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Hello everyone! Welcome to you all. Today is a rather unusual prompt for the haibun. I usually try to stick to traditional subjects but a few days ago, I became intrigued with an advertisement I read on Flipboard. Intrigued and then enchanted by; and ultimately, I began to have more thoughts on the ad campaign.
It seems that Sweden is the first country to have its own telephone number. You can dial the phone number and speak to a random Swede in a random location in Sweden. You can talk about darkness, snow, sex, Weezer’s white album, politics, food…whatever. Sweden is celebrating the 250th anniversary on the ban of censorship in their country. What better way than to celebrate than to make it possible to have an open conversation with someone in another country, time zone, age, sex, cultural background? Needless to say, I called the number and spoke to a friendly young woman. I told her I was doing the call out of curiosity so she took the lead asking my age and where did I live and then the weather. Mindful of the cost, I blurted out, what is it like living so far up north that seeing the stars at night is a rare occurance. She asked about the stars way down here and I told her of my love for the night sky, writing about the River of Heaven (Amanogawa, Milky Way). Excellent conversation and I put in a pitch for Bjorn and Keyhole Stories and the poetry on dVerse. Wistfulness on her part about my night sky. We hung up after exchanging emails.
I went outside and looked up at the stars. I thought of how easy it is to talk to a stranger but sometimes, how hard it is to talk to a friend or family member. I thought of how long it had been since I had communicated with some of the people I care about, of the daily calls I make to my mother and how sometimes she remembers I visited her a couple of weeks ago, sometimes she does not. I thought of several people with whom I have not spoken in several weeks or longer. My mind made an uncomfortable trip to last summer when a long time friend committed suicide and how I had tried to call him, leaving messages on his voice mail two weeks prior. I thought of calling my first long time relationship to tell him our mutual friend I had died. I had not spoken to him at all since the day he had left to return to Japan and now, he was hearing my voice for the first time in 23 years to tell him our friend was dead and how.
So going the long away around as usual, the prompt for the haibun is communication or lack of it. Write a haibun about the last time you communicated with someone or put off communicating or some communicated with you to share the birth of a child, loss of job, newly diagnosed illness. Or a time of uncomfortable silence. I wrote a poem for the Tuesday Poetics prompt on trains: traveling in a commuter train and one morning seeing a man lying on a bench at an abandoned train platform and over the course of a few days, seeing snow pile up on the man as we traveled past; how we become trapped in our routines, how we become numbed, how we live in our routines and stop seeing, caring, speaking. My husband and I went to dinner tonight. One table across from us, the mom, dad, two teens were silent. Texting, playing games, whatever. All immersed in their electronics and silence, mindlessly eating. At another table were mom, dad, three kids, a grandparent – all were laughing, talking, sharing.
An odd prompt for sure. Write a one to three paragraph haibun – tight, poetic paragraphs ending with one haiku about silence among ourselves, loneliness, the last time you had a conversation that changed you in some way, some news you had to share, a silence you needed to break, a happy reconnection. If you write something fictional, please make a note to that effect. For further inspiration google the lyrics to Dangling Conversation by Simon and Garfunkle; below is an excerpt:
“It’s a still life water color,
Of a now late afternoon,
As the sun shines through the curtained lace
And shadows wash the room.
And we sit and drink our coffee
Couched in our indifference,
Like waves upon the shore
You can hear the ocean roar…”
Since communication is what this is all about, please don’t just link your haibun. Read and comment on the other links, especially those people who took the time to read and comment on your link.
Let’s communicate!
– Access Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post and add your name and direct link to your haibun (not just your blog site).
– Leave a comment on the linked haibun and….join in the fun and get in on the discussion below.
– Spend time reading and commenting on the work of the pubsters. Remember: check back during the week for work submitted after today. Mr. Linky is up for the week for this prompt.
hayesspencer said:
Hello everyone! Welcome. Internet problems here…..
kanzensakura said:
I hope you all will enjoy this topic or find it relevant.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello… I’m not yet a random Swede (quite a specific one)… but I might register myself (I have downloaded the app)… but there are many volunteers apparently… I so hope to read many great haibun for this prompt… Love the originality for this one.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Fascinating project, Bjorn. How do they handle calls from people whose language they don’t speak?
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ah.. I think it’s assumed you talk English… :-)… there is also a twitter account for Sweden that is run by different Swedes every week… 🙂 We are weird up here in the far north…
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Weird? Nah. But that could explain my Norwegian husband.
kanzensakura said:
From my understanding of the ad campaign, the volunteers speak English well and some speak French or German. I guess they make sure, based on the call code where the call originates, it gets routed to a random speaker of that language. This is sponsored by Swedish tourism so I have a feeling they thought this out very well.
kanzensakura said:
Thank you. Communication has been much on my mind lately.
kanzensakura said:
Ironically, my internet is having issues…apparently local carrier is going flukey
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Hmmm…impaired communication! Darn Internet.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
Such a relevant topic, Toni. I did do a fictional account, about a lack of communication, on a topic that concerns me as someone who worked closely with the elderly and is now getting there myself.
kanzensakura said:
I like that. I’m getting there myself.
kanzensakura said:
This is funny. In my car I can use my smartphone to very slowly comment…my Swedish neighbors are in their yard. I’ll bet in a minute they’ll walk over to check on me…grin
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. yes that would be funny… they do you have tinted windows in your car… maybe they think it’s FBI.
kanzensakura said:
Lol. They are surprised by nothing over here anymore!
hayesspencer said:
I was right. My neihbors just came over…now they are in their car with their laptop. He telecommutes.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
How funny.
