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Hello everyone. Welcome to this edition of Haibun Monday. Today the haibun is all about kindness. Plain and simple – kindness. We all could do with some kindness in this harsh world. So…Let’s have at it. “Whoever you are, I have always depended on the kindness of strangers.” That famous quote by Blanche Dubois in A Streetcar Named Desire. So many quotes about kindness.
One of the kindest creatures I know is…Winnie the Pooh. He gives us the most simple of quotes: “A little consideration, a little thoughts for others makes all the difference.”
The other day, I was driving along when I realized, my back tire was going ka-thump, ka-thump! I realized I had a flat tire. I pulled over on the side of the road and just said, what next? I got out of the car and opened the trunk and pulled out the spare and the jack and lug wrench. I began working with the jack and it wouldn’t work! I groaned. I stood by my car – waiting. After about 20 minutes, a real beater of a car pulled up and a ragged looking man got out. But he was smiling and asked what was the problem. I thought about waving him on but, I was so desperate I said I had a flat tire and the jack wouldn’t work. He said those magic words, Let me help.
He proceeded to mess with the jack and after about 30 minutes, the jack began to work. In just a few minutes, the car was up in the air and he was taking the flat tire off and put on the spare. I heard barking and saw a dog in his car, barking away – talking barking, not fussing barking. I went back to talk to the dog and it wagged its tail and smiled. It was a senior animal with white around its muzzle. I noticed there were boxes in the car and from the looks of it, the man was living with the dog in the car. I went back to my car and offered him money for helping me. The man smiled and said, “No ma’am. Just doing what my folks taught me long ago – I was just helping out a stranger.” I had been to the store and on an impulse, I bought a box of dog treats! I asked if he would take treats for his dog. He agreed to that – he would take nothing for himself but he would take something for his dog. I took the box and fed a few to the dog who gobbled them up greedily. I reached into my purse and laid a $20 bill on the dash for him to find when he returned. I told him thank you and blessed his journey. I waited until he drove off and got into my car. I cried. That man with no home refusing money but willing to help and to take something for his dog. I was humbled.
So – what I would like you all to do, in haibun format – tight paragraphs with a haiku at the end, in 150 words or less, to write a haibun about actual kindness that was done for you or that you did for someone. Go ahead, toot your horn! Let’s flood the universe with instances of kindness. I am even going to forgive if the haiku does not have seasonal word in it.
To join in,
• Write your haibun and post it.
• Copy and paste the direct URL of the poem into Mr. Linky at the bottom of this post, along with your name.
• Post the link to dVerse on your blog and social media sites.
• Return to the pub and read other poets and comment on their work.
• Enjoy. And be sure to read and comment on the haibun.
And show some kindness this week.
kanzensakura said:
Hello everyone! Have you all had enuff meaness, sadness, whatever this week? Ready for some Kindness? Then let’s go! 🙂
kanzensakura said:
Autumn has finally come to the South – cool nights, colored leaves…I am happy to see it.
Grace said:
Very cold weather is with us too ~ I love reading stories about kindness because they remind me, that it takes little to give and share it ~
kanzensakura said:
Yes it does. I love the back and forth of kindness.
kanzensakura said:
And remember, this is about a kindness done to you or that you did to someone else. I want positive feedback from this, no political rants, lectures about the state of kindness, etc.
X said:
Yes ma’am.
kanzensakura said:
You haibun was marvelous.
X said:
So how about if your haiku has the right number of syllables but you mess with the line breaks?
Remember, we are talking about kindness here. Ha.
How nice of the man to help you out – and of you to return it to him in your own kindness. This is the way the world spins, or should.
I love autumn. It is my favorite time of year.
Grace said:
Yes, your heart is in the right place when talking about kindness, and the autumn season X ~ Perhaps Toni can forgive you about the haiku, smiles ~ Love that you are sharing your writing 🙂
X said:
It was a 2 year vow of silence, just up this week, you know.
Ha.
I will humbly seek forgiveness.
Grace said:
Has it been that long? Seems like forever since you deleted your other blog ~ I am glad you found new wind or wings, for sharing your writing ~
X said:
10/6/2015 was my last post.
kanzensakura said:
LOL, when one has been writing haiku for 30+ years, one is entitled to the occasional page break. ..and forgetting of season words. It’s all about being kind today. I know I mos def need it.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. and here I was kind to you and tried to do it as it should be… if I had known I would have done the “one-line” haiku 🙂
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. here I’m too late to the bar… we turned back the clocks during the weekend so the bar actually opened a bit earlier than I expected. We have no daylight left to save here.
Grace said:
Our clocks are changing this coming weekend. Thank goodness as it has been really dark to wake up so early in the morning.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Ha.. we are having issues with the very long dark evenings… but good to know it’s next week.
erbiage said:
A pox upon this clock changing madness!
Vivian Zems said:
More blessed to give…. I love a bit of positivity for a change. Kindness always makes you remember what being human is all about.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think it takes so little really.. kindness is best served warm
Vivian Zems said:
Absolutely!
jazzytower said:
Amen to that : )
Vivian Zems said:
☺
Frank Hubeny said:
Thanks for hosting, Toni! Nice description of the person who helped you with the tire.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
Oh yes.. and I like how it’s so much easier to accept kindness on behalf of others (like a hungry dog)
sarahsouthwest said:
What a lovely story. What a lovely prompt. We could do with some reminders of kindness at the moment.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I have read so many offerings and seen kindness comes in so many different parts…
erbiage said:
Greeting friends, forgive me I’m a bit morose for this tonight, I wrote a second one to atone for the first, but that seems a bit glum too.
Thank you for offering this though, too often we ignore kindnesses. None are too small, nor too large.
Björn Rudberg (brudberg) said:
I think you need a lot of kindness Eric… tonight the bar is a good place to be.
erbiage said:
Thanksbjorn. It is a good place to be.
kim881 said:
Good evening everyone! I’ve just got back from choir and am feeling a bit tired, so I’ll read as many kind poems as a I can and then return refreshed in the morning. It’s just a simple, straightforward haibun today as I am not feeling my best. I hope you are all well and enjoying the poetry this evening.
jazzytower said:
So glad you found a way to give back to him. Such a kind, proud man. I known you were really thankful for the help. Now I need to take a look at my spare and make sure everything is where it should be. And that my booster cables are in the car: ) A lovely read on kindness. Thanks
Pat
merrildsmith said:
What a lovely theme, and what a lovely anecdote. I’ve been out on jury duty all day, but I hope I’ll be able to join in later this week.
A homeless man once changed my flat tire in downtown Philadelphia. It was night, and I was coming home from teaching a class. He also did not ask for anything.
My daughter played Blanche in her college production of Streetcar. She’s now married to the man who played Stanley, and the director officiated at their wedding!
Frank J. Tassone said:
A kind prompt, Toni. Thanks! And what an inspiring story of kindness rendered and returned!
Sherry Blue Sky said:
How I love the story of that man and his dog – and your kindness, too, in giving the dog treats, in being so moved by someone in need of help himself extending himself to help someone else. I hope that man’s good karma catches up with him soon. It is wonderful to hear stories like this to counteract what we are hearing on the news these days. People are mostly awesome. I love this theme and will write something for it for sure…………..and how I love reading X again. Missed him so much.
Sabio Lantz said:
My goodness — almost all people are over the 150 words. Alas. LOL
Sabio Lantz said:
I created a Haibun with two situations, but the word count was 265 — so I cut it down to 1/2 of the story to obey the rules.
susanmehr said:
People with so little give the most. Beautiful Story.