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Hello everyone and welcome to poetics. Hope you are doing good.
In my city, the winter is slowly fading now. This year, we had a rather sporadic winter. It was not too cold, temperature fluctuated, rained here and there. Around this time of the year, we get to see a lot of seasonal flowers. This year is no exception no matter what the winter felt like.
The biggest attraction of January for me is that we have an international book fair. If I am in the city, I never miss it. If I have one reason to return to the city in the month of January – it would undoubtedly be the book fair. Every year – they would pick a theme country and invite writers to come over and share their creativity. I had a busy Saturday, but when I went there today and could speak to some of the writers, it just made my day and I returned with a bag full books. On that very special note, I wanted to share a special poem I grew up with.
My introduction to modern poetry in mother language was with Jibananada Das. He redefined the style and later many took his path. The majority of poetry that is written today is inspired by him in one form or the other. I wanted to share a few stanzas.
When again I return to the Dhansiri’s banks, to this Bengal,
Not as a man, perhaps, but as a shalik bird, or a white hawk,
As, perhaps, a crow of dawn in this land of autumn’s new rice harvest,
He often wrote about coming back to where he was born – his words made me aware of delicate and beautiful nuances of nature as I grew up.
Into the half light and shadow go I. Within my head
Not a dream, but some sensation works its will.
Not a dream, not peace, not love,
A sensation born in my very being.
I cannot escape it
For it puts its hand in mine,
And all else pales to insignificance–futile, so it seems
Jiabanada showed me a lot of possibilities but he was also affected with certain morbidity. I have never overcome that whenever I read him. May be someday I will try to translate some of his work – only if I felt that translation did not take away beauty of his language. His poetry has often asked this question to me – if I want to come back. I guess I will always have elements of my city, my existence that I would want to return to.
So today I ask this question to you – do you want to reborn as who you are? Do you think you could come back like a bird? What would you be looking for if you come back?
Join me on my poetics.
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Thank you all. Have fun.
Good evening… I wrote mine last evening…. and I kind of loved the thought of being born something else… I might have added a little bit too much humor, but somehow I felt I had to.
Tonight I would love to have something strong..
Oh, I loved your humor, Bjorn!! I thought you were really inspired.
I found it easy if I started focusing on what I was to be…
And you chose a Pine Barrens frog – I love the NJ pine barrows
What’s your drink, Beelzebub? (I’m talking about manga.) Ooh, mangoes. Yummy. Whatever you’re having, let’s add a splash of that gooey-orange-madness. What say you?
Are these your own photos? Really nice ones. the flower is so very pink and the water is so serene. I wouldn’t mind coming back as a serene body of undisturbed water.
I love this. ~
Coming back
as water.
Thank you..
I love bodies of water! Thank of all the life in many of those water places, reflections of the sky or moon, people in and out enjoying it, animals getting sustenance. Yes, I think I like being reborn as a body of water.
Thanks Tony – yes they are my own. These two I found could be closest to the theme.
With all the brilliant sunshine today, maybe we’ll finally get six weeks of real winter.
I’m not sure if I met the requirements – I hope so! Thank you for the prompt, Abhra!
Well, I was inspired after reading Annell’s poem. I followed her lead.
I had my own thoughts and when I read her’s, I knew I agreed. We have memories but we can’t go or come back….unless it is in our legacy.
Exactly! I read your poem too and think we feel the same! No going back…only moving on.
Me too! I don’t exactly believe that one can return but if I am to be reborn 🙂 shall prefer to be the same!! 😉
Truly Mary – that was really inspiring.
Hey everyone,
Thought this to be an extremely inspiring prompt 🙂 sharing my poem “When this reborn.” Hope you guys like it 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
I am glad you did Sanaa.
These photographs are gorgeous
Thank you 🙂
Love your beautiful photos, Ahbra and thank you for hosting today and giving us an interesting idea to ponder.
Abhra, I am drawn to that pond photo, as I am to all things water. I liked where this took me, though those who know me well will not be surprised. 😉
I might need to try to do something a little more unexpected, as a second one…
Does it have to be an animal? Or is it totally open? I won’t write about the first thing that popped into my head. 🙂
I absolutely loved your piece De.
