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a bird by any other name, out the house and in the yard, poetics, poetry prompt, shanyn silinski, whats in your window?
Tony was wonderful enough to bring us a refresher on forms after our Holiday break. I’m sure your poetic muscles are feeling a bit of the ‘burn’ and ready to do some heavy lifting. Guess what? You can put away the work out gear, this is fun time!
I had a rather formal Poetics for us today. Something along the lines of packing away the holidays, the annual things we look forward to. That sort of January ‘Janus’ looking forward/looking back.
Then I looked outside my window. It is warmer here than it has been since the first part of December. Almost 30 degrees or more warmer. Shorts cause it is in single Celsius digits warmer. And everyone is happier. The birds. The dogs.
So what I would love for you to do this poetics is two part. Go to your favorite window, door or outside view. Snap a photo. Second part: write a poem about what is happening. In the moment. Choose whatever form you like.
Share with us on this January Saturday a snapshot of your ‘view’. And window dress it in fine, or plain, poetic fashion.
Don’t feel tied down to one photo, make a collage if you are so inclined. Paint your view if you are in the paints.
My Windows
Looking out windows not my own.
Ours for a season, but nothing more.
Scratched by dogs not my own.
Cleaned for a better view of the birds.
Chickadees, woodpeckers and sparrows.
Eating, fighting and resting from the cold.
I hung buns on a string, and left shortbread
in the branches of the cedar. Blue jays came!
Looking out windows not my own.
Seeing the jetstreams streaking in the sky.
They came home, and brought warmer air.
Frost on the trees from an early morning fog.
Tracks in the snow – coyote, deer, moose.
Dead sunflower heads bow to winter and
birds eat the hope they left behind for spring.
The bird song is loud today, singing the feast.
They eat the feast, but it is I who gets the joy.
- Write a new poem to the prompt and post it on your webpage
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- There you will also see others who have joined in, visit them. Let them know what you liked/disliked, thought unique
- If you promote yourself on social media, used @dversepoets so that we can find and promote you as well.
- Have fun
Happy Saturday everyone!
nice…i do this often shanyn…just sit and focus on the world around me and try to capture it in the best detail that i can…had fun with this…did a sketch for you instead of a picture…
KB has a cool pic out his window…i love that tree….
like the birdsong in your verse…all the life…i would love to see a moose sometime….it is on my bucket list…smiles.
A moose, come visit us and we’ll try to arrange a moose sighting! 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it, and are another one of the window watchers. We are keeping good company.
nice…let me see what i can do on the travel…smiles…
i love to listen to the birds… they’re not only excellent musicians but story tellers as well… smiles.. wonderful prompt shanyn…. oh &… the bird in my poem got a bit out of control but…..ha…smiles… happy saturday everyone…
ha. i would say it got a little out of control…in a very good way…smiles. happy saturday c
happy saturday to you as well bri…
Birds are happy composers! I love them. Thanks for coming by. Sorry for the late start by your bar tender! 🙂
Hi Shanyn! Nice prompt. I will enjoy visiting the views from everyone’s homes/ windows at this time of year. I think, in this snowy season, I will be quite jealous of some of the views. Smiles.
Happy Saturday, everyone.
smiles…maybe i will give an actual pic in one tomorrow or at oln so you can see my back yard…
That would be cool, Brian!! I would like to.
see what i can do…its nasty wet today and greay but we will see…smiles.
Thanks Mary! We had a great day, warm after a long cold spell, hoping for some pics tomorrow!
I loved this prompt! I also took a picture from my mother’s window… will write something later about that one (I’m trying to write about things other than her condition).
i hear you…i bet it is a good break to get away in your words at times…would be interesting to see your view through her window…
had thought of doing one out the window at work, may still do that one tonight if i can…
I am so looking forward to your words Laurie. 🙂 Any window will do, and the more the merrier!
Hey guys… having a few tech issues right now but will be joining later… Great prompt; I live behind a senor highrise so there’s always some juice goin on back there… haha
hey anthony….. good to see you and hope you’re getting your tech issues solved…and sounds like there’s enough material for poetry in your view..smiles
hahaha ok, i am not sure what juice is going on in a senior high rise but i am looking forward to it i think…smiles….
Oh my! Juice you say…can’t wait to see the pics. ha ha
Thanks for the prompt, Shanyn! I am sure we’ll get to see a lot of very different views.
yep… enjoyed those i read so far…
I am so looking forward to reading everyone’s poetry.
Well the view from my window is foggy and grey but reading the poems here & there brightens my dull afternoon ~
Thanks for the prompt Shanyn ~
it was grey and rainy all day over here as well.. and i built a shelf for my paints… self-made with boards and bricks from the DIY store…for 16 Euro…ha… but the trip to the store is a story in itself…smiles
My daughter paints but its all tubes in a messy box ~ Maybe after a time, we can put up a shelf for her paints & stuff ~ I am envious of her talent, like yours, ha ~
oo so maybe tuesdays poem? smiles.