MarinaSofia said:
What a wonderful story about your phone call – I too heard about that Swedish phone number and wondered about it, but how brave of you to call it and make friends! And I think you are so right about how much more difficult it is sometimes to talk to those closest to you…
kanzensakura said:
I am not brave, but I am way too curious!
kanzensakura said:
I am heading out. Will be back later to read and comment. Fighting with the internet is just too yucky. Hope to see you all later!
Pleasant Street said:
I think we should all get on Skype and have a conversation. It would suit this prompt. It would be challenging to have a time when everyone who wanted to could talk but it would allow a few interesting meetings of random ones of us who can and we can hear one another’s voices. There is also text for leaving a message or saying when you will be online if someone wants to talk to you.
Victoria C. Slotto said:
That would be fun. I have Skype and no idea how to use it…like the old lady in my haibun!
hayesspencer said:
This is an interesting idea! It would be quite a fait accompli considering how many time zones and countries we are all scattered about. I had a group of friends in CA, Canada, WA, CO, Philly, and Melbourne. Once in a blue moon we could rig it to skype. It was fun.
whimsygizmo said:
Love this prompt, Toni. My degree is in Communications, but I have still never felt qualified. 😉 Love everybody’s pieces so far. Mine is a glimpse into past life stuff.
hayesspencer said:
I look forward to reading it!
Linda Kruschke said:
I love this haibun prompt, but this one is going to take me a few days to figure out what to write. So glad it’ll be up all week!
hayesspencer said:
I am glad it will be up all week as well. I’ll be looking forward to your haibun.
tamekamullins said:
This is my first time trying my hand at writing haibuns. I really like it. I look forward to reading more of them! 🙂
Victoria C. Slotto said:
It’s addictive, Tameka–and I know you will enjoy it.
tamekamullins said:
It mixes two of my favorite forms of writing. I love it!
hayesspencer said:
I’m glad to see you. I was thinking about you just over the weekend and wondering how you are. It is a great form. If you want a review or anything, just search on Haibun on this site and check out haibun#1 and haibun #7 for more indepth. It is one of my favorite Japanese forms. And Victoria is right, it is addictive writing.
tamekamullins said:
Oh hi there! Thanks for thinking of me.I hope you’re doing well. I am working on so many things that at times I can’t participate, but I always peek in to see what you guys are doing. It’s a pleasure when I can join in.
I will definitely take a look at some of the other haibun work. Can’t wait!
hayesspencer said:
It is good to know your projects are doing well. It is good to know you look in on us. Don’t be a stranger. If you’re busy, just say hi!
tamekamullins said:
Thank you, will do!
hayesspencer said:
SO MANY WONDERFUL Responses! I have read good things today aand look forward to more during the week. Thank you all.
Grace said:
A relevant theme Toni, specially considering our busy lives and with all the techno gadgets ~ I believe in setting time aside for face to face talk, honest and even no-holds barred kind of discussion ~ It does wonders to relationships ~ Thanks for hosting dear ~
kim881 said:
Good morning everyone! It’s just gone six in the morning and I am so pleased to drop by the poets pub! I feel a bit out of sync this morning so it will take me a while to fire up – had a bad couple of weeks with a chest infection and then got a touch of food poisoning yesterday. Weak as a kitten but still raring to go. I have a few ideas for a haibun, so I’ll crack on a drop back later to share an d read. See you later!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I look forward to read what you have written Kim… hope the words make you stronger.
hayesspencer said:
Bless your heart, as we say here in the South. The prompt will be open all week so take your time as you are able. Stay hydrated! 🙂 i will be checking all week for newly linked haibun. I hope you feel better soon and enjoy your reading.
kim881 said:
Ah, thank you. 😊 It’s early evening here now and I’m looking forward to seeing what this evening’s prompt will be. It doesn’t appear until after 8 over here.
Margaret Elizabeth Bednar said:
I really enjoy the haibuns. I will be back in the morning as this took me a while to with and it is 1:30 am! It is maybe a bit of a liberty taken as I didn’t exactly do a conversation but I as inspired by the idea…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Being up late writing is so poetic…:-)
hayesspencer said:
Glad you are inspired. It doesn’t really have to be a conversation per se. I have read some wonderful takes on this so far….I think you will come up with your own interpretation! 🙂
navasolanature said:
What a fascinating prompt I might even have to try to ring Sweden! Have also read Bjorns and Lilian’s . Both so different and so powerful. Am in the city of poets and fado, Lisbon but will try and catch up with you all soon!
Mary said:
Hi Toni! Thanks for an interesting prompt. Mine is up…smiles.
Rosemary Nissen-Wade said:
I love haibun! As one is also requested for the Dark Poetry prompts I’m responding to this April, and as any poem is acceptable for the Tuesday Platform at toads, this piece is doing triple duty!
hayesspencer said:
Good on you! Multitasking is a good thing 🙂
Hannah Gosselin said:
Thank you, hayyespencer for the prompt…I’ll be reading as time allows thank you for your patience! 🙂
hayesspencer said:
Hi! Hayesspencer is Kanzensakura. That is how my name comes up on dverse for administrative sign on. I’m glad you like the prompt, it is one I have been thinking about for awhile. Take your time! The prompt will be around all week and after Mr Linky expires, the links can still be accessed gor reading and commenting. Thank you for interest. 🙂
Hannah Gosselin said:
Oh, that makes sense now…I wasn’t sure at first…one and the same. Thank you, so much for the inspiration…I’m looking forward to it!
mishunderstood said:
A late hello to all. Just added my haibun to the mix, then off to bed. Will be back tomorrow to read and comment, though I have peeked at a few.
I don’t think this is an odd prompt at all, Toni! For me, it conjured up some of those moments of lost communication that are hard to mend or let go of….perhaps easier to write about.
mtw said:
another late hello! i’m glad i was able to get this done in time. i’ve never written a haibun before so this was an interesting new writing experience.