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Hi and welcome to dVerse, today I will introduce you to a form of poetry called the haibun. It goes back to the 17th century Matsuo Basho. For those accustomed to haiku, he is also the inventor of haiku in it’s modern form. The form combines prose with a haiku poem. I will not dwell here on how to write haiku, but now it’s sufficient to say, that it’s not about counting syllables at all. If you prefer other short poetry such as tanka, american sentences, or maybe be a pioneer and use the tilus.
The prose can be in any form, it can be an autobiography, an excerpt from a diary, a recipe, a prose poem, a short story or a travel log. The importance is how the haiku and the prose interact to form a unity.
Let’s first look at Basho and an excerpt from his “Narrow road to the interior”
The months and days are the travellers of eternity. The years that come and go are also voyagers. Those who float away their lives on ships or who grow old leading horses are forever journeying, and their homes are wherever their travels take them. Many of the men of old died on the road, and I too for years past have been stirred by the sight of a solitary cloud drifting with the wind to ceaseless thoughts of roaming.
Last year I spent wandering along the seacoast. In autumn I returned to my cottage on the river and swept away the cobwebs. Gradually the year drew to its close. When spring came and there was mist in the air, I thought of crossing the Barrier of Shirakawa into Oku. I seemed to be possessed by the spirits of wanderlust, and they all but deprived me of my senses. The guardian spirits of the road beckoned, and I could not settle down to work.
I patched my torn trousers and changed the cord on my bamboo hat. To strengthen my legs for the journey I had moxa burned on my shins. By then I could think of nothing but the moon at Matsushima. When I sold my cottage and moved to Sampū’s villa, to stay until I started on my journey, I hung this poem on a post in my hut:
Even a thatched hut
May change with a new owner
Into a doll’s house.
Certainly the text is poetic, but without the haiku, it’s a piece of prose. The haiku is certainly a piece of poetry by itself, but it gets additional depth through the prose. Modern haibun have of course evolved, just like the haiku. Subjects have deepened, and widened, but still some elements that remain the same.
The technique of achieve the effect of the haiku could be seemingly disconnected, a juxtaposition or even condensing the feeling of the prose.
Today I would like you to try to experiment with the technique. If you’re not friend with haiku, use another short form, if you like your prose to be very poetic – please do so. If you want to interleave short pieces of prose with micropoetry – do so. But remember that the short poems and the prose should have that specific disconnected connection that create a poetic effect.
There are many on-line examples of haibun, and there are many writers of haibun in the blogging world. Just google haibun for good examples.
Here is how it works:
- Write a haibun and post it to your webpage.
- Enter a link directly to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below
- There you will find links to other poets, and more will join
- Read and comment on other poet’s work, we all go here to have our poems read
- Promote your site and poetry you like on social media of your choice
And remember to have a lot of fun.
Happy thursday poets.. hope you are ready for some haibun.. here in Sweden it’s a cold and sunny evening…
GOOD CHOICE today, Bjorn. I always dig the Haibun form, because on has incredible latitude as to the prose section, from one paragraph to several, the present or the past or the future; even the haiku can be abstract, or a direct extension of the prose. It is time consuming, but joyous.
It’s one of my favorite choice, and we have not done it before… it works for any poet I think..
An interesting prompt, Bjorn. I periodically enjoy trying my hand at Haibun, so thank you for the opportunity!
Me too.. and I truly enjoy what could be done in this illustrious company.. I have seen a few great examples already.
Great suggestion…my submission may not exactly qualify but couldn’t get it out of my mind. Curious to read soon what others have written.
Ah.. I look forward too.. haibun has great flexibility..
I also want to remind everyone that THIS SATURDAY will be dVerse OpenLinkNight. I will be tending the bar, so hope to see many of you on Saturday as well. As always, the bar will open at 3 p.m. Eastern Time. Let’s gather & share a variety of poetry.
Ah.. yes.. we have a collaborative poem waiting for the bar.. (we have started to sync it with OLN)
thanks for the reminder mary…gotta get busy and write for that as well…
Thanks for the reminder Mary ~ Have to write later too ~
Thank you for this Björn – there were thoughts in my head that needed an outlet – and you have provided it.
