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“Were it not for shadows, there would be no beauty.”
― Jun’ichirō Tanizaki, In Praise of Shadows
Hello my dear Poets and Friends. It is another prompt for Haibun Monday. Years ago I read this incredible book, In Praise of Shadows (“In Praise of Shadows (陰翳礼讃 In’ei Raisan) by Jun’ichirō Tanizaki. It was written in 1933 and is a book long essay on Japanese aesthetics and culture and was translated by academic students of Japanese literature, Thomas Harper and Edward Seidensticker (source Wikipedia). I was moved by it and began my immersion in the Japanese Culture because of this book. I re-read it again last month and was still equally moved by it.
Here is another quote from the book: “Whenever I see the alcove of a tastefully built Japanese room, I marvel at our comprehension of the secrets of shadows, our sensitive use of shadow and light. For the beauty of the alcove is not the work of some clever device. An empty space is marked off with plain wood and plain walls, so that the light drawn into its forms dim shadows within emptiness. There is nothing more. And yet, when we gaze into the darkness that gathers behind the crossbeam, around the flower vase, beneath the shelves, though we know perfectly well it is mere shadow, we are overcome with the feeling that in this small corner of the atmosphere there reigns complete and utter silence; that here in the darkness immutable tranquility holds sway.”
― Jun’ichirō Tanizaki, In Praise of Shadows

traditional Japanese architecture – public domain image
And so today, I would like you to write a haibun about shadows: sitting in a dark room with the fireplace or candles flickering, taking a walk at night under a full moon or in the snow, the way raindrops dripping from the eaves cause shadows to form on the ceiling during the night, watching the shadows from clouds racing across a meadow, pond, mountain, street lights reflecting on a wet street, dark times in your life in which some light was shown….anything to do with shadows. I used to play with my shadow when I was a little girl. I still love watching the sun shining through leaves and causing shadows to dance on a walkway or porch. I have written many poems about the moon and stars and even snow at night. I have written numerous haibun. One of my favorite movies, Moonstruck, has a lovely scene of Olympia Dukakis standing at a window and looking up at “la bella luna” – the full moon. The moonlight playing through the lace of the curtains create an incredible image of black lace against the white of her skin or the lovers gazing up at the moon and the shadows on their faces.
image from Moonstruck public domain image
And the shadows in our homes and buildings! Do we consider them? Fear them (afraid of what may step out)? Do they make us feel serene? When we walk in the forest, do we fancy elves hiding in the shadows?
So…shadows is a pretty open theme. The only rules are:
• Must be written in Classic Japanese form with one to two tight paragraphs with a seasonal haiku to wrap it up.
• Must be true and have actually happened to you.
Write about shadows! The shadow knows…mwahahahahahahaaaa!
Here is how to play!
*Write your haibun and link it to this post.
*Add the link to Mr. Linky below this.
*Read and comment on others who have linked. It is how we grow our community and it is always interesting and useful to see how others responded to the prompt.
**Get to know your fellow poets better!
Post on your social media #dversepoets
And most of all, have fun!
Hello everyone. Welcome to the Shadow Knows edition of Haibun Monday! It is cloudy here today so not many shadows. but yesterday was full of shadows because there was a lot of sun!
Hello Toni… My haibun is soon coming up.
Great! After your foghorn poem, I can hardly wait.
Ha.. but that was 55 words… another form
I find shadows intriguing, especially the shadows at night during a full moon. What about you all?
Funny you should ask… I included a photo. I have, perhaps, too many photos like this.
Good evening, Toni and Bjorn! I hope you are both well and looking forward to some interesting haibun. I will have to post and go for a while. I might manage to get back later. If not, I’ll read in the morning. Have fun!
You have fun as well. It will be good to see you later in the morning. Many of our followers and poets also wait until morning many times to read with their coffee.
Happy Haibun Monday everyone! Looking forward to your poems ~
Hapy Haibun Monday Grace!!!
Hello Toni and Bjorn and anyone else who straggles into the pub. This is a truly fascinating topic, theme, Toni. Years ago I got “In Praise of Shadows” but only read part of it. I remember the essay on Japanese toilets! I got that book down again a few weeks ago….and started to read recently. There is a calming effect in his words. Almost a meditation on Japanese vs. Western architecture and also the interior of rooms, appliances, etc. Though written in 1933 as you point out, it is still applicable today to the interiors of many houses in Japan. Lovely! And a lovely theme . Thank you, Toni.
Maybe my view of shadows are different because I live in the North… half of the year I crave for as little shadow as possible… the other half I seek the shade.
Understandable for sure.
Here in the south, we are like the hounds…always seeking the shade. Survival.
And here in the North we are lapping the sun to go on.
LOL. yes it is. We have a joke around here during the summer…the trees run around looking for shade it is so hot.
It is a wonderful book. and the toilets…they are a trip to use. And this is one reason why I get so upset about and dislike so much the “western” versions of Japanese poetic forms. It is like murdering a culture. We supposedly have so much respect for difference cultures as poets and yet, we think nothing of razing Japanese cultures. Create another form! don’t just use a form already in use and cut it to pieces and call it by the same name.
