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Lillian here for today’s Poetics. I’ve met many of you since I first moseyed up to the dVerse pub in March 2015. And those of you who’ve gotten to know me, know I enjoy fancy little umbrellas in my drinks! That is to say, I love pizazz, the sparkly, the bling. I’m in love with life! Never call me retired. I prefer rejuvenated! Give me a dance floor and I’ll put on my tap shoes and do the soft shoe or pound out those great rhythmic time steps I learned long ago.
So for today’s Poetics, I’m asking you to kick up your heels a bit with me! Give me the ole razzle dazzle! Sparkle me with a mood by following these steps:
- Absorb the definitions of these words: Razzle: showiness that astonishes; Dazzle: amaze, brightness, brilliance, glare; Sparkle: effervescence, excel, shine, vivacity, energy, oomph, gusto.
- Now write about something or someone or someplace or some experience that portrays the mood of the words. Use the words, one of them, or none of them. But do evoke their mood. Razzle dazzle me!
Here’s some fun photos to get you in the mood.
Only two photos above require credit: sun is by Jenny Erickson. Tinsel is by Elvis Santana. All others are in public domain and need no attribution.
As always, please do observe the “rules of conduct” for dVerse – and for those of you new to dVerse, here’s what we hope everyone does:
- Write a poem to razzle dazzle us, as the prompt suggests, and post it to your blog. Feel free to add a photo of your choice or one from above.
- Click on Mr. Linky below to add your name and enter the direct URL to your poem
- On your blog, please provide a link back to dVerse. This enables others to enjoy our prompts, multiples our readers and thus the responses to everyone’s poems.
- If you promote your poem on social media, use the tag #dverse poets
- And most importantly, please do read some of the other responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for several days – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so do stop by another day and read a few of the latecomers too!
Hello everyone! The pub is now open….serving effervescent beverages today including club soda with a twist of lime and mimosas 🙂 We’re having a razzle dazzle sunshiney day here in Boston — so hope you’ll join us in this prompt!
Mmmmm. I’ll take one of those club sodas, please. 🙂
Served with a smile, my friend!
Make it a double! {I’ve come back for seconds.} 😉
I went into the seduction mood here… after being all modernist for a while, I turned into the old pentameter again… being dazed by meter… please give me a parasol with my drink.
Coming right up, sir……and it shall be pink as I blush at those tinseled eyes! 🙂 And always, always, your meter dazzles, my friend!
Hello Lillian and Björn! I said I be here on time! What a prompt! This is one I’ll have to think about for a while, so please excuse me while I put my sparkly thinking hat on! I’ll be back in while…
Take your time…..it always takes a while to razzle dazzle oneself! 🙂 Many different ways to take it…….fantasy, children’s fairy tale, romance, become a Rockette for a day, or become a fortune teller with beads and a feathery turban! Or go a bit serious too…:) Look forward to what you do with it!
That was fun. It got me out of my usual fall somberness. Thanks, Lillian!
Always happy to hand out the smiles — and little umbrellas on drinks too! 🙂 So glad you posted — I loved your take on the prompt!
Hi Marilyn: Hope you read this. I left a comment on your post — really loved it! But looking back this morning, my comment is not appearing. Brian let me know that my comment to his post went into his spam. Could you check and perhaps let me know here? Thanks!
Have managed to finally get my fancy self over here. Will be back soon to read all the sparkle. 😉 Thanks, Lill.
There’s lots of razzle dazzle that’s for sure! 🙂 So many interesting takes on this!
Side story that makes me smile:
When my daughter (now 13) was little, she would call anything sparkly “sprackally spracks.” As in “have you seen my sprackally spracks?” and “Oooooo, mommy, look! sprackally spracks!” This eventually became anything even remotely sparkly or shiny, slipped into her fancy pink purse. “Wait! I gotta bring my sprackally spracks!”
😉
LOVE it! Out of the mouths of kids come the most amazingly creative words! 🙂
Hey everyone,
Hope you guys are having a wonderful day so far 🙂 sharing my poem ‘November Night’ (which is based on a true event in my life) hope you all like it.
Thank you Lillian for the enchanting prompt 🙂 this one’s for you ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Will be moseying on over to read….
❤
Hi Lillian, thanks for the fun prompt. Wanted to let you and the rest of the pub drinkers that my wife has out-patient surgery first thing tomorrow morning so I will check in with the rest of the entries later in the week. That is if Hurricane Matthew doesn’t cause too much damage in my area.
