EVERYDAY POETRY
Poetry over the ages has dealt with a variety of topics and subject matters. The poet praises his country and its specificity, marvels at the beauty of Nature or of a monument, mourns the loss of a leader or a friend.
But the poet is also the one who sees beauty in the little things around her. This is the kind of poetry Mary Oliver or Marge Piercy writes.
Mindful
by Mary Oliver
Everyday
I see or hear
something
that more or less
kills me
with delight,
that leaves me
like a needle
in the haystack
of light.
It was what I was born for —
to look, to listen,
to lose myself
inside this soft world —
to instruct myself
over and over
(…)
It ain’t heavy, it’s my purse
by Marge Piercy
We have marsupial instincts, women
who lug purses as big as garbage igloos,
women who hang leather hippos from their shoulders;
(…)
So the idea today is to think of something that is part of your everyday life – the first cup of coffee in the morning, the emails in your inbox, your bus ride, the daily walk with your dog, what you see from your kitchen window, the latest pizza you ate, the possibilities are endless – and weave it into a poem that makes us see what is unique for you about your routine. Make us part of your everyday matters, share a moment or two with us today at dVerse.
What to do after you have written:
• Post your poem to your blog
• Add a link to your poem via the ‘Mr Linky’ below
• Read and comment on other people’s work to let them know it’s being read
• Share via your favorite social media platforms
• Above all- have fun!
Gabriella said:
Good afternoon, Poets! The bar is now open. Looking forward to reading your everyday poetry!
Mary said:
I enjoy reading poems about the ‘everyday.’ I think oftentimes these are poems that many can identify with in one way or another.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I agree.. and it’s also relaxing in a way to try to gain experiences from others…
Mary said:
Yes, it is. And it feels good sometime to do some ‘relaxing’ with one’s poetry. Everyday poetry seems low key, less struggle, not so complex. It felt good to write everyday poetry this week!
X said:
Considering that most of what I write I would consider every day poetry, that was relatively easy. Its like journal poetry, capturing little moments of the day.
Gabriella said:
So true; and I think writing about those every day experiences often produces interesting poetry, such as those I gave in the examples about. And yes, X, it definitely is often journal poetry, poetry we can look back at later and see what made up the substance of our life at that time.
X said:
I have journals dating back 15 years. I like to pull them out occasionally for just that reason. To see where I have come from and to measure the path I have travelled.
Mary said:
What a wonderful memoir you could write someday! Smiles. And, of course, what a great source for poetry you have in the meantime.
Gabriella said:
I try to do that with sketching but it is hard to sketch something every day. Maybe writing would be easier.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I love to play with fantasy.. but it was still quite easy.. just thinking about I start my day.
X said:
Reality has its own kind of magic, it is just a bit hidden. Check the shadows and the seems, perhaps the edges of the painting to see what is underneath. There is plenty of things out there we have not figured out yet, but often over look.
Mary said:
Ha, this sounds like Claudia’s poem for today. Smiles.
X said:
A slight nod to a friend.
claudia said:
smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ah.. I thought so much about my morning here.. I find mornings are usually so much more habits.. so if you want to do something everyday I had to do a morning poem..
Gabriella said:
I think you are right. Our morning routines are often pretty fixed in what we do everyday. Your poem was a great example of that!
billgncs said:
the richness of life is made of the everyday things – certainly they are worth celebrating – or at least noticing…
Gabriella said:
Yes, both celebrating and noticing, I think. So often we struggle (I think) to find a subject for our poetry; but if we just look around our lives there is much inspiration in our everyday routines.
billgncs said:
yes, a good point
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Maybe also see the uniqueness in what might even see as mundane.. by putting it in words we see it in new lights.
billgncs said:
I came, I saw, I left a note…
Mary said:
Yes, I think that if ever one struggles with a topic to write about this topic can be utilized….taking a look at the everyday in a new light! I like the way you have expressed that.
billgncs said:
Einstein looked at existing things in a new way… we often are locked in our ways…
kanzensakura said:
Every day is amazing to me. I am a cancer survivor so even the tiny things are full of wonder. I know I myself get to thinking of things so…grandiose, I sometimes forget that brief bit of birdsong, or the first opening of the bloom on my tomato(s) are miraculous. When I realize that, I have to back up and reassess. I think this is a wonderful Prompt and hopefully, we can all share some of our everyday amazing with each other.
Gabriella said:
I understand, Toni. I think once a person has gone through a serious health scare one does really get to appreciate things that are everyday and ordinary. I think during a health crisis it is the simple joys that one thinks about most of all at those times, rather than the ‘grandiose.’ Glad you liked the prompt!
kanzensakura said:
The prompt is wonderful!
Mary said:
I agree. I definitely resonate with this prompt. And I enjoyed your haiku. Smiles.
Mary said:
Ah yes, there is definitely beauty in the birdsong and the opening of the first bloom. Ha, I wrote about grass and tomato plants today. Smiles. Can’t get more everyday than that.
kanzensakura said:
And except for okra blooms, you can’t find a prettier bloom than the tomato bloom!