I agree. It’s a slap in the face of these cultures where Western poets consider to bypass the traditional form for something ‘better’? It’s just laziness to me. It is not original or inventive. It is lazy because IF you apply yourself to the study of these forms…haibun, tanka, haiku etc…you will find a world of intense purpose that created these forms, and….how deeply they reflect the particular Japanese culture. People just grab onto a form and think they can run with it without any consideration as to ‘why’ it was formed the way it was. I will go further and say that it takes years of study to begin to understand a Japanese form: there is so much behind and within it. I also feel that it is just our Western impatience, arrogance and ‘anything goes’ when we violate these forms where they are unrecognizable.
I totally agree Jane. And it is laziness and arrogance. At least there is now the American Sentence! I like the honesty in that. And having studied Japanese culture for 40+ years and the poetic forms for 30+ And I am still learning.
I’ve only studied for 10 years, and I am just scratching the surface. I remember 30 years ago, with a few belts under my arms, thinking what a tough ass I was….in judo, etc. Until I met a Japanese man who went for a very embarrassing kill: He picked me up and whirled me around (in a small space) like a whirly gig. LOL! My arms and legs like the clock hands of an insane clock. It cured me immediately of my arrogance. I don’t know why that memory pops into mind right now, but I think it was my Western arrogance coming flap up against his Japanese expertise. LOL!
Yeppers….grins
I think I found a pdf of it online: http://dcrit.sva.edu/wp-content/uploads/2010/10/In-Praise-of-Shadows-Junichiro-Tanizaki.pdf I’ve only read a few pages of it so far.
I didn’t realize it was online. thank you for letting us know! My much tattered copy will enjoy a rest.
It’s a small and wonderful book, Frank. You will enjoy it. It is worth the effort.
Happy Haibun Monday to all! LOVE this theme, Toni. I did co-opt your The Shadow Knows as my title….hope that’s okay.
Looking forward to reading later this afternoon and tomorrow in the early AM.
You’ll all see me back tomorrow afternoon, tending poetics. 🙂 I do love this pub!
Great! and we love you doing this job! It is okay to use the title. I did as well.
I planned on a walk through Chipilly Woods near where I live a couple days ago. There were plenty of shadows to be found because it was sunny, but the recent rains made the dirt trail too muddy to take.
Well, I am sure you have walked it enough to know the shadows! I kept thinking of your walk in the snow that night and the pics you took.
I really enjoyed your respectful walk on the earth in this haibun.
And the old Frank Sinatra song, Me and My Shadow:
Like the wallpaper sticks to the wall
Like the seashore clings to the sea
Like you’ll never get rid of your shadow
Frank, you’ll never get rid of me
Looking forward to some exciting reading.
I hope you will enjoy. So far we have several takes on the prompt!
Bjorn is checking out the posted link for us.
Hi everyone! This is a wonderful prompt; shadows lend themselves to unique photos and glorious writing. I ended up with implied shadows, but thoroughly enjoyed the process! Toni, I believe I’ll have a Black Shadow to drink this evening – seems appropriate! Jilly
Great drink! Coming right up. Implied shadows are still shadows. I am so glad you enjoyed the prompt. Thank the book for it!
So much can be said on shadows, what would we really know of Light without them? I was writing the first, and getting more grim and morose, and in the middle of working on it, the idea of the movies popped up! Well that should have been more fun, but the shadow returned. Thanks for the prompt Toni.
The shadows are always with us. Always.
Well, I am off to fix dinner and all that sort of thing. You all make yourselves at home. I will be back later on the dVerse Trail to continue reading and commenting.
Great prompt. There are so many ways to play with this.
Yes it is!
What’s up on the “Logan” site? I get redirected to signing up for “Blogger”. 😦
I do not know as we have no control over other blogs. Bjorn in Sweden will probably investigate tomorrow. He is the administrator of dVerse.
Try the site and let me know too
Kind of shady, but I’m game! Bar keep! Drinks all around! Who’s paying? Tin roof. (It’s on the house!)
Yes. All thr drinks are on the house! I’m back for a bit to catch up on reading. I do so enjoy reading these haibun and how you all do your takes on the prompt.
I couldn’t tighten-up my paragraphs, so it’s not a traditional haibun. I won’t share it on the link-page, but I’ll share it here in the comments in a few minutes.
OK… here it is…
https://mylibidowearsatuxedo.com/2017/04/03/elegy-of-laughing-duets/
Sadly I’ve been away and missed this great prompt last night – a wonderful intro to it Frank and will definitely dig out that book. Went to Japan for the first time 18 months ago – just totally captivated by it
The prompt is up all week for Haibun Monday if you would like to participate. And yes, Japan is totally captivating. I treasure every hour I spent there.
Always late to the party, but I finally got my haibun posted. I’m new here, by the way, and think I messed up the link to the actual poem. Hopefully I can do better with future linkage.
Welcome and I have fixed up your link ~ It should point now to your poem directly, not just your blog link ~
Thank you, Grace. Sorry about that!