To write a good description one should learn to observe things closely and, yes, accurately. Our eyes must gather visual images, our ears must gain auditory images, our mouth must form taste images, our nose must receive olfactory sensations, and our skin must take tactile impressions.The senses, however, do not operate alone for behind the sense organs are the mind which selects important and/or pertinent details while disregarding others of lesser importance. Our senses do not give impersonal, complete images the way a camera does. Our mental or physical condition affects what and how much we observe.
Successful description demands a special technique and varies with the purpose of the description. If you want, for example, to describe the effect of a house on you, your description will be suggestive and imaginative. The purpose of your description gives unity to your work and produces a dominant impression.
While there are, I think, two general classification of description (Informative and Artistic) I decided to choose Artistic description to go along with the art of impressionism. An artistic or suggestive description is often called evocative or literary description. It differs from informative description not so much in subject matter as in the manner in which material is presented. It does not aim to inform; it seeks to entertain. It appeals to the sense of beauty of stimulating the reader’s imagination and feelings, giving a vivid image of the object as felt and seen by the writer. It projects an emotion or mood.Magandang hapon (good afternoon) / magandang gabi (good evening) / magandang umaga (good morning) wherever you are in the world. My name is Kelvin, hosting (for the very first time) yet another series of dVerse’s Poetics — a not so new, not so old but oh so cool place where Poetry is everything. Today, we are writing impressionistic poetry in a rather artistic way using the selected artworks I provided here. You may select any of the artworks above that inspires you the most or if you are having difficulty choosing you can, instead, go directly to Papers & Crayons — a little wall where I share my artworks publicly and, yes, I allow you to pick and use any of your desired piece there to accompany your poem/s. Remember, we are writing in an artistic description and our mission is to entertain and not to inform.
…and now to formally start allow me to present to you, of course, the very famous:
‘If you’re new, here’s how it works’ –
- Write your poem (using your selected artwork/s) and post it to your blog
- Click on the Mr. Linky button below and enter your name and URL and click enter.
- This is also where you will find the list of those that have also joined in—visit others, read, comment, meet new people—let people know what you think of their verse.
- Feel free to share your link and a link to dVerse using the social media of your choice.
- …and lastly, of course — smiles…
MAGANDANG UMAGA!!!! 🙂
…and happy poetics saturday (sunday) to all…
…smiles…
ha. i am a little surprised you are awake sir…smiles…
…ha.. and i’m surprised too…suppose to be still sleeping… ye know, 3A.M.’s quite too early here… but it’s Sunday & holiday tomorrow so perfect time to do a li’l sacrifice for the sake of poetry… smiles…
oh heck…now that is a big sacrifice…great prompt sir.. wonderful artwork as well
…hihi… but i’m loving it Claudia… smiles…
..magandang umaga!!!
Woohoo! I am the early bird!
Good afternoon, Kelvin, and all.
…ha… early birds catches early poems…
good afternoon to you too…smiles…
nice opening kelvin…this should be fun…i like your thoughts on descriptions….when i write i think of painting or photography and try to capture the detail so that the reader can be right there…for me this includes a bit of the fine detail that would often go unnoticed as well…something out of place….love your art too man….some very stuff….smiles.
see you out on the trail….
…that’s where i started as an artist Brian… i am first a poet in crayons / brushes before i became a poet in pen… fine details is always good though at times too much of it make a reader lost… smiles…
nice…art is where i started as well…most of my school years were a mix of the two…
..ha, so do you have art pieces too? cool.. i’d like to see.. B-)
I love the idea here – will have to work on it this weekend and hope to post something by tomorrow evening!
very cool…will be looking for it…smiles.
Me too:) I would like to be blogger that likes this page. But, for the past few days it hasn’t let me. I tried clearing my cookies, but, it didn’t help. sorry everyone 😕
hi Marina,
…looking forward to your offering… ok… smiles… and feel inspired…
Hi Kelvin – very lovely paintings. They are beautiful/pretty, but also filled with emotion and contrast. Very nice. I will come up with something – but let me think! k.
…thanks Karin… will def wait for it… just realized today…i shared the loneliest artworks here… ha…
smiles…
Thanks for the poetic prompt and inspiration Kelvin ~ Magandang umaga sa iyo ~
I like the idea of creating an emotion or a mood ~
Happy Saturday to everyone ~
.magandang umaga Grace… creating emotion & moods is/are what i’m off focusing these days… smiles…
Kevin, it was fun seeing your art work. And I certainly agree with you when you say “the senses do not work alone” .
