Hello everyone, this is Paul welcoming you to the bar on my first night as an ‘official’ member of the team.
Thank You All for affording me such a warm invitation into this community of poets.
I am honored and humbled in equal measure.
So it is with no surprise then that my first official bar prompt for this Tuesday Poetics night is to be ‘Community.’
Let me begin by sharing a most beautiful piece of writing by Starhawk
“We are all longing to go home to some place we have never been. A place half-remembered and half-envisioned we can only catch glimpses of from time to time.
Community.
Somewhere, there are people to whom we can speak with passion without having the words catch in our throats.
Somewhere a circle of hands will open to receive us, eyes will light up as we enter, voices will celebrate with us whenever we come into our own power.
Community means strength that joins our strength to do the work that needs to be done. Arms to hold us when we falter.
A circle of friends.
Some place where we can be free.”
Inspiring right?
So where do you find community in your life? In real time? With people? Family and friends, clubs and associations? In nature? With animals? In cyber-space? With birds of a feather? With the world? In your country? In the pub? 😉
Here’s another morsel to whet your appetites.
Ode to Wine by Pablo Neruda
“Day-colored wine,
night-colored wine,
wine with purple feet
or wine with topaz blood,
wine,
starry child
of earth,
wine, smooth
as a golden sword,
soft
as lascivious velvet,
wine, spiral-seashelled
and full of wonder,
amorous,
marine;
never has one goblet contained you,
one song, one man,
you are choral, gregarious,
at the least, you must be shared.
At times
you feed on mortal
memories;
your wave carries us
from tomb to tomb,
stonecutter of icy sepulchers,
and we weep
transitory tears;
your
glorious
spring dress
is different,
blood rises through the shoots,
wind incites the day,
nothing is left
of your immutable soul.
Wine
stirs the spring, happiness
bursts through the earth like a plant,
walls crumble,
and rocky cliffs,
chasms close,
as song is born.
A jug of wine, and thou beside me
in the wilderness,
sang the ancient poet.
Let the wine pitcher
add to the kiss of love its own.
My darling, suddenly
the line of your hip
becomes the brimming curve
of the wine goblet,
your breast is the grape cluster,
your nipples are the grapes,
the gleam of spirits lights your hair,
and your navel is a chaste seal
stamped on the vessel of your belly,
your love an inexhaustible
cascade of wine,
light that illuminates my senses,
the earthly splendor of life.
But you are more than love,
the fiery kiss,
the heat of fire,
more than the wine of life;
you are
the community of man,
translucency,
chorus of discipline,
abundance of flowers.
I like on the table,
when we’re speaking,
the light of a bottle
of intelligent wine.
Drink it,
and remember in every
drop of gold,
in every topaz glass,
in every purple ladle,
that autumn labored
to fill the vessel with wine;
and in the ritual of his office,
let the simple man remember
to think of the soil and of his duty,
to propagate the canticle of the wine.”
Take a moment to reflect on where community shows up in your life and how.
Write a poem with the word community at it’s heart.
As always, please do observe the “rules of conduct” for dVerse – and for those of you new to dVerse, here’s what we hope everyone does:
- Write a poem, as the prompt suggests, and post it to your blog.
- Click on Mr. Linky to add your name and enter the direct URL to your poem
- On your blog, please provide a link back to dVerse: perhaps a statement at the end of the poem indicating this prompt and linking to dVerse. Others us dVerse as a tag as well. This enables more folks to view our prompts, and thus increases the readers of your poems too.
- If you promote your poem on social media, use the tag #dverse poets
- And most importantly, please do stop by to read responses to the prompt and add a short comment or reaction. Everyone likes to be appreciated! The prompt is “live” for several days – as you’ll notice by the comments you’ll receive – so do stop by several times, and read some of the latecomers too!
Hey Paul, great to have you on as a new bartender… great prompt.
Welcome Paul as our new bartender!!! A meaningful prompt – a community ~
Thank You Bjorn and Grace. Looking forward to a wonderful night.
Welcome to the pub this evening where we will gather as usual in community.
I have some very fine Belgian ale called Spring Tipple, made in an uber cool micro brewery and as Mrs Scribbles often says ’tis never too early for Gin’ we have a wonderful bottle of Botanicals from the Island of Islay, complete with the requisite tonic, ice and lemon. Refreshingly drinkable.
Come on in, sit yourselves down, have a drink and pen a poem.
Happy writing.
But for sure I can get a glass of Lagavulin… it’s a chilly might here.
Of course you may. I’ve a lovely Festival edition from 2015.You’ll love it.
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Alcohol & I are no longer friends, so just pour a diet Coke or a ginger beer, and we will jaw for a time. It is wonderful to have a new host/bartender/poet within the virile community of poets here. I affectionately call us “dog poets” as we run in packs out there on the dVerse trail, where fellowship is dished up like caviar, and poetics soar like the breath of life.
