Lillian here, delighted to host today’s Poetics.
A refrigerator is something most of us take for granted. Unless we’re tent camping, lose our electricity, or because it dies of old age. Ours was on its last legs on June 25th. Note the date! City dwellers in a high-rise, we have a galley kitchen requiring a very narrow refrigerator. No one stocks them. We ordered ours, had to wait three weeks for delivery, and nursed along our old one in the meantime. New fridge arrives. Hurrah! One day later, its freezer totally frosts over with miniature stalactite icicles everywhere. Freezer compartment temperature control does not work. It froze a bottle of vodka! We call. Store says we must wait one week for a repair. Freezer food dumped. At least the fridge portion works. Appointed day arrives and the repair person calls. “I’ll be there at noon to fix your faulty door.” Faulty door? No. It’s the freezer. “Oh. Can’t fix that. You need a new one.” It is new. “Call the store and tell them you need a replacement.” Did that. “You need to come in to the store. Can’t do it on the phone.” Did that. “So sorry. It will take three weeks for delivery. We don’t stock those.” Three weeks with no freezer. Day arrives. They haul out the defective refrigerator and come back with paperwork in hand. Where’s our new refrigerator? “We don’t have a refrigerator on the truck for you. We were just supposed to pick up the old one.” It wasn’t an old one. It was a NEW one that DIDN’T work! “Sorry. We don’t have a refrigerator on the truck for you.” Many phone calls later, a manager apologizes and says “We can get a new one to you on October 5th.” Forget it! We dump all the food. We get a full refund, but we have no refrigerator! We call another store. Order another new refrigerator. It arrives September 18th and . . . ooh, ice cubes . . . ah, milk for cereal . . . ooh lettuce and salad dressing . . . ohhh ice cream! Yep, we now have cold food, ice cubes and . . . a refrigerator fetish!
For today’s prompt: walk into your kitchen and open your refrigerator. What’s in it? What’s way in the back on the bottom shelf? A jar of pickled herring? Hot mustard? Hearts of palm? What’s in your freezer? A bag of peas for use as an ice pack? Frozen bananas for smoothies? Close the doors. What’s on the outside? Magnets? Pictures? Kids’ drawings? Pick something specific that resides in, or on the outside of, your refrigerator. Let that be the inspiration for your poem. Include the specific item in the body of your poem. Include more than one item if you wish. Be fanciful or serious. Perhaps it will turn into a metaphor – or spur a memory. Take it at face value and write about the item or about your refrigerator….or let your imagination use the object as a jumping off place. Let’s all chill out with this one!
Refrigerator – 1957
by Thomas Lux
More like a vault — you pull the handle out
and on the shelves: not a lot,
and what there is (a boiled potato
in a bag, a chicken carcass
under foil) looking dispirited,
drained, mugged. This is not
a place to go in hope or hunger.
But, just to the right of the middle
of the middle door shelf, on fire, a lit-from-within red,
heart red, sexual red, wet neon red,
shining red in their liquid, exotic,
aloof, slumming
in such company: a jar
of maraschino cherries. Three-quarters
full, fiery globes, like strippers
at a church social. Maraschino cherries, maraschino,
the only foreign word I knew. Not once
did I see these cherries employed: not
in a drink, nor on top
of a glob of ice cream,
or just pop one in your mouth. Not once.
The same jar there through an entire
childhood of dull dinners — bald meat,
pocked peas and, see above,
boiled potatoes. Maybe
they came over from the old country,
family heirlooms, or were status symbols
bought with a piece of the first paycheck
from a sweatshop,
which beat the pig farm in Bohemia,
handed down from my grandparents
to my parents
to be someday mine,
then my child’s?
They were beautiful
and, if I never ate one,
it was because I knew it might be missed
or because I knew it would not be replaced
and because you do not eat
that which rips your heart with joy.
Pub is officially open! Hoping you’ll come chill out with dVerse today…and yes, that refrigerator saga I related before the actual prompt is true! We now covet our fridge!
I have margueritas, iced tea, and numerous other libations available! Hoping many will stop by today.
I want something warm… autumn is coming crashing down.
Ah….name your drink my friend and I will rustle it up! 🙂 Fall is here also…well, not today. Today it is 80 degrees…what my mother used to call Indian Summer. Tomorrow in the 60s. I actually enjoy the cool crisp autumn weather.
I enjoy it… but not when it’s raining as I bicycle home.
I do understand that!
Ha.. I had some fun with this, a rhyme more in the style of WCW :
This Is Just To Say
William Carlos Williams, 1883 – 1963
I have eaten
the plums
that were in
the icebox
and which
you were probably
saving
for breakfast
Forgive me
they were delicious
so sweet
and so cold
Thanks for posting this one, Bjorn! I love this poem and you did indeed have fun with this style/poem…
One of my absolute favorites. Why is it every time I read it I can taste those plums?!
Hi all! I’m on a very short break from an on-line workshop with The Poetry School, so I’ve posted and now I have to run. But I will be back in less than an hour!
Will mosey over to see your post, Kim. Take your time…we’ll all be here just chilling out! 🙂
Would it be correct to post magnetic poetry for this prompt?
hmmmmm I suppose if that’s on your fridge, one could do that. 🙂 Hopefully there’s a variety of responses.
“What’s in your freezer? A bag of peas for use as an ice pack? Frozen bananas for smoothies? Close the doors. What’s on the outside? Magnets? Pictures? Kids’ drawings?”
Are you stalking me? That is all exactly right.
Chuckling I am….and looking forward to chilling out with your poem today! Thanks for stopping by, Marley. So glad to have you here at dVerse!
