set rime patterns occurring regularly within the short space of fourteen lines afford a pleasant piquancy to the ear of the reader, and create truly musical effects. The rigidity of the form precludes a too great economy or too great prodigality of words. Emphasis is placed on exactness and perfection of expression. The brevity of the form favors concentrated expression of idea or passion.”
Traditionally, English poets employ iambic pentameter when writing sonnets, but not all English sonnets have the same metrical structure. In the Romance languages, the hendecasyllable and Alexandrine are the most widely used meters. Consider this to be the standard meter for all three types discussed here.
THE PETRARCHAN OR ITALIAN SONNET
The most famous early sonneteer was Petrarca (known in English as Petrarch). [Poets who write sonnets are sometimes called sonneteers; however in time that term came to be used derisively.]
The structure of a typical Italian sonnet of this time included two parts that together formed a compact form of “argument”. First, the octave (two quatrains), forms the “proposition,” which describes a “problem,” followed by a sestet (two tercets), which proposes a resolution. Typically, the ninth line creates what is called the “turn” or “volta,” where the poem moves from proposition to resolution. Even when sonnets don’t strictly follow the problem/resolution structure, the ninth line usually marks a “turn” by making a change in the tone, mood, or stance of the poem.
The octave follows the a-b-b-a, a-b-b-a pattern. For the sestet there are two different possibilities: c-d-e-c-d-e and c-d-c-c-d-c. Over time, other variants on this rhyming scheme have been introduced, such as c-d-c-d-c-d. The Italian Sonnet should not end in a couplet.
XXVIII from Sonnets from the Portugese
My letters! All dead paper, mute and white!
And yet they seem alive and quivering
Against my tremulous hands which loose the string
And let them drop down on my knee to-night.
This said,– he wished to have me in his sight
Once, as a friend: this fixed a day in spring
To come and touch my hand…a simple thing,
Yet I wept for it! – this, …the paper’s light..
Said, Dear, I love thee; and I sank and quailed
As if God’s future thundered on my past.
This said, I am thine—and so its ink has paled
With lying at my heart that beat too fast.
And this…O Love, thy words have ill availed
If, what this said, I dared repeat at last!
—- Elizabeth Barrett Browning
(If you care to read it, my Italian Sonnet is here: Nocturne Opus II )
SPENSERIAN SONNET
Spenser seems to have adapted his sonnet form from the one he used in The Faerie Queen which was [a-b-a-b-b-c-b-c-c ]. This was a kind of terza rima form. His sonnet has this rhyme pattern: a-b-a-b-b-c-b-c-c-d-c-d-e-e. So his abab pattern sets up quatrains, each developing a specific yet related idea or commentary. Each quatrain develops a metaphor, conflict, idea or question, and the end declamatory couplet provides the resolution. Spenser often begins L9 of his sonnets with “but” or “yet” which should signal a volta; however if one examines his “turns”, they aren’t really turns at all. If there is a change in his sonnets, it usually comes where the pattern changes in the end couplet.
Sonnet LXXV
One day I wrote her name upon the strand,
But came the waves and washed it away;
Again I wrote it with a second hand,
But came the tide and made my pains his prey.
“Vain man,” said she, “that dost in vain assay
A mortal thing so to immortalize,
For I myself shall like to this decay,
And eke my name be wiped out likewise
“Not so.” quod I, “Let baser thing devise
To die in dust, but you shall live by fame;
My verse your virtues rare shall eternize
And in the heavens write your glorious name,
Where, when as death shall all the world subdue,
Our love shall live, and later life renew.”
——Sir Edmund Spenser
THE SHAKESPEAREAN OR ELIZABETHAN SONNET
The Shakespearean Sonnets were inspired by the Petrarchan tradition. The form is often named after Shakespeare, not because he was the first to write in this form but because he became its most famous practitioner. The form consists of fourteen lines structured as three quatrains and a couplet. The third quatrain generally introduces an unexpected sharp thematic or imagistic “turn”; the volta. With only a rare exception, the meter is iambic pentameter, although there is some accepted metrical flexibility (e.g., lines ending with an extra-syllable feminine rhyme, or a trochaic foot rather than an iamb, particularly at the beginning of a line). The usual rhyme scheme is end-rhymed a-b-a-b, c-d-c-d, e-f-e-f, g-g.
Often in this type of sonnet, the first quatrain is an exposition of the main theme or metaphor. The second quatrain extends or complicates the theme or metaphor sometimes with an imaginative or exaggerated example. The third quatrain presents a conflict or a “twist”. Sometimes it is introduced by the word “but” or “yet” often at the beginning of Line 9. The last couplet summarizes or concludes sometimes with a surprise ending or image.
