Tags
Carl Sandburg, Celebrations of Light, Japanese Poetry, Kanzensakura, Milky Way, Robert Frost, Stars, Ursid Meteor Shower
Photo: Ursid Meteor Showers, Public Domain
Hi. Toni here as your Pubtender for Poetics today. Welcome to you all. This is the last poetics until after the New Year while the Poets Pubtenders will be on break. Bjorn will be here Thursday for a special and surprise Meeting the Bar segment with a co-authored, unique prompt I know many of you writers of free verse will enjoy. And as a special treat for some of our Pubtenders, my special holiday cranberry tea with clove studded slices of orange for your enjoyment.
Since the beginning of time when humans looked up into the night sky and beheld the stars, we have been held in thrall to their beauty and their mystery. All cultures have stories about their creation, the various constellations formed by star groups, have used them to navigate and lead them on their journeys. the Mayans thought the Milky Way was the road they followed to the underworld. The Japanese call it, Amanogawa – River of Heaven or the Celestial Rivers. I have to say it is one of my favorite kigo for writing haiku. As an insomniac, I am best friends with stars of all the seasons, frequently walking in the night or sitting on my back steps looking up at them for most of the night, until dawn comes.
Milky Way: Public Domain Photo
Stars also hold much of romance. So many tales and poems written of love found under the stars by mortals, stories of denied lovers who were taken to the heavens to be together or sometimes, separate, for eternity. “Falling” stars (falling meteors entering the earth’s atmosphere) have inspired wishes and when there are showers of them, unabated awe. This time of year, the Ursids will be in full force from December 15 through Winter Solstice, Christmas, and the New Year. Areas with a high level of light pollution miss out on these celestial fireworks.
Today, since it is the winter season and many cultures embrace the celebration of Light in various forms and giving of special gifts to family and friends, I would like you all to write a poem about stars. Consider this your gift to the poetic world and to the world in general. As this is a gift, I ask you to make your poems as full of light as you can – it has been such dark times for us, I would like us to give the beauty, mystery and hope of the stars to the world in general – to write of positivity, joy, love; no politics or cynicism. Write of making wishes on stars as a child or an adult, of viewing a meteor shower, of being in love and making love under the stars, of their mystery. Or make up a story poem about the stars, a constellation, or a personal experience about stars.
Here are some excerpts from examples for you to help you craft your star light poem:
Stars by Robert Frost
How countlessly they congregate
O’er our tumultuous snow,
Which flows in shapes as tall as trees
When wintry winds do blow!–
As if with keeness for our fate,
Our faltering few steps on
To white rest, and a place of rest
Invisible at dawn,–
And yet with neither love nor hate,
Those starts like some snow-white
Minerva’s snow-white marble eyes
Without the gift of sight.
Summer Stars by Carl Sandburg
BEND low again, night of summer stars.
So near you are, sky of summer stars,
So near, a long arm man can pick off stars,
Pick off what he wants in the sky bowl,
So near you are, summer stars,
So near, strumming, strumming,
So lazy and hum-strumming.
And two haiku I wrote decades ago and a newer one:
spring stars twinkle far
above a solemn moon – laughter
as cherry trees bloom
amanogawa
shines in the darkness – light flows
around star islands.
- Write your poem and post it to your blog or website. Link your poem back to dVerse.
- Copy the url of your poem and click on the Mister Linky below and paste it into the space provided along with your name.
- After linking up, leave a comment below. We would love to get to know everyone better and we welcome discussions and questions.
- Visit and leave comments for the other poets who have linked a poem and especially to those who have visited you.
- Enjoy and share with others our wonderful community.
Toni, thank you for the perfect prompt for this wonderful season…and it is Toni’s prompt (Kanzen Sakura)–I just did the posting part for her sick computer. :0) Looking forward to a starry, starry night.
Thank you Victoria for helping my sick computer!!!
A friend lent me her laptop for this afternoon. Thank you Arabella!
Smiles.That’s what friends are for.
What a good friend!!
Yes she is. the poor puter is slow as molasses in January but it works!
Ahhh.
Well, better than nothing. Smiles!
You got that right. The thing kicked me off the internet several times and I had to keep logging in. But I will not tell my friend. I’ll just let her know how truly thankful I am. I hope when I get my new tablet later in the week, that will help.
I love the molasses simile!
