Hello, this is Björn, filling in doing Poetics for the first time, and today I would like us to be inspired by the spekulative, the future or maybe even the dystopic. Author have always been inspired by the future – and sometimes also the poets. I have chosen to call this science fiction. Science fiction in poetry is a genre that goes back much further than this century. Consider for instance this passage:
For I dipped into the future, far as human eye could see,
Saw the Vision of the world, and all the wonder that would be;
Saw the heavens fill with commerce, argosies of magic sails,
Pilots of the purple twilight, dropping down with costly bales;
Heard the heavens fill with shouting, and there rained a ghastly dew
From the nations’ airy navies grappling in the central blue;
Far along the world-wide whisper of the south-wind rushing warm,
With the standards of the peoples plunging through the thunder-storm;
Till the war-drum throbbed no longer, and the battle-flags were furled
In the Parliament of man, the Federation of the world
(Lord Tennyson, Locksley Hall, 1842)
Could almost have been a passage from Asimov, don’t you think?
Remember Jules Verne, and his tale about a trip around the moon. Certainly there are some food for poetry in those dreams. Or the dystopies of George Orwell and Ray Bradbury, though placed on earth still evoked plenty of speculative elements.
Myself I was exposed early to Sci-Fi poetry through the epic poem “Aniara” by Harry Martinsson. It describes the escape of people from an earth destroyed by radiation. Being lost in space they know the will live a normal life but just drifting through space forever lost to our solar system. How the crew and emigrants handled it with cults popping up and especially the powerful Mima that run the ship and provide consolation to the poeple on the ship. Many innovative words for nonexistent things were introuduces in this epic poetry, but of course based on the science known in the 1950’s. I know it has been translated to English (twice) but the spread has not been that big.
There are many themes to explore in this speculative kind of poetry. Think technology terms, the loneliness in the vast space and maybe a little social criticism and I’m sure we can get some great poetry today. This is all about your fantasy.
Maybe we can bring everyday scenes like deceit, love and why not cafeteria scenes into the space and future. I choose to give a hint of this theme on this Tuesday’s OLN.
How space was lost
on silver sails, we set our hope
in ships that gravity eloped
we left a planet in despair
from death on earth we did forswear
away, away in rapid pace
alone in space it’s hard to cope
for mutiny we used the rope
we couldn’t have lament and tears
on silver sails
Now left alone I live on dope
I see the heartbeats on my scope
and count the stars within my prayer
for death I have no longer fear
my coffin disappears in smoke
on silver sails
So boldly let us go and meet in space – today the bar is manned by aliens and androids and we are ready to go.
10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1
- Write a poem and post it to your webpage.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all go here to have our poems read
- Promote your site and poetry you like on social media of your choice
And not least have fun and smile 🙂
Welcome everyone. Hope you are all aiming for the stars. I have a family dinner here, but have a little pause.. hope you all have a wonderful saturday,
hey hey….i am on vacay with the wife…swinging through…i could not miss the sci fi fest….though i may be a little slow to visit as we are keeping going….toured several art studios today…so much fun talking to artists and watching them at their work…some really cool people….but i am a sci fi nut from way back…and enjoy the conventions as well…ha…totally geeking me out bjorn…smiles…
Sci-Fi is actually a great subject for poetry.. lots of things you could do … I’m so eager to read all the entries.
Enjoy your weekend Brian ~
most def….we are about to head back out….going to the art shops downtown here in asheville….then the late showing of 12 years a slave at the arts cinema….probably check in between there somewhere…or just be back late…smiles.
A very interesting challenge ~ Thanks Bjorn & Happy Saturday to all ~
Grace
A happy saturday to you too Grace.. a little late here.. will be coming back tomorrow.
happy saturday everyone and greetings from nice.. i’m here at the cote d’azure for a long weekend.. ahh.. its beautiful… smiles… thanks bjoern for sci-fi rocking the pub… smiles.. have fun playing everyone.. !!
Ah have a glorious Mediterranean weekend..
heya…i could not stay away either c….smiles…have fun on your trip…cant wait to hear all about it…smiles.
Lucky you,enjoy….take a drive to Grasse….beautiful village!
Hi Björn! Interesting and challenging prompt! Your reference to Asimov made me think of a short story where young children find a real book in an attic and compare it with the device they have hundreds of books can be stored. This is no longer Sci-Fi. Enjoy your first time at Poetics!
I’m enjoying tremendously ,,, this was fun.. and going totally with fantasy and letting go of form or fact… love to see your entry.
Hi Bjorn, Grace, Claudia, Brian–all–thanks so much Bjorn for filling in for me–I am at the end of my tether here–I’d planned a blog break to do big-project writing but instead have been swept up in big-project job work. I’m very fortunate truly–but feeling a bit worn out–this is a very original topic–for all of the traditional work you post! Will think about it–thanks much. k .
Ah,, thank you for letting me have this.. so much fun in thinking of a topic.. good luck with all your tasks.
Hi K – hope you are well ~ This is definitely the first for me to write of sci-fi poetry –
I will be taking a short break too so I can focus on studying for my exam~ Take care ~
Good luck! k.
