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Brueghel, corner of your eye, Fall of Icarus, Michael Hamburger, missing things, poetry of details, unobserved, W.H. Auden, William Carlos Williams
Hello to another installment in the ongoing fun and drama of Poetics. Marina Sofia here behind the bar, aiming to get your creative juices flowing.
Life is what happens while you’re making other plans, goes the quote. And poetry is sometimes what happens when we’re not quite looking, or when we are busy examining other things. At the interstices of our life, our thoughts, even our words.
My favourite example of that is Brueghel’s famous painting of The Fall of Icarus. In the foreground: farmers tilling the soil, shepherds counting their flock. In the background: ships sailing across the sea to distant mountains. Somewhere in the corner of one’s eye, almost unnoticed, the v-shape flash of white legs, the silent splash of Icarus AFTER he has fallen. Not a trace of his ambitious waxen wings, not a second of his glorious flight.
This is such a striking image that it has given rise to at least three famous poems, by William Carlos Williams, Michael Hamburger and, most famously, W. H. Auden.
About suffering they were never wrong,
The Old Masters: how well they understood
Its human position; how it takes place
While someone else is eating or opening a window or just
Walking dully along.
So for today’s poetic prompt, I would like you to think of a minor incident which you barely notice in daily life, a small detail which you have learnt to take for granted, something that is all too easy to ignore or forget. Write a poem about the happening in the corner of your eye, while you’ve been busy focusing on the important things in life. And perhaps missed that once in a lifetime chance of watching Icarus soar towards the sun.
Here’s what you have to do to make it work:
1) Write a poem and post it to your site/blog.
2) Enter a link to your poem and your name by clicking Mr Linky below.
3) You will find links to other poets. Read, enjoy, share and comment on other poets’ work.
4) If you are promoting your work on social media, use the tag #dversepoets.
Hey Marina! Great prompt; I had a good time writing for this… And btw, I didn’t see the linky for this week the main Mr linky page, was it just me? Had to do the ole click refresh, repeat, and link. haha
I had the same problem, Anthony. Confused me a bit.
i put it in just a few minutes before the post went online… maybe that was the reason
ooh, ok. Thanks! I thought it was my browser for sec…
Sorry, sorry, had a thunderstorm incident last night, plus family crisis – ironic, really, given the prompt… and had trouble getting a linky in time.
How do I add myself to the list without Mr.Linky?
Great prompt….I liked where it took me. 🙂
Or did I miss it? Now that’s ironic.
Oh, no, did you miss it? So sorry! I’d suggest writing it anyway and linking up on Open Link Night or on another occasion. Would love to read what you wrote.
I did post it, Marina.
Linking it up on Open Link Night is a great idea. Thanks! 🙂
Good evening … here we have rain and falling leaves.. it seems like it’s October… am I alone in feeling a little of that depressive mood of darkness?
Rain and falling leaves usually bring me peace of mind… sitting at the table with my back door wide open so I can hear the drops…
Brr.. here it’s way to cold to do that..
After a near drought here in WA state all summer, heat stroke the affair of the day, the shorter darker days, the rain, the trappings of Fall, all are welcome guests for we folk of the North woods, the mountain worshippers & river walkers.
here it’s just cold and dark by now… need something to cheer me up..
rainy day over here as well… and very cool.. i’m wrapped in a warm blanket…
dude turned cold here over the weekend and it is lingering….
We had a spectacular thunderstorm here which went on for ages – we went to bed and it was still raging on. I thought thunderstorms were supposed to be over rather quickly?
I like this, our worlds a bit like it was before Galileo – we the center of the universe, and a poem to look deep to the corners of known space
sometimes the details are up there staring in our face.. maybe we see the end of the world one day and miss that giant supernova tying our shoelaces..
But that’s just it – we think we are the centre of our universe, but there is so much happening in all of the other centres… which are on the outskirts of our mind.