Oh that Mr. Shakespeare, not only was he a playwright extraordinaire, a poet, an actor, a director, a producer, a man-about-town, London and Stratford’s notorious party boy but also he was quite the literary critic. I am including here his Sonnet 130 which satirizes Petrarch for what has come to be known as “Petrarch Conceits”, defined by elaborate and exaggerated comparisons in terms of beauty, cruelty, and charm; or suffering, sorrow or despair. Hyperbolic analogies to ships at sea, marble tombs, wars along with oxymorons were common. Here Shakespeare catalogs some of the more common ones:
Sonnet 130
My mistress’ eyes are nothing like the sun;
Coral is far more red than her lips’ red;
If snow be white, why then her breasts are dun;
If hairs be wires, black wires grow on her head.
I have seen roses damask’d, red and white,
But no such roses see I in her cheeks;
And in some perfumes is there more delight
Than in the breath that from my mistress reeks.
I love to hear her speak, yet well I know
That music hath a far more pleasing sound;
I grant I never saw a goddess go;
My mistress, when she walks, treads on the ground:
And yet, by heaven, I think my love as rare
As any she belied with false compare.
–William Shakespeare
So today’s challenge – write a sonnet in the shape of one of these. And while I kept to the “strict” definitions for your information here, that certainly doesn’t mean that you shouldn’t be true to your own voice. Nevertheless, keeping it close will give you a good sense of what it takes to master the form. Then link with Mr. Linky below and be sure to read, enjoy and comment on the work of the other linking poets. I hope you enjoy the experience!
Welcome to the pub on this early fall day. Seems perfect to take up the challenge of sonnets. So we have hot & cold drinks today, and snacks by the bar. The windows are open and change is in the air. Watch for all the changes on Line 9 too while you’re reading. They’re tricky to compose I think. Fourteen lines shouldn’t be this challenging. But completion is worth the struggle. Welcome to the pub and hope you have fun today!
So Sorry I never made it, Gay… circumstances have been… trying, at best. Glad you got the sonnet done and dispelled any myths about the relevancy of counting ten syllables hehe 🙂
Thanks Luke – I know you would have brought your unique voice and musical credits to the table but I thought I’d introduce the basics, and leave those clever variations with added difficulties and nuances to you, Sam, and others. And one day, you can, perhaps, introduce us to your stress/matrix sonnet which seems impossible to me! But after reading some fab sonnets today, I think many would be up to the challenge!
Hi Gay, I like sonnets, but every time I post one – and I’ve posted a lot – I’m told that my meter is not purely iambic pentameter – I respond what about trochees and anapests and dactyls and am told that they are not allowed and that I’m too syllabic.
I don’t know if I can fully change these ways! For one thing, American pronounciation is somewhat different from British in terms of accents, and then again there are many American pronounciations.
(So there!)
At any rate, I’ll see. I’d like to write a new one – traveling today (I hope) so won’t be free till late – but on the good side, much of my trip is by train – clackety clack. Not necessarily iambic, but I don’t have to drive. k.
Well I was reading Heaney’s sonnets along with Barrett-Browning’s and neither stuck to purely iambic. I tried today (but as Luke always pointed out) my Texas stresses weren’t like any others. It’s sort of hard to keep one eye on the dictionary when you’re writing too. Yes, the rules did say IAMBIC, but as I said I don’t think you should sacrifice your style and your own speech for rules. I say know the rules and then break ’em!
Heaney was known to write a lot of blank verse sonnets (no end-rhyme), and let his meter be looser… but yeah, even Shakespeare allowed a trochee or phyrric foot (and certainly, double-stresses, spondees, or intentionally used for emphasis) — I read a guide somewhere once that roughly said what was OK in terms of stepping over the line… one or two trochees would be OK if absolutely necessary (ie if the word was the only one/the perfect one). I tend to be pretty strict, because really, if you juggle it around enough and try different words/syntax etc, you will almost always get there 100% iambic. If you think of it as simply that the piece needs to alternate stressed and unstressed syllables the whole way. If you have difficulty hearing where the stress falls in a word, you can use resources such as dictionary.com, which highlights the stressed syllable. I prefer thefreedictionary.com, as it gives both the US and British versions. Both have a soundbite so you can actually hear it spoken. A double unstress (phyrric) in my opinion is a no-no, but apparently these were used occasionally. They are not musical – in fact the opposite. Iambs have a lilt — I think of a Nordic accent, or Welsh one, or perhaps Indian one… or the sound of a horse galloping in the distance. Or a heartbeat (dum-DUM dum-DUM). The syllables are not evenly spaced but fall closer together.
