The Red Wheelbarrow
so much depends
upon
a red wheel
barrow
glazed with rain
water
beside the white
chickens.
William Carlos Williams
In the early 1900’s the movement called Imagism made itself known in England and the United States. Many names that we recognize embraced it to varying degrees: Ezra Pound, Hilda Doolittle (H.D.), Richard Aldington, William Carlos Williams and Amy Lowell, to name a few.
Imagists sought to represent “things” in clear, precise language—in the words of Ezra Pound, “luminous details.” Notice in the oft-quoted poem above, by William Carlos Williams that nothing really happens. The words are pure description.
Imagism was influenced in part by Japanese poetry and even Cubism, the art form that sought to reduce an object to its purest essence. It generally employs no metaphors even though the reader may project some underlying meaning into the poem.
While the movement itself was relatively short-lived, its influence extends to subsequent poetry, and even prose. As writers we seek to bring life to our work by including sharp sensory descriptions.
In an article for Poetry Magazine in 1912, Ezra Pound defined the group’s position:
• Direct treatment of the “thing” whether subjective or objective.
• To use absolutely no word that does not contribute to the presentation.
• As regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of the musical phrase, not in sequence of the metronome.
Pound further defined an image: “that which presents an intellectual and emotional complex in an instant of time.”
For today’s prompt, I invite you to share a poem in the style of imagism. If you prefer, the imagist aspect may be part of a larger work.
To participate:
- Write your poem and post it on your blog or website.
- Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this page and add your name and the direct URL to your submission.
- Finally, return and visit other poets and comment on their work. Please make every effort to return visits and comment on those who have taken the time to read and comment on yours.
In conclusion, I’d like to share a few ideas about blog etiquette. It is a gift to be a part of a blogging community. Along with that privilege comes some responsibility. Here are a few thoughts:
• As mentioned above, take the time to return visits and comment on their work.
• Please do not repost the work of another blogger without obtaining their specific permission. If you write to a prompt, be sure to acknowledge the source of the prompt rather than just cutting and pasting the prompt itself.
• Include your active URL when commenting to make it easier for the recipient of the comment to return visits.
Because of problems I’ve been having with Internet connectivity, I’m re-posting a prompt I offered in January, 2012. I checked out Mr. Linky and only a few of you were around back then, so I hope it will be fun for you.
I’ll be around to visit and comment, and look forward to your images.
Victoria might have some problems coming here… so welcome everyone… the bar is open.
You are so good to us 🙂
I think I’ve never spent so long time with so few words as this. Very challenging prompt for me… but I am actually happy with the result.
I loved yours, Bjorn!
I found myself either getting too flowery with language, or settling into Japanese form patterns. I tried to break free from both, and follow WCW’s lead…don’t know if I’ve succeeded. I have written so many poems in response to his; it was a great challenge to try to write one of my own, instead.
I really liked this one by Ezra Pound
In a Station of the Metro
The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.
Yours where so splendid.. I found mind being more H.D. than WCW …
I’m afraid I kept to my Japanese style but then again, haiku and tanka are the earliest forms of imagist poetry, IMHO…smiles
I truly liked yours – like a fine black and white photo by Ansel Adams – clear and precise and full of depth.
Thank you for opening up, Björn. I have limited access on my phone and will do what I can to visit. Hopefully our internet provider will come soon to fix whatever is wrong. This seems to be an ongoing problem. I’m not able to post my own poem as yet. Looking forward to visiting your posts and hope you have fun writing them. Victoria
I understand. I just now received the post in my email. I most have the s-l-o-w-e-s-t internet in the world. others must have the fastest…..I like this form muchly. One of my favorites is Plum. I’ve had that one posted, held by magnets, on my refrigerator for years. I truly like this … less is more and just grabs you and holds you. Instead of a plethora of stuff (which I tend often to be too verbose) there are memorable words that just stay with you and follow you about, giving a new perception to simple things, making them new and amazing and sometimes, heartbreaking.
I’ve been at my daughter’s all day….with the grandchildren so could not mosey up to the bar. Just read the prompt on the train on the way home. For some reason, rotting apples came to mind! Go figure! Just posted and will get to reading everyone tomorrow in AM over my morning cup of joe! Thank you Victoria for your tending here — and for the gentle reminder to folks too.
PEASE don’t forget, others will be posting later so please don’t just read the first few. I have a feeling there will be some amazing poems. Excellnt prompt Victoria! Hugs
Thanks, Toni. It seems we share bad Internet Karma.