The senses are filtered through emotions, worldviews, temperaments, habits of thinking and more. Likewise, they are expressed through those filters. Because of that, I think the distinction between “artistic” and “informative” descriptions has problems. One can be artistically informative and informatively artistic. All art contains information. Much of art contains opinion and propaganda. Information and Art are inseparable.
One can certainly be informatively entertaining — that is what good teaching is. And some of what is considered the best poetry is all about propaganda, declaring worldviews and teaching.
…hi Sabio,
…i agree…i think most poetry these days are a wise mix of both informative & artistic description… making voices sound more contemporary & on pointly strong… i do think as well how artistic way of describing in poetry can be too classical approach and rare nowadays… that’s why i’m reviving it… for it makes good combination with impressionism… smiles… looking forward to your share…
Being aware of how our art is filled with our own information is fun. Coloring our information so the sharing is rich and entertaining is an art : be that poetry, teaching, prose or talking at a party.
Thanks for your reply — your poetry is always fantastic.
…thanks Sabio… and you’re always full of insights… ‘colouring our information’ — now you clearly demonstrate the unison of the two… 🙂
Fantastic article! And welcome to the pub!!! 😀 No stage fright here…you even got the smiles 😉 Be back soon!
..ha… if you only knew… smiles…
…i’ll wait for your take Tash… smiles…
Hi Kelvin, what an excellent article you provided, and an interesting prompt! So neat to see that you are a talented visual artist as well as a poet! I very much enjoyed writing to your art….and will enjoy seeing what others write in response. Happy Sunday to YOU!
…thank you Mary… and i enjoyed your double treat… smiles…
What beautiful paintings! Really nice! Natural and expressive. Thank you for sharing, sir!
…thanks Anders… enjoyed your haiku… smiles…
i’ll be in and out throughout the evening…stuffing manicotti right now…we are fixing dinner for a neighbor that had surgery…
..how caring of you & your family, Brian… hope the neighbor gets well soon… 🙂
oh wow…that’s really nice..hope he recovers quickly..
hey…just coming back from an evening with friends…almost midnite over here…so think i do you a favor when i read your poems tomorrow with fresh eyes…smiles
smiles…you had a good time?
see you tomorrow claudia…sleep well…
smiles..yes had a good time…we had Feuerzangenbowle which is mulled wine with a sugar cone on top of the bowl that you set aflame..ha..took some cool pics..
how’s your neighbor.. doing better…?
…have a sweeeet poetic dreams… good night…:-)
Very nice idea, I love writing to pictures. Usually it’s the other way around… Goofing around looking for pictures.. But you just hand out great pictures.
I wrote min contribution on the subway hom from a wonderful concert by progressive rock band Änglagård,.. 😉
…cool sir… and i enjoyed a lot your share… i will come back to read it again and again… smiles…
Thanks for sharing uour beautiful art with us, Kelvin. I love this prompt.
…my pleasure Laurie… i’m deeply honoured by the responses so far… smiles…
..magandang umaga…:-)
Nice job, Kelvin. Beautiful art. I found myself in a break and wrote somrthing quick. I’ll get some reading in off and on, but the first pic of Kelvin’s I saw, I had to write on. Thank God for technology.
..thanks Henry… glad you’re here… will def check you out in a minute… smiles…
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I like it when a host comments on our poems. I would have liked to read the sonnet you spoke of. That is one form I cannot write, but I love readinf them. Hope you get to host again someday, Great artwork too, I have to get moving now. I think I’ve read everyone, but duty calls.
…thanks Henry.. really enjoyed your great take on this… and i think i’ll be here for quite long… planning to revise the sonnet but when it gets done i’ll let you know… 🙂
Wrote and posted this one this morning. Not sure it fits the prompt, but wanted to share it with y’all this evening. Happy Saturday! 🙂
hi Charles… no worries… i’ll check yours after b-fast… smiles…
…Charles.. i left a comment on your post… but i think it went to your spam… just to let you know…
I got it, Kelvin. And, thank you! You are a very kind and gracious host! I plan to write a poem using the prompt, and will post it Tuesday for Open Link Night.