Mary said:
Ha, I have never seen the okra bloom…..they don’t grow here. Sigh.
kanzensakura said:
They look like a yellow hibiscus bloom. I think they may be distantly related.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think it’s actually very important to see what’s unique and special in each day.. maybe even the ugly or gritty.. there is a uniqueness that we sometimes need to celebrate with our words.
kanzensakura said:
It is indeed. The pretty and gritty all make up everyday.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
I’m with you–having survived kidney failure/dialysis (thanks to my former co-worker and friend Paula’s kidney). Everything seems to come into sharper focus.
kanzensakura said:
It does. My husband says whenever I look at a tree, I see every individual leaf.
claudia said:
good evening… i LOVE everyday poetry…smiles
watching “fack ju göhte” – teacher film – scary – ha – and funny – will start my rounds in a bit…
Gabriella said:
Good to see you, Claudia!
claudia said:
good to be here… smiles
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ah… some night watching films is the best thing.. you are a master of everyday poetry.
claudia said:
the film was really good… funny… exaggerated but with a good message
Gabriella said:
Yes, I have always liked how Claudia can see the poetic in her everyday life and inject a little bit of magical surprise in her poems.
claudia said:
alright – bedtime – will check back in tomorrow morning…
Gabriella said:
Good night, Claudia!
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Vagrant Rhodia said:
Ran across today’s prompt and couldn’t resist 😀
Gabriella said:
I am glad it inspired you.
Mary said:
Ha, and if you visit my link I will visit yours. I have visited yours a few times with no response, so I will wait this time.
Vagrant Rhodia said:
I apologize, Mary
Mary said:
That’s ok. I see you just commented. Smiles. And now I recollect that you have commented before. It is pretty confusing though because you link as Bohemian Nerd and comment here as Vagrant Rhodia and in my blog I see Rose Kettering. Perhaps it would be easier if you chose one name to use. (At least it would be easier for me. LOL.)
DELL CLOVER said:
Hi Gabriella! I’ll tackle this one later–it requires a wide-awake ponder!
Gabriella said:
I look forward to reading it when you post.
DELL CLOVER said:
You’re so kind and welcoming!
Myrna said:
Good prompt Gabriella. I enjoyed writing to it. Thanks for coming up with such good ideas.
Gabriella said:
Thank you, Myrna. I enjoyed your poem.
katiemiafrederick said:
Ah.. i love treasuring the small things in life.. particularly through the art of photography and words in many ways..
And my favorite things to treasure that are small..
are all the so-called imperfections in life..
from the strangest weed.. to
chipped off paint..
but only with 6 photos and 570
words for today.. a slow and
rainy one
for me..:)
Must escape the home for
a while and the face
of computer screens..
be back later to read
and comment on all..
This is a great prompt
and I am looking forward
to that the most..:)
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Delaina Miller (@DelainaMiller) said:
Whew, it is has been too long since I have hung out with you fine poets at the pub.
I know time flies when we are having fun but does it have to feel like warp speed? Seriously I have missed you all and it is nice to be here and reading all of your fine poetry about the important things in life. the everyday things.
Thank you for hosting Gabriella!
Gabriella said:
I am glad you have come back, Delaina. It is always nice to see fine poets here at dVerse. Thanks for writing to the prompt.
Delaina Miller (@DelainaMiller) said:
Oh what a nice thing to say and a great place to be. Thank you Gabriella!
Truedessa said:
I captured a moment from my day this weekend, but I am always looking for the beauty in nature..it is the little things we find each day that make the day special.
Gabriella said:
You certainly captured a magic moment, Truedessa.
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el34ax7 said:
Once again, an older poem since my fickle muse has taken a leave. When reading through other submissions I found a popular affinity for two things: gardens and coffee. I chose the latter to submit as it’s one of the few things that gets me up in the morning.
As for the other poems, I found many of them to be simple, passion-filled works of delight. From the gardens to beverages (red wine was a delight) to recollections, I was delighted to get to experience the everyday of others.
Gabriella said:
I agree that people have written and posted ‘passion-filled works of delight.’
claudia said:
good morning… cup of coffee and out on the trail to read…
Mary said:
I am joining you (a few hours later) on that trail, Claudia. Hope you have / are having a good day.
X said:
After number 15 you might as well be pissing in the wind.
Gabriella said:
LOL, X! I think OLN last week was far worse.
X said:
Not as bad as it was last week — well, that is progress, i guess.
Glenn Buttkus said:
Gardening & morning routines rule the numbers out on the trail. It is pretty awesome to see, to try & understand the way we each launch a new day; less focus on the exhaustion of our evening routines; less dynamic or dramatic perhaps. I wrote about my incessant duel with raccoons at 5 am near my office; interesting that Sabio used to raise them & has a whole different perspective on the critters. It never ceases to amaze me that our group of poets just launch in so many significant directions following up on a prompt. It took me awhile to find the hook for my piece, but for me, I just have to “get started” sometimes, & let the poem begin to take shape, let the poetics pour out as it gathers intensity.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Guess I’ve joined the garden crew–but it is that time of the year!
Gabriella said:
We all love gardens and some of us enjoy gardening!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Just passing by and preparing for tomorrow as well 🙂 A great prompt here.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Isn’t the best poetry/prose infused with tidbits from our daily lives? Thanks for the meaningful prompt–one that just flows. I wrote about my garden which has been demanding a lot of my love and attention lately.
Gabriella said:
I am glad you could join in, Victoria!
http://vivinfrance.wordpress.com said:
Somehow I missed this so-tempting prompt until Victoria’s lovely gardening poem popped into my inbox. I pondered and started to write. What started out as a tanka turned into an epic, and isn’t finished yet, so I’ll tinker and shrink it and keep it for OLN.
gailatthefarm said:
…a day late and a dollar short…
http://gailatthefarm.blogspot.com/2015/05/a-childs-wordseveryday-poetry.html
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