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claudia schoenfeld, online poetry, poetry prompt, putting Moses out in a basket on the water, sow those seeds, the art of letting go, what we can't hold
Naturally, I’m not a Let-Go type of person. On the contrary, I’m more a Jacob-kind of “I wrestle hard and won’t let go until you bless me” or the “Defending the fort with a sword in hand until the last man falls around me” sort —ha.
I think it has something to do with my childhood (see, you can blame your childhood for everything—smiles)
But I find it hard to let go which surely has its good sides as well. For example, if my boss gives me a project at work, he knows, he can lean back and come rain or shine and no matter what wheels I have to turn and how hard it may get, I will fight through it and present him the results he asked for.
But—
There are times when it’s wise to let go, to sit back and let things develop their natural?? way.
Times when we put Moses out in a basket on the water and trust that things will flow the way they’re supposed to.
Does this give you an uneasy feeling–?
It surely gives me an uneasy feeling and I think for most of us, it doesn’t come so easy–
We have to let go of our kids, even when they’re still small, we let go in small steps. We may have to let go of dreams, career, hopes, friends, our partner—we shouldn’t hold them too tight anyway I think— give those around us room to breathe— (this says someone who needs lots of space to breathe and can’t stay on an island that is smaller than Manhattan without feeling closed in—ha—smiles)
But then, do we let go too easily sometimes?
It’s a relief when we can let go of fears, expectations, addictions, habits, break free from well-worn paths to start something new maybe
So for today, I’d love to ask you to write about the ART of Letting Go—whatever this means to you, the fights that come with it, the relief when we manage, how we get our hands free for new things, the fear or emptiness/loneliness but also the joy that comes with it—just grab a pen and write— wherever it takes you—
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- Most of all… have fun..let go.. breathe deep..
happy saturday everyone.. see you out on the trail in a bit..
Evening everyone! I’m hot off the press tonight – thanks for the inspiration Claudia. 🙂
hot off the press sounds good…enjoyed your piece holly ann..
🙂 x
what a cool picture claudia…anda great prompt…i think i have come a long way in learning to let go a bit…i guess the key wisdom is in knowing what to let go…smiles…happy saturday everyone…just rolling home from hitting a few history museums with my son…ready to read poetry…
yeah…def. the key wisdom is knowing what and also when to let go.. just think of the birds who kick their young ones out of the nest so they learn to fly..timing is everything…smiles.. and history museums sound cool..
it was…it was smaller local ones…he has to do it for school but we made it fun…smiles…stumbled onto a valentine party as well…at one of them…and we made valentines for the local retirement home…smiles…
Love the prompt…the balance between…knowing when to fold them, knowing when to hold them (Yes…to the chagrin of many, we’ll thank Kenny)
really like your piece tash…showing the holding on in contrast.. think i’m a bit one sided with the prompt because with my daughter, going to australia, it was all about learning to let go these last weeks…smiles
I’m too busy shoveling snow to write something new, but this old limerick is related:
Empty Nest (Limerick)
By Madeleine Begun Kane
A woman was feeling depressed.
(Her syndrome is called “empty nest.”)
Her home was too calm.
She missed being a mom—
Though her spouse “helped” by being a pest.
(For the record, I’m not a mother, but I imagine this is what it’s like.)
This is really fun Madeleine ~
Hubby is shovelling, not me ~
Thanks! We usually split the snow shoveling duties. I do the front. My husband does the back. And then he joins me in the front to help finish it off. If I don’t help, I worry he’ll over-exert himself. 🙂 We’re NOT spring chickens. We’re not even summer chickens. 🙂
haha…good one madeleine…and happy snow shoveling… hope the blizzard doesn’t hit NYC too hard…
oy i hope you can unbury…we just got a little here on the tail end of the storm…
Thanks Brian. We’re officially unburied … and tired. 🙂 Glad you got just a little.
get some rest…and hope you dont get more while you are dreaming…smiles…
Thanks very much, Claudia. We got off relatively easy at roughly a foot of snow. We know people just 15 miles east of us that got much more than two feet. I’m now recovering from shoveling. I’m definitely getting too old for this. 🙂
Thank you for the lovely prompt Claudia ~ There is a tricky part to holding on and letting go ~ Don’t we all need our space ~ Smiles ~
Happy weekend to everyone ~
Grace
it is…and both i think can be equally difficult..