Best wishes for a successful surgery and speedy recovery, Brian. We’ll be thinking of you…….no need to hurry back. Spend some time – living and loving is more important than reading, for sure!
Thank you for the dazzling prompt Lillian and I look forward to reading all the sparkling entries :o)
They sure bedazzled me! Some are so fun — all are unique and so well written! You’ll enjoy, I’m sure!
Such a fun prompt but I am still in Internet limbo so off line for now. I do have good old paper and pencil. So I can write some razzle dazzle for the future. Just no patience for typing on my phone.
Totally understand! Hope you can enjoy some of the replies….it’s been really fun to see how folks take this……everything from a drop of water falling, sizzling onto a red hot pan…..to advice from a show girl and Glenn wearing cheap sunglasses + so many more! 🙂
Taking a break for dinner and to watch the VP debate. Will be in and out….bar remains open with chardonnay, pinot noir, and club soda with lime set out for everyone. Please do imbibe and bedazzle us! Will be back to reading soon! 🙂
Razzle, dazzle, and sparkle…what interesting imagery those words conjured up! Wonderful concept, Lillian…a jewel and creative gem of a prompt.
Glad you like it! It’s been fun to read the responses of folks.
Just went to reread your post this morning and I get an OOPS message when I click on the link. The page isn’t coming up. I’m sure late readers will want to read….so perhaps check on that?
Uh oh. I’ll check. Thanks Lillian!
🙂
I put in another link. The new one is working properly. 👍
I’ve sprinkled it with sequins and scattered it with silver stars. It’s coffee time here, so I’ll stay away from that sparkling prosecco and stick with a flat white. Thank you for a glittery fizzy prompt.
So glad you enjoyed. I’m on my second cup this morning and heading over to do some imbibing of sparkly words! 🙂
Good morning everyone! Bar is open — serving up hot coffee this morning — adding flavors too, just for a little pizazz in keeping with today’s prompt. So perhaps a hazelnut, amaretto, or pumpkin spice in keeping with the fall season?
Heading over to do some reading — quite a few posts since I retired (and I mean went to bed — even rejuvenated folks need to sleep) last night.
CRITICAL MESSAGE to ALL WHO HAVE POSTED HERE:
I was just told that my replies are going into someone’s spam. I am SOOOO frustrated! I’ve returned to the bar and have gone over all the poems I’ve already read and discovered that my replies are not appearing on some.
PLEASE check your spam if you do not see a reply from me. I’ve gotten as far as Toni’s post already — and will continue with my reading this morning.
Will try to email individually folks where my replies are not posting — Technology can be frustrating! I need a drink — think I’ll pour me one of those amaretto coffees!
Making applesauce today. Be back to read and comment tonight. Have a great day.
ooooh that sounds like a delicious thing to do on a fall day! 🙂 Do you freeze apples for pies too?
Occasionally, I make an apple pie filling and freeze it. So handy.
YUM! Remember our Iowa country days, living in a country house on 15 acres of land with 2 big apple trees!!! 🙂 Many many years ago but I can still smell those apple pies baking in the middle of winter! And loads of zucchini bread frozen too!
I grew up in Tn and remember my grandmother’s house always smelling of good home-cooked food.
sign up email not coming through and the contact us link goes to wordpress support…anyone help?
Since you are on WP, you can follow this blog by adding our link to your subscription. To contact us, you can either email Bjorn or myself for any concerns. We have a general inbox but if you need a faster reply, just comment or pop over to our blogs. Thank you ~
Thanks Grace. I am following the blog already so I guess I have to go to the reader every day or visit the actual blog to find out what’s what. email prompts just work for lazy folk 😉
That is lovely Paul. We have prompts 3x a week (always posting at 3pm EST) and you can check our schedule (up there) if you like. For this Thursday, we have OpenLink Night where any poems can be linked up; your choice of poem for our reading pleasure.
Thank You Grace
Stepped away from the bar for a bit — glad to see you had your questions answered. Thanks Grace!
Hi Paul: I just put a comment on your post (I so enjoyed it) and as I go back, it is not appearing. Someone told me today that my comment went into their WP spam…could you check? So glad you posted today!
Finally back on to the pub… it’s been a long day at work, but will make my rounds…
Welcome back, Bjorn! 🙂
Hey Lill…I’m wearing my sparkly shoes to make up for my lateness. Will try to catch up on the razzle dazzle. Just couldn’t miss your wonderful prompt! 🙂
Glad you enjoyed it!