A master stroke for a Poetics prompt, Marina; one that I have not really written to in the past. Sitting & considering how to start, the garbage truck in the alley, the lawn guys loading their trailer, the school marching band tuning up blocks away, a cat fight in the distance, the wind in the maple leaves next door, & my newspaper hitting the porch all spoke at once; & my poem began to take several shapes.
and you gave us three pieces in one… 🙂
I really liked your response(s), Glenn, and thank you for liking my prompt!
that is a very interesting painting – and a very interesting prompt as well… lots of things going on around us…and probably we sometimes put the focus on the wrong things and miss what is really important…
I think as poets we are more observant than most.. but maybe we look too closely sometimes and miss the big picture instead.. a tricky thing,
Missing the forest for the trees, right? But also perhaps learning to appreciate the beauty of a single tree rather than just the ‘forest’ as such….
or miss the forest for the trees…
And yet, as poets, we do process more of the emotion, the events, the truth within that part of the world that we inhabit, that touches us; so we are the harbingers, the message carriers, the romantics, the skeptics, the observers & whistle blowers; a pack I am proud to run with, a passionate pride I am ecstatic to roar with.
In the writing course I’m going to.. one of the participants said that she had started to observe more keenly now.. and there is a lot of truth in that.. a little bit as when you have a camera around your neck.. you look for those images all the time…
Sorry, guys, couldn’t find Mr. Linky amidst a big thunderstorm – kids and cat quite frightened etc. etc. All up and running now, will be visiting shortly to the sound of rain…
rain over here as well.. no thunderstorm though…
I was unfamiliar with that painting… but I really like the artist’s de-emphasis of the main theme.
it’s cool – and confusing first – i read the title and then needed quite a bit to find him
It’s like “find Waldo” almost… 🙂
interesting pic…I just now saw Icarus….
I like it when artists slip those things in…tells a side story…
had fun with this marina…I like to be a notice of the side things
the things that often go unnoticed…
and people too…smiles.
And sometimes we choose to look the other direction too..
Yes, I noticed this in your poetry, Brian, thought this might be right up your street…
I need to get to bed now.. 🙂
Sorry I’m late to the bar … been at a real life poetry meeting …. will get round as much as I can tonight and tomorrow. Also able to give dVerse a big plug in an interview which you can catch here if you’re intrested 🙂 http://magpiebridge.blogspot.co.uk/
Oh, thank you very much for the mention and hope you enjoyed your evening. Look forward to seeing you around.
Great prompt Marina. I can see how that painting insired you for the prompt. It’s wonderful. Thanks for hosting tonight.
Thank you for your kind words and for taking part, Myrna!
Yes, the painting is a great example of a political or other statement for others to figure out or read betweenn the lines….I wish I had something more profound to write, but alas it’s all I could think of this cloudy, ‘need wind to clear the air day’…kind of muggy and we will get rain. Thanks for the prompt, Marina!
Hi Marina, thank you for a great prompt, little doors we missed to knock in life. I love the picture.
hey you….smiles….
bottom right corner…
I love the painting and Auden’s poem, Marina. I went in a somewhat different direction– but hope okay. Thanks for the very interesting prompt. k.
Any way is OK – just wanted to get you thinking, but the end product may be very different indeed!
Cool prompt.. and inspiring enough.. for me to respond after the prompt.. for my second effort @dVerse here.. i let it sink.. in.. dancing.. and then the ideas come!… like a torrent of water.. but under 400 words.. and only 50 photos..;)2!
What i wrITE earlier today.. almost blOWS MY mind.. yah.. THAT’S only for the NOT faint of heart!..:) but this one.. IS only light hearted.. a nice way to GO! TOO! 🙂
Ooh, a short effort then from you! 😉 Look forward to reading it.
Did you find it in the end? Very easy to miss – which I think was the point the painter was trying to make.
Seeing sideways, the gift of the witch, the shaman and the psychic.
And the poet, I would argue…
Wow, cool prompt! What I wrote was unexpected and confusing, but I like it. Thanks Marina!
~heidi
I love the prompt and the painting. The poetry of the untold, or the almost forgotten.
Wonderful prompt, Marina.
Mine is up at: http://purplepeninportland.wordpress.com/2014/10/11/sounds-of-summer-evenings/