I also like given art or themes as prompts…nice drawing Kelvin; you have become a leader here in no time;) I was in a sea shell kind of mood, as I often am …
…thank you Katy… i think most of us are like that… hiding inside their shells… will check yours after b-fast… smiles…
Hi Kevin! Magandang umaga. You are so talented. I hope I can write something for his prompt. I am happy to see you tending the bar. 🙂
..magandang umaga Imelda… pls do write for this prompt… it will be an honor… more than anyone else..i’m always pleased & proud to see fellow filipinos writing and doing good… i’ll look forward to your share… smiles…
For you, I will do my best to have a poem, Kelvin. 🙂
…smiles… will wait for it…
…ok… thank you for the responses so far… i’ ll have b-fast for now… the artist is starving… will come back soon… promise…
smiles…
..back on the roll… buuuuurrrpp…
..oops… hihi…
..smiles…
Hi Kelvin–I have a very silly one – k.
Kelvin – I revised attritubions. Hope okay, sorry. k.
attributions.
…no worries Karin… just got surprised… hihi…
XD
Thank-you for such a great prompt Kelvin!
…smiles… ur welcome Gretchen…
Kelvin, I just went down to my local shops, and as I turned the corner what should be floating up into the sky above suburbia but a single red balloon… couldn’t help but smile, just had to share this with you all… 🙂
…ha, now that’s COOL… the balloon went off its frame and becomes real… what fun to share… smiles…
😀
TO: GAVIN P….
…sorry but your page isn’t loading on my server… but appreciate you for participating today… i’ll try some other time what i can do to fix things up… 🙂
i had to back out to the main blog and go back into the post to be able to comment on his page…
..it didn’t work Brian… just a while ago his page show up but coudn’t see link to comment section… glad he commented on your post so i was able to trace his email add and just sent him a message along with my comments on his share…:-)
Never mind< I just needed to log into word press. Sorry, my bad :0)
Awesome first Poetics Kelvin. You’re artwork is killer, love the contrast and symbolic attributes you infuse in so many different ways, was truly difficult to pick which one I liked and wanted to use the most. Look forward to the responses over the next day. Thanks again, and great job. Glad to have you on the team.
…thanks a lot Fred… and really enjoyed your very keen observation on my artwork… you provided a whole understanding of my art and that i truly appreciate… so thank you and my pleasure to be part of dVerse staff— a team of more than talented individual… smiles…
good morning everyone…cup of steaming coffee and about to browse through your poems… nice..we have snow over here… candy cotton snow..it’s lovely…smiles
We have snow here too – and coffee and poetry for breakfast before going out to church. Our new pastor is leading his first service today 🙂
very cool…about to head to church as well in a bit…it’s not far from where i live..a ten minute walk through winter wonderland…smiles
…ha… i don’t drink coffee…but i like snow.. it’s too hot here at my place… a country of if not forever summer… forever rainy…
Hi Kelvin – nice prompt. I had a busy day yesterday – we were ordaining and inducting a new pastor for our church, and this morning is busy too, but I will write something for you later on.
Thanks for bringing your art to the pub – I knew you’d make changes, but I wasn’t expecting a complete makeover on your first day … smiles. (I forgot the smiles on my first night…. ooops!)
haha…but you brought bagpipes and a kilt instead of the smiles which is pretty cool as well…smiles
hi Tony…
…will look forward to your poem… hope the new pastor had a great day in your place… will head my way off to church too in few time… smiles…
Thanks Kelvin – it was a good morning. Had fun writing for your prompt too 🙂
really… i want a watermelon now… smiles
…and i had fun reading your clever take Tony… XD
…ok… time for Church now… i’ll be out for some time but will def be back… many thanks to all who have linked up & shared their precious words t’wards my artworks… very much appreciated… and oh… to those who haven’t shared yet…you still have 20hours more to write & be inspired… smiles…
just got back from church myself…and catching up…
Great art work for a prompt. Didn’t give too much away, but left pplenty to the imagination. An inspired prompt, I thought. Much thanks.
on my way over…
…enjoyed your share Dave, sir… as always… smiles…
Art and writing go so well together, thank you for a really inspiring prompt!
art and writing go indeed well together…like coffee and cake me thinks… visiting my mom in a bit…there will be plum cake…ha…smiles
Zwetschkenstrudel? Yummmm! (I grew up in Vienna, so am a real cake fiend…)
nice.. vienna is famous for its wonderful cakes…sachertorte and stuff..hmmm…nice
Great idea. Question is: what do you do if you want to go all Mondrian on people? 🙂 I’m halfway through a programme on the Dutch painter on telly (just started watching it a few minutes ago on Catch-up) and now I’m finally beginning to understand what the geezer was going on about. Me, I like my Monets and Dalis better.
