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When I was eleven (quite a long time ago), I was lucky enough to win a spot on a special children’s trip to Japan. There was another girl on the trip, and we each wore little blue skirt-suits, complete with white gloves, for plane departure and arrival. (We had sweatpants to change into, in the plane bathroom, for the flight itself.) The point is that a trip by plane was a big deal back then; you were supposed to look sharp for it.
That plane ride was a big deal for me. It was one of my first, my first without my parents, and perhaps most importantly, my first with my own camera.
And, amazingly, we flew above the clouds! I darted from row to row–the plane was practically empty – accumul(us)ating little oblong vista after vista, using up more than a roll of (very precious) Kodak film. I felt like I was getting a glimpse of what gods must wake to.
This is Manicddaily, a/k/a Karin Gustafson, to confess that I still get goofily excited with a camera while traveling, even just on a plane. The picture above, for example, is one I took of a plane window that reflected the movie some other passenger was watching. (If you look closely, you can just make out the film. Hint, it stars John Travolta, and his cute little suit is white.)
But this prompt is not about plane views or even specifically plane travel, but simply about trips.
“She was a trip.”
“Have a safe trip.”
“Careful, don’t trip.”
“We were really tripping, man.”
I ask myself what the different uses of the word have in common; each describes an experience that takes you from yourself, your normal groove, even your planned next step. And with that movement comes a change of perspective, a shifted window on life.
My hope (I haven’t written my own poem yet) is that this change of perspective creates a space where poetry might arise. This fits very well, by the way, with the old English use of “trip” by Milton and Shakespeare, in which it meant to dance nimbly. (As Milton wrote in his poem, Allegro, “Come, and trip it as you go, / On the light fantastick toe.”) (For those who have not yet figured out the John Travolta movie, this is a second hint.)
So, the prompt today is to write a poem arising out of the notion of a trip— whether to a far country, the corner store, the land of Napowrimo (where many of you have been traveling this month), or even just the surface (on your hands and knees) of a rutted parking lot. Your poem does not need to be about the journey itself; it can relate to something you saw while away or something you remembered about home; “trip” is simply a window to look out of. (It certainly does not need to be a plane window.)
For added inspiration, here are a few links to travel poems: Window, by Carl Sandberg; Evening Song by Sherwood Anderson, Cattails by Nicky Finney, Go Greyhound by Bob Hicok, Traveling Light, by Linda Pastan, Dark Matter, by Jack Myers. I love the flow of each and the way that travel – whether on a Greyhound bus, across five states by car carrying cattails, in search of love or work, or inexorably towards death–seems to sharpen a sense of what is both fragile and universal, funny and also tragic, in human experience.
So, happy trails, partners! Please be sure to travel over to your fellow poets’ blog and share their poetic trips. For those who are new to dVerse, here’s the way to hop onboard:
- Write ~ a poem stemming somehow from the idea of a trip, post it to your web page
- Link ~ by clicking on the Linky button below and entering the URL to your poem
- Read ~ pick some of the other linked poems to read
- Respond ~ leave your fellow travelers feedback, what did you like? what inspired you? Feel free also to use other social media to spread these flights of fancy of your own and others.

each trip takes you from yourself…ha…that def describes my trip…how fascinating it must have been as a child to go to japan…that is very cool…i remember my first flight…it was pretty amazing…cool prompt k…glad you are home from your trip…smiles.
Yes, me too. k.
Hi All! I am still finishing my poem, but am almost done and will be checking on others soon too. Hope all are well! k.
I love all the directions you can go with this prompt. Mine started with an observation as a dainty little girl ate lunch (which, when I saw, I knew would have to be poem). Thanks, Karin.
I look forward to it, Laurie. k.
What a wonderful idea. I will however come in later. Currently I’m at a dinner with friends. I will visit as many as I can later tonight and tomorrow 😉
Hi Bjorn! It’s so great to have people involved from all over the world on this site. I look forward to your poem. k.
Hiya Karin, loved the video.
And though I do like views from planes, my tripping was a kind of light fanstastic with elephants shaping the dose 🙂
Have fun tonight everybody
Ha. k.
PS – thanks for liking the video – there’s a wonderful app on the iPad for animation – you have to do the drawing, but they give you the “ghost” of your past drawings, and allow you to duplicate and erase parts so it makes it much easier. But it takes much more patience than I have. k.
Have to confess that I have never held or even seen an iPad. Not exactly au fait with the modern world. Don’t even have a mobile phone. And I am not even sure what is meant by an app. Unless it takes rose cuttings, I’m not really bothered 🙂
Love trips! Posted a trip-type poem I wrote on a serviette in a cafe 6 years ago, then lost it, then found it again a couple of weeks ago. Looking forward to see everyopne’s journey poems 🙂
Napkins great notebooks. k.
I wrote a poem yesterday, and posted it on my blog this morning, hoping it would fit the prompt today. And, by golly, I think it hit pretty close! It’s about a trip I took when I was young(er), and the trip we all take, starting the day we’re born.
Thanks, K!
Thank you, Charles. k.
Oh, I also wanted to invite you all to take a look at the story I posted on Kellie Elmore’s Free Write Friday this week. It’s getting some fairly good reviews!
Hi K,
Thanks for today’s prompt. It’s going to be fun seeing what folks come up with. Although I love travelling, I’ve taken ‘trip’ as the predecessor to ‘fall’ for my poem. Off to hit the trail now; hopefully not too literally 🙂
Ha. Well, any trip has that aspect, I think. And that is why I used that specific word and not, you know, travel. k.
