One thing I love in poetry is the freedom to use mixed images and metaphors that don’t seem to connect or even fit on first sight–
It’s a bit like cooking–
We all have the recipes that work well together – foolproof // riskfree– ha
A certain theme – certain images and words – they won’t fail, unease your stomach and leave you standing in a downpour with people pointing fingers or shaking their head at you
And that is cool
But honestly
Sometimes it can get a bit boring as well, right?
When I first ate beef with a dark&bitter chocolate sauce I was like “What–?”
It was in Hamburg on a hotel visit and the chef belonged to the “young wild” group
I think you guess already — it tasted devine–
Having understood the power of contrast
they served foie gras, caviar, the most sophisticated and expensive starters in the most adventurous combinations – on silver plates – in the dusty attic of the old historical hotel
They served lobster soup in test-tubes
There were cobwebs in the corners
You wouldn’t take your guests there – right?
For my job I eat in a lot of excellent restaurants and it’s almost always really good– but as soon as it’s over, I forget–
That attic experience was about 8 years ago – I still remember every detail cause it was
a bit rakish, unexpected, special and brave
Contrasts&Contradictions, even more when they’re a bit unsettling, make us remember things
And hey – I want my poetry to be like that – at least sometimes – at least a bit
Smiles
So today’s task is to be a bit brave,
mix things you wouldn’t usually like…
cats and petroleum jelly
ice cream and motor oil
raccoons and watercolor cakes
missiles and flower poets
and and and….
think about contradictions and serve them up boldly
place things in an environment that doesn’t seem to fit
have fun!
— and season to taste
If you need inspiration – Charlie Zero by the way is quite good with this
Smiles
Happy writing &
See you out on the trail
–Claudia
ha. fun to make these connections and present things in new and unusual ways…also to develop these contradictions as well…beef and chocolate….hmmm….sounds good to me….smiles…
and charlie is def awesome…smiles.
I would take lobster in any form and in any vessel… as long as it’s still lobster.
amen…and crab legs….seriously torturing myself with the thought of it…
i need to get to the beach…and crack some shells….smiles.
….and oysters….hmmmmm
oh my, there was this place in pensacola florida called peg leg pete’s…they had this oyster platter….mmmm….i like em steamed too…
is it dinner time yet?
beef and chocolate….sigh… it was awesome… think i have to try cooking it myself some day
me too! I might throw some Hershey’s special dark chocolate on a bologna sandwich… sounds yummy, right?
hahaha if you try that…i am not sure i want to know how it tastes…lol….
still trying to get the image of you naked reading your english textbook out of my head anthony…lol…
oops… maybe I gave a lil TMI… hahahah
i want an invite for dinner….
Mexican Mole Sauce!
mole poblano…
This was a lot of fun.. yes I tried my best… and I served it on a silver platter 🙂 in the form of a sonnet… I remember in one of my first comments on Charlie’s blog I said I wanted to write a flarf sonnet… so just maybe this is what I have done…
a flarf sonnet… how cool… i didn’t even realize it was a sonnet as i was so focused on the images…cool
ha… iambic pentameter and shakesperean rhymes (though slanted).. but plenty of nonsense ..
dude, seriously you do some things with form that are ridiculous….in a good way….
ridiculously good… i agree…smiles
it was fun to do .. I might try it again sometimes..
As they say on those TV commercials; “Too much good stuff”; would have love to include /raccoons & watermelon cakes/ in my poem, but too many other randy non-secutors & oxy-morons ran rampant over my pages. Wow, the fun has just begun today/tonight. Thanks for the playful prompt.
smiles… you know – i needed a bit playtime
glad you had fun glenn
raccoons are the bomb…after squirrels of course…they are my fav…
hmmm…might have to play again in the morning…
Somehow I think badgers that are high on jelly-beans would work too..
ha. potentially….smiles.
maybe… after reading the prompt – everyone gets hungry and starts cooking lobster and such instead of writing a poem….smiles
but hey – that is ok – hehe
….as long as you invite me for dinner…smiles
Somehow when we journey into the land of Nonsense, I become giddy, & the naughty neophyte metaphors & languid lines of tumultuous treacle roll out like lollipop soldiers on parade.
ha. lollipop soldiers will have me singing wizard of oz tunes soon….