Do so hope your Thursday is/has been wonderful too!
Anna :o]
Good.. I look forward to read your entry.. Thursday here has been a holiday.. so it has been a wonderful day.. almost like a weekend..
Bjorn, I’ll be posting one tomorrow (finally) for my Friday post as I’ll be on the road most of the day and can’t easily do the Weekly Photo Challenge. Perfect timing. Thanks for the background, too.
janet
Ah.. I look forward to that 🙂 I always look forward to your writing Janet.
thanks for this, Bjorn! Haibun are always a pleasure.
Haibun is my favorite format to build poetry from.
It is a really rich foundation I think
You have no idea how much I enjoyed writing this. I have written haibun before, but I’m not in a nature mood at the moment – I’m feeling much more urban, so I’m so very pleased you invited us to play around! I think I might be finding a new path and perhaps my poetic niche – not sure yet! 🙂 Thank you for tending bar tonight!
yes. modernizing old forms is one way of finding your muse.. so glad you like it Freya,
i am all about exploring new pathes and developing new niches as well…yours was fun freya
Thank you 🙂
good evening… and sorry that i’m a bit late to the party… will be out on the trail in a minute….
welcome Claudia.. there are able hands to tend the bar I hope 🙂 hope your have a gorgeous evening…was it a holiday for you too?
yes – it was a holiday for me as well… a beautiful sunny day… we did some biking to basel’s botanical garden – it’s quite small but beautiful nevertheless
We went walking in a wonderful park/wood of old oaks … really the perfect day to go strolling in the woods..
nice….we went hiking yesterday up to a nearby mountaintop…its a cool perch and you can see all the city spread out through the valley…
fun. i have read quite a few but never wrote one…
still not sure i wrote one completely…ha…i tend to make form what it is…smiles…
been reading but was at an inservice at school so i could not come here…
anyway, i am about, and will be popping in…
eating at a restaurant on the lake with my wife tonight so will step away for a bit when she gets here…
You have a very nice evening Brian., here we have holiday so today was off work. As I said today the form is quite free.. I like us to experiment. Mine was certainly not a standard haibun….
alright…she is here….caught up thru 15….be back in a couple hours…
Enjoy your time Brian ~
that sounds wonderful – have a great time!
hallo…made it back…smiles
on the docks there are like 3 foot catfish that swim up with big pouty lips
they are so use to people feeding them….
Hope they don’t grow big enough to feed on people … 🙂
This might be a difficult writing challenge for me. I’m going to try it, just in case you don’t see my new poem up. Then just keep in mind that I tried it, and it didn’t come out the way I wanted it to. Excellent prompt Bjorn. 🙂
I think you will do excellently Charlie.. as a fan of beat poetry I’m sure you know that some of them were also skilled haiku poets… 🙂
Can I do a short Haiku poem? like the one you just posted?
The idea with the haibun is to add a piece of poetic prose to add depth to that haiku. (that part you handle very well).. the haiku is one part of it…
come on charlie…i have faith in you…
you can do it…smiles…
This is a new form to me. It’s fascinating! I’ll read awhile more, then maybe give it a try. Thanks for this, Bjorn!
I think you find it a very versatile story.. If you have a fascination of poetic prose and can write short poetry it’s just about finding that balance… hope to see you back with one..
i find the combo or prose and short form fascinating as well… makes for a cool contrast
Yes and the possibility to evolve it further is endless.. In some of your poems I think you have almost done this, when you interleave two stories .. so I think you should do more haibun Claudia..
I love writing in this form Bjorn ~ I like your suggestion to experiment with short forms ~ I am hitting the poetry trail now ~ Happy Thursday to all ~
Indeed. many fun combination to do…
happy thursday to you as well grace
Hmmmmm I like this challenge…might not be in to play until tomorrow morning but will be reading and enjoying for sure!
I think you will enjoy… it’s a lot of fun — a very versatile form of creating poetry
looking forward to your piece shanyn and you will enjoy your rounds – a lot of cool pieces out there on the trail
cool will look forward to reading shanyn
ok – bedtime for me – will catch up tomorrow morning…
Bedtime for me also.. Good night 🙂
See you both tomorrow ~ Have a good night 🙂
sleep well you two
Björn, I had not written a haibun for a while so I welcomed the opportunity you provided. Thanks a lot!
hello gabriella…
Yes I enjoyed it a lot.. it’s one way to keep the storytelling going..
