I’ve looked at clouds from both sides now
From up and down, and still somehow
It’s cloud illusions I recall
I really don’t know clouds at all– from ‘Both Sides Now’ by Joni Mitchell
Happy Monday to all you dVerse poets out there! Kim here from Writing in North Norfolk bringing you the Q44, our Quadrille, when we take any meaning of one word and transform it into 44 poetic words. Today, I want you to write a poem of exactly 44 words (not counting your title), including the word cloud.
To inspire you I have included, with permission, an image of one of a group of paintings by a friend of mine, Norfolk artist, printer and community librarian Maria Pavledis, who you can find on http://mariapavledis.com/
How many times have you looked up and seen shapes in the clouds, chased a cloud or sheltered from a rainy mass of storm clouds? There are so many types of that visible mass of condensed watery vapour that floats in the sky: the highest clouds in the atmosphere are cirrocumulus, cirrus, and cirrostratus; mid-level clouds include altocumulus and altostratus; and the lowest clouds in the atmosphere are stratus, cumulus, and stratocumulus.
Cloud can be used to refer to a state of gloom, menace or worry. Winnie the Pooh pretended he was a little black rain cloud to get to some ‘hunny’. The verb ‘to cloud’ can be applied to any number of things that make the sky, water or our eyes dim. Clouds can be linked to our previous prompt word ‘shadow’. Mick Jagger sang ‘Hey, you, get off my cloud’ and Kate Bush made a wonderful video with Donald Sutherland for her song ‘Cloudbusting’:
Borrow the Joni Mitchell quote and/or the image (please remember to give credit), and let it float your cloud. Or you may want to write your own take on the Kate Bush song. Just be sure your 44-word poem contains some form of the word cloud.
Here’s how to Quadrille:
– Write a poem of exactly 44 words, including the word cloud.
– Put your poem on your blog and link back to this post.
– Link it up to our Mr. Linky.
– Visit other blogs. Enjoy some amazing poets. Comment. Come back later this week and write another one, and visit some more. Comment some more. Create as many poem clouds as you please. I’ll be reading all week.
Good evening everyone! Wow! I’ve been waiting for the clock to tick over and am so relieved that my first post is up and running. I suppose I’d better link up my own poem before I start reading!
Wow… and I have been waiting here for you to open for the first Quadrille… great to have you on board prompting… Clouds fit so much for today… a cloudy monday in October….
Hi!
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Nice to see you’re on first, Lillian. I’m just about to read your Quadrille and I’m looking forward to it!
Hi there, Kim. Wonderful to see you hosting, and with such a great prompt! I’m at my daughter’s today and tomorrow – helping out with kids as there’s no school today or tomorrow here. They are off to music lessons so I can sneak in some reading now. Are you serving pumpkin lattes at the bar today? Chilly here this fall day so that would be yummy!
Okay – I’m off to imbibe some cloudy poetry!😊
I’ve never had a pumpkin latte but they sound divine. I had butternut squash pilaf for dinner – does that count? You are so lucky to have grandchildren, Lillian. I’m still waiting for the patter of grandchildren’s feet. I have to make the most of other people’s children and grandchildren at Bounce and Rhyme on Wednesdays and Thursdays. 🙂
Thanks for hosting, Kim! Another prompt that didn’t turn out like I expected. 🙂
Welcome behind the bar, Kim. We are blessed to have you as part of the team. Wonderful word for today’s prompt.
Thank you for the kind welcome and for having me as part of the team!
Thank you for hosting today, Kim, and giving us a great word for inspiration. And thank you to the kind soul who linked me up today. 🙂
🙂
Hey everyone,
Hope you’re having an amazing day so far 🙂 sharing my poem “Miserere” hope you all like it 🙂 Thank you for the wonderful opportunity Kim ❤ this one's for you ❤
Lots of love,
Sanaa
Thanks, Sanaa. I’ll be over to read in a while. I have to take a short break but will be back in about thirty minutes.
Sounds good ❤
🙂
I love Kate Bush!
Oh, me too! Kate and Joni – heaven!
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Hi, Kim – if you aren’t a skyscape expert, living where you do, I don’t know who is! My head is full of clouds now, suspect there may be a couple of links coming your way. I might have a pernod and water tonight, to continue the cloud theme. No cloudy cider, though, it’s a Monday night, after all!