Claudia, I like beef (we raise it) and I love dark chocolate (!) but honestly, when I recently tried the combination in a restaurant, I was rather disappointed…missing the silver platter, I suppose? Anyway, i’ll try to stretch my tastes and metaphors as i think about this one 🙂
i think the secret’s in the right dose – i had it quite a few times since then – but it never tasted as good as the one in that place in hamburg…smiles… and looking forward to what you’re coming up with…
hey i been meaning to ask you c…
have you got to the season finale of blacklist yet?
nope… three episodes missing… they are stored on the hard drive… just didn’t have the opportunity to watch yet…
nice. i will hold my tongue a bit longer then…smiles.
Oooh, this sounds good, Claudia!
bring it madwoman….smiles…
And I thought I was gonna get a 4-day weekend…NOT. Thanks for always encouraging me–I’ll get on it, pardner. Bless you!
ooo 4 day weekends…nice….i have a 3 dayer myself…off work tomorrow…just me and the boys…thinking we might be pool bound….its so dang humid here…i might puddle…
Oooh, pool-bound sounds heavenly! Humid–are you in TX, or FL?? Hey, I want to tell you something important–your comment, “Bring it, Madwoman”, is just so wonderful that I’ll hold it in my heart forever. See? We never know what power our simple words can have….
ha. most def.
i am in Virginia, along the east coast…
its because of the wicked storms we had last night…poured down…tore out trees…knocked over a huge construction crane…(still thousands without power) and soaked everything…the sun is pulling all that water back today and making my world a sauna…
ugh – that’s tough
we often have a high humidity as well over here because of the rhine valley climate… it’s after 10pm and still so hot…
Oh my goodness! No power means no AC–just the word “sauna” sucks the breath out of me. I’m glad to be in the coolish Pac NW! Sending up prayers for quick relief and recovery.
Claudia – what a fabulous prompt. You have absolutely no idea how I needed this distraction from a pretty ropey day… I am tension-free now! Thank you for hosting tonight, Madam Bar Keep! 🙂
better than yoga jellybean tangos….
Very true!
ah that is cool freya – i had a pretty ropey day myself – started at 5am this morning already when i ruined half of my friend’s flat just by wanting to open the window…smiles
Ah, dangerous things, those windows…. I hope all is in order now!
I worked with a Romanian fellow named Adrian who was master of mixed metaphors. He embraced English as a second language with aplomb. For example, to be overly pickey and detail orientated is to “split hairs” and to have a grudge is to have a beef. One day he stormed to my desk and declared: “I have beef to split with you” – I couldn’t help it, I burst out laughing.
ha.
fun with linguistics…
A gotcha is something that may break the system in your code, so one day Adrian comes over and says, another one of those damn get-me-s
lol….
when i worked for citibank we had a more international clientele and there was some fun with idioms as well…
haha… that is way cool… in germany in that case we use the saying: ein hühnchen mit jemandem rupfen – means “i have to pluck a chicken with you”
plucking the chicken…together…
ahem…ha.
and hey – cool that we’ll be meeting soon in person
hahahaha!!! I’m going to love coming up with something tastefully delicious.
🙂
of course you will… smiles
nice….i knew you would like this…
it even has your name in it!
smiles.
I have been waiting for this opportunity for the flarf sonnet I promised you..
Nice…I will check it out. I too, will also be posting a bad flarf poem. My poem will be the most terrible thing ever written but yet will cure lobster-shack of its fundamental jack in the box. 🙂
I look forward to that… Very much actually.
ok – bedtime for me over here…
there was an elephant in the sky that is now a rooster and seems to turn into a dragon… think i gonna switch off the light and watch a bit until he disappears…good night… smiles
good night…smiles.