Love that beautiful flower Abhra ~ My hubby and I were discussing this and we agreed we will come back as birds 🙂 Definitely not going back like before but maybe taking another journey ~ If only we can live and die many times, and try different routes that will be exciting ~
Happy Tuesday everyone and don’t forget its OpenLinkNight this Thursday ~
Happy Tuesday Grace..I am glad you like it.
I brought some Midori to share. Anybody want some?
Sure 🙂 Hey, I keep on approving your (new) comments 🙂 Thanks always for your support ~
Thanks. 🙂 I can’t seem to keep the same name for very long. It causes me pain.
I wrote you a little something.
It’s a mystery to find you 🙂
I’ve gotta have some kind of draw. You all don’t come by for the good poetry, that’s for sure. 😉
I am just catching up so late to this. I adore Midori. Ages ago, some friends and I began calling it Green Slime….as we were at a very early “comic” con, we made up a solemn song about it. Unfortunately, all I can remeber is: Green Slime, Straight outta time…ba dump bump….
Hello everyone – I couldn’t stay up till the time bar opened. Here now.
Hello Abhra ~ Thanks for hosting ~
Ha. “hosting” = “ho-sting”
You’ve gotta rethink your language around me, missy. 😉 You know I can dirty-up just about anything in a hurry.
Oops, freudian slip 🙂 I think you need to write your own dictionary 🙂
Ha ha ha! That would be SO much fun. De and I could do it together. 🙂
Pleasingly prompted to post and have…thank you all, for being here…
Thank you so much.
Intriguing question! For me it dovetailed nicely with the haibun prompt, and also wit the upcoming Midweek Motif at Poets United.
I just saw your post – it was lovely. Good to see that you connected the theme with Haiban.
Thanks for such an inspiring post. The Bengali poet seems so interesting if at times touching on morbidity! I love the idea of rebirth and especially if I could choose but somehow doubt it!
I hadn’t planned on participating in this poetics, until this prompt floated by on my Facebook newsfeed. It’s ironic that you have used the title ‘Coming back’ as it has been a very long time since I joined you here at dVerse and also quite a while since I wrote a poem. I had already written my piece ‘Bullet’ but I felt it fit the prompt all the same, because I am feeling a bit lost creatively and am trying to find my way back. I’m trying to uncover what I could be reborn as and am falling a little flat at the moment. Hopefully reading some of your poems will help revive my creative spirit. Many of you have inspired me in the past. So, thanks for this and for letting me join in.
Vanessa, I loved your piece. A different perspective, and one I think all creative souls can relate to. Welcome back.
Thanks. I hope to stop by a bit more regularly. Poetry always seems to enrich my novel writing and creativity in general.
Kudos on novel writing!
I have commitment issues. While in life I have been married a ridiculously happy 17 1/2 years, in writing world, I am enamored right now only of poetry…this fantastic, intense, passionate one night stands. 😉
Abhra, your focus in this prompt was sharp and certainly brought us all to a new understanding of ourselves. I would not come back. If it was a pattern of existence, I’d fight it. Probably would eventually accept the reality. I have read all up to this point and enjoyed the rich diversity of responses. You are a great group of poets, my pub friends.
YES. I LOVE this prompt, and the intensely personal and beautiful poems it has brought. Thank you, Abhra.
Thank you so much – this makes me think I would like to share some more thoughts from the same poet – the quietness of beauty that he has introduced me to.
That would be great.
What I love about dVerse is the diVersity (pun intended) of cultures and poets to which we are introduced. Thank you Abrha for this poetry new to me.
This is a wonderful prompt. Made me think. Sorry to be late submitting but glad to be here.
I am really overwhelmed with the participation and good to see everyone joining in on day 2. Thanks everyone. I will be making my second rounds now.
Bummer…I missed it. Here’s mine if anyone chances upon it…I’ll be visiting others…it’s an interesting prompt! Thank you!
https://wordrustling.wordpress.com/2016/02/04/butterfly-school/
I am glad you could join in – I will try to add your link as well.
Added your link.
Oh!! Thank you, Abhra!! 🙂