Yes — I’m late today……..so hope folks will come back to give a read. Sharing is best 🙂 I’ll do my reading and commenting in the AM over my coffee — just glad I got mine up tonight!
I never heard if imagism. I am looking forward to learning something from this exercise
I think less is more.. a great way to reduce poetry to just the barebone.. a concentrated cocktail.
I’ve been toying with that on Twitter. It’s been great fun.
A concentrated cocktail — perfect statement for the bar 🙂
I hope you give it a try. It’s a great exercise for prose writers, too.
I hope you will give it a try here – I like what Bjorn said, concentrated cocktail. If you are doing twitter, this will be easy for you!
I totally agree with your etiquette thoughts Victoria. Drop and run is just not very friendly. I often will come back later when more have linked so I can read pretty much all of the posts. Internet, due to the blizzard has been iffy so I am still catching up from Tuesday. And another point to the etiquette, unless the author has stated they want all kinds of criticism, please do not make suggestions how to “better” a poem and to be supportive. That is what I like about this community – the feeling of support that so many talented writers give to new visitors or new poets.
This was a hard prompt for me, and I am not sure that my poem fits it. It is ABOUT images though. Sigh. I have always liked the William Carlos Williams poem. In fact at one time when I was teaching I had children write a poem inspired by that one. They had to begin with the words ‘So much depends upon….’ and I remember I was awed by the poems the 6th graders wrote! Ha, I was tempted to do this myself today, but decided not to. I realize I probably do not have as many IMAGES in the poem……but I tried to write in a short, concise manner….something I like about imagist poetry.
I think this was extremely hard… I really tried to question every single word… even in haiku you want to have a certain flow, but here you have to find it yourself… Love the thought of seeing this as a child…
Yes, it was hard. I think it is much easier to write a wordy poem that goes on than to crystalize one’s thoughts in a concise imagist kind of way. You did very well. Ha, glad I did not read yours (and a few others) first. Smiles.
What a fun exercise for the kids…I bet it was interesting to read their responses. I heard, in a poetry class, that reams have been written trying to analyse what exactly depends on the wheelbarrow. That’s academics, I suppose.
That would be a wonderful prompt – so much depends upon….I liked yours very much and you nailed it.
Sorry I’m late to the party. I had a lot of poems that I think of as Imagist…many I’ve already posted. I found these three on some old drafts, ideas for poems. I think they resonate Carlos Williams, Pound (not as good as Three Faces on the Metro, but then again they were drafts). Not very Wallace Stevens but I am feeling Stevens a lot lately. I read Mary Oliver at the Dr.’s office this a.m. I think she qualifies..she’s good at images that resonate, they’re almost symbols yet on a deeper scale act as metaphors. These aren’t that but they’re something. Enjoy.
Aha, I should have written a Mary Oliver style poem……I didn’t know if she would be considered an imagist or not!
It’s not too late. I can see how she’s adopted many aspects of imagism.
I do’t know either if she is imagist, but she is one fine poet!
I can see how Stevens fits in, too. I was going to try to use him for Mary’s prompt last week.
Love Mary Oliver! So glad Amy Lowell was mentioned in this prompt….she is an oft forgotten poet.
Oh, yeah! Time Warner woke up from its nap for the moment, so my first post is up. Want to do another if I can so I’m burning incense to appease the Internet gods (just teasing).
Hello everyone! Victoria, I’m sorry to hear of your ongoing internet problems, no fun. I wrote three short poems that just seemed to pop into my head. I hope they qualify as imagist/imagism.
Hey Victoria,
I hope I did justice to the prompt.. never written an imagist poem before. Hope you like it 🙂
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Also, I had a question regarding the rhythm of the poem as stated by Ezra Pound in your presentation, Victoria. I don’t quite understand: “As regarding rhythm: to compose in sequence of the musical phrase, not in sequence of the metronome.”
What does that mean exactly?
I’m not Victoria, and she probably can speak to this better and deeper than I can, but I always took that note to mean you write musically the way you would “sing your own song” not in strict meters like iambic tet or iambic pent or in strict anapests etc.
Thanks for this, Gay. Your response helped a lot. I can certainly do that!
That’s how I understood it from looking at the work of the imagists. Thanks, Gay.
Victoria – I put up the wrong link. Will you delete my first one please.
Only if you really want me to. It seems to me it fits well.
I did. But Bjorn beat you to it. Thanks. I didn’t mean to make people read the same thing twice. Besides I may have to torture them further. There’s a second part to it…sob. Coming next OLN.