Interesting prompt, Karin! So many ways to write about ‘trips.’ Pleasant and otherwise. (Ha.) Looking forward to reading….
Been brooding over this all day after reading Brian’s this morning, to no effect. I think April may finally have burned the last brain cell out–I haven’t utterly given up though, and after your lovely exposition above–how well I remember as a child when going *anywhere* besides out to play was an occasion for dressing up–I feel like perhaps I may stumble over something if I persevere. So glad to have you back, Karin.
Ha! Thanks, Joy. I haven’t gotten my own up yet – almost done. Of course, it would be great to see what you come up with but I cannot imagine how tired you must be– you’ve been on a great journey all month and are bound to have some sore muscles and jet lag! k.
Well, I managed something–I hope it’s not too morbid–not meant to be, but you know me. —and I don;t think I move fast enough for jet lag. ;_) Will be by after dinner to read.
Ha. I look forward to it. k.
A wonderful prompt K ~ I know that John Travolta movie and that elephant flying into the clouds made me smile ~
Speaking of actual trips, we are taking a road trip to Ottawa to see the tulip festival in mid-May ~ Spring is finally in our shores ~
Thank you and wishing everyone a happy weekend ~
Sounds so beautiful! Tulip festival! k.
I say that elephant is in the sky! 🙂
Yes. He doesn’t realize that clouds are just water vapor! k.
smiles…the elephants always seem to hide when i’m on a plane…smiles…cool prompt k… i’m way late…just coming through the door…was at a little party…
Yes, you have to be very sharp-eyed to catch the elephants! k.
ha…your elephant vid is funny k…smiles….
Thanks. I am a very primitive animator! I have an app for it that helps but it still requires more drawing than I am really up for. I think I did that one on a flight – you know, one of those places where you are kind of trapped.
oh and k…thanks for the links as well… i just fell in love with bob hicok…loved his poem go greyhound and checked out more of his work…awesome…just downloaded “this clumsy living” by him to my kindle…
I really liked that poem too. I like to quote them as I don’t think people look at links so much – but these are so recent. The Sherwood Anderson is really beautiful too, I thought. Well all of them. k.
So I have mine done now – which means no excuses for anyone else ! Ha!
I will be in and out for a bit but look forward to my next trip around! k.
Very fun prompt. Just go back from golf (it’s almost 100 here–the temperature, not my score). Will see what happens next.
ha. temp not your score…smiles…so you hit well?
Ha. Your score was undoubtedly in the 90s! k.
Thanks for a delightful prompt!
Limerick Rut
By Madeleine Begun Kane
A woman was stuck in a rut.
She’d tripped, falling down on her butt.
She was wedged in so tight,
She might be there all night.
Seems its risky to text while you strut.
you know there was a president once who got stuck in his bathtub…i am sure he could relate…smiles…fun stuff mad kane…
That was a perfect Limerick 😉
Ha! Something many of us should keep in mind. Thanks, Mad. k.
The dangers of texting that no one warns you about. Thanks for the PA, Madeliene.
Ha! k.
haha…true that… i write poems on my iphone while walking around…did this in berlin…doing it everywhere…oy…dangerous..smiles
Sometimes tripping can be hilarious..thanks !
Thanks so much everyone for your lovely comments!
Exciting prompt, Karin! Loved the intro. and the video is too cute.
Ha, thanks, Heidi. Was very moved by your poem. k.
It seems that some of my comments are not getting published. I will have to return and try and see if I can get them to publish again.
Hi Charles – I think at first the WP browser doesn’t recognize you, but once you are initially approved it should work. If you are using an iPad – I find it harder going back and forth between WP and blogger, especially since I once had a blogger account – you had an WP once, right? Maybe part of problem? (Such a pain.) k.
I like WordPress just as much as anyone else. But it shouldn’t be a sick about coveting usernames and passwords. That’s stupid.
Wish I could write about a recent trip to India or anywhere..it’s been awhile…going
to Ireland next year 😉 ..so I went with the first image that struck me that I had already started a poem about..only under a different meme..glad to have you back, karin.
Ha – well really enjoyed your poem, and Ireland sounds pretty great to me. k.
ireland sounds wonderful…it’s on my list as well…
I’ve had to reach out to some of you by email with comments on your poem. This is because there’s some incompatibility in your browser with iOS. Best wishes, Charles
charles…it is so good to see you around more again brother…smiles.
Ok, I’m in! I wrote about a journey to the self. This was the first time I wrote a medium-length poem this quickly from another person’s prompt, that is, a poem that didn’t knock me over and yell at me to write it down! It’s excellent practice – not nit-picking away at it but letting it be…and I’m happy with the result! Thanks again.
sweet…be over in a few moments…good to see you back…smiles.
I’m linking to one written in 2006, about an actual trip (journey) and also a rather trippy ‘brief encounter’.
ah enjoyed yours…smiles
Interesting – can’t wait to see what others have done!
Thanks for yours, Dave- quite a trip to the zoo!
….lucky you… Japan is one cool place to be with… smiles… and ha… loved that elephant swinging by the clouds… smiles…
Japan was wonderful for a child. I’ve been one since and really enjoyed too, but even that time was long ago at this point. Kelvin – did you link up, I did not see. k.
…i haven’t yet…. but hoping to… for the meantime i’ll read some while courting my muse… smiles…
Ah. Good luck. k.