Hello Everyone! Toni here. Welcome to the last Poetics of the year! come and sit down – I have a pitcher of special Hemingway daiguiris and a pitcher of natural cranberry juice mixed with sparkling white grape juice. come on up and grab something good!
I’ll take something hot, please. 18 degrees F here this morning.
Brrrr. I have hot natural cranberry juice with slices of orange studded with cloves. Will a mug of that do you!
Some mulled wine for me please
I got glogg! Your recipe!
That’ll do it.
Stars! I love the stars up in the sky. Anytme of year. Starlight, star bright, first star I see tonight. Wish I may, wish I might have the wish I wish tonight. I wish you all a happy healthy inspirational rest of the year and more in the new!
I love this festive time and so since it is the last Poetics of 2015, in addition to the special drinks, I have laid out some salmon tartare, a meat and cheese tray, Japanese pickled veggies, and my special Japanese green tea cotton cheese cake. come on – eat, drink, be festive!!!!
Oh that cheese cake sounds delicious! Yummmm!
It is wonderful – melts on your mouth and is not overly sweet – light and fluffy.
I have to say that blue cheese on gingerbread is so great 😉
Never tried that. I do like cream cheese. I must try the blue on the gingerbread. Lessa brought me some amazing soft dark ginger cookies and some beautiful star shaped thin short bread cookies with almonds and an almond glaze. The ginger cookies would be great with the cheese.
Would love to have some and I will definitely check the recipe for that ginger cookies Toni ~
My neighbors are Swedish! I’ve enjoyed getting to know them after them living next door several years and being so quiet. Last year, they started being less restrained and it has been a nice cultural exchange. I imagine if you looked up Swedish ginger cookie recipes, you could find it. I’m looking for the almond shortbread myself. To.die.for.
What a wonderful prompt for this season, Toni! I love this festive time too, and I really think that stars are especially meaningful at this time of year!
They are. They play such a role in the story of Christmas for those of us who celebrate Christmas.
This year, there will be a full moon for Dec. 24. It is after the winter solstice but it will still be bright for that celebration!
Very cloudy here that I didn’t see the Gemind meteor shower ~ Looking forward to that full moon next week ~
Wonderful prompt Toni… Though I rarely see them I know they are there… A little late as I’ve been having Glögg with friends.
And now having more! Oh what fun. It is always good to see you. You might like the salmon tartare – smoked and fresh salmon diced with fresh dill, capers, minced shallots, lime juice “cooked” in the lime juice for at least 2 hours. Wonderful on rye bread points. and good with Glogg!!
Sounds perfect 🙂 dill and salmon is a perfect marriage
Yes it is. I had my Swedish neighbors over this past weekend. I sent the leftovers home with them. I was pleased because they enjoyed it so very much.
and totally Swedish-delish.
🙂
Oh, yum. Love lox and bagels myself.
I am not much of a fan of salmon and certainly not any fish tartare. But this is sooo good. The lime juice cooks the two salmons and with the minced shallot, dill, and capers, it is wonderful spread on rye toast points. Ever since my cancer, I’ve been almost not wanting any kind of seafood but for some reason, I found this recipe and it hit me. I can’t eat much of it but it is very good. I can almost see some on cream cheese on any kind of bread vehicle. I also found a really good brand of unsweetened cranberry juice I mix with natural sparkling white juice – pretty and festive and tickles my nose. Good with any kind of nosh.
So far, the linked poems are beyond amazing. Thank you all. I am looking forward to more reading from our friends!
Thank you Toni for the lovely (and very seasonal) prompt, and thank you Victoria for making sure it appeared online. I’ve managed to come up with something this time, for which I am very proud (the timeliness, I mean, not the quality of the poem).
Thank you! It is good to have these friends who help us out. And it is good to have friends who write wonders to share with us.
Bravo!
As usual, I replied in the wrong area….Bravo!
But, Marina, the quality is stellar.
Our Victoria lives in the desert area. I think back to years ago, in the Mojave, I was able to go with friends to observe the Leonid Meteor Showers. spectacular. Those of you who are not able to “dark” areas miss out on the stars. We’ll just have to do our best to bring them to you.
Though as the population grows, it’s not quite the same as it was years ago. For the moment, cloud cover is still the issue.
