Hi everyone ! In my part of the world, it is winter and the temperatures are falling below 0 C. We are all bundled up in our boots, jackets, scarves and gloves as we dash along salted and muddy streets. I haven’t done my Christmas shopping yet, but my chef son has promised to help me with Christmas meal preparation which is really a big help to me. He has been baking lately – lots of apple and pear pies, corn bread and banana cake. The smell in the kitchen gave me an idea for our last poetics for 2014, and that is bread.
Rustic Bread in Iron Skillet by Canela Kitchen
Here are two poems for your muse:
Bread
Each night, in a space he’d make
between waking and purpose,
my grandfather donned his one
suit, in our still dark house, and drove
through Brooklyn’s deserted streets
following trolley tracks to the bakery.
There he’d change into white
linen work clothes and cap,
and in the absence of women,
his hands were both loving, well
into dawn and throughout the day—
kneading, rolling out, shaping
each astonishing moment
of yeasty predictability
in that windowless world lit
by slightly swaying naked bulbs,
where the shadows staggered, woozy
with the aromatic warmth of the work.
Then, the suit and drive, again.
At our table, graced by a loaf
that steamed when we sliced it,
softened the butter and leavened
the very air we’d breathe,
he’d count us blessed.
Poem copyright ©2012 by Richard Levine from his most recent book of poems, A Tide of a Hundred Mountains, Bright Hill Press, 2012. Reprinted by permission of Richard Levine and the publisher.
Bread
for Wendell Berry
Each face in the street is a slice of bread
wandering on
searching
somewhere in the light the true hunger
appears to be passing them by
they clutch
have they forgotten the pale caves
they dreamed of hiding in
their own caves
full of the waiting of their footprints
hung with the hollow marks of their groping
full of their sleep and their hiding
have they forgotten the ragged tunnels
they dreamed of following in out of the light
to hear step after step
the heart of bread
to be sustained by its dark breath
and emerge
to find themselves alone
before a wheat field
raising its radiance to the moon
W. S. Merwin, “Bread” from The Second Four Books of Poems (Port Townsend, Washington: Copper Canyon Press, 1993). Copyright © 1993 by W. S. Merwin. Reprinted with the permission of The Wylie Agency, Inc.
Source: The Second Four Books of Poems (Copper Canyon Press, 1993)
Our challenge is to write about bread, either as a subject (making or sharing the bread or the lack of bread) or as a metaphor (peace, forgiveness, love, etc). And if I don’t see you around for OpenLinkNight this Saturday before we take our break, I wish you and your family, Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays !!!!
Welcome to our last poetics for 2014~ I am still in the office but will be around to read your poems ~ Let’s break bread together, smiles ~
i love fresh baked break – used to bake a lot when the kids were small – and nothing better than baking break on a rainy day…. it is nurturing…. and meaningful… and def. worth of exploring it in all its shades and metaphors as well… happy tuesday…
Fresh baked bread is the best ~ Good to see you Claudia ~ And Happy Tuesday as well ~
have a great Christmas and holiday as well.
You too Bill ~ We still have MTB on Thursday and OLN this Saturday before we go for hiatus ~
thinking of bread makes me want to stop working and loaf.
I am with you, smiles ~
never pass up the opportunity for a good bun, I mean pun.
i can appreciate a good bun…I mean pun 🙂
I agree, let humor flour.
there is more than yeast rising here…
everyone kneads a bit of humor…
🙂
you have me rolling over here….
🙂
Very powerful prompt. Bread has so many important metaphoric implications. Thank you, Grace.
I agree ~ Good to see you Victoria ~
Grace, I love the prompt! I also haven’t done my Christmas shopping…thank you for sharing that tidbit! lol. Smiles and enjoy all of the season to the full!
Hopefully I can complete my shopping this weekend ~ I hope you are well Dawn ~
Oh, me too…me too!
nice…I love the smell of fresh baked bread…it is so comforting…and makes me think of home….tagged yours with claudias from last week….
Yes I noticed — so well don…
I know that smell of comfort specially winter season ~ Good to see you Brian ~
What a basic and wonderful prompt thought, Grace. It has universal identity and appeal, yet can be individually interpreted in a universe of ways. Wrote a poem to it, but not sure if I’ll link tonight. Have a great evening!
I like the universal appeal of bread myself Joe ~ Be over in a bit ~
Man Can’t Live By Bread Alone … Or Can He?
By Madeleine Begun Kane
Here’s some bread for some bread at the store.
Bring back change or you’re toast, cause we’re poor.
Get me wheat bread or white,
And I’ll toast it quite light.
But this dough ain’t for anything more.
Once a girl in Rome was eating some bread
being hungry she was eagerly fed
but bread was too stale
and she didn’t get ale
bread stuck in her throat until she was dead
Fun limerick, Bjorn!
Nice limericks Madeleine and Bjorn ~
Thanks!