Thank you, Bjorn. I love the versatility of haibun. You make a good point about the connect/disconnect of the prose/haiku combination. Yes, they should complement each other as well as have meaning as stand alone. A lovely prompt. 🙂
glad you made it loredana…
So good you made it Loredana, and a great entry…
I so enjoy this form–it’s perfect for those of us who write both prose and fiction. I will look forward to reading–tomorrow. :0) Thank you, Bjorn
i need to get back to writing a bit more prose…perhaps this is the way…eh? smiles.
It is–and your prose is so good, Brian.
Yes .. I’m sure you can create your own unique haibun style.. many times it’s almost like keeping a diary.
A great introduction to haibun Bjorn-thank you!
My pleasure.. It’s one of my favorite forms of poetry.
Ok I have been doing a morning tour, for some reason I have problem with the blogger one, but I will be back later.. A rainy and chilly morning here… But yet a day out of office.
smiles… a day out of the office for me as well… will take my mom to the doctor though, do some cleaning, go to a gerhard richter exhibit….so will be in and out… no rain so far over here but the clouds hang grey and heavy..
Need to do something like that myself I think.
nice…hope all goes well with mom…and enjoy the exhibit….
raining here too…last work day at school….supposed to have a picnic
but my world is fairly drenched as well…
Never done this one before. It was pretty fun!
Work has been pretty hectic, and I haven’t had much reserve energy to devote to my writing as much as I would like. It feels good to cast aside worldly trappings and nourish my neglected passion again.
I will be making my rounds tomorrow and during the weekend.
glad you managed to write despite the job hectic… life can be a beast…
good to see you barry…life does that….
very nice on your prose…
see you soon man
It happens that I wrote one just a month ago, so I have linked to that. It’s a form I enjoy, so will try a new one if I get time — but no promises, as I’ve got a lot on at present. 🙂 (I seldom write haiku as 5-7-5, but I see that in this one I did … can’t remember why.)
I loved your haibun Rosemary.. wonderfully well done..
My wife & I are headed out to Pac Beach for the weekend, so I will miss out on the monthly OLN this time; folks will have to wait for the next installment of BLACKTHORNE. Life comes first, & family, even for poets.
Have a great weekend Glenn – I had looked forward to the next installment – personally I’m headed the same way on Sunday – I have a business trip to Silicon Valley..
yes – lilfe and fam def. comes first – enjoy the weekend at the beach glenn!!
This was a prompt i will not forget in a long time. With my dad in the hospital ICU I was struggling..and then this prompt gave me the solace i was looking for. Thanks Bjorn:)
Oh . I hope your dad will recover.. writing poetry can be a great way to find solace…
What a superb suggestion, Bjorn– I’d written prose yesterday while hiking in the mountain, a piece I plan to use to accompany a painting I am beginning. This form, prose + short poem will work incredibly well for what I wish to convey. Thanks for the extra fish in my pond ~ peace, Jason
I hope you can share it here — look forward to what you have done…
Indeed I will! although the painting will take about a month~ see you all in a month! 🙂 ~peace, Jason
Maybe for next OLN
caught up…and off to pick up my boys….will check back this even and see who else has joined in….
Excellent post and challenge…thank you so much! 🙂
I don’t know if I did mine right, but I am glad to have written something for the prompt. Thanks, Bjorn. 🙂
Hi Bjorn. What a welcome surprise. I love this form, but unfortunately I cannot link up. You can find mine at: https://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2014/05/31/the-quickness-of-time/
I missed this because I was travelling but will post here. It is not a form with which I have experience but I thought I would like to give it a try.
http://roslynrosssmallstones.blogspot.com/2014/05/contained.html
I discovered this challenge too late to add my name to Mr. Linky. Here’s a link to my haibun if you are interested. http://suzannemillerwritings.wordpress.com/2014/06/01/at-the-temple-of-aphroditea-haibun/
Why don’t you link it on open link night the linkup is still open there
Thanks – I will