Really, I couldn’t have asked for a more brilliant and perfect prompt. And getting to click around and read everyone elses version is another perfection altogether.
enjoy your trip…there have def been some fun ones out on the trail…
and hope others take advantage of the audio/video
at your place…
We’re all in the mood to “chew the fat” tonight. I’ve been giggling.
jack sprat’s wife is surely happy…
smiles.
This one got put up and posted! Yay – still bummed I missed Poetics getting on the Linky. Hope this fits what you had in mind Claudia.
i still caught you shanyn…if i would have seen it go up i woulda got you in…smiles.
I know you did my friend. And yrah you would have! Cause you rock.
This was fun..thanks, Claudia; hope everyone has a great weekend…hope some rain will come and wash the caterpillars away here!
you can have some of our rain…we get storms most every night this week…
Thanks for the challenging prompt Claudia ~ Reading the above comments made me hungry, ha ~
Wishing you all happy week/end ~ I have enjoyed my rounds of reading 🙂
i can see why…ha…
hope your week ends well…
traveling tomorrow to richmond for and open mic…
oh nice.. have fun!!
Enjoy and have fun Brian ~ Maybe we can see a video performance, smiles ~
good morning… coffee and poery… what a wonderful start into my day…
good morning…smiles…
the sky is rumbling & flashing here///another storm
rolling in—to sing me to sleep…
Hey Claudia, Brian–I am not linking because I am one behind. I did the family history one at last. I will put link here but no one should feel obligated.
http://manicddaily.wordpress.com/2014/06/12/lore/
hey k…yours will be my last for the night….
Go to sleep, you!
I enjoyed this one K ~ Thanks for the glimpse of your family’s history ~
Completely blown away by all the talent here 🙂
its all fun, you know….add your name to the mix….smiles.
This time, especially, the fun is definitely in the reading….thanks but I don’t think I currently have the brainpower to connect the unconnectable! 🙂
i am a veggie so not tickled by beef and lobsters. have a tough day but ll see if u can dish out a nice veg meal of unconnected contrasts and contradictions!
Claudia..,born in a pure vegetarian family I have no idea of beef or lobsters…so i made the contrasts of feelings which we all can connect..i am fully enjoying the pub prompts..you guys are one cool team..i have to tell you that coming to this One Pub has made me reach that side of me which i didn’t know.. the whole team is just wonderful..love you guys..:)
awwww smiles… love back… and over to reading yours…
Cool and imaginative prompt, Claudia…there will be some good reading from this prompt, I can already tell! I’ll be out of town today, but will be back!
glad you made it back sherry….smiles.
well, just had a new fancy schmancy internet thingy installed – so maybe now i will be able to post and read and comment – hurray! one of those things about living at the end of the earth or what we love to call the Ozarks 🙂 Any way – loved the prompt and since i write such nonsense on a regular basis – smiles – this one was a fun little romp – thanks for continuing to be an oasis in the desert – K
heya kathleen….wish i was coming your way again this year….we are heading north though to let the boys experience NYC….
what a great trip you will have – love NY tho its been years – but you know the welcome mat is always out at the Kathleen & Bob Summer Camp B&B! smiles
Claudia–I didn’t think I’d get this one in on time, but I scrambled; and in my hurry put the wrong link in, so had to edit….oh my goodness, what I won’t go through to be part of the fun here!! Whew.
woot! you made it back.
smiles.
Can’t believe it myself–quite unexpected!
smiles… glad you made it back
Thank you so much.
good morning… catching the overnites and closing the pub doors, sweepin’ the floor and such… happy saturday!!
I am a bit late, but here is my post inspired on this: http://basho2012.wordpress.com/2014/06/14/contrasts-and-contradictions-for-dverse/
No time to play along this week, but I love the idea of this, I’m going to keep this one in mind to play around with in the future!