I loved the bread prompt.. so much you can do with it.. I have read through all and am ready to go to bed.. but I think I’m too hungry to sleep properly 🙂
Yes, so many ways to write about it ~ Sleep well Bjorn & see you tomorrow ~ I am just making my rounds now ~
Hi Grace, Bread is an amazing prompt really. There are so many different facets that poets can explore. I really am enjoying what people have written so far.
I also like that different cultures have different types of bread ~ Makes me appreciate the versatility of “bread” ~ Good to see you Mary ~
Grace, this is a wonderful prompt. I have read a number of poems and they are amazing. Bread seems to evoke warm and strong thoughts in all of us.
I agree Gabriella ~ Your bread picture made me hungry, smiles ~
All this bread talk is making me very hungry ~ I will take dinner in a bit but wanted to let you guys know that I am really enjoying your responses ~
Good Evening Dear Poets,
An interesting prompt tonight. I am looking forward to joining you for bread..
Good to see you Truedessa, smiles ~
would love to break break bread tru..
I am turning in for the night and will check back tomorrow ~ Thanks to all ~
have a good evening grace….smiles.
I hope to read everyone’s poem by tomorrow evening…catching up on rest tonight and Christmas cards going out in the morning…and thank you, Grace, as always for your gentle prompt.
Lovely to see you Kathy ~
good morning…made me round and already hungry again because of all the bread in your poems… smiles… really enjoyed the read…will drop in after work again to catch up… have a wonderful day everyone!!
Good morning ~ Making my rounds too and will be checking in throughout the day ~
Sorry, I disappeared rather quickly last night after posting my poem – it was late for me. But what a great prompt, linked to so many cultural traditions, to this time of year (where some kind of sweet bread/brioche is being baked in so many countries). Will be around to read all.
That’s what I missed most being away from my native land, the smell of the native bread and sweet rice cakes at this time of the year ~ Good to see you Marina ~
Happy Holidays to all, and thank you, Grace, for such a lovely post. That poem by Richard Levine brought tears it was so wonderful. A real keeper for my Christmas box.
Happy Holidays to you too Lydia ~ Thanks for dropping by, smiles ~
I’m glad I didn’t see this before I made spaghetti last night- all I had was saltine crackers to go with it, and I might have had to make a trip to the store for some of the good stuff. Great prompt, Grace.
I hope all of my poetic friends here have a wonderful holiday season, and don’t eat too much of anything… unless it’s bread, the food of the Gods. : )
smiles… i love spaghetti as well… hmmmmmm
O. Grace! I do not know if I will be able to write to this prompt this year, but it is perfect! the two poems took me for a walk through wonderful memories and forgotten thoughts You nd your poems and this sight are bread to me–nurture and sustanence and Light. Happy Holidays!
O. Grace! I do not know if I will be able to write to this prompt this year, but it is perfect! the two poems took me for a walk through wonderful memories and forgotten thoughts You and your poems and this site are bread to me–nurture and sustanence and Light. Happy Holidays!
happy holidays to you as well susan… on saturday we’ll be celebrating our last OLN for this year – maybe you can link the poem there if you don’t manage to get it in here before the doors close…
Happy holidays to you too Susan ~ Thanks for dropping by ~
good morning! had an early meeting, so just getting back in…thanks to those reading….will be catching up with you in the next little bit…
janu,
will visit you from home tonight…I cant get to your site because “terrorist” catches in the filter here at school….Ironically, I can not get to my own site because I used “butt” in the title…ha.
hmmm… cannot get on the site either – even without filter… it loads forever…
happy holidays to all the poets …let there be peace inside and outside …
Grace thank you for the prompt…
Happy Holidays to you too ~ Love, light and peace to all ~
Grace, I came about 22hrs late to the party, but hey! smiles… just got done playing catch-up and wow, thank you for this prompt. I never really thought about the profoundness of bread and how important it’s roll is in people’s lives… You left us with a very eye-opening poetics. At least for me it was… 🙂
I see you around the poetry trail, so its fine 🙂
I am so happy that this prompt connected with you and others in a meaningful way too ~
Hi Grace – the post came up past my bed time, so couldn’t come here last night. I am in a spending my first winter in a city in India, where I have never been before – it’s not very cold, rather very enjoyable.
Wrote something in few weeks for your prompt…take care..
I am envious of your weather, smiles ~ Enjoy your holidays Abhra ~
My dear poets: I just managed to write a poem that uses bread as an ingredient. It is rather late, so I will make the rounds tomorrow. Thanks for the patience! Good night!
Will check it out in a bit ~ Good to see you Adriana ~
Flying in at the last minute..with flour on my face…this one could not be missed. Beautiful prompt, Grace. 🙂 Sorry for my late arrival.
Smiles, lovely to see you here ~ I am checking in now for the late entries ~ Good morning ~
Grace–a lovely prompt, following the lovely James Wright one. I have done a bread poem–almost done, and will post belatedly. (Mine is rather silly.) k.
I love bread 🙂
Alas! The link has expired!
Here’s my post for the lovely prompt 🙂
http://www.anitaexplorer.com/2014/12/bread.html