Hi Sarah! cloudy cider sounds great! There was so much cloud up here today I couldn’t see the joins. It’s done nothing but pour all day. I’ve been over to read and I love your two Quadrilles!
We had one of those beautiful crystal clear autumn days. 😌so beautiful. I seem to have spent a lot of time in the car enjoying the scenery!
Now that sounds spiffing!
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Sorry everyone, I had to step out for about half an hour. My husband was away in Leeds and Newcastle over the weekend and got back today. But I’m back now! Thank you so much for the wonderful welcome and for the fabulous poems so far. We’ve had a very grey Monday here in North Norfolk with heavy showers right through to this evening – the sky was so heavy you couldn’t tell where the clouds started and ended. Not quite pewter, Björn, but getting there. There’s a damp chill in the air and people are starting to light there fires – don’t you love the smell of smoke on autumn air? I’m looking forward to putting on a scarf, hat ,gloves and boots and scuffing up some leaves! I’m off to read some more Quadrilles!
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I am here, fresh from our Thanksgiving walk and lunch ~ Thanks to Kim for hosting and wishing everyone a Happy Monday ~
Hi Grace! I hope you had a wonderful walk and a fantastic Thanksgiving Day. I think I kind of celebrated a bit with a butternut squash pilaf this evening.
And we had butternut squash soup, smiles ~ Wonderful autumn day today, thanks ~
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Nice hosting job Kim…I have written mine and read and commented on all the others so far. I need a drink. What you got Kim?
Thank you! I was thinking of a Tia Maria coffee liqueur as a night cap, but maybe as it’s the end of Canada’s Thanksgiving Day, something with maple in it.
Well as we are now at lunch Maple works well with Bacon so maybe a snack is in order and a beer. 😉
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Wonderful cloud prompt, Kim! I’ve posted one, about to post another, and will be back later (or in the morning) to feast on the cloudy offerings within. You rocked this prompt!
Thank you, De. I got up this morning with another one to post and I’ll be doing the rounds too!
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Hi, Kim!
Thanks for the prompt.
http://wordsandfeathers.com/2016/10/10/sea-beast-20161010/
I’ll be over to read in a moment!
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Good morning.. will hit the trail before off to work.
I’m doing the rounds again too!
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Thank you for a wonderful prompt Kim! I have added mine and will begin the rounds with a large cup of tea :o)
I think I need to go back and do some more reading. I’ll be late at the bar tonight as an old friend of mine has just arrived from France and we’re going for a meal. I haven’t seen her in a couple of years so we’ve got a lot of catching up to do!
Enjoy your evening with your friend, reading can wait :o)
I’ve got a couple of hours yet 🙂
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the cloud certainly brought up some thoughts – thank you for that
[going offline for a day or so as broadband issues amongst other things – will catch up with reading later]
Thanks for reading, Laura! I hope the broadband issues are resolved soon and to see you later!
I think I might have double-linked my second poem (I am a cloud -2), but the removal tool didn’t work for taking out the link that doesn’t have a (2) at the end of it (I linked my poems back to back, so the middle link can be removed…could one of the moderators please help?) Thanks!
I’m not sure how to do that yet, Bryan. I hope that Bjorn or Grace will be around to sort it out, if possible.
if not, some people might just have to read one of my poems twice 😉
I love that song. 🙂
Thanks for the prompt, Kim.
Thank you for joining in!
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A third offering! Wow, you’ve been busy, De!
Couldn’t resist doing the one with all the Q44 words so far…
😉 Thanks, Kim.
It’s almost 7 in the morning here and I’m just about to do some more reading – I’m looking forward to this!
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I’ll be over soon!
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Kim: nice to see someone who I read prompting. Thank you for the prompt 🙂
That was my first one on my own! I was so nervous but it’s been wonderful to read all the poems – just hard to keep up! I’ll be reading some more this morning.
It’s like hosting a big party…creating appetizers and then attending to all of the guests. You’re doing/did well 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
It looks like I have a lot of reading to do 🙂 I decided to go cloudless
I’ll be reading more this morning – there are some real beauties!
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I’ll be over to read in a while 🙂
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