Ginger beer coming your way and thanks for the warm welcome Glenn.
Welcome to our new bartender, Paul!
Hi Grace! Welcome back, Bjorn!
What a great theme for a community of poets! I hope everyone is safe and well this evening. We’ve had a couple of heavy downpours of hail, albeit short ones, and then the rest of the day was cold and sunny. I’m looking forward to seeing what everyone brings to the pub this evening in the way of ‘community’ poems.
Thank You Kim. We have had hail and snow here in Scotland but now the skies are blue. I look forward to reading your poem along the trail. Drink?
Sorry I didn’t come back for that drink but I got caught up in something else and then it was time for bed! I’ll have a raspberry inferno tea this morning, please!
Coming right up.Hot raspberry 😉
Thank Paul!
Thanks! Sorry about the typo – I’m a bit poorly this morning – been up since the early hours.
Sorry to hear that Kim. Hope you have space for rest and recovery.
No luck! I’m at the library this morning for Bounce and Rhyme and then I’m listening to infants reading for two hours after lunch. But this evening I will be tucked up under a blanket!
Go Well. Bounce and Rhyme sounds like fun.
Thanks Paul!
Welcome, Paul! This is a great topic. I’m still working on the poem I plan to link. I hope it will be ready by this evening.
Evening Frank and Thank You. Look forward to reading it when it lands.
It is just in. I found out about Jonathan Haidt this past week and I have been reading his views on social intuitionism. My ideas of community got confused in the process, but they are sorting themselves out, all for the good, hopefully. Good prompt, Paul!
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Hallo, Paul, and welcome, lovely to see you behind the bar! And with such a wonderful prompt. Alas, I won’t be able to participate immediately, as I am away working, but I hope to get a chance to visit and read your poems on Friday.
Thanks for the lovely welcome Marina and good luck with work. See you on the trail.
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Cheers for the prompt Paul and many thanks for tending the bar. Enjoyed responding as I listened to the rain dash against the windows…
Kind regards
Anna :o]
You are very welcome Anna. Help yourself tom the big jug of G n T at the end of the bar.
So it is approaching the hour when I wind down for this part of the shift. Thanks to everyone who dropped in for your wonderful responses. Some really interesting takes on the community theme. I’ll leave the jug of G n T on the bar for incomers from other time zones along with some hot chocolate ( whisky laced) for the sleepy ones.
I’ll be along on the morrow to check in on the poets who visit whilst I dream. Night for now.
See you tomorrow Paul ~
Back and ready to serve up hot chai n coffee.
That Ode to Wine made me thirsty! Great prompt. I hope to have something to share later.
Look forward to it.
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Great fun, Paul. Welcome, and thank you! 🙂
Thank You De.
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Thrilled to see you joining the team, Paul! Hooray 🙂
If you are still serving, I’ll have a Chai Latte, if you please. Seems appropriate to have tea 🙂
Morning…back for a shuftie…One Chai Latte when you want it.
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Yay!!! Welcome, Paul! and i read your prompt and featured poems and went back to my page and words just flowed. 🙂 thank you!
Morning (here) Good t here. Just off for a butchers 😉
😀 😀 😀 i live on the other side of the planet hehe
Where exactly?
the Philippines. 🙂
Ah. Never been there.
🙂
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What wonderful collection of poems we have community’d here this last 12 hours. I’m reminded of the words to a Mike Scott (Waterboys) song….
‘Somebody left his whisky
And the night is very young
I’ve got some to say and more to tell
And the words will soon be spilling from my tongue’
Keep spilling. I’ll pop in throughout my day to read and comment.
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did not think I could join in with this one til prompted by an opposing prompt. Good to see you serving up at the bar – especially with that Neruda ode to wine which was refreshingly new to me. Now off to catch up with community.
I’m so so glad that you did…wonderful poem.
So nice to have you as part of the team, Paul. Such a perfect prompt that I will miss for now because of “business” obligations. But, Welcome.
Thank You Victoria. See you along the trail.
Happy to see you have joined the dVerse team Paul. I particularly enjoyed the Starhawk’s quote. Her vision is beautiful.
Thank You. I agree. This is posted above my desk.
Welcome to the team, Paul, and thanks for hosting a wonderful prompt!
Thank You.
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I am so late writing and posting mine, but I had an idea..not a deep poem, but a statement nevertheless. Thanks for the prompt, Paul.
You are welcome. Thanks for posting.
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Thank you, Paul, for joining the team and posting your first official prompt, to which I should consider myself lucky making the last submission!
Thanks Colin. It’s possible we might squeeze in one or two more before submission close. You never know. Off to have a read now.
Congrats, Paul. You can really mix a drink! I was too late to post, but liked the subject of your prompt.