interesting…. i have something in mind… your pic sure is getting the creative juices flowing
ha..i’m glad…once the creative juices are flowing you just need to find a pen quickly enough..smiles
Wonderful prompt, Claudia. Really a subject to reflect on. Letting go is hard oftentimes, but sometimes so is holding on! I will enjoy seeing what people write. Happy Saturday to everyone.
happy saturday to you as well mary
You know, I’d much rather hold on, but there is such freedom in letting go… great topic!
i’d much rather hold on as well.. but def. agree on the freedom..
Hello everyone … Claudia, great idea and it just so happens I was going to write my first 100 word flash fiction. So, I combined the two. Thanks and Happy Saturday!
ha..and you combined well…smiles
As luck would have it, I’ve just posted a couple which fit that theme! (Then again, it is my ongoing theme at present.)
smiles…yes..it’s an ongoing theme for me as well.. over to read..
Had to tell a story with this one. Good prompt, Claudia.
hmmm i like stories…over to read..
love your writeup, claudia, & esp the reference to jacob not letting go until he’s blessed… so like me too (& sometimes then the blessing feels more like punishment… smiles ruefully) – def doesn’t come naturally, letting go
ha..there’s def. the risk of limping afterwards…smiles
Hi Claudia – this is a very serious and rich subject for poetry. I do not have it in me today to somehow write about some of the things it brings up! Although it is something I will keep in mind for writing poems. I was also able to think of a more silly approach to it – so I went in that direction. Anyway, thanks as always. k.
just read yours…enjoyed..some good wisdom as well…just take that turn slowly…will keep this in mind…a good tip for many a difficult situation in life..
ok…time for me to switch off the lights over here and get some sleep…will be back in the morning to catch up with you…
sleep well claudia…i will be around for any who need…smiles.
Thank you for the post. Just finished my poem and posted the link.
nice…enjoyed your verse as well…
Just in from seeing Les Misérables so overwhelmed with emotion! A wonderfully apt prompt. I have posted a poem I did some weeks ago that is about letting go on many levels
nice john…have yet to see the movie but saw the play on broadway…it was amazing…
Nothing like a bout of poetics in the afternoon. You picked a terrific prompt, Claudia–if love is the common denominator in the universe, then letting go of someone something you love is the key to the deepening of that love; kind of tricky with one’s children and pets who want to rove the neighborhood, or spouse who want/need to cultivate interests/friends outside the marriage, outside your sphere of influence and pathetic arrogant need for control.
tricky is a good word for it glenn….wish it was easier…
Warning! Tissue alert!
I wrote this poem this morning, and could not believe the prompt when I saw it this afternoon. It’s about the ultimate letting go. I had to wait til Sherry got home to make sure it was okay with her if I posted it.
ok – will stop by in the afternoon… just about to leave the house and don’t wanna run into the people with red cried eyes…smiles
Probably a wise move, Claudia.
Rather early in the list it seems…for those having trouble letting go, just down another glass…
ha – and sometimes it’s about letting go that glass…smiles
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..whew…letting go is one tough subject… i dunno… but i write a sonnet in progress at least for now… smiles…
nice kelvin…be by in a few minutes….a sonnet…you are trying to show the rest of us up eh? smiles.
nope…hihi… but my muse tells me to write a sonnet for this subject… smiles…
p.s. i have a li’l concern… mr. linky is treating me bad again… somtimes it works… sometimes it didn’t… aww…
weird…check your email here in a few minutes…
enjoyed your snowflake poem, Claudia, very much; also the ’empty nest’ limerick by Gay…great day for museum going..or to see Les Mis..lots of ‘letting go’ in that movie! to unwind now but I’ll be back;)
always good to see you in the pub katy…enjoyed your poem as well..
alright poets…have a good evening…i will be back in the morning to see the overnights…
Okay, that took me awhile. I am so into the difficulties of letting go my girls and could not write about that at all…
So I came up with a fictional sort of letting go – trying to fool myself.
…not at all to fool oneself… you made it sound & feel real… smiles…
this was different
enjoyed your take on it tammy..
