Hello, everyone! Marina Sofia here to act like a wet blanket on all your holiday plans… I have been told that my poetry is all doom and gloom, that I should lighten up, but somehow I always revert back to black. So please excuse this weighty subject amongst the Midsummer frivolity, but it’s my birthday today and I’ll cry if I want to!
There are days when the cracks beneath the surface became too much and our world (or at least our vision of it) breaks into a million fragments. This despair often leads us to poetry: trying to express the unsayable, trying to make sense of the random and painful. Here is English poet Michael Symmons Roberts’ take on it in his poem ‘World into Fragments’:
Small breaks first […]
Reasons for this shattering include:
too great a tension, too much shrill,
a world more fragile than we thought.
The most iconic ‘fragmentation’ poem of all is, of course, T. S. Eliot’s ‘The Waste Land’, with its disjointed rhythms, abrupt change of topics and tone, and mix of languages. It may be called the original mash-up poem: trying to make sense of a world that was irredeemably broken after World War One, not even attempting to recapture an innocence that was clearly lost forevermore.
And yet, and yet… glum though poets usually are, there is some hope for rebuilding, for making whole again. Speaking in very broad stereotypes here (and T. S. Eliot perfectly disproves it), it usually takes European poets to complain about a world in ruins, and American poets to energise us into rising from the ashes. Jerome Rothenberg reminds poets that everything is within their power, for they have the magic of words on their side.
No world is too hard,
If you summon up enough heat.
You can do it.
The fire’s there in your fingertips.
So for today’s prompt, I would like you to consider what does it take to shatter your world and how do you make it whole again? For some, it is faith; for others it is love and family. Some even seek wholeness at the bottom of a glass. It can be something of gigantic proportions, or tiny little gestures, half-remembered words and unclear images. Do you believe that what doesn’t kill us makes us stronger? Or do you cover your world in a protective glass bell?
I hope that proves that we need not be gloomy with today’s prompt, but that it offers something for all kinds of poets. Interestingly enough, in a writing seminar, I remember the tutor saying that far fewer people ever describe happy sentiments when they write in workshops. Sadness and anger are just much easier to write about.
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Have a lovely summer (or winter), a well-deserved break, and look forward to reading you today, tomorrow and always.
cool topic marina…i have def been through my ups and downs along the way…and had my life shattered and put back together….i got nothing yet though…so probably do some reading and maybe post something tomorrow…
Ha, gotcha! Sorry, didn’t mean to make it hard for you, but so often I don’t have anything for some of the prompts, it’s only right I get my revenge! No, seriously, sleep it over, a lot of good things come to those who dream…
lol…i will.
We do tend to do just that but (in my opinion at least) we all need a let out to the incessant thoughts circling in our mind… everyone needs it whichever way they choose to do it, it’s necessary & even therapeutic 🙂
Poetry is great therapy, I agree: the discipline of finding just the right word, or the frenzy of unleashing a torrent of words…
Good to see you behind the bar Marina. Hope all is well. I’m not quite sure whether I met the challenge exactly, but I am linking what erupted. Looking forward to the others! Thank you.
Erupted is the word – and I cannot blame you for your ‘outburst’ – the constant horrific onslaught of news does make me despair as well! Thanks for participating.
Ah.. I have read a few.. but right now it’s Midsommer murder on TV.. a great summer TV tradition for summer….Loved the prompt Marina
I’m a secret fan of Midsommer Murder (and used to live close to where many of the scenes were filmed when I was in England) – but shhh, don’t tell anyone!
Bjorn – with all the amazing crime dramas on offer in Sweden (and I am a huge fan of them all, with subtitles!), I confess to giggling a little that Midsomer Murders is a favourite of yours 🙂
I must say … I watch very little TV… but those Midsomer murder have became a tradition .. (wonder if it’s a coincidence that they all drive Volvo)..
Oh, I’d love that. Sort of Film Noir?
Not film noir – far from it: quintessentially English villages unaccountably prone to murders, but it’s all very polite and pretty.
Haha! Still intrigued that thy translate… 🙂
I very much relate to this prompt. I too find myself being pulled into the dark poetry-my soul has a need to purge what lies behind the smiles. Thanks for the great prompt Marina. It’s right up my unlit alley. LOL
I love that expression ‘ your unlit alley’ – I tend to be like that too. But that makes the joys all the more profound, right?
Hi Marina. 🙂 I hope mine met the challenge. Love, love will make or break my world.