It is quiet now so I am going to skip away for a bit to do dinner stuff. You all make free with the drinks and food and share lots and lots of words!!!! I’ll be back in a bit. 🙂
Take your time ~ I am now hitting the poetry trail ~
Is it a coincidence that the prompt open the day before the world premiere of the next star-wars movie?
I had to write a little fun piece before going to bed… some sci-fi from going through the stars…
Neat-o! Have a good night’s rest. The stars will be there because they can see you.
I must say, the old Geek did think about it when coming up with the prompt! 🙂
Love this prompt! Got mine written and posted. I’ll be back later to read all the great star-gazing poetry (and catch up on last week’s OLN). Peace, Linda
Excellent Linda. Thank you!
Hey everyone,
Awwww… I m gonna miss you all so much over the holidays 🙂 hope you guys like my poem “Beneath the silver stars.”
Lots of love,
Sanaa
We will be back first week of January 🙂 Checking out the linked poems now 🙂
Will be waiting 😀
Thank you Sanaa. One way to keep from missing us is to follow the various blogs if you don’t already. The pub may be closed but us Poets are always “on the job”.
Will do 🙂
Carl Sandburg was a nice treat today, thank you. Gingerbread sounds really good.
Wonderful topic! The stars have always been meaningful to me. Thank you to all the hosts of dVerse Poets… Wishing everyone a beautiful winter season!
And to you as well as you prepare for your special season in February. I’ve been a star lover since I was a kid. Just incredibly miraculous.
Wonderful prompt. My first time joining this group….I’m certain I shall enjoy it!
Holiday hiatus — I’ll still be posting on my blog but will look forward to being with you all again in January!
Welcome to you! thank you for joining us. If you are interested, we have a feature, Haibun Monday plus all the other prompts and every other Thursday for Open Link Night. I hope you would like to come back to the page and catch up with us through the archives. There have been some interesting and thought provoking prompts, not to mention all the pub talks. Have a good holiday and don’t be a stranger!
Will definitely take the time to meander the site tomorrow! Thanks for the warm welcome .
🙂
Welcome to D’verse Lillian ~ You can check out our D’Schedule on top, and other stuff ~ Looking forward to reading more of your work ~
I couldn’t resist – I had to link another, a haibun about stars and KFC in Japan!
I had to check it out.. there were some great videos on youtube… I think Turkey is difficult to get in Sweden too… here it’s ham for Christmas.
Google also has hundreds of images. Colonel Sanders is a cult figure in Japan since mid ’70s. Always a life size figure in every restaurant decorated for every season. I even saw on with an inverted KFC bucket on his head with plastic reindeer horns extending from the bucket, ala Samurai. It is fun. We do ham as well for Christmas along with turkey. I myself like fixing fried chicken. We always had all three on our Christmas table. Since we always had guests (family and people alone for the holiday) the food was never extravagant in amount. We always sent leftovers home with guests. 3 meats, at least 10 different side dishes along with salads and desserts. Folks in the South do a major throw down for Christmas! My grandmother would make 5 dozen beautiful flaky buttermilk biscuits (like scones not cookies) and they always got gone.
I’m linking very late and will have to catch up on more visiting tomorrow. Thank you for the inspirational prompt, Toni, that got us out of the funk of darkness that some of us had been writing about lately.
I decided for a series of haiku for my offering.
Gayle ~
Greetings to all you Dverse poets and thank you so much for inspiring me to write more poetry.
Hello all fellow stargazers! This prompt made me happy just contemplating what I’d write! Thanks Toni and Victoria, off to read!
The beauty of being a day late (and a buck-fifty short) is that there is a gorgeous starspill of words waiting. Goodness. I have been around to all who wrote before me, and I’m awash in wishes and light. Thank you.
Toni, this is a perfect prompt for the season. Thank you!
Cheers and falling stars to all. Merry Christmas!
A Merry Christmas back to you De… I really enjoyed the prompt today… both writing and reading.. 🙂
Love the prompt today and will be back to participate…in the process of having some medical tests done. Thank you, Toni.
Oh I hope all is well with you Kathy.. loved your work..
…a deep vein thrombosis needing attention…I am fine, Bjorn, thank you. Now on to more reading.
Some seriously good stuff today… a wonderful day.. 🙂
I enjoyed everyone’s offerings. A most upbeat and inspiring prompt. Thank you, Toni, I think we needed this badly!