…Ok… i’m tryin’ to reach everyone via comment trail… Mr. Blenza is playin’ hide & seek with me… just wait you… i’ll catch you silly…arrgh..
Hi Kelvin,
I had this problem before and wrote to Mr. Linky, Help Desk. They can help you with the settings.
Grace
…tnx Grace… i will… really weird coz it’s back there…showin’ up again… smiles…
…and no… it’s gone again…
I posted a poem, at least letting go of my rhymes. Cheers
smiles…letting go of rhymes is not a bad thing sometimes..smiles
ok poets…caught up with most of the overnights…will read the rest in the afternoon…see you later…
A nice open subject. Couldn’t ask for more!
really loved you cloud form poem dave
This really struck a chord for me, Claudia. Your prompts are so damn beautiful they make me cry!
thank you lydia…
good morning poets…really enjoyed the overnights…and thank you to the overnights as well for restoring a bit of my faith…seemed there were a lot linking yesterday but only about half were actually visiting others…
i really want to encourage those who link up to visit others as well…you’re missing gems if you just stay at home on your couch…don’t be shy….smiles
A lot of gems, I agree Brian and Claudia ~
Grace
..sadly…but others are only linking.. forgetting the real essence of a community…. (sigh)
kelvin…i will say that you are a breath of fresh air…i love reading your comments…they are thoughtful…claudia and i were just talking about that…smiles…
..tnx Brian… i know most of my comments don’t hit the right chord but i still try my hardest to give my thoughts based on how a poem appeals to me… i’m having a hard time commenting today & the other days bcoz of my issue at mr linky but i did find ways to reach out others thru the comment trail… it just sad to think while others are exerting effort some just don’t care. sorry for my sentiments here… it isn’t the right place for it.
i dunno…i think we have to talk about it…and might as well be out in the open…if we are striving for community we have to deal with things as a community…so i appreciate your thoughts….
smiles…you are a breath of fresh air indeed kelvin and i think in a community like this it is ok to discuss such things openly. i agree with you, it is frustrating when some invest their time and energy in reading and commenting on others works and others just link up and are not interested to read at least some of what their fellow poets have to offer..
Interesting prompt, Claudia — you do tease us by hinting at childhood stories you use (by your own confession) to justify your grabbiness (is that word?).
I loved that confession — your refreshing honesty shines both in your poetry and here.
Besides, grabbiness is equally useful as a tool, as is “letting go”.
Thanx for getting me thinking. I’d love to see someone do a tally of the frequency of letting-go genre that the crowd here spins. Ones that are obvious are death of loved ones and children growing up. I’ve had both of these and thought about writing on them, but wanted to imagine the principle of letting go from another angle. And so, I threw something together quickly this morning. Food for later re-writes, perhaps. I hope its present form is intelligible enough — I hope it communicates.
haha.. someone called me tenacious once…maybe that’s the word…smiles
read through most poems by now and we have a good variety of topics..approaches from different angles..really enjoyed what i came upon so far..looking forward to reading yours sabio
As I look, they do indeed seem pleasantly d’Verse!
been reading all afternoon until my eyes hurt…ha…a book that i bought my daughter for christmas… divergent by veronica roth… good book…not just for teens…ha..smiles
I think most of us are like you, Claudia, in that we tend to hold onto what is familiar in life even if it something that hurts more than feels good. Sometimes it is ‘time’ that can be our greates ally.
true that …time and space often help…esp in ones like you address in your poem…
A bit late to the party for this one, I’m afraid. Thanks for the prompt Claudia, there are so many directions this could go in.
For somebody who had so many encounters about this letting go – bit, this topic proved to be quite a challenge. Thanks for the prompt, Claudia. 🙂
smiles…will be over to read in a bit…need coffee first..ha…smiles.. and good morning..
This was such a hard poem for me to write. I missed your deadline, but here is the link and I will bring it to Tuesday’s Open Mic.
http://susanspoetry.blogspot.com/2013/02/letting-go-and-digging-in.html
Too late for this Linky. I’ll let it go until tomorrow. 😉
http://tasmith1122.wordpress.com/2013/02/11/letting-go-at-dusk/