There is a dreamy quality to your poem – love and summer and langour – sounds like very sound strategy to me…
Oh, I did not see your reply before I made my second post. Sorry about that. 🙂 and thanks for your reply. 🙂
Oh, I was reading the prompt again and I figured my piece may not be appropriate. I was trying to remove it from the link, but I can’t even after clicking Mr. Linky’s link removal tool. 🙂
good evening… just back from a little walk and will be out on the trail in a minute…
oh – and ….
happy birthday marina!!
i think i will get my guitar and we can sing you a little birthday song later on…smiles
and thanks for tending bar on that special day!!
My pleasure – I can think of no nicer way to celebrate my birthday than with a few of my favourite online friends and fellow poets!
A birthday celebrated like this is good.. still singing is a great idea… hmm
A challenging prompt this week, Marina – demanding us to dig deep… Thank you for hosting us tonight.
a pleasure to seeing you in the pub freya
Thank you, Claudia.
So brave of you to write that poem Freya.. I hope that the writing did you good.
Thank you, and it did. I just put my fingers to the keyboard and the words flowed out.
about to pack my bag for a business trip to stuttgart tomorrow…. will catch up in the morning before i’m leaving… happy writing everyone!!
Have safe travels Claudia..
Safe travels, Claudia. Hope you can build in some fun.
Have a safe trip Claudia ~
Happy Birthday lovely lady 🙂
Happy birthday, Marina. I wrote a fictional response poem. Like you, I gravitate toward grim in my writing. Had lunch with a friend together and was telling her about my novel in process that begins with a death bed scene, ends in a cemetery and features ravens at the beginning, the end and on the cover. We both cracked up.
Oooh, can I read it, Victoria? Sounds just my cup of tea…
Happy birthday to you, our lovely pub host ~ Thanks for the lovely prompt and wishing you all Happy Tuesday ~ I appreciate all your kind words ~
Thank you – it’s been so nice reading all the poems – each one feels like a little gift of insight and honesty! I can’t imagine a better way to spend my birthday.
Am late to the pub. Have barely been reading since coming home 6/2 after inpatient treatment. Thank you, Marina, for giving me my voice since coming home. Am glad you are here for me to let out the vile.
nice to see you maggie…
Thank you, Claudia. Safe travels.
Bless you, Maggie, you’re always a welcome face and voice – hope you feel a little better soon (trite but heartfelt wish, all the same).
Thank you for your kind words. Makes me smile ♥
Hi, I just had a simple question. Can I add a link of a poem that had been blogged quite sometime ago but relates to the prompt?
yes – that is fine
Hey Marina–not sure that this fits, but it is about the lightening and darkening of a mood–hmmm… I just don’t know. a new poem/draft though. Thanks. It is all intriguing. k.
cool with the city lights image as well k.
ha – it is cool when they write themselves and we just have to jot down the words…
alright – read the overnights and off to stuttgart now… will be playing catch up in the evening from my hotel
And very nicely they write themselves too – go with the flow…
Dark is not where I want to go: the world is too depressing as it is, without adding to the gloom. Humour is my “unshattering” tool.
Later: I wrote a horrible poem which would depress everyone, so decided not to post it. The state of the world is such that I want to stick my head in the sand and hope it goes away. Alors, I’m posting an older poem which turns the tables on my pessimism.
Don’t worry about depressing us – we’re all different in the way we respond to poetry, in what we ourselves are currently going through – so there is no single tone, or right answer or party line to mind. Thank goodness!
Having said that, I do like your old poem too – a very vivid character that I’ve probably come across before in French towns (those plane-tree lined squares).
my net is going nuts…hope i’ll be able to link up mine…linked at last…thanks for the interesting prompt Marina…
Pleased you managed to make it – and what a heartbreaking story you share with us!
I remembered to look in time to catch Mr Linky. Interesting prompt.
I really enjoyed your intro to the topic, MarinaSofia. 🙂 Very enjoyable read.
This prompt was right up my alley since the source of my writing seems to be of darker times and experiences. Somehow the light finds a way in.
Happy Birthday!
Glad you enjoyed the prompt – we can’t pretend to be naturally sunny writers when we aren’t, can we? But I hope the writing is a good way to expunge some of the darkness.
Thanks for the reminder about Eliot’s The Wasteland. I haven’t picked up that poem in more than 20 years, but at one time I was absolutely enthralled by Eliot and Pound. I’m going to take it down off the shelf again and see what resonates today that didn’t when I was just a teenager.
Well. I am so late that I can’t link but I did post something for the prompt.