That’s a great idea, Gay. I will look forward to re-reading it. So beautifully written.
Goodness but I learn so much here. I made an attempt but feel it’s lacking. Yours that I’ve read so far are really good! Thank you, Victoria!
Glad you are here–I’m off to read more now.
Thank you!
ABSOLUTELY ditto the “learn so much here.” Hoping mine qualifies — just posted tonight. Imagist to me, is the nth degree of description….appealing to the senses..right?
🙂 Yes!
Thank you! That’s what makes it such a skill.
I tried, but think I only half-succeeded. Does that mean I just sucked? C’est la guerre! At least, I played!
We all learn something from the prompts. Often, not doing it “right” is still a learning experience. We did sonnets long ago and I wrote mine bass ackwards….go figure! It was gently pointed out to me but also, positive things as well. So I learned – I write sucky sonnets! grin…
My Internet is down again…sorry.
ooooh so sorry, Victoria. Internet problems are indeed the pits!
Ohmygosh, you guys. I am LOVING these. I’m such a “small moment, small poem” nut anyway…such amazing stuff. Keep it coming!
Awesome prompt, Victoria! Thank you!
I’m afraid I’ll have to write a million of these. But I won’t link anymore. 🙂
I want to write more as well. Addictive form. Some people wrote several and submitted at once, like #1 #2 #3 on the same page.
It is fun and challenging–so glad you are enjoying. I want to write more, too. It’s 9 PM and the ISP just left…left us with the problems still unsolved, though I’m on for the moment.
This has to be one of my favourite prompts so far. Thank you, Victoria for introducing me to this style. I like the way it pushed me into descriptive mode.
🙂
Description is one of the things I like best about it…it helps me as a prose writer, too.
It certainly gives me a great way to cut down on my verbosity when writing haibun!
I couldn’t resist – another Concentrated Cocktail linked up.
I think you linked the wrong poem.. i correct it.. 🙂
“reduce an object to its purest essence. It generally employs no metaphors” That’s my kind of poetry – I do like to be able to understand a poem, to “see what’s there” without having to delve into deep layers of metaphor. I’m not writing much at the moment, but I’ll see what I can come up with.
Funny, though, how without meaning to, a metaphor sometimes suggests itself.
Added mine, hope it fits in…
So glad to see you, Sumana.
Hello, this prompt allowed me to keep it simple, that I like, and I hope it works for you.
I look forward to reading your work!
I went to a local poets group last night and shared about the wonderful community here and the many lessons that are offered. Several of the members of that group expressed an interest in checking out dVerse. I hope they do. As for today’s prompt, it is very interesting. It seems to lend itself to short poetry, which is what I wrote. I’ll be back after awhile to read some other poems. Unfortunately, work calls right now. Peace, Linda
Yeah–love to see you promoting the prompt, Linda, and we would love to welcome new poets. I always learn from each of you and find so much inspiration, too.
Thanks Victoria and I couldnt resist, although late in the day and feeling a bit under the weather. I loved The wheelbarrow when it was in a book called ‘Love That Dog’ brilliant for teaching about poetry by Sharon Mcreech. Tried to comment on your post but it disappeared. So far have loved the duvet and white roses. How deep some of these image poems can be with so few words.
Feel better! I think it’s the post-holiday rush catching up with us.
Thank you Victoria. Work and writing has gotten in the way of poetry – never mind that my work in PR and planning novels both involve intense writing!
Your topic however, is so delightful! Will try to write a poem – otherwise I will just visit!
Happy New Year!
Thank you, Ninot–we miss you and wish you a happy New Year, too. Good luck with the novels. I’m hatching a new idea, too.
I accidentally re-linked my first poem as #2…just added the correct link.
Great participation, everyone–thank you. Mr. Linky is still open if you have more.
Sorry got tied up yesterday. I may lose phone service which is distracting. I will still try to get around to reading everyone in the morning if possible. Again I apologize. I was having so much fun reading and then had to stop. Having a tiny birthday party this evening..so tomorrow for sure.
Don’t worry, Gay. My Internet has been screwy and right now we are having a horrible wind storm, so who knows what will happen.
missed the linky but wanted to thank you for this prompt – the discipline of saying what is there was just what I needed
oops put erroneous link with the contact details above – so its
https://telltaletherapy.wordpress.com/2016/01/31/on-ice/
I have visited others to try and get the hang of this challenge!