shall I | com PARE | thee TO | a SUM | mer’s DAY?
remember My Fair Lady? –
the RAIN | in SPAIN | stays MAIN | ly IN | the PLAIN
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oy gay….hard stuff today…tried to write one all day yesterday…will keep trying tonight and see what i can get for you…nice article…you just have me a little intimidated this time around…lol
i will still read the ones that come in whether i do it or not…maybe they will help me with this one…
You are not alone. I had already written a petrarchan and shakespearean some time back; but the one for today resisted me. I have spent four days on it and just couldn’t find the right words. I knew what I wanted to say, what the topic was, and couldn’t find a clever way to say it. I hacked at it all day yesterday and finally finished this morning – relieved to get it done, but still finding lots of flaws with it. When I read it, I thought this just shouldn’t prove so difficult! I guess that’s why they enjoy the station they have!
Brian – I chose the Petrarchan which I’d not done seriously before – I may have played with one years ago – I have to say I’ve always been kind of down on the last couplet of the other two, but I found that I really liked those forms better! Agh!
You’ve probably done one by now – I’m too tired to check! This is my day to travel but even the train didn’t help. I did one super political one first, but decided not to post because I just didn’t want to be so controversial so had to start all over again. Pretty silly! k.
Well, I’ve only written a couple of sonnets, one answering the other..so here they both are. They are a bit of a variant because I’m using, and adapting, the Wyatt form (post-Petrarch/pre-Shakespeare)… Must write another.
Thanks, Gay, for the opportunity to give them an airing and I’ll look forward to visiting you all tomorrow.. 🙂
Thanks Becky. Glad you had some “in stock”. I’ll be by soon!
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Well. I write my first sonnet in years on Tuesday and then it’s write a sonnet form for all! So I’ll post it again for the hundreds who missed it two days ago! It follows the Shakespearean form with rhymes but it is more free in line and rhythm. It’s content is more emotionally darker then the form suggests.
However , read The Reality Street Book of Sonnets ed jeff hilton. This explores how the form has been stretched, deconstructed, re composed as free verse, prose, visual since the 1940s
It’s really good. I recommend it!
Gay, your essay is easy to follow despite the complexity of the topic. You are a great instructor, writer, and poet! I love sonnets, and would I had time to make a perfect one during the next several days. Alas, I do not, and not to be left out, I pulled out one that is a story and a celebration from earlier this year. I hope you enjoy it.
I’ve had four goes at sonnets – but only 2 of them obey the rules. My latest ended with 3 couplets – terribly bad form, I’m afraid – but at least it was all iambic pentameter for a change! They really are much harder than they look , which makes Shakespeare’s output all the more remarkable. Will have another go, and will marvel at those who have more success than I anticipate.
snickers…tony if its any consolation, my attempt should make you feel better….smiles.
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Wow–this was HARD, but so much fun. Please be kind (I know you all are, **smiles**) as this is only my second sonnet ever!
I love sonnets…thanks for the prompt! Though I don’t suppose my meter and feet always make the mark 🙂
very cool gay… i love the melody of a well written sonnet…so musical… and even though that i’m still on a business trip, i just couldn’t resist and posted one…smiles…happy thursday everyone…and i’m out on the trail before i’m falling asleep…smiles
So happy you’re finding time for us, Claudia. Have a great time on your trip! Loved your sonnet! Pleasant dreams.
I swear, Gay, one of these days I’ll do a real sonnet! I worked so long on this…but know it’s not a sonnet…posting anyway…cause I worked so hard on it!!
It just doesn’t seem right it takes so long, does it? Yesterday afternoon I said – wow, only 6 more lines to do. I worked four more hours re-writing the first eight and didn’t get the last six until this morning though I had several drafted outlines for them. I think I threw them all away.
Makes me appreciate Shakespeare’s genius (and hate him) all the more! He apparently could write an entire play overnight!
Yes, a genius…shocking what he could do!
Absolutely loved your darling sonnet…just charming!
Thank you!
nice sonnets out on the trail…after midnite over here… time for me to get some sleep…have an appointment at 6 tomorrow morning for a round of swimming in the hotel pool…smiles
I am partial to reading the Shakesperean sonnets…maybe because of their popularity and hence familiarity, but definitley because of their wry delivery. I think I’ll give that type a try. If you don’t hear from me, you’ll know it was a bust – haha.