I can hear you calling when you have a head ache…
Please give me some peace, give me some peas.
🙂
Howling with laughter over your story, Lil !! I mean, I ‘m really sorry about the whole stupid process, but you tell it so wonderfully… I must work on this prompt. Back in a bit, but first… the frig.
It truly was a saga! Unbelievable!! Yes — we’ve had many folks laugh over our predicament but then, as they all say, glad it was you and not us! For days after we FINALLY got our new fridge (one that worked), we’d walk into the kitchen and literally fondle the door! 🙂
Sorry it took so long – I’ve just got off the online thing, which went on much longer than expected, and have read and commented on a few poems. I’ll have to come back in the morning for the rest. This is such a fun prompt, Lill!.
Thanks, Kim. Glad you’re enjoying. See you in the morning! Sleep well….or in other words, chill out! 🙂
🙂
Hi Kim and everyone, a fantastic prompt – yum.
Nice to see you! We’re all just chilling out tonight…so hope you’ll join in and do a post. I’m handing out ice cubes with drinks tonight…or little coolers if you need to do a carry out to insure it’s chilled when you get home 🙂
Okay, so here it is… my childhood ordeal. I’ll be in the corner, nursing liquid amnesia! No, seriously… great prompt! I’ll enjoy the reading as much as I enjoyed writing.
I there Charley! Good to see you here tonight. I thought I’d go with a bit of a bizarre prompt tonight….puttin’ the serious stuff on ice so to speak. And we trully are still fondling the front of our refrigerator before we open the door….so grateful are we to have this appliance in our kitchen again! 🙂
Kitch(en) fetish. Hmmm. Or is it Kisch(en)? I can understand. Salt pork can only take you so far in life.
Thanks for hosting, Lillian! Your prompt is for me a good reminder to clean out the refrigerator every now and then. I’m glad to hear you finally got a new one.
Oh yes…..we absolutely covet our new refrigerator!!!! Taking a while to restock on condiments etc. Quite often we’ll prepare a meal and realize, oops, don’t have that ingredient that used to be in our fridge!
Thanks for sharing that chaotic story about your refrigerator. Sounds very frustrating! I will think about my fridge and write a poem soon.
Look forward to it! 🙂
Stepping away from the bar for a bit — dinner and a bit of relaxation calls. Leaving the lights on and the pub refridge on so come on in and chill out! 🙂
Thank you, Lillian. I had something half prepared so I should make the rounds earlier this time.
I’m popping in and out this evening. Glad to see you Kathy. Looking forward to reading your post! Not to worry about early, earlier, later, etc….bar is open 24 hours with the light always on….I’m must in and out but always pop back! 🙂
Loved loved loved this prompt! Hurrah for poetry!!’ And poets!
Good morning! So fun to read your enthusiastic response this morning! Will get my morning coffee and then chill out reading the new additions 🙂
Ha ha ha! A fridge full of guilt today. I thought this would be more fun, but it didn’t turn out like that. And now I feel I should clean the dam’ fridge out. Curses…
Oh dear…..certainly didn’t mean to lay on any housekeeping guilt with the prompt! I do think a fridge can sometimes become a repository though….we bend down a little to look on the lowest shelf, peer into the back, and … oh yeah…there’s that jar of xyz that I meant to use in those muffins I thought I would make. That was the day that abc happened…etc. Will mosey over to see your post as soon as I get my morning coffee.
I will say this….until we had to pitch everything, I really did not have a full awareness of everything we had in ours — now how often we used the thing! 🙂
With such unbelievable twists and turns, I read your story like I would with a fiction. Since most of the fridges are now produced over here, it’s hard for me to imagine the inconvenience you experienced. Thanks to your irresistible prompt, Lillian, I managed to write about something which I’d have nearly forgotten.
So nice to see you here, Colin. Every time I see your name, I think to myself, I must dig in my drawer for my Chop. I had it made many years ago on my first trip to China, on an absolutely clear day while walking on the Great Wall. In those days, it was very lucky to have a clear day on the wall. I remember it was the first days of portable phones (don’t even think they were called cells) — and it was 3 pm and I called my husband back in Boston (where it was 3 AM) to say I’d talked with him on the Great Wall. When I got home from that week’s trip, I was feeling pretty good but he had jet lag from all the calls I’d made to him! LOL In 2019 we have a cruise scheduled that will go to China and Japan and I will finally actually walk with him on the Great Wall! 🙂 If I find my chop, I’ll take a photo and see if I can somehow put it on my blog on the next dVerse post so you can see it. Thanks for all your kind words, Colin. And for posting to this prompt! A bit of an odd prompt…but I think sometimes we need to have a bit of fun, right? 🙂
Back in those days, we called those Motorola bricks “water bottles”. When we dined out in China and heaved one onto our table, it automatically guaranteed that the restaurant manager personally waiting on our table.
2019? That’s a bit of a wait. (Well, at least, the excitement will last for two years. Lol) The Chinese say, “Only those who’ve made it to the Great Wall are great men.” (No pressure on your mister.) 😛
Thanks again, Lillian, for a wonderful prompt. You’re story about your replacement refrigerator was a riot!
Yeah….somehow the saga stories are always funny in the telling…not so much in the experiencing. IE when telling camping stories, we never tell the one about the perfect day with wonderful weather and a beautiful campsite. The one that “goes down in family lore” is the one where the tent fell down in the torrential rain storm or the racoons got into the food or when the kids dropped the flashlight down the pit in the outhouse!!! LOL. Glad you enjoyed the prompt!