Hello. Welcome to Haibun Monday. It is getting to be the kind of weather when I drive with my windows down and the CD player cranked up, with me singing at the top of my lungs along with the CD. It used to be the radio and then tape player…now it is the CD player.
How many of you also crank up your sound system to sing along with a favorite song? I know I do. I have actually, when not able to sleep (which is often) take myself out for a drive at night, similar to how parents will take a fractious baby or toddler out for a ride! I will be restless and reading or writing doesn’t calm me. I head out for my car and plug in my favorite homemade CD with all my favorite songs on it. I wait until I hit the interstate and then crank up the player full tilt and cruise along the dark highway at about 80 to 90 mph, singing at the top of my lungs.
My top playlist includes Born to Run, I Will Survive, Bad to the Bone, It’s the End of the World as We Know It, Dancin’ in the Street….just to name a few. Have any of you ever done that? Or taken a road trip with friends or by yourself? Ever had another motorist look over at you in consternation or better yet, give you a thumbs up? Played sad songs and cried, played defiant songs, played dancin’ in the car songs?
Today, I’d like you to write about singing along with your music and driving. Off on a trip, off on vacation, soothing yourself and just driving at night, driving out your anger or your grief, shared a few songs with a friend?
Let’s keep the haibun classic (please, no poems or “westernized” writings) with one paragraph and a haiku – not a senryu, or three line micropoem, or American sentence. I want us to keep this clean and classic. Also if you like, print out the lyrics to your favorite song or embed a video as well so we can sing along with you, cry with you, laugh with you, take this job and shove it with you.
How to play:
- One paragraph, one haiku. If you need a review on writing haiku, please go to this link: https://dversepoets.com/2015/11/16/japanese-poetry-forms-twins/
- If you are multitasking writing to several prompts, please remember this is a haibun prompt and write accordingly.
- Link your haibun to Mr. Linky and also to this prompt so others can find their way here.
- Read and comment on other’s haibun. Remember, this prompt is good through the week so you are not late if you don’t immediately post.
- Check back for new entries during the week to read and enjoy.
- Have lots and lots of fun with this.
Singledust said:
Hi Toni! That was a nice introduction to today’s Haibun and I am pumped, music has been a passion from way back I first had cartridges! Now to look for a song! I love your Bruce Sprinsteen, it was one of the songs I sang along to, too! thank you for the lovely prompt, just what I needed.
kanzensakura said:
I am glad! Enjoy!
sarahsouthwest said:
I can’t find Mr Linky! What a fun prompt, thank you.
kanzensakura said:
Thank you. Mr. Linky is up now so you can link your poem there. I thought this first day of May, some fun was needed.
sarahsouthwest said:
Done!
Jane Dougherty said:
I couldn’t see the linky either so I’ll post it here.
kanzensakura said:
Wait until the usual time of 3 pm est to post. Unfortunately, folks can’t and won’t comment on poems linked here. I will be back at three to properly open the pub. I’m wuth mybmom now.
Jane Dougherty said:
Will do 🙂
kanzensakura said:
Mr. Linky is up now so you can’t link your poem! 🙂
Jane Dougherty said:
Thanks! I’ll do that thing.
Misky said:
Still no Link, so here’s mine. https://foundlines.wordpress.com/2017/05/01/dverses-haibun-36/
kanzensakura said:
Hi folks. Major snafus with today’s post. DON’T PANIC. Go ahead and write your haibun but don’t post until normal time at 3 pm EST. Have fun with this. Write about whistling while you work, crooning while you cook or compute…just make it sing along happy or sad. This will give you plenty of time to write a quality haibun. 😸
kim881 said:
Oh Toni! As soon as I read this I knew exactly what I was going to write about!
kanzensakura said:
Hi Kim. Mr. Linky is now up!
kanzensakura said:
PLEASE WAIT UNTIL 3 pm to post your poems. Please do not post now. Thank you.
whippetwisdom said:
Hi everyone and thank you for hosting tonight Toni! I have linked a haibun and will swing by later tonight and tomorrow morning to read :o)
kanzensakura said:
Sounds good!
kanzensakura said:
OFFICIAL START!!! Hi everyone. a general snafu today but we will get by, we will survive! I am looking forward to reading all the prompts for this. What fun.
kanzensakura said:
Happy May folks!!!!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Hello all, I might post tomorrow- no inspiration tonight, and doctor’s appointment waoting
kanzensakura said:
Take care of yourself. Thanks for posting Mr. Linky!
jillys2016 said:
Love this! Toni, I could use a cold one after that drive and all that singin’. I’ll take it straight outta the bottle – feel like slummin’ it tonight 🙂
kanzensakura said:
Bud or Mich??? got both!
kim881 said:
I just got back from choir. We’re still singing ‘Shine’ and ‘Piece of my Heart’, as well as a quick run through of ‘Up Town Funk’. The guy who set up the choir and does the arrangements was there tonight and I think we impressed him. Sadly no Joni but nobody laughed at my singing.
kanzensakura said:
I LOVE Uptown Funk!!!!
kim881 said:
🙂
kanzensakura said:
I taught my husband how to dance to it…he does okay but I really break it down. I think it is a great song for choir!
kim881 said:
Dancing to Uptown Funk sounds fun! Some of the people in the choir do dance moves of a sort – I’m too intent on following the sheet music – the lyrics are tricky!
kanzensakura said:
I went ahead and did a haibun for the rest of the story. I rarely post more than one poem but today…..
Charley said:
Yuengling… bottle. Save the glass for the dandies. Let’s see if the band knows this one! Cool prompt.
kanzensakura said:
Thanks. Yuengling coming up.
paul scribbles said:
Thanks for a great prompt Toni. Away to ma bed. Laters x
kanzensakura said:
You are most welcome. Sleep tight!
Adriana Citlali Ramírez said:
Great prompt! It brought me back in memory lane to my late teens.
I have to sleep now –It is late over here. I will make the rounds tomorrow. Happy writing!
kanzensakura said:
See you later!
Sabio Lantz said:
Note: directions ask for 1 paragraph (2 weeks ago it was 1-3), for a classic Haibun. I broke this rule and obeyed the previous (ironically like the author herself) and used two paragraphs. LOL
kanzensakura said:
That is fine. The paragraph stipulation is to keep people from writing on and on and on. If you will notice when I make comments, I do not criticize the writers for going on with more than the stipulated number of paragraphs. LOLOLOL
frankhubeny said:
Thank you for hosting, Toni. I’ve added one about a trip I took to Indiana a couple of weeks ago to visit my sister and a former teacher of mine.
kanzensakura said:
I just got through reading it. Great work on it. I enjoyed it immensely. I guess many of us of a certain age are finding out those things about our parents…
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I finally did one… wonder how many have heard mine…
frankhubeny said:
It is the first time I heard Maria Magdalena, but I have missed a lot of music.
whimsygizmo said:
Late to the haibun party. Loved this prompt, Toni. Thank you!
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
If anyone has spotify… here is a driving playlist I created once. (nowadays it’s no CD for me).
colorfulpen said:
All good songs on that playlist!
colorfulpen said:
This prompt took some digging in the old memory bank! I finally got mine posted.
merrildsmith said:
Mine is certainly different from my last one. 🙂
Kathy Reed said:
Thanks for the great prompt! I thought of many songs..all kinds of music…as usual I am posting late but will catch up slowly. Spring cleaning has taken precedent this week but I can’t miss what everyone else has posted. Thank you all for being patient with me here in the Pacific Northwest.
kenneth said:
. Note: directions ask for 1 paragraph (2 weeks ago it was 1-3), for a classic Haibun.