I love this assignment. I am new to poetry. But 36 hours to write a sonnet? Can’t d’Verse lengthen out their assignments/prompts?
actually it is 33…and what we found is that after 33 hours very few people come back and actually read what you wrote. i would hate to see you put all that effort in and have few read it…but we do build in the catch all and that is OLN so if it take you longer bring it back then…
i feel you…i have read all so far and still no closer to my own…
Ahhhh, a solution I suggest: Give the prompt. 5 days later, when the bar opens, given the “Mister Linky”. That way, people can prepare for the bar meeting.
Otherwise people spend very little time crafting, or pull out poems they have done in the past — neither of which I would think would be what the site is shooting for. Just my opinion. I am going to try to shoot off a poem today, but probably won’t get it done. I work. I guess 33 hours is enough time if you don’t work but it filters out all the other potential poets.
Wheew, hours later, I got one done & posted. Wow, that is difficult. Great excercise and explanation. Thank you.
I’ve written a number. They are more difficult. The Petrarchan especially is difficult with its few rhyming sounds.
Signing off for the evening. Will be back in the a.m. to read more. Lovely bunch of sonnets. Thanks to all of you for writing and linking. Very brave. Difficult form but I think you’ll say…”so rewarding”. G’night.
good morning…will go swimming and then be back to catch the overnights…
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Sorry I’m so very late. I had an incredibly busy, stress-filled day refinancing two mortgages, working, and other dramas :). It felt good to be constrained and I’m quite sure I jazzed up the stresses, reflecting the chaos of my day. I’m excited to make the reading rounds in the morning.
really fascinating anna…really great sonnet….
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I entered a sonnet and I hope you will like. 🙂
Very informative essay on sonnets, Gay. Written with such clarity yet depth, so that I feel I should book mark it for future reference. I truly enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing it. I have no time at all today, but could point to one I have ‘in stock’, as you say.
i am getting closer…..should be able to drop in here shortly gay….dont give up on me…smiles…
Phew! Wasn’t sure I’d manage this, but I’ve had a shot. Good to have this sort of challenge.
you did great dave….and thanks for popping in and your encouragement…
wow! my yearning to learn how to do sonnets have been answered here… the timing couldn’t have been any better than this. Thank you. Letme try my hand on this!!
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Good morning.
Thanks to all of you who have linked since I signed off, and to all who left me such kind comments. I think it is difficult to write some of these forms – this and a sestina for instance– in the time allotted; but the articles are fairly easy to access on the site, If you’re interested you can always copy and paste the information onto a document and keep in your own files for personal reference.
I wanted, particularly, to have sonnets covered. These are only the basic ones. There are many deviations from this, some very complex and Sam already has in mind to cover a few of those. Luke Prater has invented some of his own! Having this information, you can read others with an eye to how they may have varied elements – rhyme scheme, line length, and meter. Some might alternate lines with feminine endings or start all the lines with hard stresses and then alternate stresses. You can add anapests to speed up lines for example. Or you, too, can “play” with these elements (not only in sonnets). It’s useful to see how how rhyme, meter, line length, and poem length work with the other “tools of the trade” – alliteration, personification, similes, metaphor, etc. If you consider yourself a jeweler, words would be your jewels, and these devices would be your settings and mounts. You need them to make your jewels sparkle, to make each piece unique.
gay you’re just unbelievably cool…thanks for such an excellent article and for sharing your knowledge and expertise with us
I concur!
Thank you…I try 😉
whew…and six hours later…
I spent twelve hours once writing a triple sestina, each portion with its own end words, and a final stanza with all eighteen. The reason it took so long was the end word selection. The poem? A Wedding Ceremony with speaking parts!
You should talk to Hedgewitch – she’s the queen of sestinas. I wrote one and it was wrong – well two actually but the second one doesn’t properly count. Maybe one day I’ll try another! Kudos.
I might post that triple sestina on my blog, if you like. I wrote it sixteen years ago…my how the time goes..I am not the same man at all anymore.. 😉
Sorry it’s taking me so long (I am slow anyway. I read things several times, think, read again before I write comments). It’s been a busy day, but I promise to get by to everyone eventually. I am so impressed with each poem I’ve read. I know the work that has gone into each, the soul of each of you expressed within. I feel there has been an extra effort with this form to find the right subject, or the right use of the subject. I’m doubly excited by the number of people who have found other devices besides the poem itself to use within this form..word choice, personification, intricate and layered metaphors and similes just to name a few. You guys are truly awesome!
I love a good sonnet too! To keep things real, I wrote a Shakespearean sonnet about a poet that doesn’t fit the mold (or form) well in his own writing… Bukowski.
nice….playing catch up…just got in from the football game….
I’m reading the last one posted so far. They have been varied, unique and valuable. I think some poets made personal break throughs regarding their poetry today and others showcased their talent in new and vibrant ways. I certainly learned a lot myself from everyone. Thank you.