I’ve read so far a couple of the poems inspired by your challenged and I have to say that he quatlity is high. Well done! 🙂
Greetings from London.
…well i only provide inspirational driver…the rest was to the creative minds of the poets… so praise be to ’em… smiles…
..thanks for stopping by…
Kelvin, you must me delighted by the avalanche of quality poetry your inspiring images have released. It was such a pleasure to travel round and see the work.
…indeed Aprille… i am more than delighted… thank you and to all who participated… truly a wonderful experience to me to have read what you all felt & see from my artworks… smiles…
Great prompt, i’ve tried to capture some thoughts from one of my favourite paintings, and i hope it works. Thanks
…wonderful share Alan… glad you could join us here… 🙂
Dear Kelvin,
It was a hectic day, Sunday being my gardening, cooking and hanging out with the kids day.
I loved this prompt, it sends us on a journey to find beautiful and inspiring art – from the past or new, they all work their way into our subconscious. I started out writing a ghazal for fun, but your post inspired me to try the same theme in different forms.
For those who tried to guess – the Queen was of course the very famous storyteller Scheherazade of Persia, daughter of the Vizier who married King Syahrir who had until then, beheaded one thousand wives after his first wife was unfaithful.
Scheherezade was determined to end this, and married the king, telling him a story each night and stopping just at dawn, at the most interesting part of the story. Every day, the king postponed her execution so that she could finish the story. This went on for 1001 nights and the One Thousand and One Arabian Night Tales were born.
And yes, they lived happily ever after.
Congratulations Katy and Mark!
how cool…she must have been an awesome storyteller… glad you told us who she was…was already about to google cause i was so curious after reading your poem
…ha… i knew it… i know part of her stories was about Ali Baba & the Forty Thieves… one of my fave tales ever for its entertainment quality & humour… ah… thanks Ninot, ma’am for reminding me of her… she’s indeed a great woman… smiles…
Not a problem at all, some of her stories included that of the Seven Journeys of Sinbad, Alladin and the Magic Lamp, Noureddin and the Persian Slave, The Story of the Fisherman, The Merchant and the Genie, The Enchanted Horse, The Young King of the Black Isles, Caliph Haroun Al Rashid and the Merchant of Baghdad…and of course so many more….
Cheers!
Coming in late on this, tough to work weekends! Kelvin, thank you for hosting this and sharing your artwork. Actually found inspiration in your silhouette image of the bird on the wire. Loved it! Hoping I got the gist of this lesson. In any case, quite inspired by the prompt!
Hi Ginny,
…i so enjoyed your poem… quite a glimpse to the sad life of a mockingbird…. glad to see you here… smiles…
…ok…sleep is calling me in.. good night everyone…
sleep well kelvin..you did an excellent job..
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Well, Kelvin, I managed to write something. I had to because I promised you. 🙂 I chose a theme that was close to my heart, but even that proved to be difficult. I was expecting that the words would flow just like a snap of a finger. But no. 🙂
…Imelda… you’ve offered your heart there & that’s enough to honor my art… thank you…for sure, a most enjoyed read for the prompt… smiles…
…ok… 47… not bad for a firt timer.. i guess.. (sigh)… thank you to all who participated, shared & exerted effort, time & appreciation… thank you Claudia, Brian & to the rest of the staffs… thank you for sharing your talents and for taking my artworks into different perspectives…. i so enjoyed you all & i have taken notes to ponder from each who have linked theirs poems…i know some other future time i can use your words / feedbacks / critiques in further honing my crafts… thank you so much for giving me such a wonderful experience yesterday & today… and yes.. we’ll be seeing each other again in succeeding days… have a nice day!
..smiles…
I think we should be thanking you, Kelvin, for sharing your art with us and bringing such a rich prompt to the pub. I’m looking forward to your future contributions and challenges.
Kelvin, I am sorry that I didn’t contribute to this. I came to it late, after working most of the weekend, and doing some other writing projects. I still may write something on “Alone.” I’ve been wanting to get involved here, but usually work the weekends, so I tend to just observe. Glad to see your beautiful work and words here!
missed the widget deadline! nevertheless,…used one of your pics! Kevin
http://randomlynovel.blogspot.in/2013/02/journey.html
…never too late for one willing to join… effort appreciated… thanks Akila… smiles…
Awesome artwork on your site, Kelvin!
Cool topic, Kelvin! I have been reading some of the posts this morning and I am so sorry i missed this one. I love your work, especially “Alone”.