Hi Bjorn, very interesting topic for Poetics this week. Thank you for hosting. Interesting how so much we used to consider Science Fiction in the past has come about in one way or another. I used to read science fiction a bit…the stuff of Arthur Clarke comes to mind…but I haven’t read sci fi in a while. At the moment I am more grounded in reality, but it was to play a bit with sci fi today. Will enjoy seeing what others write.
I think the advantage is to let go of reality and bring the image you want to portray into space it becomes much more pure
Great prompt. It happens that I wrote one just yesterday which I am linking here. It’s rather dis-topian so I’ll try another later with a more hopeful vision. I enjoy sci fi reading and writing.
it is rather scary…and i wondered when i read it if it was for this….the loss of oxygen….quite a scary thought….some things we cant save up….
and i am off now….catch up later everyone!
Dystopian… works so well… I will head of to read soon.
O, thanks for correcting the spelling.
I put in the wrong link again! Sorry. The right one is: http://susanspoetry.blogspot.com/2013/11/last-breath.html
Done Susan ~
Thank you, Grace. Study well.
Science just floats my boat.. thanks Bjorn for a great prompt!
I look forward to read you entry.. 🙂
Well, Bjorn, seeing that you are pouring this evening, make mine an Alien Brain Hemorrhage Cocktail 🙂
As usual, my take is slightly off beam: I’m adding science to fiction in the style of Jean Painlevé’s films.
Thanks for stepping into the breach this evening.
Ah.. how about an alien zombie …
Cheers 🙂
Thank you for this prompt, Bjorn. I didn’t go alien, I just went into the future, bouncing off some authorly inspiration on the way. I hope it fits the bill!
Sci-Fi is all speculation about a future.. and personally I love the dystopian to… I think that with good Science Fiction we can focus on the real issues by getting disconnected with the complexity of our real word. Beaming in on the real issues, which I think Aniara does…
Yes. Whatever the future has in store, whatever environment we are in, the human worries will still be with us, just in a different context.
Love this prompt. A friend and I were discussing Ray Bradbury and Ayn Rand last night and how in many ways our world has become similar to the ones they wrote about all those years ago. Looking forward to reading some sci fi poetry.
i def enjoy bradbury….more so than rand…actually i really like his short story works….
Cool prompt, A poet,s imagination can go wild on this scifi prompt.
Cool prompt, Will stir up a poet,s wild imafgination. Imaginative anfd fun prompt.
I’m not a sci-fi, imaginative writer at all…so I’m actually taking a class on imaginative fiction. So far it’s been the Grimm Brothers, Poe, Lewis Carroll, H.G. Wells. This prompt stretches me…maybe I’ll come up with something (in the future). Have fun, all.
setting my time machine to see what you will write….smiles….
I thought about this…and I think that by setting a familiar dilemma in an unfamiliar environment one can focus on the dilemma.. I watched a lot of Startrek when I was younger and some of the episodes addressed dilemmas but places in another planet they became more subtle… and clear at the same time
Science Fiction is one of my favorite genres! Although, I’ve never even tried to write a Sci-Fi poem. I decided to step out of my comfort zone and try one. Thanks for the wonderful inspiration for this prompt Bjorn 🙂
me too…and i think my first sci fi poem as well….never really thought to try it….
It was my second poem 🙂
I never thought to try it either, but it was kind of fun 🙂
Pour me a brown cow, neat, and I’ll sip while I consider your awesome sci fi prompt Bjorn! I’m going to have to put some thought into this – but it looks fun.
nanu nanu….smiles.
brown cow coming up!
Ha.. look forward to what you’ll come up with
Hey Bjorn– came up with something a bit weird! Thanks for the inspiration! k.
Weird sounds good… I’m thrilled
Sci-fi – my staple diet of TV and reading growing up and during young adult period. Let us see if I can dig into my past fascination for inspiration.
Great prompt, Björn!
Oh yes.. there is plenty to dig out..
Mine is a whirl through outta space but I don’t know if this is strictly sci-fi 🙂
I think Sci-Fi is not very strict.. so it will fit the bill..
Excellent this Björn. Started scribing yesterday and couldn’t wait to get home this morning to complete and post. Night shift (again) tonight – so I will read a few and then go to bed. Read more when I rise and the rest tomorrow morning.
Anna :o]
Ahh,, I need to check it out before going out 🙂
good morning poets…in and out today…going to take int eh christmas shoppes in the village this morning and then head home…ao it may be late before i catch up again, but i will…have a wonderful day
way out of my comfort zone here….but i did it and i like how it turned out! I also love your poem how space was lost….sort of sad.
i LOVE sci-fi { even though my first poem isn’t, truly, what i would consider sci-fi } ~ thanks so much for the fabulous prompt, Björn.
the outside world is making demands on me this morning, but i’ll be back by tonight to visit ~ really looking forward to seeing what everyone has written!
have a happy day!
Ah thank you.. I love what you wrote.. 🙂
Thanks for the prompt Bjorn! mine just tapers about a little, perhaps off from the core of the prompt but nevertheless shared it! by the way, the linky is still open??
Waiting for you of course 🙂 … seriously… I forgot to program the closing… but now it’s closed.