Our day was pretty grey too, but warm so we enjoyed it. Looking forward to reading everyone’s pieces.
Just back from my sister’s place.. We have given my mother a good birthday I hope. Lots of company and nice talking. I will do reading tomorrow morning as I wake up.
Sounds like you had a very nice time Bjorn. We had an errand and chore day so I might be catching up more tomorrow as well!
yay…glad mom had a good birthday man….rest well…
Love this prompt, Shanyn. I’ve got mine rough-drafted and will get it linked in a few. True story that happened this morning with a few avian flourishes that I see often here.
oooh I’m so looking forward to it!
Shanyns – thank you so much! This will be such fun, tomorrow.
Looking forward to it! Coffee and poetry is a great way to start the day!
looking forward to it liz….
It wasn’t long back that I already wrote on this subject – but it’s a new prompt and I am working on a new idea 🙂
I’m looking forward to it. 🙂
cool…we will be here…smiles…
Thanks Tony…while I wrote something that happened a week ago I did not take a picture,
but I will put a reasonable facsimile together with Pixler to get the ‘view’ across..’ and comment later tonight as I usually do…
looking forward to read…
Sounds really cool, can’t wait to get caught up!
Rain falls and temperatures climb here for a very unusual winter, maybe like Claudia’s. I brought you two, and I will be back tomorrow to gaze through your windows.
i haven’t given up hope for a bit of winter and snow completely yet but at the moment it’s so warm that all the plants start budding already…ugh…
We have a nice warm spell going on here after a brutally long cold snap – enjoying window poems, and loving the nice weather (which we played in for hours yesterday!)…thanks for coming by.
I love this prompt! Not my best effort but it’s been so long since I’ve posted on here I thought I’d better go with what I’ve got or I might not get going again…looking forward to reading others’ work.
http://seingrahamsays.wordpress.com/2014/01/11/what-is-this-white-stuff-says-the-dog-and-i/
smiles… i enjoyed meeting your dog…
wow….you got some major snow!!!
hey c…isnt it like 4 am there?
2:38
smiles
um, warm milk?
counting sheep?
Thanks for this. 🙂
I got this too late–the sun’s gone down–but I’ll be back! I saw the perfect scene out my window this morning–even commented about it to Sherry–and I’ve written the poem. Just need some sunshine (forecast is sunny and 71 for tomorrow) so I can take the picture!
you got all day tomorrow charles….
that sounds wonderful…. looking forward to both… poem and pic…
Am waiting with great anticipation Charles! 🙂
Sunshine is here, but the stars of the show have yet to arrive. Sitting here tapping my foot!
Awwww
Decided I’ll have to post it with an empty stage and hope they stop the strike soon. It’ll be up in a few minutes.
Hi all – I wrote a sonnet about my backyard… http://poetrytech.com/2014/01/11/sonnet-the-view-from-the-false-door/
nice…you know…i bet there are millions of backyards in the world that would love if someone wrote a sonnet about them…
Gary – thank you for joining in. And this is, in sonnet form, one of the reasons I am a country girl! 🙂
ok… trying to find some sleep over here… see you in the morning…
smiles…sleep well…
to bed myself now…be back in the morning…
morning! 🙂
This is lovely-I enjoyed your view! I tried, but we had the power go out. We were under a Tornado watch in my area. My photo was torrential and dark. Today’s view is much better, sunlight fragmented through the blue~
Hoping your weather is much more stable today! Thanks for coming over Ella.
Good morning poets and friends! Finally got my computer and internet happy together again! I could only read last night off my phone. No commenting 😦 But I’m back and ready to visit everyone!
Its tough working Fridays and Saturdays, I’m always running late! Shared a free verse and a couple of photos–thought the contrast of seasons would give you a better feel for my “quiet spot!” Enjoyed this prompt very much, Shanyn!
Thanks for sharing, and so glad you are here!
Thank you for this wonderful prompt. I sometimes forget to simply look out my window (especially in my backyard). I apologize for running a date late!
oh not a problem…there are still like 11 hours in the prompt…happy sunday!
Yay! I’m not tardy then 🙂 hope you are having a great Sunday!
happy sunday everyone… just coming back from the lightopia exhibit at the vitra design museum…so very cool… will be out on the trail to catch up in a minute….
Hood sliding 🙂 This is what we do for fun on the farm on warm winter days! 🙂
hood sliding… that looks like so much fun…would love to do this
I’m a little rusty, but I’ll give this prompt a shot (^_^)
glad you did… and we serve oil in the pub as well…smiles
…usually for our robot guests like R2-D2… but..
hahaha we get quite a few interstellar poets….
john,
if you stop back by….i deleted your link as it did not address the prompt. Please feel free to drop it in OLN on tuesday as i commented at your site.
Thanks Brian. Did figure Mr. Linky out after the fact. Posted what’s outside my window today – enjoy. On this sunny tuesday morning I’m going to sit back and enjoy the poetry on Mr. Linky